Hamari Adhuri Kahani (SK/AR) pt46 pg86 - Page 49

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow....wat a revelation!! I mean it all connects beautifully...however I'll start from the beginning....all the lines were well suited to the situation of Sujal n Kashish....and I must say u chose them wonderfully. I liked the slight inclusion of Atul-Anjali...and also the AR scene. Seems like Armaan knws wat he wants....and wud love to see this story progressing further!! - thanks alot for appreciting it all. Yeh i thought it was abt time the revelation took place. surely Armaan won't be able to stay far from her for long

Here Rishi also gets bak wid sum piece of info....that Charu was behind all this....but why did she try to kill Sujal later on? And why did she hav to do this wid Akshat? 😡 - are aadha nikal chuka hain to baaki ka aadha bhi nikal jaayega jaldi

And now...coming to the Mauli-Visaal part....u again wrote it beautifully...and I definitely liked the way it all has turned out to be. However I hope everything is f9 wid Mauli....and Sujal is found soon....wonder where he has left. - thanks for liking this part too. Yeh things will progress in the next part and lets see how both of these get on

And yes...its actually soo tragic to imagine Sujal's condition...coz his book built the Kashish for him....and despite loveing him immensely....she doesnt blv she is his...and this implies he cant get his love despite the fact that its eternally his.....gosh....its too painful.... - yeh i know but this is wat intensifies their love really

but at the same tym very beautiful as well....lovely part Kiran.... - thanks very much once again

pls do continue soon...as am very much eager to read the next part!!

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

woowww bbuddy..

amazing part...👏 - thanks very much

loved the antakshari part...⭐️ -I'm glad u did

n sujal reaction...n wat he did....he hugged her...sooo happy for that..😳 - sure as it was natural na

but wat kasish said...broke my heart also...😭 - yeh it was sad I know but she is going through a lot too

n both left in rage...n armi got a slap from ridz....bechara...😆 - hehe yaha pe to sab ki lagi huwi hain

so charu did that all...she killed akshat also....she is such a jerk........😡😡 - yes she is

serial mein bhi becharon ko nahin chora...aur yahan bhi.......😡 - ab kya kare oska kaam hee aisa hain

n finally the whole truth is out.........

mouli told her everything.... - yes finally it has been revealed

hope she cope up wid all....n her parents also support her... - hmmm lets see wat happens

warna bohat mushkil ho ga....

i hope mouli will be fine...nothing goes wrong..😲 - yeh she wud be fine nothing to worry

n so is wid sujal... - ab oski guarantee nahi hain

amazing ud... - thanks once again

plzzz update soon...

thnx for the pm........😉 - ur welcome

Originally posted by: spvd

wow very nice part................. - thanks very much

now everything is clear..................... - yeh u must be happy that finally the mystery is solved

but how long will it take for visaal to believe and accept the truth, thats gonna be tough unless her parents support and say the reality................ - hmm yeh let's see how that carries on

hope sujal is fine and also Mauli......................... - sure they'll be just fine

cont soon dear...............
finally the mostly awaited part is here................am so glad about this revelation................ - well I'm glad u r

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
Riddss

plz sweety coninue soon........:-(

Originally posted by: funkyred

plz sweety coninue soon........:-(

I am dying to read he next part........😭

ur ff is superb ⭐️

but plz continue soon.....

Part 42

After Visaal heard Mauli's scary scream she rushed to her side to enquire as to what happened. Her doctor instincts became alert and she held her carefully.

Meanwhile Mauli was in pain and she just couldn't understand anything right then. She screamed for Piyush and cried out loud. Visaal trid her best to take care of her but it appeared she had to be taken to the hospital immediately.

The situation was tense and because Visaal was stressed she panicked. Usually she knew exactly what to do in situations like those as she had encountered endless of those situations daily but right then she wasn't thinking like a doctor but like a helpless woman.

However soon Mauli's constant cries brought her to senses and she quickly grabbed Mauli's phone in order to call anyone from her family. Luckily she found Piyush's number only in the missed calls and she quickly dialed it.

A tensed Piyush drove around the city worrying about where Mauli had gone to. He had tried to catch up to her in between and had even followed her in the car to some extent but then at one point he had lost her totally. Since then he had roamed around clueless of her whereabouts.

His cell ringed continuously and yet he ignored it but then finally he picked it up. When he saw Mauli's name, he answered with haste. "Thank God Mauli you called…"

"Piyush you need to come here immediately." Visaal tried to stay calm. "Mauli…Mauli is in…"

Before she could have continued Piyush interrupted becoming hyperactive. "What happened to her?" he recognized Visaal's voice and was confirmed that Mauli was at her house. "Is she alright? Ose kuch…"

"We need to take her to the hospital right now so hurry up and come to my house." That's all she was able to say because she couldn't see Mauli's painful state any longer. She dropped the phone and handled her to calm her and confort her to the most.

