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mohseena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Omy luv ur ff!!..mindblowing hai yaar! But mayank..feelin so bad for him:(

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Monica

@_Monu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

POOR MAYANK!!

NICE PART!!

FEEL SAD 4 MAYANK!

CONT SOON!

SEE YAA!!

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

very sad . mayank is going soooo bad . waiting wats going to happen next . plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooon

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arjun-rati4ever

@arjun-rati4ever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

sorry for being so late. and all those who commented and liked it have made me happy:)

i am just continuing for u guys!!i love u!

reply on this one too...i might update the 7th part in a few minutes..so yea..

Part 6

mayank was lost in thoughts...--wat r u thinking dude! u cant face her again!wat if u break down right in front of her?!no !u have made a decision mayank to stay strong and to let go of the past and start a new chapter in ur life. this is not the end! it cant be... all u need to do is go far. go as far as u can from her. thats all u need to do. this one step can chang ur life from miserable to somethingthat u always looked forward to! this is it!

thinking all these things he finally decided not to see her. not even for the last time. but smewhere inside he felt a great urge to see her. but y?! but he decided to let go of these feelings. he was nt gonna live with this anymore.....

meanwhile rahul was at nupur's house

n- rahul..mayank hasnt talked to me evn once since last night!not even a txt!! idk wats wrong with him!!

r- its ok babe....i am here... just for u..and he kissed her neck

n- rahul plz not now i am not in the mood

r- but i am...and he started kissing her and feeling her body

n- rahul...rahul.plz...

but he didnt listen to her and he continued making love to her.

meanwhile at mayank's house.

mm- r u sure that this is wat u want to do beta?

m- mom! trust me! i am as sure as it gets..ok? u dnt worry

and he kissed her and gave her a warm hug

md- take care my son!

m- i will....dad...i will

and he hugged him goodbye.

he told them not to come at the airport and decided to drive himself and asked the driver to get the car back to his house. he was driving. driving away . away from his life. he knew that she was his life and without her he would never be complete. but he had already made a decision which he refused to change.

but at some point wen he was driving he heard a cry. as if she needed him. something was wrong. very wrong. he started to sweat a bit which was quite unusual. and then his heart started beating faster. something was very very wrong. he could just sense it. it was like instinct told him to take a u-turn and thats wat he did. he started driving faster than usuall. and stopped right in front of her house. nupur's house. as he stopped he saw rahul's bike pull away. rahul didnt see him tho.

but wat was wrong! he still cudnt find out.

so he walked into her house not finding her parents anywhere. he slowly walked towards nupur's room. and was shocked to see his love, his life, lying there completely naked. she was crying on the floor. he felt a sudden sting. as if somebody had just shook his world yet again seeing her lying there in that condition.

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

gossshhhhhhh

sh*t man...hell yaar

i mean...no ways . !!!

hope nups recover soon

u write beautifully

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arjun-rati4ever

@arjun-rati4ever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

PART 7

mayank was shocked. shocked to see her like that. shocked to see her lying there crying. he ran up to her fast. he didnt knw wat to do.

m- nupur...!

and he held her iin his arms.

n- mayank...m m m ayank....wo..woh..ra..h..ull...bohot bura..hai..he got ..wa..wat ..h..he...wa...wa...wanted now he doesnt care...ma..yank..he doesnt care ..abo..about me!

m- dammit!! nupur r u crazy?!! y did u sleep with him.

he was angry at her but he didnt knw if that was wat he shud be doing during that situation

as soon as mayank asked her this question she burried her face into his chest and started to cry hysterically.he tried his best to console her. he moved his fingers thru his hair.

m- nupur...sh...shh.. its ok..

n- no mayank!its not ok!!!everything is wrong mayank everything is wrong!!

mayank lightly kissed her head. he knew that saying anything to her at this point wont work. so he figured that it would be best to keep quiet. he let her cry. as much as she wanted. but he was there.he stayed right there.

after some time nupur had gotten quieter. she was definately in shock with wat just had happened.

n- y did he do this to me mayank!?! y?!!

m- nupur!! stop thinking about him!! hes just a piece of trash ok!! forget about that loser!he just a fu**ing asshole!!

n- no mayank!i am a piece of trash! he used me and threw me away!!i am the trash!!

m- shut up god dammit(he said rather loudly which made her go completely quitet ... he looked at her angrily) dont u dare say that ever again! do u hear me nupur?! (and then he cupped her face seeing her get scared by his loudness) listen...ur the most precious thing in this universe!! ur something that every...every girl wishes to be nonu!! ur the best! cuz u knw y?! thats how God has made u! ur the loveliest and the sweetest and... the prettiest...ok?! and dont u dare let some1 else tell u somethin else!! ur my nonu!!whos always the best!!( while saying this he had tears cmin out of his eyes but he was smiling)

and he kissed her forehead. and slid the blanket down from the bed and covered her up.

m - now u go and change. i'll get some water for u...ok?

he asked tapping her cheek lightly.

she gave a half smile and nodded.

mayank left the room. nupur stood up thinking of mayank. how she had seen somethin in his eyes today which made her pain go away. she was unsure of wat it was but watever it was made her feel awkward...but it was a good awkward......