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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
nihu
even i want a pm
and do u even plan to update?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: falak01

thanx 4 considering our "gun point DHAMKI"😆😆😆

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🤣..sach main yaar..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@shinzz..lolzzz abhi tak sirf planning hi thi.abhi falak ki dhamki ne..Darra diya
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@mishu..hey thanxx dear..sure will add u and thanxx for buddy add!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

@shinzz..lolzzz abhi tak sirf planning hi thi.abhi falak ki dhamki ne..Darra diya

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@mishu..hey thanxx dear..sure will add u and thanxx for buddy add!!

chal ab darr ja aur kaam pe lag ja..and yes poem pe comment karna mat bhoolna...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiiiii
guyzz here it is

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Nupur's loud shriek was very clear evn to her neighbours.

N:samrat?..am gonna kill u..if it's a joke?really..?Gunjan ne bhi nahi bola..sh*t sh*t?.now where's th dam radio??.

S:nupur clam dwn!!..abhi AD chal rahen hain radio par?after tht..mayank will cum to gv his msg ON AIR!!!

By th time gunjan came running in th room..hearing nupur scream?

G:nups kya hua???tum kyun ..chilla rahi ho???koi hai kya??haaan

N;by god!! Mayank!!!

G:mayank????kahan?.

N:ufff gunjan radio par..on air..tere RADIO STATION PAR?woh hi set kar rahi?hoon..yeh LOVe FM kab set hoga?.samart..samrat u still there[ screaming on her cell]

S:yes nupur bhusan!!!!am here?

N:aya..mayank..on air????

S:nope still add going on?

N:yeh dam..station?gunjan help na..plzz set it?

G:nups..u dn't hv my radio station set up?.tht means u dn't hear me????Nups?uuuuuu???

N:areee..tu toh meri behen hai..tujhe exclusively roj ghar par bhi sunti hoon..abhi plzz help me set?ok..here [handing her th cell]..u talk wid sammy..i set it?

G:uff sweetu..tu bhi na???hello ..samrat!!

Samrat's heart skipped a beat.he was on cloud nine..gunajn was talking to him..she said samrat..dude u dn't hv to hide urself..frm her..nt now atleast?ur nt th unknw caller nw?cumone dude..speak up..

S:arr hmm hello gunjan?hw r u???

G:aha?tumne subha subha pareshani dedi?aur puch rahe ho..hw am i..abh toh jab tak mayank ki awaz nahi sunleti tumhari best frnd?sab kuch..gadbad hai?.kyun??samart??smarat..ho na???

S:{smiling..with his eys closed..he was too much lost in her melodious voice?unaware of wot she was saying?

G:samrat???kya hua???

Suddenly nups loud shriek brought sam bck to reality!!!!

N:gunjan..set hogaya?chal cell band kar [snatching th cell fm her] samm chal coll main milti hoon..byee

S:huh??kya??nup?ur!!!*sigh*..nups ke rehte I doubt kabhi meri luv story complete bhi hogi?

N:gunjan dekh mera dil kaise dance kar raha hia?uff kab ayegaaa mayank

And juss then th RJ announced.

."welcum bck guyzz aur jaise maine aapki JIYA ne promise kiya..hum sab ke FAV star MAYANK humare saath ahin aur hume kal ke contest ke bare maine batayenge!!..jiske winner ko milega..mayank ke latest movie ke premier ke tickets!!!here u go guyzzz"

nups heart beatd violently?she was dying to hear tht voice ..th voice which will calm down her heart..which will make her day?which compensate for th uncomplete dream?and then

"HI guyzzz ths is MAYANK?and am here on Love FM..to announce th contest ..well its very simple..u juss hv to answer ths question. And th first caller will gte th prize..so ready??"

unknowingly..nups said"YES!!!kab se"

M:ok so th question is..WOt is th 1st thing u'll say to me if u ever meet me??? Ur answer should be sumthing haat ke?and should nt be I LUV u mayank?.bcoz I knw..tht..u all luv me..so say sumthing..which I hv neva heard!! Ok so ur time starts now?

