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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: angel_riya
i thut of comin here 2 scold u Anam for nt upd8in bt i curse myself for comin here 2 scold u...w/o knwin d fact tht u caught cold...
my sisi fren{sisterly fren}hope u dun mind me callin tht...
caught a cold...i knw how bad colds r...'Just get away u cold!!u r hurtin my Sisi Fren!!!'
g8 wel soon hun!!
wil try n wait for d nxt upd8...take rest!!

luv ya loadzz!!!
urs riyu!!!

riyu hun luv ya loadssssss rey

ya i hateeeee wen i catch a cold but yeh cold to mera peecha hi nahi chodta but dw i am working on it

ive done more than half of it on word document hopefully tomrow or the day after tomrow tak update kardungi

riyuu luv yaaa loadsss hayye u can call me ur sis 22

dbnt call me sis fwend im ur fwend 222 muahzzzzzzzzzz

i jus cant wiat for u 2 join humara (u noe lolz)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#312

riyu hun luv ya loadssssss rey

ya i hateeeee wen i catch a cold but yeh cold to mera peecha hi nahi chodta but dw i am working on it

ive done more than half of it on word document hopefully tomrow or the day after tomrow tak update kardungi

riyuu luv yaaa loadsss hayye u can call me ur sis 22

dbnt call me sis fwend im ur fwend 222 muahzzzzzzzzzz

i jus cant wiat for u 2 join humara (u noe lolz)

luv ya too sis!!!{now thts fyn lolz}
bak b4 4mnths i used 2 catch cold evryday at d mornin n at nyt...!!!
bt aftr we shiifted 2 UK...i caught cold only for once..phew!!!
dun worry...i can wait for it...i understand ur nt feeling wel...!!
i knw u hav a severe headache while u catch cold n sumtyms i feel lyk throwing my head outta my body!!!hope u g8 wel soon Anam{my sis}!!!

dun worry i already m in my 260s lines of my posts...wil b thr soon!!!

GET WELL SOON HUN!!!

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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#313

riyaa ur such a swtheart

the part is ready but i dnt think i have time to send PM's but ill try 2

its coming in dew mins

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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#314

PART 13

sorry for teh long wiat guyz

As armaan pushed the blanket off him with his legs and rubbed his eyes'.he yawned and slowly got up. He checked the time and realized he was getting late so he rushed into the bathroom to take a shower. After 10 mins he came out wiping his hair with his towel with water sprinkling everywhere. He was wearing a white shirt with jeans. He looked at himself in the mirror and winked to the mirror. He fixed his hair with his hands.

To the mirror: dude your looking hot.

He checked his phone in case Riddhima called him after all those miscalls he gave her but there was no miscalls from Riddhima. Disappointed he decided to stop by at Riddhimas house in case she needed a lift. He knew that was just an excuse the real reason was that one day without seeing her seemed so incomplete to him these days. He was actually missing her'he beautiful smile'.the way she looked at him,'.her hair flying all over the place'..thinking about her made him imagine she was there.

(Asmaani rang ho-background music)Riddhima was spinning around letting her hair go everywhere' her eyes twinkling'. smiling at armaan. Armaan slowly took small steps and started to come closer to Riddhima. As he was going to put her hair behind her ears'.

Armaan realized he was only imagining her. He knew something was wrong with him. He felt so different these days. But he liked this new feeling. The only bad thing was he wasn't sure what it was. He put on his jacket...Got his keys and rushed to his bike. As he sat on it he checked himself again in the side view mirrors. He started the bike and drove off ready to see Riddhima.

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Whilst in the Gupta mansion Riddhima was sitting down on the breakfast table all ready to leave wearing a red (sauce wala red) salwar which showed her beautiful figure leaving anyone who looked at her stunned. She was taking small bites of her toast whilst her sister anjali was munching down everything she could in that time. When she saw that Riddhima was looking at her she smiled. Riddhima was glad thinking her sister was alright with her not knowing what she was up to. When Riddhima looked back at her food anjali gave an evil smile to Riddhima and carried on eating.

