pending replies from part 8@nij... yeh i think i can guess what in RM.... n nikki/abhi... i'm keeping in mind what i was told, they must follow through the story.. abhi's chicken was really just spontaneous... i dunno how it came, but im guessing that means i haven't lost my touch, with WEIRD senseless nicks on the cell, no one i knew in my undergrad was a NAME name in my cell directory, they all had... ahem! and armaan! sigh... its the one plavce i can prudly make anything of a guy and say hes mine, as in ye mera wala armaan hai :D :D :D .... gladie u liked, all that u did... and no... comment a bore, tera?? u forgotten what my first book has to say??? :D
@hina didi ... im saying nothing more than what i did in the ps... seriously hinz, i did write some 3/4th of this current update after reading ur comment :)
@kiz... yeh yeh yeh! u like armaan not cause AR were missing, and pigs can fly :D lol! its such a treat to tick u/tease u/ pick on u :D anyways didnt get the next too much longer jeez! but! ... u know why she could NOT know it was him now, at least! :) will continue sooner, this time, pukka se! and u editing comments, tuje pata hi warna wat!
@ftm_ca ... ps: did u tell me your name, and it has slipped me? sorry! please, once again! and im glad ur enjoying it, i have only a count few exclusive AN/AA /RM fans on this fic, and its always interesting to know what they think of the story and its proceeding and when the obvious emphasis is always only AR!! glad also, that ur enjoying the friendly banters, they shall i assure you go on for an eternity, i dont know of an undergrad bonding otherwise!
@prathi aka pester team ki sardar! sure!! all the pestering and seat sharin, now u guys have it up for competition on who's better (so much for a fic! im SO flattered :D ) aite seriously, glad u enjoyed the bits, RM are an edge higher yeh, courtesy rahul, and mostly there is a distinction i have in my head of all 4 couples, which i keep trying to put across with each part!!...
*edit*@sai... i LOVED reading ur comment, and esp ur analysis at it! yeh... armaans self talking bit, him not concluding her to be a crushing girl (like duh! hes an IITian, respect his mind, eh!) and nikki muskaan... rahul the guy! ... abhimanyu and chicken! that was spontaneous, i have no clue when it hit me! but really! your comment was extremely fun to read... nikki knowing about chicken, we'll see how tha goes, and AR up and ahead!! they have a long way to go, longer than usual and many! thanks for the details hun! enjoyed reading, much!
@harika... just one ting, your last sentence made me smile, immensely... cause i know, its not a usual from u , at all! me beaming!
@margi thanks hun!
@aria :D u and i have some coordination with timing updates, AND delays, dont we?!!
@alia ... thanks for the wonderful comment hun, esp the pretty color of the text :) apart from all that u liked, which i am glad about, here's answering the question u asked... so in my head, framing RM here so far, its showing rahul as an edge over muski in a relationship two people share... in terms mostly of his maturity... shes a smart and understanding girl for her age and experience, but with rahul apart from all his love and concern she suddenly feels over shadowed by someone who can see through herr like shes transparent, where as she cant read his mind, understand his needs half as much... when he shared his problem with her, it was the fact that he shared it that bothered her, but the fact that she cant see how to react/respond/empathize with him... she doesnt understand how when he shared something that he expected her to come back... basically, lets say, she thinks she doesnt match up to understanding how to be with him and a good partner the way he manages to be... u know? hopefully! basically, im trying that... its something like dating a guy older than u by a few years, where u want the relationship to be honest and very mutually important, and when u feel u fall short of what the relationships demands... nonetheless, i will keep it in mind, trying to build upon my thought explicitly? as the parts grow!! :) (ps: howz ur foot?) ... as far as the aag dono taraf barabar hai beeru goes, lol alia! u can never skip the dramatics, and im always looking forward to them!!! :D
*edit* @aish ... about armaan's conflicting emotions on ridhima having come for the game and yet not made it, lets say it was him trying (in vain) to understand her as a person, and lets also say, he's far from knowing half of what she is! for now! RM, yeh muski's mostly just having the age gap issue in relationship dilemma... she cant figure him out as much as he can, it makes her feel inadequate, at times?! Nikki abhi :D wait n watch! glad u liked the part, and u can be mad at me for this, but i sort of forgot what it was that i had intended u to see... :S maybe i'll recall it soon , and let u know!
@armaan ... honestly, everytime im replying to u using THAT name, it makes me think im talking to a character! :D thanks for staying up, sacrificing extra cricket AND sleep to read the update! :) and im glad the part at least made up for both of those losses! the characters and dialogues are, even thought none of them really me, yet technically a lot of how i am, aor what ive seen in my own gangs... not at all a single person i knew or shall,... but on the whole!! my perception of undergrad bondings!! nof course engineering!!
@urvi.. thanks a bunch girl!
@RT di ... :D i'm not going to not tell you, your idea abouyt ridhima taking the number, calling and realizing the voices were identical never struck me, it would have been a RAGE!!! :D (maybe i'll use it some other time... maybe also, u should start writing?!!) glad u liked the update, but where are you now..?
@sunaina ... :) im glad u seemed to have enjoyed every bit of the part, thanks for the lovely comments, and wind T ... trsut me, that is heaven like during the typical indian summer... one of those times when u begin to thank engineers and their at least on rare occasions REALISTIC smart minds outside of the darned labs!! :D hope u enjoy the new update as much!
@sakshi ... as far as ridhima and her reaction on learning about Abhi goes, i guess i made my point... lets see what happens when Armaan comes to know!!! (aren't they FUN! i enjoy writing these two SO much!!) the rest of the gang, they have to be... im notorious for my incapability to focus on the protagonists1 if i directed a movie, the lead actors would have a ball with how light their schedules are!! :D as for the pestering team, dont u think they are enough, already? how about u come to my side, i'm a loner so far, with help from nijal only VERY rarely!
coming back to the rest soon!
Edited by spln - 15 years ago
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