Hamari Adhuri Kahani (SK/AR) pt46 pg86 - Page 9

very nice part..too good..the poems were gooddd....kashish kii shararat.. sujal ka attitude.. sab ek dum mast hai.. keep up the good work going....👏 do continue soon...😊

the last part really hurt me..................cant stand the way sujal gets insulted in front of kashish's gang................but the sms part was excellent............so lovely...............cont soon dear....................

nice part but wana see more AR
thanks sooooooo much
Love Sanam

Originally posted by: sania_58

hey awsome update dear

& jaldi post karne ke liye Thank You

by the way, yeh Kahsish phir se Sujal ko ched diya??

never mind, Sujal ka waqt bhi aayega.

waise idea kaafi accha tha maana padega.

SMS part was too good, lovely Shayeris.

very nice update

great going

plz continue soon, waiting

Originally posted by: sun_423

very nice part..too good..the poems were gooddd....kashish kii shararat.. sujal ka attitude.. sab ek dum mast hai.. keep up the good work going....👏 do continue soon...😊

pls cont soon long time since u last contd

Part 7

"I knew this was going to happen." Mauli squatted down near the pool side and shook her head at Sujal.

He quickly stood up and composed himself as he didn't know what she heard or meant. "K...kya huwa hai....kuch bhi to nahi." He walked towards the edge to climb himself out of the pool and tried hiding his flushed face as he knew Mauli will read him like a book.

She stood up, "I knew she would end up making a fool out of you. When will you start listening to me?" she helped him to climb out.

"Oh come on Mauli tumhe lagta hai ke wo mujhe bewacoof banaehgee or me banjaunga. Wo to bus mera pair fisal gaya tha or..." He was fully out now and he sat down to dry off.

"Yeh, yeh," she pushed him back; "I know everything. Kabse sab kuch dekhrahee thi me wahase." Then she mimicked his actions. "Kese wo tumhe apni meetheesi zubaan se bulaarahee thi or kese tum paagalo ki tarha oske peeche jaarahe the bina soche samjhe."

He went into a dream stance, "I don't know per jab bhi wo mera naam letee hai to kuch ajeebsee kashish mehsoos hoti hai.." she looked at him and he gave her a knowing smile. "I know it's ironic but what can I do. Baree cute lagtee hai jab wo mere saath badmaashiya karti hai."

It took a while before Mauli shook him to take him out of his trance. All this was making her feel suffocated as it was just nonsense. "Sujal please stop all this. Isse pehle ke tum koi museebat me phas jao." She thought about something and became horrified. "Kahi tum sach me Kashish se mohabbat karne to nahi lage?"

He didn't know how to answer that as he didn't know himself. He was about to say yes when he remembered how boldly he had challenged his friends of how he will make Kashish run after him and not vice versa. "Are Mauli tum itnee jaldi shart bule gayi. I'm only doing this to fulfill the challenge." He put his arm around her shoulder. "Yeh sab karna parta hai warna machlee jaal me kese phasegee." He winked at her and she just shook her head as she was never going to understand him completely. He kept changing his colours which worried her further.

At night Kashish couldn't sleep a wink as Sujal's face didn't get out of her face. Every time she closed her eyes he was there with his gorgeous smile and she was forced to open them and just go mad over him. She didn't know what it was but she felt this pull towards him and wanted him to keep coming towards her. He was just too cute and adorable to resist and to reject. She thought, "ek dum buddhu hai wo, per ek cute buddhu. Maana ke wo bhi khel khel raha hai per mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai jese I want this to be real? Kahi me sach me to osse pyaar..." she sat up in excitement, "nahi nahi aisa nahi hosakta." Then the pool scene came in front of her again and she squealed like a kid and fell back on the bed hugging the pillow with love. She just imagined hugging Sujal in the same manner.