Riddhima had finished eating and was staring into space thinking of armaan. when she woke up this morning she had 25 miscalls from armaan but somehow she had controlled herself form calling him back though she was worried in case he wanted to tell her something important. She still wanted to figure out why he didn't come yesterday and who that girl was that she heard on the phone.

ridzi thought- one day down 6 more days to go

she had decided to stay away form him for a week and only one day had gone and that with very difficulties. If it was difficult to stay away from him when he wasn't even there in the hospital imagine how hard it will be when he is infront fo her eyes for the whole day. But she was determined. She had to prove that she didn't love him. She was still confused. What if it was love? No it couldn't be. How can she fall in love with someone she only met?

Riddhima: di mien niche aapka interzaar kar rahi huun

anjali: ya ok Ill just get my purse

anjali ran upstairs and ridzi was walking downstairs waiting for her sister so they could go hospital together. She was so happy that her sister was behaving nicely to her again. In a way she was thankful to armaan. He was the one that made me believe that everything can be alright.

She saw few bikes go pass which reminded her off their first meeting. She started smiling as she remembered. How armaan introduced himself thinking he was such a dude.

Ridzi laughing to herself: pagal

then she remembered how he was forcing her to take the lift

she laughed more but it was interrupted by the person she was thinking about. Yes the one and only armaan

armaan took of his helmet and shook his head so his hair also flew. He got of his bike so he was standing in front of her. Then he smiled at ridzi: hi basket

ridzi looked at him and her smile disappeared. She was confused. She had no idea at all what to do or what to say. She was totally blank for a second.

armaan: basket hello basket kaha pe khoyi hui ho

ridzi looked at him but didn't answer '.she looked away looking at her watch then to her house door hoping that anjali will come and save her.

Armaan slowly looked down upset and confused as he didn't know why Riddhima was talking to her.

Armaan: (thinking she might not respond to basket) Riddhima what happened

Riddhima totally ignored him and she started to walk off but armaan caught her wrist and pulled her towards him. Riddhimas file that were in her hands flew and now she was standing right in front of armaan really close...so close that they're thighs and chest were touching which made shivers go through he backbone. Every time armaan touched Riddhima she felt something'Something weird but she liked that feeling. She lowered her eyes unable to look at him as she knew he was looking straight at her. She also knew his eyes contained a few questions which she couldn't answer. Armaan held her by the waist which he made bare as he put his hand under her salwar. Again Riddhima felt Goosebumps all around her body. She closed her eyes anticipating for more. Armaan pulled her as close as they can be. They were literally stuck to each other so close that they couldn't be any closer. As Riddhima was squeezed towards armaan she laid her head amongst his muscular chest feeling relaxed than ever. Armaan kissed her on the forehead caressing her head. he had forgotten the reason he was here for. All he could see was Riddhima and nothing else. He took one tiny step back and held her by the chin and slowly brought it upwards so she was looking at her. But Riddhimas eyes were closed. She was just living the moment. She still hadn't said a single word to him.

it only took footsteps to get her back in her senses. She stepped way back far away form him rubbed her eyes which continued small tears. She couldn't believe what juts happened. She remembered how he pulled her and that's t. she didn't realized how all that happened, how she relaxed her head on his chest and how good she was feeling. All of it was blurry to her. She just couldn't believe it happened.

She saw her sister come down so she quickly wiped away her tears. She didn't have the guts to look at armaan anymore.

Armaan was also shocked. He didn't know what he was going to do if she hadn't pulled herself away for another minute. But in a way he was glad. He realized that Riddhima also had a weird feeling towards him that he had for her but she wsa just not ready to accept it.

As anjali came he smiled at her: hey babes looking good

anjy smile back as he flirted with her: as always u don't look that bad either by the way why are you here at this time.

Armaan not realizing this could increase problems between the sisters came straight out and said it: oh im here to give Riddhima a lift

Riddhima shockingly looked at her sister who was equally shocked.

