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Posted: 16 years ago
hey srrry srrrry fr late comment actually iws not at home since 15days so couldn't be able to comment nd read but readed it now wohoooooo yaar it ws jst mindblowing u knw nd tht dream sequence which u hv made it it ws sooo hot nd romantic hehe lvd it sooooooooooooo much ridz ws confusd is she realy gosh yaar their bb match hahaa lvd it ar controlld but kab tak nd why didn't he cme hmmmmm thts wht worried her hmmmmm nd now she decided she wll stay away frm him fr a week wow maza ayega but seriously i ws having goosbumps while reading riddhima ko pata nahi kya hogaya tha dream mein hehe but i lv d charactr lvd it cnt wait fr d nt prt
cont soooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG OMG OMG!!!
IT WAS A DREAM???
YAAR YEH RIDDHIMA BHI KAISE KAISE SAPNE DEKNE LAGI...
CHI CHI CHI CHI CHI CHI!!,,,LOL!!
YAAR AISA LAGTA THA KI ARMAAN KI BESHARMI ALLOWED!!
.........LOL.........LOL........LOL!!!
BUT WAS HOT!!!.....
BUT THANX TO MUSKAAN N THE "DREAM"
SHE REALISED THAT SHE IS IN LOVE!!!
NOW SHE IS GONNA STAY AWAY FROM HIM?
I DONT THINK SO...IS IMPOSSIBLE!!
AUR AGAR AISA BI HUA TOH....
ARMAAN PICHE NAHI HATNE WALA...*wink*
LOVED IT!!
OK!! CONT SOON!!
CANT WAIT!!
SEE YAAA
LOVE UUUU!!
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thxxx evry11 for ur comments

luv u all

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As riddhima was checking patients a nurse came in'.

nurse: dr Riddhima ji aapka phone hai

Riddhima waondering who's it might be went to the front reception where the phone was'she picked it up and heard a voice she took no time to recognize

Riddhima: armaan tum

she remembered how she had to stay away from him but did that mean not talk to him at all. She decided she will talk to him only related to work but stay away form him .

armaan: haan mein waise tumne mujhe phone kyun kiya tha '..maine abhi dekha sorry

ridzi: who'(she wanted to tell him why but she sticked to what she decided but before she said anything she heard a girls voice at the backround who was talking to armaan...

(in the backround) a girl: armaan'. bolo naa yeh ya yeh kaunsa zyaada acha hai''armaan tum kise baat kar rahe ho phone par'.. meri baat suno warna mein naraaz ho jaungi


(she was feeling awkward'.she really wanted to ask who that girl was and why he didn't come'.but controlling herself she didn't)

armaan: ridzi im sorry mein us waqt tora busy tha isliye phone nahi uthaya ..par phone kyun kiya

ridzi: armaan badme baat karte hain mujhe jaana hai

armaan: par riddhima'''.

(slamming the phone down without letting him even say bye)

Riddhima felt really weird'..she remembered the girls voice: who was that and armaan uske saath kya kar raha tha'.does he have a girlfriend'.but he never told me

realzing what she was saying: Riddhima he doesn't ahev to tell you everything does he? And why are u worrying anywayz?

she went back to the general ward to carry on with her duties'.she couldn't get the girls voice out of her head'.she wanted to know who she was and why armaanw as with her'though she had promised herself to stay away from armaan and not worry about him'it wasn't working out for her'..

not realzing she was checking the heartbeat of the patients head instead of the chest

patient: doctor doctor

Riddhima was too lost in her thoughts to hear but then trouble came

doctor kirti entered and saw what was happening

dr kirti: DOCTOR RIDDHIMA aapka dhyaan humesha kahi aur hota hai unke dil uke ceene mein hai sir mein nahi waha dimaag hota hai 'who to aapko pata hai na

dr Riddhima: yes maam im very sorry maam

dr kirti: dr Riddhima sorry se kuch nahi hota (speking abit softly now) dekho doctor riddhima ek doctor ke liye ek second bhi baghut maine rate hai ek second mein bhi kisi ki jaan ja sakti hai'.so im trying to say it for your and our patients benefit jab aap duty oar hote hai to sirf duty par hi dhyaan dijiye 'kyunki aise na ho k eek din aap bahut pachtaye'.and if you have any personal problems don't bring them to professional life'.your a doctor you have to do this..