Nups frantically searched for her cell suddenly..oh nupur how could u be so dumb?u got engrossed in listening to HIM..which u could hv done by putting on any of his films..u are so silly in letting go th opportunity of talking to him..oh god plzz my cell.."

Wen gunjan's voice made her stop "here nupur its ringing..u are th first caller..i directly calld to Jiya?here?.cum quickly"

Nupur's eyes moisten seeing tht gunjan had already dialed th number for...her..

N:gunjan..u.. dialed ?? for me??.. buh..u u ..alwys teased me?and still u??..u luv me so much..gunji

G:uff nupur tum bhi na bahut filmy ho..chaloo abh jaldi..baat karo?cum on?

Nupur smiled weakly and and in a cranky voice said.."hello"

Quickly mayank said Hi..frm th other said.."hi..so wot will u say to me wen u 1st meet me.."

N;[closing her eyes as if to imagine she was standing in fornt of him..Actually].THANK u?I'l say thank u mayank. .thank u for joining films.thank u for sharing ur talent with us?thank you for gving us such beautiful moments we had watching ur films..Thank u..for letting us close to such a wonderful person LIKe u..and make us belive tht..ppl like u exist?.

Mayank couldn't belive his hears?THANK u?one of his fans wanted to thank him ..no one nt a single person had ever thanked him..in his lonely life there was no one to appreciate his hardwrk?those two wrds sounded like music?th feeling of been thanked was much..sweet than receiving a award..tht too frm a stranger..STRANGER???who was she???her voice !!!!was she crying??or her voice was like tht??i want to meet her??atleast I can knw her name??

whie nupur's face was coverd wid a content smile as if she finally said wot she wanted to say th 1st day she saw him..or th 1st time her heart beated for him..

M:wot's ur name??

N;huh??[opening her eyes and cuming bck to reality]

M;ur name??

N:y??arr I said sumthing wrong??u didn't like my ans??

M:no..i want ur name so tht I can write ur name on th tickets!! U won lady!!! So juss tell me ur name

N:whoa?*sniff* really?u like my ans??

M: I luved it..[his lips curved into a smile and] no one has thanked me..so ur sweet name

N:nnnnnn?hmm [she bcame conscious ,she feared telling her name!! and with out any valid reason..th name tht escaped frm her mouth was..].SWEETU!!!

M:sweetu???wwowwwwww tabhi aap itne sweet ho..lovely!! ok so enjoy th film..hope u'll still thank me after watching ths one too!!byeee

N:yaa!!byee [and cut th call}

"wow so we finally got th winner..and now I like..to?.

RJ's tahnks gvng speech to mayank was drowned by nupur's loud shrieks..

N;Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey!!!!.i won won!!gunji I won?[she twirled round and round holding gunjan unaware of th fact tht gunjan was red wid anger..]gunji??

G:y th hell u didn't tell ur name??? u said sweetu???are u out of ur mind..damn!!?hopeless!!!how can u be so?..????how can u do?..??

N;[held gunjan's hand in her hand]..am sorry gunji..i knw..i made mistake per..i was nervous I feared he would laugh at my ans

G:buh he liked it..didn't he??

N;ya buh..plz gunji..understand me !!

G:nupus all I wanna say is tht?wotever u said was ur thoughts?and now he knws it..as sweetu's..nups I can't stand ur luv nt been appreciated by ur name!!![and a drop of tear rooled dwn her cheeks]

N;awww meri pyaari behen..dn't be sad yaar..naam se ki farak padta hai?sweetu kahe ya nups..pyaar dil se hota hai naam se nahi?hai na??

G;[simply nodded]

N;chall abh rona band kar..aur raido sation ja..aur main jati hoon sam ke saath coll..ok..raat ko milte hain behena?

And gunji broke into small laugh?"tum bhi na..par abh sweetu kahn se ayige?u won't get tickets unless u hv SWEETU wid u!!!"

N:chill behena?who rita aunty ki beti?she is sweetu..remember???usko le ke jaungi..and bingo usko bhi mayank pasand ahi?as bhaiya!!!

G:par who..she is in school?7yrs old kid ?..it won't look like she gv th answer?