Anjali stammering: tum ''yaha'.ridzi 'ke...liye

anjali looked at ridzi in anger: Riddhima I thought your coming to the hospital with me

Riddhima : I am(as fast as she could)

armaan: its ok I only came here in case she needed a lift

anjali: if she doesn't want one you can give me one(winking at him)

she held him by the shoulders trying to get close but armaan started feeling awkward with anjali even touching her so he came up with an excuse

armaan: but if u come with me who will ridzi come with

anjy: ya but''.fine

armaan: ok see ya babes in few min sir so
as anjy sat in the car he secretly looked at Riddhima who was also secretly looking at him. He winked at her and waved a small bye. Riddhima quickly looked away and sat in the care. She was worried as she knew her sister was angry with her though she didn't even do anything. She slammed the car door and tightened her seatbelt unable to say anything.

Anjali starting a conversation: so armaan tumahre liye ayah tha

Riddhima: mumbling: urm...I'

anjali: tum what? So you lied to me huh? So you guys going out or what?

Riddhima was so shocked that her sister can even think like that: no way di you know ill never do that

anjali smiling thinking of something in her evil mind: acha acha stop crying as she saw small tears in ridzi eyes which she was trying to hide

Riddhima was just too shocked by all this. Everything was happening to fast for her to understand''.she needed time to understand what was happening to her.

in few minutes they were in the hospital. As she got off the car she saw armaan sitting on his bike looking at them

ammy parked his bike and came towards them

ammy: heyy again

anjy laughed and started talking about random things with him. She didn't even realize ammy was too lost in Riddhima to hear a word she was saying. As anjy was blabbering on ammy was secretly looking at ridzi who was looking very tensed and upset.

She was thinking to herself. She knew she felt something towards armaan and now she was feeling suspicious that it might be love aswell but she just couldn't accept it. She remembered what happened this morning. Surprisingly she actually smiled though it was a very small smile but she still smiled. She still wanted to keep her promise which she gave herself to stay away form him. She decided as much as armaan provokes her she wont talk to him and if she can maybe its not love.

she walked to the locker room and went to her locker but unlucky for Riddhima and lucky for armaan'armaan's locker was right next to hers and others was away so armaan thought this was a good opportunity for him to talk to her. He saw anjali go to her locker and everyone else just talk to each other not noticing armaan and Riddhima. He walked to his locker. As Riddhima was going o close her locker he held her hand. Riddhima surprised looked at him. He whispered to her

ammy: Riddhima why are you not talking to me? What have I done? If ive done anything to upset you im really sorry.

Riddhima felt really touched as armaan hadn't really done anything he should be feeling guilty for. She pulled her hand away and looked in the other direction. Armaan first looked at the others who were still busy with their own things. When he was satisfied that no one was looking he held Riddhima by the shoulder and turned her around so she was facing him.

Ammy: Riddhima please batao'.

Riddhima ran to the changing rooms. This was the only place she knew armaan wouldn't come and she could cry but armaan knew she really wasn't changing in there. Armaan not realizing anjali had seen Riddhima go in there also went in there which anjy saw again and started burning with anger and jealousy.

Riddhima was so shocked how he came in here but she also knew he didn't come in here with bad intentions. She didn't let this thing make her say something to him. She just generally was going to walk out as if nothing happened but again armaan pulled her by the wrist.

Riddhima getting the courage pulled her hand out of his soft hand'the hand that's its lil touch gave her shivers.. And she ran out off the changing room.

Slowly tip toeing so no one realizes he was also in there he came out and took his necessities like lab coat and stethoscope out of his locker and put it on.