Riddhima was kind of shocked to see dr kirti talk to her so gently..: yes maam

dr kirti left but Riddhimas mouth was still open in surprise. She didn't know dr kirti also ahd a soft side. But she remembered what she said and went back to work. She promised herself to only and only concentrate on work.

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On the terrace there was atul watering the plants as well as talking to them.

atul: haye rey mere bacha haan paani chahiye naa (as if he was talking to some baby)

watered the palnt and moved on to the other

atul: arey baby aapko bhi cahhiye haan papa aapko zaroor denge

he continued when he saw muskaan walk in the terrace slowly in her own thoughts

atul: hi muskaan

muskaan softly: hi

atul noticed that muskaan was sad: kya hua muskaan

muskaan: hmm?? Huh oh who kuch nahi aise hi

atul: acha (getting easly convinced) by the way tum yaha terrace par..

muskaan: who aise hi sar dukh raha tha iskliye socha thandi hawa khaane..

atul: kyun us ghade rahul ne phirse tang kiya

muskaan: aeyy atul ghada kisko bola

atul: rahul ko

muskaan: hitting him gently: rahul ghadda nahi hai

atul: tum uski side kyun leh rahi ho tum to usse humesha jhagra karti rehti ho ab kyun

muskkan: urm.. who who ''..meri marzi

atul: acha baba by the way tumne partner film dekhi hai

muskaan(coming back to her lively mood) haan bahut achi movie hai na !!

atul: haan aur phir who scene mein''

as their conversation continued muskaan started laughing and forgetting her tension but it didn't last for long when rahul came on the terrace also

rahul: muskaan tum yaha ho aur mein tumhe poore hospital mein dhoond raha tha

muskaan: (mumbling) kyun kya hua?

atul: acha mein jaa raha huun Hitler ka pager aa gaya

RM: HITLER?

atul: haan armaan ne dr kirti ko naya naam diya hai acha hai na

RM both smiled as atul left

muskaan was also going to leave but rahul held her wrist nto letting her go

muskaan: chodo mera haath

rahul: meri baat to suno

muskaan: acha bolo kya(turning to listen to him tired of ignoring him)

rahul: tum tikh to ho na kal us party mein tum bahut udaas lag rahi thi aur phir achaanak who dance'

muskaan: haan mein tikh huun rahul tumhe meri chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai(not being able tyo look him in the eyes)

rahul: (holding her by the shoulders in desperation) muskaan tumhe kya hogaya hai tum'.. please mujhe batao

muskaan: rahul chodo mujhe

rahul left her and muskaan walked off but stood their at the door peeking at him

rahul fell on his knees tears falling unaware she was still there: WHY muskaan why ?? yeh mere saath hi kyun' I love you for god damn it'.

muskaan ran crying into the toilets: rahul kaash mein tumhe bataa sakti par is kasam ne mujhe band rakha hai''..I LOVE YOU TO rahul I love you to

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after all the duties had finished Riddhima was stting on the bench thinking about armaan: UFFFF I just cant forget him'mein kya karuun'.i kknow I don't love him but he just doesn't leave my head

her thoughts were interrupted when anjali entered the locker room. She walked to her locker and placed her lab coat inside

ridzi: hi di

anjy: ya whatver

ridzi: di hum ghar ek saat chale?

anjy: kyun aaj armaan nahi hai

ridzi: di?

anjy: itni bholi mat bano tum jaanti ho mein us din ki baat kar rahi huun

ridzi: di aap jaanti hai na us din kya hua(shocked that her sister can even think like that)

anjy: excuses excuses maine dekha kal party mein tum kitni chipak rahi thi use dance ke waqt

ridzi: par di hum sirf dance kar rahe the

anjy: ya ya aur waise bhi tumne usse bataya humare rishte ke baarein mein'tumhe kya lagta hai uske poochne se sab tikh ho jayega

ridzi: par di who meri madat kar raha tha bas'.

anjy: whatever ridzi lets go

ridzi crying: no di aaj aapko batan hi parega why aap mujhse kyun itni nafrat karti hai '..

