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Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#601

huh huh huh *pants heavily* uff thak gaye mein...itna bhaag ke ayi ho hehehe

okay part 8:

Fabulous part muni!!!! 🤗 Yur parts get better and better every time!!!!! 👏 dil kartha hai mein parthi jao parthi jao but then it ends!!!

loved how mayank opened the door at the exact time when nupur was about to knock 👍🏼

ooo hoo mayu getting lost in nupur 😳

oo kool new york... i still haven't watched it but really want to yaar!!! 😔

omg loved how yu put mitwaaaaaaaaaaa in!!!! 😃 yaar Roka ki yaad aa gayi!!! 😔 but good thing is i cud actually imagine it on MayUr too!! 😛

haha aadi raat ko biryani dhaba pe lol nupur bhi na 😆

oh noo yeh gunda kaha se aa gaya pit ne ke liye!!

aww loved the hug at the end!!! 😳

keep up the great work sweety!!! 🤗

Hinna

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

editeddd my cmmnt...

jus saw ur cumment
n hav lost my mynd
Thanku SINDHYA
will reply in detail in a while
😃

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..
hey muneefah!! i'm back!! 😃

Part 2:

Awww loved this part!!!! 😛

Uff nupur kitna bolthi hai 😆but mayank isn't get irritated 😳....ooo nice!! 😉

Zarur Raastey mein kuch free ka khaney ka mil gaya hoga hahaha good one!! 😆

Aww the last scene was very cute!! 😛😳

Gna read next part now!! 😊

Hinna

hinna!!
tumharey cumments r adorable
m lovin em

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iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: muneefah

jus saw ur cumment
n hav lost my mynd
Thanku SINDHYA
will reply in detail in a while
😃

nn d loonngg cmmntt to shoooowwwww hoowwww swtt u rr too pmm me d 2 partss....

kipp pmingg me d parts niffii plzzzzz....

luvv u babes...

will wait for ur replyy...

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..
Part 3:
Great part muni!! 👏

I'm lovin yur ff!!! 😃

aww mayank's gone take nupur round mumbai...shooo shweet!! 😳

hehe nupur pulling mayank's cheeks....soo nupu ishtyle and adorable!!!! 😛

mmmm i love paani puri too!!! 😛

awww loved the rain scene....and mayank whistling to himself....hmm lagtha hai kuch kuch ho raha hai!!! 😉

Keep up the fab work!!! 👍🏼

Hinna

haan yaar
kuch kuch howa tha usey
😉

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

nn d loonngg cmmntt to shoooowwwww hoowwww swtt u rr too pmm me d 2 partss....

kipp pmingg me d parts niffii plzzzzz....

luvv u babes...

will wait for ur replyy...

aWWW!!
honey ill surely do dat!!!!
MUAH!!
n ill update today 2!!! 😃

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Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#607

part 9:

woot woot 🥳another fab part muneefah!!! 👏

love yur writing style yaara!! 👍🏼

aww wow mayank accepted his in love with nups!!! 😳 great!!! 😃 now wen will he confess 2 her!!

oops mayank ke mou se baar baar pyaar and love nikli jaa raha hai 😆 n he's getting jealous of benji lol

awww!!! 😳😳😳 loved the hug at the end.....very endearing!!!!

Hinna

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..
Part 4:

fab part yaar!!! 👏

aww sleeping nupur luks so cute!! 😛

oye hoye mayank going to help nupur with her assignment in his house...not bad!!! 😉

hehe the mayank's mum scene was funnny....nupur boli jaa rahi hai!! 😆

oooo love the room!!! 👍🏼

kool precap

gna catch next part

cya in a bit!! 😛

hinna

adorable!!m lovin it..Keep readin n cummentin..m njoyin alot

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Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#609

Part 10: almost there 😉

Awesome update munnefah!!! 👏

It was a short one but still very good and detailed!!!

wow mayank confessed even if it's in a drunken state but he still did confess 😲😃

nahiiiiii nupur ne mana kar diya!!! 😲 kyun yaar?!! 😡 bechara mayu!!! dil toot gaya bechare ka!! 🥺 koi nahi...mein hoon na mayu ke liye!!! 😉 😆

hmm i wonder what's nupur reason for not accepting his love!!! 😕

ooo wonder what's gona happen next!!

Hinna

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

heellooooozzz nifffiii jiii....

first of alll leme thanku 4 leavin such beautiful cumments

....okkkk niffii didd ne11 tell uu whhhhaaaattt a gooddd-dammnitt swwtthrtttt u rr????.... urrr suuuchhhhhhaaaa cmplteee daaarrrllinnggg niiffzzz....