Voiceover: saare interns dr kirti ko report karein

they all left the locker room. Riddhima saw how upset armaan was.

tears fell on her cheek: sorry armaan I just want to prove myself something

armaan was walking alone determined to find out why. He came up with a plan.

all the interns stood still as dr kirti gave each of them their duties. And lucky for armaan and unlucky for Riddhima they were together

Riddhima: why god? This day just keeps getting more difficult for me

she looked at armaan who had a small grin on his face. She knew why he was smiling

after she gave all the duties out she set them off for work

armaan and Riddhima were in the children ward.

as armaan saw the coast was clear he pulled Riddhima into the fire escape

Riddhima not being able to control herself started to talk: armaan yeh tum kya kar rahe ho

armaan pushed her towards the wall and stood in front of her with his arms around so she had no way to go.
Riddhima: armaan leave me I want to go

armaan: you have to answer me

Riddhima: what?

Armaan: you know what im trying to say

Riddhima: armaan please (not being able to look him in the eyes)

she tried to walk under his arms but armaan grabbed her tightly by her wrist and pulled her against the wall. He had twisted her arm unknowingly.

Riddhima: armaan its hurting (in pain)

armaan left her hands slowly but made sure she couldn't leave.

he just stared at her waiting for an answer. Riddhima was tired of ignoring him so she decided she had to make up an excuse but she also knew she couldn't let him know why she was actually ignoring him. But luckily armaan and Riddhimas pager came at the right time giving a chance to Riddhima

Riddhima ran out using the opportunity.

Armaan was really angry now. He wanted to find out why this was happening to him
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later on in the children's ward Riddhima stared at armaan's innocence with the kids. She saw how much he loved kids. There he was standing surrounded wuth kids playing with each of them not leaving out anyone. Everyone was enjoying themselves as armaan told them stories. Riddhima just adored him.

Riddhima then realized she being very childish by ignoring armaan. if she loved him she would find out one way or the other but ignoring him wasn't a way. This would just make him dislike her. She decided to start all over with him.

She walked up to armaan getting the courage

Riddhima stammering: A..Ar'armaan

armaan kind of surprised to see Riddhima standing there. He had lost hope to find out why as he knew girls and their egos but after seeing Riddhima there he had hope again

armaan: haan Riddhima

Riddhima: can I talk to you?

Armaan: sure terrace par in half an hour.

Riddhima: ok

she walked off with a smile on her face. She wanted to talk to him now as she was getting desperate but she knew she work comes first. So she carried on working.

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Whilst in the ICU rahul and muskaan were getting ready for an operation. As we all know muskaan was scared to do operations. She was always scared in case she couldn't save the person life'she would blame herself all her life for not being able to save that person life.

as rahul washed his hands he saw muskaan tensed sitting in the corner

muskaan: babaji meri madat karo babaji

rahul went up to her and held her hands

rahul: muskaan tum chinta mat karo main hoon na

muskaan: rahul 'tum'who

rahul: muskaan I know you better than you know yourself'.so

muskaan: rahul please don't start again we have to go now

muskaan took her hands away from rahul's and walked off to the ICU. Again she had tears in her eyes. Her life was so miserable these days. She knew she had to forget the past but rahul being in front of her she could never. Rahul was her life. How could she just forget him?

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atul and anjali had finished their duties and they were sitting in the canteen. Anjali was remembering this morning. How armaan came JUST for Riddhima and then the changing room incident. She had to think of something otherwise if they kept coming close she could lose armaan and she liked armaan.

atul was staring at her beauty unable to think of a conversation. He really liked her. But he knew she didn't like him back. But he never lost hope. He was fixed to making anjali like her. He thought of a conversation

atul: anjali

anjali: what?

Atul: tumahre koi boyfriend hai

anjali: tha par Maine use dump kardiya

atul to himself: to mera chance hai

anjy: what?

Atul: kuch nahi anjy..

anjy: no im anjy only for my friends tumahre liye anjali ji

atul was really disappointed to hear that she didn't even think of atul as a friend. He was upset. No one had made atul so upset. He was so lively that everyone adored him as a friend but anjali who he had started to love had broken his heart.