Sujal was equally unable to sleep and he was lying on the hammock in his garden and busily writing down his poem. Each line had its own magic and was only full of love. Kashish was his only inspiration. Suddenly someone came and grabbed the book out of his hand alerting him and annoying him. "Mauli do you mind?" he was irritated and tried to pull the book back. "I've told you so many times never to disturb me when I'm writing." He grabbed the book and sat down on the stone step.

"Oho someone is really getting senti over things." She teased him further. "Come on Sujal me har baar tumse poochti rehti hu per tum mujhe apni kavita kabhi nahi dikhaate. But today I want to know." She tried to grab the book again. "Please Sujal tell me na." She desperately wanted to know but Sujal kept hiding it from her. Then she became cross like a small child and turned away from him.

He looked at her and laughed as he knew Mauli was just pretending. "Okay, okay as you wish." He went forward to show her and she got excited and sat closer to him to hear about it. He opened up on the page he had written and he showed it to her. She began scanning it but none of it made any sense to her as he hadn't written in proper discourse.

"What is this Sujal I don't understand one bit of it." She was disappointed.

He grabbed the book back and then lied back on the stone step and began reciting the poem. "Tu meri adhuri pyaas, pyaas

Tu agayi mann ko raas raas

Ab to tu aaja paas paas

Hai guzarish

Hai haal to dil ka tang tang

Tu rang ja mere rang rang

Bas chalna mere sang sang

Hai guzarish

Kehde tu haa to zindagi

Chaino se choot ke hasegee

Moti honge moti

Raaho me

Tu meri adhuri pyaas, pyaas

Tu agayi mann ko raas raas

Ab to tu aaja paas paas

Hai guzarish" Then he finished at that and just lied there staring at the moon in the sky.

The words really touched Mauli and she was awed by his words. She had read many of his previous poems but this one was too special. "Wow, Sujal this was so magical."

"Hogee kyu nahi aakhir jiske liye likha hai wo bhi to khaas hee hai." He saw a smiling Kashish in the stars waving back at him and sending him a flying kiss. Mauli didn't ask further and lied down next to him also staring in the sky and listened to the rest of his poem. She knew by now that no matter how much he was denying it he surely was in love with Kashish and it was about time he admitted it rather than pretending to be this big hot shot which he clearly wasn't.

Next day Kashish and Charu were in the famous market place shopping around but Kashish couldn't stop thinking about Sujal. Everywhere she went she could feel his essence and it felt as if he was all around her. What was this sensation she was feeling she couldn't understand but she certainly felt good during it.

"Kashish? Kashish?" Charu had been calling her from the past five minutes and she didn't respond at all. She went and shook her and then Kashish realized what was going on. "Kya karahee hai yeh?" she referred to Kashish's hand as she had worn red bangles. "Tune laal rang kee churiya pehnee jab ke tujhe yeh rang bilkul pasand nahi."

Kashish looked down towards her hand and saw the bangles and was equally shocked as to how did that happen. She didn't know what happened. She had gone to the stall and then as she browsed, Sujal came towards her and then took her hand. Then he picked up the red bangles and slipped them on her hand and she didn't protest and allowed him to have his way. Then he lightly kissed her wrist as he slipped them on and then he disappeared. She couldn't believe he was doing this to her. She put the bangles near her cheek and kept touching it as if she was trying to feel his touch on her.

Charu found it really strange. "What are you doing Kashish?"

"I don't know but I just love this colour now." She pretended that everything was alright and then both of them walked away from there. They were just getting near some other stalls when they heard someone humming a tune. The voice sounded enchanting and Kashish couldn't move her feet and was forced to turn around to see who it was. She couldn't believe who stood in front of her. He was actually here again and she knew exactly why he was.

Sujal stood in front of her with his usual charming self with a guitar around his neck. He was strumming a sweet melodic tune and gradually made his way towards her.

"Tu meri adhuri pyaas pyaas

Tu aagayee mann ko raas raas

Ab to..."

All eyes were on them as he made his way towards her and Kashish felt a bit conscious.