It took Piyush ten minutes to reach to Visaal's house as he raced his car to the most he could have. Once he got there he found both Visaal and Mauli on the floor with Mauli lying holding onto her belging stomach, whilst Visaal held her. He didn't waste any more time and quickly picked Mauli in his arms and carried her out towards the car. Visaal followed him and then they all rushed to Sanjeevni.

Sanjeevni

Two to three hours had passed since Mauli had been in labour. As Piyush had feared, her pregnancy had taken complications due to which they had to perform a c-section. Visaal had talked with the head gyneac, Dr. Muskaan about it and then Muskaan had taken over the case quite well. She assured Piyush that it was a risky case but she would try her level best to save both the mother and the baby.

That had been then and yet still after the long hours wait there still wasn't any result. Piyush was really worried and hadn't been able to rest for even a minute. He was all alone and he truly missed his brothers a lot. Especially Sujal because his support would have made him feel totally relieved. Yet he was missing and the rest were involved with their problems. Life seemed to be in such a mess right then.

Gupta's house

An utterly upset and disappointed Riddhima ran inside her house and bursted into her room crying over the whole episode between Armaan and Shilpa. She had loved Armaan so intensely and yet he had crushed it so harshly. Her heart felt crashed into millions of pieces.

Armaan had caught up with her and he knocked onto her door desperately. "Riddhima…please Riddhima open the door." He knocked again. "Look I know you're really upset but please listen to me." He knocked again and again, "Riddhima…"

She just continued to cry inside her room ignoring his pleads. It was as if she didn't want to hear or understand anything anymore. Life truly felt empty right then.

Even with the constant knocking, Armaan didn't see any response and he brushed his hands through his hair with frustration. How was he going to explain to her that there was nothing between him and Shilpa. There had never been anything between him and any one else in fact. He agreed that it had taken him a long time to realize his feelings towards her but now he knew that they had always been there. Whatever it was he had to get his word towards her before things got out of hand.

After ten minutes Riddhima's tears had dried but the hole in her heart became more hallow. She sat on her bed going over all the things she had shared with Armaan and had kept as her memories of him. All the letters she had written to him were still fresh and each and every word flashed in front of her. It made her burst out to cry once again and she fell onto her pillow, burying her eyes deep inside them.

A crash noise was heard so she sat up instantly to be alarmed. When she saw that Armaan had climbed in through the window she was even madder and turned away from him. She didn't want to see his face at all.

It had been something Armaan had done many times in other women's rooms but when he climbed in through Riddhima's room he felt very awkward as if he knew it wasn't right. Perhaps it was because it was the first time he actually cared what the woman thought of him. He had a sorry look, "Riddhima I'm sorry I came in like this but please listen to me."

"Armaan chale jao yahase, mujhe kuch nahi sunna." She got off her bed and stood with her back towards him.

He walked forward towards her, "I know I've hurt you and I understand what you're going through and…"

That made her turn towards him angrily, "you don't understand what I'm going through and shall never." It was then that Armaan saw the hurt in her eyes for the first time. "You've never understood anything Armaan." She was really upset. "Kabhi bhi tumne mere feelings ki care ki hee nahi warna aaj tum aise nahi hote."

To some extent it was true and Armaan knew it. "Yeh sach hain ke maine kabhi bhi samjha nahi but I've understood now." He gradually came closer to her from behind. "I've understood what it means to only think about that person day and night." He was a bit closer to her. "I've understood what it means to loose all your senses just thinking about that one person." His front now touched her back and she slightly gasped. "I've understood what it means to feel terribly upset when that person hurts you the most." His hands, entangled with her's gradually. "I've understood what it means to give everything you own for that one person and never to care what you receive back." Both of them had tears in their eyes as he began to wrap both of their arms around her. "I've understood Riddhima how hard it is to see whom you love immensely crush your heart in a whiplash."

She continued to cry as he rested his head on her shoulder bringing both of their faces really close. "I've understood what it means when your heart pains and you feel like crying because you've hurt that person who has done nothing but cared about you." Riddhima couldn't stop her tears which flowed like river. "I've understood what it means to love someone so intensely that you would do anything, even hide your love for so many years just to keep that one person happy."