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as everyone was sad in the hospital Riddhima was trying to make herself happy. She was checking the patient but couldn't take her eye of armaan who was still playing with the children. Every child had a wide grin on their face showing how much they loved armaan.

she went to the next child to give an injection

Riddhima: arey gappu injection time

gappu: no nahii mujhe injection nahi chaiye

Riddhima: gappu injection loge to tikh ho jayege 'agar tik hogaye to chocolate

gappu: no no no mujhe injection nahi lagana

armaan saw what was happening and he came over their with a solution like always

armaan: gappu kya hua

gappu: dekho na mujhe zabardasti injection lagana chahti hai yeh

armaan: (sarcasticllly) sachi Riddhima ji aapko pata nahi hai ke gappu ko injection acha nahi lagte

he winked at her and secretly took the injction of her.

armaan: sirf ache bache injection lagata hai par gappu koi acha bache tori hai'..aur waise bhi jo injection lagata hai usse hospital se bhi jaane ko milta hai

armaan knew how much gappu hated being in the hospital

gappu: sachi armaan bahiya

armaan: haan par tumhe to injection lagana hi nahin hai

gappu: nahi nahi acha bahiya lagao

Riddhima got the injection and was going to inject but again gappu interrupted

gappu: nahi mujhe sirf armaan bahiya se lagana hai

armaan smiled and surprisingly Riddhima also smiled. She loved how children loved armaan; she handed over the injection over to armaan and adored how armaan injected laughing and playing around with the kids.

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atul was walking down the sanjeevani corridors heartbroked. He was very sensitive. Anjali was walking behind him and slowly catched up with him as he was walking very sliowly

anjy: atul wat happened

atul: kuch nahi

anjy: don't say you still upset because I said you cant call me anjy

atul: anjali are you my friend?

anjy: ya I guess (not in a freidnly way)

atul lightened up as fast as lightening: sachi

anjy: ya why you getting so happy?

atul: anjali'woohooo so atul and anjali friends

he was jumping aroums the corriors now in happiness.

anjy: atul calm down

she didn't realize but she was also laughing now enjoying atul;'s company

atul at last stopped and let out his hand for handshake

atul: friends?

Anjali slowly shook it

anjy: fine friends happy?

atul: yup

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as the half and hour passed by

Riddhima signalled to armaan to go to the terrace with her eyes. Armaan understood the signal and left the ward.

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as the operation finished muskaan ran to the terrace wanting some fresh air after that stressful but successful operation.

Unfortunately for her rahul followed her

muskaan stood, eyes closed, face upwards taking the sunlight. She was actually feeling really happy now as she saved a life. She had doen her first ever operation and that successfully.

rahul stood behind her: muskaan

muskaan: rahul tum

rahul: haan who

muskaan: can you stop following me?

rahul: muskaan im not following you I just wanted to know if youre alright as I saw you running

muskaan: yes im fine now go

ahul: muskaan why are you being like this?

muskaan: like what?

rahul: you know'muskaan I know you still love me and I still love you then why?

muskaan: rahul please why do you always have to talk about the past

rahul: because I want to know why??

muskaan: well I don't want to say it

muskaan walled off but rahul held her by the hand and pulled her hand on his head

rahul with tears in his eyes: tumhe meri kasam

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outside the terrace door stood armaan and Riddhima shocked

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Edited by armaanno01fan - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#315

hai dear😊

nice part😊continue sooooooooooooooooooooooon😊

Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

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EDITED!!

heyy Anam!!!
u alwayz knw wat wil i write here............
NO WORDS!!!!👏👏👏
RM story....waitin 4 u 2 unfold it!!!
wat mst it be??um...mujhe kya pata??lolz!!a week more for anothr upd8??thtz k!!
OMG!!u being so unwel wrote dis FF!!!thnxx a ton for it sis!!!cho chweet of u!!!😊
AR get 2 knw abt RM...wow!!!u makin it interestin day by day!!!!😉

wil b waitin for ur nxt upd8..take ur tym hun!i can understand...its nt as easy as its easy 4 us 2 tel u upd8 soon...coz u r d one whoz got 2 imagine n write it...!!😃

luv ya loadzz!!!
muahhzzz!!!
riyu...!!

Edited by angel_riya - 16 years ago