"Tu meri adhuri pyaas pyaas

Tu aagayee mann ko raas raas

Ab to tu aaja paas paas

Hai guzarish"

he was near her now and he encircled her

"Hai haal to dil ka tang tang

Tu rang ja mere rang rang

Bas chalna mere sang sang

Hai guzarish"

He came in front of her and pleaded her.

"Kehde tu haan to zindagee

Chaino se chute ke hasegee

Moti honge moti raaho me

Tu meri adhuri pyaas pyaas

Tu aagayee mann ko raas raas

Ab to tu aaja paas paas

Hai guzarish"

His charm was certainly winning her over as he really was something. She just wanted to hear more and more.

"Sheeshe ke khwaaab leke

Raaton me chal raha hu

Takra na jaayu kahi"

Suddenly he went out of sight and Kashish kept searching him. Then he made her jump when he appeared from the back.

"Aasha ki lau hai roshan

Lekin toofan ka darr

Lau buj na jaaye kahi

He pleaded to her again.

"Bas ek haa ki guzarish

Phir hongi khushyo ki baarish"

He turned away from her

"Tu meri adhuri pyaas pyaas

Tu aagayee mann ko raas raas

Ab to tu aaja paas paas

Hai guzarish"

Kashish wanted to leave but her feet were not allowing her as his very presence was too alluring. She could feel each word coming out of his mouth touch straight to her heart. He returned back to her and threw golden silver confetti on her.

"Chanda hai, aasmaan hai

Aur baadal bhi ghane hai

Yeh chanda chup jaaye na"

He showed a mirror in front of her to say she was his moon.

"Tanhai dass rahi hai

Aur dharkhan barahee hai

Ek pal bhi chain aaye na"

For sometime both of them kept staring in each other's eyes as they both could clearly see how much they loved each other but still there was this hitch which stopped them to believe it was true.

Soon he turned away to break the trance.

"Kaisi ajab daastaan hai

Bechainiya bas yaha hai"

Kashish also became conscious as to what was she doing. She couldn't fall in love with Sujal as she knew he was also playing with her. But why did she see true love for her in his eyes?

"Tu meri adhuri pyaas pyaas

Tu aagayee mann ko raas raas

Ab to tu aaja paas paas

Hai guzarish

Hai haal to dil ka tang tang

Tu rang ja mere rang rang

Bas chalna mere sang sang

Hai guzarish"

He came over and held her hand in his

"Kehde tu haan to zindagee

Chaino se chute ke hasegee

Moti honge moti raaho me"

He lightly kissed her hand and kept giving her loving looks. She also was captured by his blissful eyes and wanted to just drown in them.

"Tu meri adhuri pyaas pyaas

Tu aagayee mann ko raas raas"

The applause from the public around made Kashish remove her hand out of his grasp and she felt too embarrassed. Charu pulled her arm to take her away from the whole drama however Kashish only wanted to stay with Sujal.

He didn't want her to leave just like that as he had planned so much he wanted to tell her. He tried to stop her but Charu was persistent and didn't allow Kashish to stay on. She gave him a sweet look which just made him forget everything and he kept staring after her.

"Beta Sujal isse pehle ke yeh larki tujhe ghoomayeh oska maamla tamaam kar." He tried convincing himself that this was just a play but his heart was not ready to listen and it only wanted to believe that he was falling in love and she also was in love with him. "Even if she is not I'll make sure she does." He smirked and walked off.

When the two girls reached outside the market place Kashish halted and pulled her hand out of Charu's hand. "Why did you do that Charu? Kitna pyaara gaana gaaraha tha wo or tune mujhe aise hee wahase keech liya." She was disappointed.

"Kashish I very well know what he was doing." Charu crossed her hands across her chest. "Bhool gayee ke wo yeh sab sirf yuhi karaha hai tumhaare saath."

"I know but I don't know why but every time he does these things it appears to be so real and sweet that I forget everything." Kashish remembered Sujal's serene face again when he had held her hand and lightly kissed it. Then she got shook by Charu.

"You can't forget that we're doing this whole thing to teach him a lesson that he can't play around with women like this."