His statement startled her and she gave him a disbelief look. What could he have meant by that? The look in his eyes told her many things but now she was tired of just understanding and wanted him to spell it out. Tell her what was going on in his mind.

It was as if he understood what she thought and then he turned her towards him, held both her hands and took them near his heart. "I know I've been the biggest fool in this world to have not seen what had always been in front of me. But now I have and I can clearly see who my heart aches for." Riddhima cried on as he continued. "I know Riddhima that it only yells one person's name and it hurts tremensely." He held her hands tight whilst silent tears flowed out of his eyes. "And I know how much that person's heart also aches and can only heal once the two hearts are joined." Her muffles became loud. "Will you help me heal that person's heart?" he asked with so much sincerity. "kya tum meree madad karogi Riddhima?"

Riddhima couldn't hold back and she burst into his arms crying out loud. She held him tight and he also wrapped his arms around her. "I love you Armaan, I really love you." Her stream of tears flowed non stop.

"I love you too Riddhima." He comforted her at the same time held her as if he had possessed the greatest treasure in the world. In real he had for sure received the best treasure in the world.

Visaal's house

She didn't stick around the hospital after Dr. Muskaan had taken care of Mauli's case. Not only didn't she want to create more problems with her family but there were also many other complications which she had to sort out. She had silently retreated back to her house and had remained deep in thought for a long time.

It was then that her gaze fell onto the reports and the diary Mauli had thrown towards her. She got off the armchair and sat on the ground near the things. Then she took the reports and read them page to page and the colour from her face drained by the end of it. Apparently everything Mauli had said was true and she hated to admit the fact that she infact had multiple personality disorder. Tears dropped out of her eyes as she crouched, resting her head between her legs. Her whole world came crashing upon her and she very much hated her existence right then.

Now that one thing was proved she had to know the full truth so hence she picked up the diary lying there and opened it to the first page. She caressed the page as she immediately recognized her handwriting. She busily read each page and felt as if she relived each and every memory of Kashish. Nearly each page was flooded with her tears because of the depth there had been in Kashish's love which Visaal couldn't feel.

Naina lageeyan baarisha

Te sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye

Naina lageeya baarisha

Rove palkein de kone vich neendh meri

Naina lageeyan baarisha

Hanju digde ne chot lage dil te

Naina lageeyan baarisha

Rut birha de badlan de chaagayee

Kaali kaali khaali raato se hone lagi hain dosti

Khoya khoya in raahon me ab mera kuch bhi nahin

Har pal har lamha main kese sehta hoon

Har pal har lamha main khudse yeh kehta rehta hoon

Truly Sujal had given his life for Kashish and it seemed it just wasn't enough. Then the best thing to do was to forget her but was it even possible for him? He knew that for one year that he had lived, he hadn't lived at all because her memories haunted him to such extent that he was forced to consume alcohol to relieve him. He had stopped everything but he hadn't been successful in stopping his tears from flowing.

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Phir kyun teri yaadon ne

Mujhe rula diya oh

Mujhe rula diyaaaa

As Visaal read all the lovable times she had spent with Sujal as Kashish, she felt more pain because it was hard to imagine that so much had happened and yet she couldn't remember anything. The memories told her the whole story which made her think that perhaps she had written to always remember it no matter what happened.

Teri yaadon main likhe jo lafz dete hain sunayi

Beetay lamhe poochte hain, kyu hue aise judaa, khuda

Khuda mila jo yeh faasla hain

Khuda tera hee yeh faisla hain

Khuda hona tha wo hogaya hain

Jo tune tha likha

By the end she just hugged the diary against her heart and cried her heart out, whilst Sujal's pain grew.

As he continued to wonder down the roads the only best thing he could crave for then was a drink. He wanted to be relieved of the pain.

Kaali kaali khaali raato se hone lagi hain dosti

Khoya khoya in raahon me ab mera kuch bhi nahin

Har pal har lamha main kese sehta hoon

Har pal har lamha main khudse yeh kehta rehta hoon

He managed to find a bar and had begun his usual consumption of glass after glass because he just wanted to totally forget Kashish's betrayal and rejection.

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Phir kyun teri yaadon ne

Mujhe rula diya oh

Mujhe rula diyaaaa

Visaal read all the memories of their time in Shimla. How many lines Sujal had recited just on her and he simply couldn't have stopped praising her. She cried about the pain she had caused him over the whole year and yet when she met him again he had only worried about her pain. It made her feel more guilty and depressed.