N;uff who sab baad main dekh lenge!!! Chalo abhi

Th day went..very hetic for bhushan sisters!!!!daily routine plus nups dragged gunji to rita aunty's house to ask for sweetu..and then staright to shooping..to buy a new dress for watching mayank's new film?ths ritual was sumthing which nups did every time she went for mayank's new film..she would alwys say?"nayi film naye dress ke saath!!!"

{at night in mayank's bunglow]

mayank was pacing up and down in his room..thinking?and nupurs voice ringing in his ears?those wrds kept repeating?her simple thoughts had made a deep impact on him..her voice made a permanent place in his heart..he was unknowingly?wrapped in th charm of th unknown gal!!

sweetu???did she actually meant wot she said???was she really like tht or faking for juss winning th tickets??how can be a gal of todayz age be so simple and sober??wot if she is really like ths??wot if she is nt faking???she impressd me!! No one!! Nt a single gal made a way directly into my heart!!! Every fan impressed and wooed th MAYANK SHARMA!! Superstar!!! Buh she impressd me..me mayank!!!tht too unknowingly!!! I wanna meet her!! Buh how??damn ths stardom!! I can't live a normal life!!! Even if I think of meeting her it'll be all over th world!!!

Sooch sooch mayank!!! Yes!!! Movie!! She'll cum for th movie!!! And am to attend it?though was planning to cancel it..now I'll defo go!!! And wen she cums to collect th prize tickets..i'll knw who is she??

Yes!!!

And he hums a song

[song..a meri zindagi frm film saya..credit to makers!only a para is used]

teri chahat si koi bhi chahat nahi

kyun ki iss main koi bhi milawat nahi

he goes to th window and looking at th moon he sings agin..

iss ko pana hai mujh ko kisi haal main?

abh mujhe iss zamane ki parwa nahi..

a meri zindagi tu mere saath hai!!!!

[next day at th threater]

mayank is already there before time he didn't wanted to loose th chance to see her?4 hers pass awy par there is no clue of HIS SWEETU tht is nupur!!fianlly he gv up thinking she won't cum and decides to go bck..on his shoot... Mayank leaves th hall !!!

its only 15 mins for th movie to start!! And nups enters th elevators screaming?"oyee rukoooooooo?hey lift ruko"and manages to jump in on time?there's only a guy facing his bck to her and talking on cell nups makes faces and says "uff..gadhaa..style marke khada ahi..lift rok nahi sakta tha..idiot!!abh yeh jaldi kyun ahi ja rahi..movie shuru hojayegi?."

And suddenly light goes off

Nupur shrieks loudly.."ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa help help"

Th guy says"kya hua??aap chilla kyun rahi ho??

Nups felt a sudden relief hearing his voice?and remembered she was nt alone stuck..in th lift!!

N;who maine?I fear..darkness?andhere se darr lagta hai..

"oh?phir tik ahi..aap yahn mera hath pakad lijiye..toh darr nahi lage ga" rplyd th guy!!

Nups felt disgusted!! Uff chance pe dance!!!!haath pakadlo?kitna cheap hai!!

No thanx am f9 she said!!

Suddenly th lift shuddered!! And nups quickly moved in th direction of th guy?it was picth dark she couldn't see naything..she held him tightly.

.unaware tht she was actually hugging him?she came bck to senses wen she clearly heard his heart beats!!!and slowly realized tht her cheeks were actually touching his bare chest frm th exposed part of his shirt!!!she felt her skin burning where it touched his chest!!! she suddenly parted with him and in th process her chain which was entangled in his shirt button broke and fell dwn!!

N:oops my chain?.oh god how am i able to find it now!!!

Relax will find it together!! Rplyd th guy!!!

She bent dwn and frantically searched for it everywhere.th guy too started th search!!! once their heads bumped into each other and twice they caught each others hand..finally th guy found it!!! "here he said"..nups blindly..moved her hands and th moment they touched his she caught hold of them and took her chain

N;thanxx ..

Guy:Oh.dn't mention?btw..may I knw ur name

{Both still holding each others hand}

N;yaa..nupur!!

Guy:nupur I hope now ur relax..