*scratchin my head*Y wat hav i dun😛

n offf courrseee d bessstttt ff writteeeeeeeeeeerrrrr eeeevvvvvvvverrr ree........

aww!!dats a huge complement!buh m not better den u aur yaad aya-i styll gotta read ur update.Will read rite away

ooooppss yee kyaa ho gayaa mainn bhi ruchii waaalii mastt language use karne lagii hooonn aaj kall....... lol.... neewwwyyzzzz iiimmmmm sssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sureee... ki urr hell confusedd rite noww......... buuhhhh nifffiii jiii worryy nottttzzzz jii worryy nott....urr sooooo swttt niffzzzz u actuaaallyyyyy pmedd meeee dd paaarrtsss....

arrey yaar-koi gal nahe hai!!!!I jus pmed em to u-not a big deal!!!aww-buh ur cumments r adorable..n worry not-m actually understandin dis lang😛

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww........ choooooooo chwweeeeeeett nifffii......... juusssss loooooveeee u ree.... ..... thhhaaaankksss soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhh....,,,,, newwwyyyzzzz beforeee i goooo gagagagaga thankkinngggg u......... orrrrrrrrr u staaaartt feeeeelingg sleeeeepyy readdinn this..... letzz cumm bak to the cmmnt.....

head over heels in luv wid ur emoticions..HEHE!!MUAH!!!!!N m not feelin sleepy at all.M lovin it.no need to thank me!!!😃

........ soooo wellllllll ahheeeemmmm aheeemmm........... iveeee neveeeerrr reaaddda betteerrr uppdaatee of urss swwwwttyyyyy.....serriouusssslllyyy maannn............ urrr updateee wuzzzz sooooooooo god-dammn-ittt rooccckkingggg.......... n sincceee reaadddiinn it ivee losossssttt itt........... serriioouussssllyy niffzzzzz ur hanndssss rr ssooooo daaaaammmmm maaaaaagicall.....

STOP RITE AWAY.if i read more-ill loose my mynd coz itni tareef my good lord..

SWEETZ-u r way better writer den me!!!!buh thanku so much 4 da encouragement.u inspire me to write more

........... tooooooo roooccckiingggggggg...........awwwwww aftrrr reaaddddinn thiss u knwww m getttiinn thoseeee cudddllyyyyy pikkaaaaboooooo feelinigss........ loll.....uu knwwww forrrr oneee mommmeeeennnntttt i starteddd cryyinnnn whennn i wuzzzzz reaaaaadddiiinnn..........

y cryin🤢

buhhh denn dheeree dheeereee padtee paddtee bass dil mein mauja hi mauja ho gayaaa yaaaarr........ serrrioouusssllyyy yaaaarr itnaa uchall khudd bed pe mainnee pehleeee kabhii nahiii kiyaa........n paaddnnee ke baadd i wuzzz doinn all sorrtsss of noonnnseenssee........... looooooll......sooooo nifffii wtzzzzz neexxxtt????? whennsss d conffeesssioonn of maayurr??

bus thora sa wait reh gaya hai!!n den confession.Duntcha worry my munchkins!!!!n y were u jumpin on ur bed??HEH!!mera asar agaya kya?

.....?????

nexxttt fewwwww updatess meinn i wantt mayankkk kissinn nupsii.... peckk bhi chalegaaaa!!..... pllzzzzzz plzzzzz nifffiii jaaann...

toooodayyyy tooo mee gonnnaaa partyyyy till dawwwwwwnnnn........ u waaaaiiittt n waaattchhhh reee!!!!.........

AWWWWW>MAYUR HUGS 4 U

n yaaaaa aaggaaarrr muujjhheee nayyaaapartt updaattiioonnn nahiii dhikhaaa naa too tuu dheekkk... woo bhiiii aaaaajjjj........ ii wiilllll cheeecckkkk sooooonn.....afttrrr takiinn a shooowererrrr........ auuurrr abhhhoiiii maiinin ekk pyyaarrriiii bachhhiiii lag rahiiii hooonngigiiiio........ paaarrr agaarrrr mujhheee updaatee nahiiii dhikhaaa phir tum dhekhnaa......... tumhhhaaaaraa toaastttt banaakeee khaa jauunngiii mmaaaiinn.......... sooooo welll jallddiiii likhhooo niffiii swtyy... neewwwyyyyyzzzzzz muuuuuaaaaaahhhhhhzzzzzz....... luuvvvv siinnddhyyyaaa....

HAAH!!ub tou update bunta hai coz sindhya ki request hai..Will update rite away