Naina lageeyan baarisha

Te sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye

Naina lageeya baarisha

Rut birha de badlan de chaagayee

The glasses kept filling as Sujal picked them up one by one. By then he had consumed enough to have been totally intoxicated. He had promised everyone that he wouldn't drink again but after what happened, life meant meaningless again. Therefore it didn't matter if he lived or died. However her memories hadn't totally left him as he sat there ruminating about her.

Do pal tujhse jura tha, aise phir raasta muda tha

Tujhse me khone laga, juda jaise hone laga

Mujhse kuch mera

He drank more and more so he could just loose his senses in order for the pain to disappear altogether.

Tu hee mere liye ab kar dua, tu hee is dard se karde juda

Tera hoke tera jo mein na raha

Main yeh khud se kehta hoon

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Tujhe bhoola diya oh

Phir kyun teri yaadon ne

Mujhe rula diya oh

Mujhe rula diyaaaa

Rishi, Pratham and Varun had driven around mostly everywhere since they had left the party to find Sujal. It had been hours and still there had been no sign of him. The last resort had been all the bars in town, which they didn't want to believe but desperate times called for desperate measures. All of them were aware of Sujal's capabitlity and since he was so disturbed there was a possibitlity of him being in one of them.

Henceforth began their hunt in nearly all the bars they were aware of in town. No results had been found when at last they caught up with him in one particular one. To their horror he had been drinking and they all were displeased that they were unable to come in time to stop him.

Any how they were here then and Rishi strode towards a drunken Sujal to stop him from further destroying himself. "That's enough Big B," he took the glass out of his hand and put it on the counter. "Come on let's go home." He tried to pick him up but Sujal shrugged him off aggressively.

"What are you doing here Rishi?" he turned towards the glass again but Rishi didn't let him drink. "Good that you came," his voice was slurred due to being drunk, "we'll enjoy a drink together." He removed Rishi's hand and finished off the drink.

Rishi couldn't see his brother's state like that again. He had seen him die each day from the past one year and since the last few months he had begun to live again, so there was no way he was going to let him go that path once more. "Big B please," he requested as he took the glass away from him. "stop drinking and let's go home." He managed to pick Sujal up this time and they had begun to walk with Sujal's constant stumbling but he managed himself.

Pratham and Varun also were there to handle him but Sujal was just too angry about plenty of things. Once they were outside, he shrugged Rishi off again and then attempted to stand by himself but rocked to and fro. The guys did try to handle him but he warned them to stay away. "Ab mera koi ghar nahi or koi tikhaana nahi." He stumbled back but he held his step, "just leave me alone." And he walked off into the darkness.

The three guys followed him to convince him to come with them but Sujal wasn't ready to listen to anything. "What are you doing Sujal?" Pratham walked behind him, "tu paagal hogaya hain, istarha haar ke beit ne se kuch nahi hoga." He tried to steady Sujal but once again Sujal shrugged him off. "Why are you doing this injustice with you?"

Sujal stopped, "I'm tired Pratham." His eyes were moist, "jitna mere bus me tha maine osse kahi ziada kiya. But I guess she is just too adamant to listen to any of my pleas." He turned around to face Pratham who looked sad too. "I know my friend that I'm ruining my life but my life has already been ruined because Kashish has ruined herself. She doesn't understand that I won't be able to live to see her in so much pain."

That made Varun come forward and held Sujal by his shoulders. "To phir jaake ose apne pyaar ka vaasta de." He looked sharply towards him. "Make her realize what she is rejecting and build that trust within her again."

In return Sujal got a bit hyper and pushed himself back, "Kitnee baar!" he yelled in the silent night. "How many times more would I have to prove my love to her?" in his excitement he tripped over a hand cart but he could have cared less and just remained in that position. His drunken state didn't allow him enough energy to get up. The others caught up with him to help him up. "I've given everything up for her, my heart and my life only belongs to her. To ab kya bacha hain mere paas." As Rishi squatted beside, he felt really sad hearing his brother's words. "Maine Kashish ko apne pure dil se pyaar kiya hain. Apne wajood se ziada chaaha hain." With the support of Rishi, he stood up.

"So are you just going to let her go like this?" Rishi questioned once they stood up again. "No Big B,' he shook his head, "I won't let you ruin your life again like this."

Once again in excitement Sujal pushed Rishi off him, "BEBAS!" his shrilled voice echoed throughtout the lonely lanes, "I'm totally helpless Rishi." He stumbled but Rishi caught him. "I can't do anything anymore." He cried and Rishi gave him a comforting brotherly hug. "sab kuch tute ke bikhar gaya hain. I've lost everything completely Rishi, everything." He continued to cry which made Rishi shed tears too. His brother meant the world to him and yet he felt so helpless to do anything to help him relieve his pain.