anjy: stop overreavting or by the way maine tumhe kal bataya tha na?

ridzi: remembering: kya?

anjy: don't act so innocent you know you alwatz get what you want

ridzi: di yeh aapko bhi pata hai key eh sach nahi hai

anjy: yes it is and the only reason is because YOURE ADOPTED

ridzi cried harder: those are the 2 words she hated in life she knew she was adopted but never felt it as her parents loved her too much but nowadays anjali always reminded her which made her feel she wasn't her real sister'.she was adopted''she wanted her sister to treat her like a real sister'she still wanted her sister back as she loved her sooo much but anjy didn't love her back.

anjali let the locker room leving Riddhima cry. She cried. She needed someone to console her. Well not someone but armaan. she knew she needed armaan. she tried her best to feel alright but she knew if armaan was here she wouldn't have to try so hard.she wiped her tears and walked outside thinking how armaan would finally make anjy like her. But no this wasn't the time to think about armaan.

she sat In a auto and went off.
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later on when Riddhima was eating her eyes were lowered unable to see anjali. Again Riddhima nanny saw her like this the same way she was yesterday but this time she thought it will be better to talk to dr shashank

so when anjy and ridzi left she dexcided to talk to him

nanny: beta

dr sh: haan ma

nanny: tumne aaj kal ridzi ko dekha hai

dr sh: haan kyun?

nanny: who aaj kal kitni pareshaan lagti hai mujhe uski bahut chinta ho rahi hai

dr sh: maine bhi notice kiye mein usse baat karun

nanny: haan beta par agar uski maa hoti to usse behtar samajh sakti

dr sh lowered his eys as he missed his wife a lot'..

nanny: beta tum doosri shaadi..

dr sdh: maan mein aapse keh chukka hoon meri zinsagi mein sirf aur sirf padma thi aur rahegi

nanny: par'

dr sh: mein ridzi se baat karke aata huun

he ran upstairs

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dr shashank knocked at the door

dr sh: Riddhima beta mujhe tumse baat karni hai

when anjali saw this she went into the bathroom but she still could hear what was going on outside..

ridzi: haan papa

dr sh: tum tikh to ho na

ridzi: haan papa

dr kyunki tum aaj kal bahut pareshaan lati ho

ridzi: no papa mein pareshaan nahi huun

dr sh: pakka na apne papa se nahi kahogi

ridzi: nahi papa aisi koi baat hi nahi hai

dr sh: acha but you know na ke tum mujhse kuch bhi keh sakti ho '..agar tumhari maa hoti '..

ridzi interrupted as she saw her father getting upset

ridzi: papa aap ho naa meri mummy bhi aurt mere daddy bhi

she gave him a bigg hugg wiping her small tears so dr shanashk doesn't see them

dr shashank kissed her on the forehead and left thr oom saying goodnight

anjy came out of the bathrrom

anjy: see papa ne mujhse baat bhi nahi ki goodnight tak nahi kaha

ridzi: par di tum bathrrom mein thi

anjy: ya so' dekha yahi mera matlab hai who sirf tumse baat karne aaye the unko sirf tumhari chinta hai unko sirf tum dikhaai deti ho mein to nahi(cry fakingly)

ridzi sat next to her and put her arms around her: di aise kuch nahi hai please mujhse naraaz mat ho aap job hi mujhse kahengi mein who karungi

anjy: pakka

ridzi: ya

anjy: scha mein sochke batati huun

ridzi: ok goodnight

she laid on her bed thinking what her sister might say'what if she crosses her limits..nah di ab khush lag rahi thi..she wont

in her thoughts she was about to fall asleep when her phne rang

she saw it was from armaan form the calling ID'she decided not to pick up'

ridzi was jus staring at her phone feeling tempted but didnt

thinking: dekha mein armaan se door rahe sakti huun I can avoid him that mean I don't love him.. yeah

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armaan at his house: uff phone kyun nahi utha rahi hai

after 10-15 miss calls when riddhima didn't pick up armaan got tired so he thorwed the phone on his bed

he laid on his bed and remembered how his day ent

FLASHBACK OF HIS DAY

after he played BB with ridzi he went home.