N;yaa

And th lights ON!!!

And nups felt heart skip a beat..th guy?whom she hugged was none other than MAYANK himself!!! It was him..still holding her hand tightly!!!

While Mayank..gazing into those big dove eys!!!and feling her soft hands

And nups she didn't knew wot to do!!!!

They stood there holding hands and th song played in bck ground!!

Mayak gazing in nups eyes!!

Kissi Mood pe bhi nay eh saath tote

Mere haath se tera daman na choo te!!!

Nups juss gazing and fearing abt th future!!

Kabhi khwab main bhi tu mujh se na roote

Mere pyaar ki koi khushiyan na loote

Mil jaye iss tarah do lehre jiss tarah

Abh hona juda haan yeh vaada raha!!!

Tu tu hai wahi dil ne jise apna kaha

Tu ahi wahan main hoon jahan

Abh toh yeh jina tere bin hai saza!!!

do leave ur comments and suggetsions!!! luv nihu😳
Edited by ILuvArjun - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
SORRY gyzz couldn't rply to th earlier commnets as those pges are nt opening for me!!!plzz forgv me and leave ur valuable comments!!!they will be answerd frm now on!!
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Edited by ILuvArjun - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
#87
awesome updt
too cute! nupur won the contest
but she gav the wrong name
n mayank is latoo on sweetu
n they met! great part
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nihuuuuuuuu..!!! you updated...!!
*dhinchak dhinchak* I'm dancing..!! hehe...😆😆😆
I've been waiting since like forever to read an update..!!
Because i just loveeeeeee this concept..!!! uffffff....😃😃😃
And I'm even interested in sajan too this time..!! LOL....that barely ever happens in FFs but i like their story as well..secret caller and RJ....uffff...
y'know throughout this chapter i could almost feel nupur's crazyness.!! hehe
How she gets hyper about Mayank and all...! LOL
Her answer really was so nice and honest...no wonder mayank was kinda speechless...!! He hadn't even met her and she had such an impact on him...!!😳
They met....!!!!!!!! OMG i seriously wasn't expecting this....i thought you'd have a hundred missed encounters and then finally they'll meet but this was such a hugge surprise..!!!
And the lift scenes.....uffff.....they weren't even romantic scenes and still sooo romantic...!! You didn't get the most romantic award for nothing....!!!
Totallly loved this part.......!!! And such a looong one..!! made up for all the wait..!!
I can't wait to see what happens next..!! Will he know she was sweetu...??
But all the most i want to see her reaction when she realises that she hugged Mayank...!! LOL😆😆😆
Pleeease continue soon this time..!! Or i'll keep bugging you..!😆😆
Awesome part..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nihuuuuuuuu..you updated ... seriously wasn't expecting this meeting nupur won but y did she give a wrong name?????????? OMFG tthe two of them met but will he know she was sweetu???
Please continue soon this time..!! Or we'll keep bugging you.!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg.....dhinchak dhinchak....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....main to padh kar ek baar fir FANAAAA ho gayiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....

yaar sab kuch fairytale sa lag raha hai....ufff.f...
wo radio station par baat....omg..sweetu?😆lol...cutee name...mujhe to KAL HO NA HO yaad aa gayi....😆
aur ye lift me jhappisss n pappisss...oops sorry..only jhappiss...😳😳😆
hayeeee...ye mayank kisi din sachhi me jaan le lega...😳
aur oopar se tere ye songs...that saya was one of my favourites!!!!!omg...
achha hua maine aur nidhi ne tujhe "dhamki di" nahi to pata nahi kab tak hume iss story se "vanchit" rakhti tu....😆😆
ab fast fast update kar dena..nahi to hum dono milkar tere ghar "terrorist attack" kar denge....😆😆
bole to ekdum dhansoo update...and wo nupz ka mayu ko hug karna n uske cheeks ka mayu ke chest pe....dot dot...ahem....feelings ko jagane ke liye shukriya...wild karne ke liye shukriya....
rockingggg updat!!!!!
lekinnnnnnnnnnnnnn.....i m not in the pm list!!!!!!!








Edited by falak01 - 15 years ago

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