"Charu I know initially that was our motive but Sujal looks so innocent and not that types as I thought." She was in denial as she felt as if she was able to see the real Sujal deep down.

This was impossible and Charu couldn't believe that Kashish was falling for it. "As far as I remember you were the one who had told us about that night incident. Of how he was coming onto you when you wanted him to leave you alone."

The whole stormy night came in front of Kashish again of how she had first met him. The whole thing made her laugh as it was surely funny. She remembered he kept explaining that he was only trying to help her but she was too scared of him. Then the encounter at the roller skating ring made her see a new side of him. But still her heart was not ready to believe that he was doing everything intentionally. His eyes told her a different story.

"Believe me Kashish he is just the same." Charu saw how Kashish didn't want to believe it. "Okay let's continue this ploy and find out ourselves as to what exactly he wants." Both of them agreed and walked off together.

Few days later Kashish was sitting in her studio where she was preparing her drawings. Her friends also accompanied her and were helping her out. Suddenly they shrieked as a loud ringtone began ringing somewhere in the mess. All of them began searching for it here and there and then Kashish found it under her sheets. She flipped her head as she realized she still had Sujal's phone. Then she smiled and called all her friends. "Hey guys, its him." All of them rushed over to her with excitement. She picked up the phone and in the sweetest voice said "hi Jaaaaaaanooooo."

Sujal spat out the water he was drinking as he couldn't believe his ears. Kashish sounded too different today. "J...jaanoo?" he was surprised and wanted to confirm he heard right.

She laughed, "kyu aapko bura laga?"

"No..I mean I didn't feel bad," he gave a funny laugh, "it just felt new and..."

"Oh come on Sujal, what's so new about this?" she teased him further, "ab to ham dono ek dusre ki dil kee baat jaante hai na Jaaaaaanooo." The last word she emphasized on purpose to tease him further.

This was making him too nervous and he didn't know what to say. Why was she being so forward all of a sudden? Something was wrong somewhere but he had to compose himself.

When she didn't hear any voice on the otherside she thought perhaps he disconnected or she over did it. Mahek took the phone from her to see what was going on and she told her that he was still online and handed back the phone. Kashish laughed and then told the others to silence down and she began her act again. "hello? Hello? Are you there Sujal?"

He became alert and answered her that he was still listening.

"Yeh kya baat huwi? Itne dino tak aap hamse milne nahi aaye or aaj jaake phone kiya?" she exchanged naughty glances with Mahek and Charu.

"Wo...me...actually..." he was trying to find the right answer but it felt impossible with her talking in this manner. His mind went numb. "Actually Kashish I did meet you yesterday for a few brief minutes..."

"Kal?" she said it with so much excitement that Sujal nearly fell back. "pura ek din. Jaante hai pure din me kitne ghante hote hai, kitnee minutes hoti hai or kitne seconds hote hai?" the girls couldn't stop gigiling as this was too much. "Ek din to kya me to ek pal bhi aapse dhoore nahi rehsakti Jaaaaaaaanooooo." She covered the receiver and burst out laughing as she could just imagine Sujal's face. Although she felt really bad doing this but it was fun.

Now Sujal was really worried and he couldn't understand what to do or think. He was sat with his friends in the caf and Pratham had just picked up a glass of water to drink and before he could Sujal grabbed it from him and gulped it down in one go. All of them kept staring at him and wondered why he was perspiring so much.

"Okay so you're coming to meet me na?" she pushed the last button to see what he would do and she was expecting a yes as she desperately wanted to meet him again.

He thought over it and then answered. "Haan...I'll be there," then he shook his head to get in his senses. "I mean I'll be there in a while after I finish my work." Then before she could say anything further he quickly put the phone down. This was turning into serious business now and he had to end it anyhow. He would get Kashish's confession by hook or by crook.

hey nice part................the song was really very beautiful.................sk have true feeling foe each other to some extent hope they confess without any misunderstandings...............cont soon dear.............