he came out of the shower shirtless wiping his hair with his towel looking hotter than ever. He wore his blue shirt with fitted him so perfectly you could see his well fit body clearly. He was fixing his hair with his hands quickly as he never owned a comb because his hair was 22 perfect to be combed (hehe)

he was just about to leave the house when his phone rang.

girl on the phone: hi armaan

armaan: heyyah babes

girl: I need you to do a favour

armaan: ya bolo

girl: you have to come shopping with me now today I don't crae pleaseeeee bahut zaroori hai

armaan: sorry babes duty calls

girl: hayye tum mere liye bhi nahi(in a sweet tone)

armaan: uff tum to mujhse bhi zyaada zidi ho apna kaam kar ki hi chodti ho

girl: that means yes woohooo

armaan: acha mein pehle apni boss se permission to lelu

girl acha acha im coming there in 10-15 mins

armaan : ok bye sweetheart

he cut the phone and called doctor kirt: maam

dr kirti: yes doctor armaan

ammy: maam mein aaj hospital nahi aa sakta aaj meir tabyat kuch tikhe nahi hai

dr kirti: ok doctor armaan take care of yourself

ammy shocked that she agreed so quickly grinned to himself but then his grin disappeared when he thought he wont be able to meet Riddhima today.

he thought of their BB match this morning and how HOT she was looking in a tracksuit with her bare waitsi showing all the time'her hair flyin everywhere..her dribbling concentrating'hyyee she was too cutee

as he waited for her Riddhimas thoughts didn't leave his mind.

but then he thought no why was he thinking so much about her'..he thought to tell the girl but then shell be angry as she said that she will choose''''

Atlast she was here. She hugged armaan tightly.

girl: heyy handsome hunk lukin very hto as usual

ammy: I noe u luk preety today as well unlike other dayz

girl: armaannn(fussing as a joke)

she sat behind him on his bike: ab chalo

they both drove off to the biggest mall in Mumbai

girl ran to the jewelly shop first

girl: tumhe inme kaunsi ring sabse zyaada pasand hai..

armaan pointed at a mens ring which was soo pretty'.

girl: hayye tumhari choice pe mein waari jawaan(she said as a joke)

ammy: uff tum bhi na

he walked off to the othe jewelry place and saw some beautiful jewelry which he so wanted to buy for riddhima'he saw a diamond necklace with a heart on it and had different letters..he asked to see the one with R

he caressed it as the girl looked at other jewellery'..

he aksed the price and actually ended up buying it''..

his phone rang a few times but he was too busy helping the girl buy things.

when atlast he got free time he checked hi phone very disapoointed when he saw the phone was form Riddhima'.

he called her back but then she didn't tlak to her and there the girl wasn't leaving him''

after that tirig day of shopping for jewelry and clothes there he was at home all tired desparetly wanting to talk to Riddhima.

he checked hi phone if ridhima had called him back but she hadn't.

wondering why Riddhima hadn't picked up his phoene as it wasn't that klate yet'so she hadn't gone to sleep'.he laid and slowly fell aslepp



SORRY FOR THIS PART

I noe its quite boring and no AR scenes but hopefully ull enjoy the next part as this was in a hurry

PRECAP

A FIRE ESCAPE SCENE

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Edited by armaanno01fan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

hai dear😊

nice part 😊continue sooooooooon😊
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww loved it bbe tooo good just beautiful do continue soon di swancy
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy

awwwwwwwwwww loved it bbe tooo good just beautiful do continue soon di swancy


thxx swancy hun sorry it wasnt as good as expected as it was dun in a hurry
Edited by armaanno01fan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey awesome part!! Loved it!! Continue soon plz!! Thnks for the PM!
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Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Hey awesome part!! Loved it!! Continue soon plz!! Thnks for the PM!



thx hun sure will muahzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow..!!
anam gr8..!!
it ws beautiful..!!
w8in for ur nxt upd8
precap.....fire escape scene..!!
dose scenes r always rockingn beautiful..!!
EDIT:-
DAT START OF D FALSH BACK
AMMY IN SHOWER N ALL..!!
LOVED IT..!!!
I WS ACTUALLY BLUSHIN N ROFLING..!!
MUAHZZ..!!!
Edited by sanisweetie - 16 years ago

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