my ff:phele takrar phir pyar part 24 on page 100 - Page 10

izziii im 13 to

lolzz

just wondering cz reading ur ff u seem much older

its meant 2 be compliment lolzz

Originally posted by: karan05

OMG....this is the 1st time i ve read it...n guess wat...."its love at 1st sight" with ur ff....
its riilllllly cooooll!!....awesome....fantastic....continue sooon.....!!!!!

thxxx alottt
btw the title has changed read 1st page

Originally posted by: armaanno01fan

izziii im 13 to

lolzz

just wondering cz reading ur ff u seem much older

its meant 2 be compliment lolzz

sorry for the long wait

part 5 coming your way

Dr kirti enters the general ward as RM are still fighting

muski: ulu ka patha(pushing him and walking to a patient)

rahul: chup beth moti (pushes her back and she takes a drop)

muski(running behind him) tune mujhe moti kaha ruk sala darpok kahin ka mummy ke paloo mein chup ne bhaag rahe hai. O bichara ruk!

rahul: pakar sakti hai to pakar le(running around patients)

dr kirti: DOCTORS yeh koi park nahi ke aap pakrn pakrai khel rahe ho aur na hi yeh koi zoo hai ke aap ek duje ka shikaar karne par tule hue ho that's it both of you one strike . 2 more strikes aur aap dono ko 2 hafte ke lie nught duty samjhe

RM: yes maam

dr kirti: good(and she leaves)

RM(hitting each other) tumhari waje se

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whilst in the canteen

riddhima walks to the till after threatening armaan but he still follows her

ridzi: mere peecha karna band karo

ammy: mein tumhara peecha kaha kar raha hu

ridzi: whatever(turning to the man serving) can I have 1 sandwich with a cup of cold tea, 2 spoons of sugar no more no less thanku

server(turning to ammy) aap kya lenge

ammy: can I have 1 sandwich with a cup of cold tea, 2 spoons of sugar, no more no less

ridzi looks at him in anger

ammy laughs and walks 2 the table where atul is and sits

ridzi(to herself): ufff I hate boys! Idea!

the server puts ammys order on the till and goes to gets ridzis
riddhima notices mirchi(chilli) . she looks aournd to make sure no one is looking and puts a hell lot of chilli in his sandwich

the man comes back and is about to call ammy but ridzi interrupts'

ridzi: koi baat nahi mein de dungi

so the man walks off

ridzi(to herself) yeh kaafi nahi hai use maza chakane ke liye. Aur kya karu'. Wo sandwich kane ke baad kuch peene ke liye mangega so'. (clicks fingers as in got a idea) she gets the salt which was next to the mirchi and looks around to make sure again and puts the whole bottle of salt in his tea
smiles to herself

she walks to their table and sits down

ridzi: here you go

ammy: are wah! Tum mujhe kana dehne ayi ho

ridzi: jaldi khao tumhe bhook lagi hogi (with a fake smile)

ammy: abhi to itne gusse mein thi aura ab itne pyaar kyun jata rahi ho(shocked)

ridzi(getting impatient) khao na

ammy: acha acha (eats a bite and jumpes out of his chair) pani pani

riddhima laughin and atul just staring at him in confusion

ammy drink a sip of his cold tea and then spits it out

riddhima laughin: plan successful

ammy runs and drink 4 glasses of water and walks to riddhima pointing his finger in anger riddhima gets scared

ridzi: umm.. sorry

ammy: tumne yeh kiya( scaring her'. He walsk one step forward she walks one step backwards and it carries on till she bumps in to a wall )

ammy puts his hand so she cnt escape

theyre face to face' so close that they can hear each others breathing and heart beats.

ridzi still staring him in fear

there is silence for 2 minutes. The whole atmosphere of the canteen is in silence

ridzi looks down thinking what he will do now

ammy backs off her and puts his hand forward expecting a hi5

ammy: are wah! Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ke tum itni ache pranks karti ho

ridzi getting out of her shock realizing it was just a prank was burning red in anger

she ran behind him . not thinking of anything she looks for something to chuck and finds a fork at the table so she chucks it at him and it hits him in the arm

ammy pretending: ahhhhhhh my arm

ridzi realizing apoligizes

ridzi( whilst running to him) tum tikh ho na im sorry( but as she runs she slips but armaan runs and catches her in his arms)

they have another eye lock session for two minutes

ridzi: realzing: chodo mujhe

ammy: ha bhalai ka to zamaana hi nahi hai. Ek to tumhe girne se bachaya aur tum aise. Chi chi chi

she walks off but her dupatta gets stuck with her chair

ridzi : armaan chodo

ammy sarcastically in a kids voice: tusi jah rahe ho.. tusi nah jao

ridzi: leave me alone..( he hears her sniff so that means shes crying)

ammy goes in fornt of her showing his hands to prove hes not holding it when a tear is about to drop but he catches it in the back of his hand
then wipes her tears

aamy: im sorry I didn't meant to hurt you I was joking

she wipes her tear. She loos back ignoring ammy takes her dupatta off the chair and runs off .

ammy: oye hoye yeh ladki

atul: tum usse itna tang kyun kar rahe ho. Subha se usse peeche pare ho
he walks off

ammy starts walking out of canteen looking for ridzi

thinking carefully: yeh mujhe kya hogaya hai mein uska peecha kyun kar raha huun

hits his head: kaam par lagg and wlaks to his duty


i dnt know i feel this part wasnt as good

plzzz comment and crticziee

hai dear.........

really a very nice part.......😊 u don't need to be worry about the part,it's really nice,this part makes progress in the story....... n the changed name of the ff is very nice than the first one....❤️ continue sooooon..........😍

Aww love is in da air for ammy..loved da hi 5 vala scene....awsome part anam... Pls do write a longer part from next time....waiting for ur next update..do pm me...

it was really gud plz contd sooon

Rockin rockin rockin.....zamaana bole...