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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Sonalihutifan

Hey add me to the PM list! Loved it!

thanx ..😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-2 [5 years ago]

gupta villa
there was a great bustle in the villa. Padma was in kitchen preparing some mouth-watering dishes for nupur..who was coming today from U.S. after 6 years. Sanjay was getting more figity because Armaan was not responding to him
Sanjay : Armaan ....kahan ho tum?
hearing Sanjay scream , padma came from kitchen
Padma : kya hua? subah subah kyun bechare par chilla rahe ho?
Sanjay : tum armaan ke tarafdaari karna kab band karogii?
Padma : jab aap mere bete ko daantna band karenge..uski shaadi hone waali hai agle month, ab toh aap bas keejiye
Sanjay : aapne ladle ko bolo neeche aaye..pakka soo raha hoga
Padma : woh kaam kar raha hoga koi
Sanjay : haan..ladkiyon ke phone attend kar raha hoga
then only armaan comes downstairs , wearing cool white tee and denim.
Armaan : kya hua papa?
Sanjay : aaj nupur aa rahe hai...tumhe yaad bhi hai kuch?
Armaan : aapko lagta hai mein bhool jaunga ke nupsi aa rahi hai
Sanjay : agar tum bhoole nahin ho toh ussee lene kyun nahin gaye
Armaan [smiles] : kyunki nupsi ne kaha tha ke mein usse lene na aaun....woh aapne bhai ko jaldi nahin uthana chahti thi, u see
Padma : toh usse lene kaun gaya hai?
Armaan : dont worry ma ..meinne driver ko bhej diya hai
Sanjay : yeh dono bhai-behan ko samajhna mere bas ke baat nahin hai
he went from there and armaan gave his best possible smile to padma who was glaring at him
BANDRA
red mercedes was coming on a sky-rock speed , the rock-on music was playing to its pitch.....a dude wearing black tee and blue jeans was setting his spikes while driving. suddenly he saw BMW front of him stopped and he was driving at such a high speed that he couldnt control his car and it banged on to the car in front......*DISSSSSH*
the guy quickly got off his car and looked at the broken head-lights
Guy : hell....cant u see while driving?
as he was still aghast at the sight of his car , the driver came out of BMW
driver : yeh aapki galti hai
guy : wat u mean....mere galti..u damaged my car !!!!
a girl came out of BMW , rubbing her forehead as she banged her forehead with the front seat due to sudden clash. She was wearing blue tee with baggy jeans and her hairs were tied in a pony.
girl : why are u screaming at him..iit was ur fault [she said to guy]
guy : excuse me ....it was ur fault.ur driver applied brake suddenly , not me !!!
girl : aankhen hai ya button..red signal par break lagate hain...u better learn traffic-rules !!!
guy [fuming in anger] :how dare u speak to me like this
girl [glaring at him ] : kyun tum yahaan pe president ho ?
guy :nahin ..par tum jaise baandriya se baat karne mein interested nahin hoon
girl [ anger taking on her ] : tumne mujhe baandriya kaha? tum aapne aapko dekho..u donkey, ass-hole, junkbag...
suddenly they hear honks from other cars....they both move inside there respective cars giving each other cold-stares
GUPTA VILLA
Armaan is standing outside the villa to recieve nupsi...his kid sister
as soon as nupur sees armaan standing..she gets all excited and runns to her bro. they both give a big bro-sis hug
Armaan : nupsi..kaise hai yaar?
Nupur : awesome bro !!!
armaan looks at her , he could see happiness in her eyes ....
Armaan looks at the car, which was damaged from back
Armaan [tensed] : yeh kya hua? accident hua tha kya? tu bhi na aapni marzi karte hai..i told u that i shld come to pick u up....
nupur giggles looking at her bro
Nupur : bro ...chill yaar..koi pagal tha...its fine..mein teekh hoon
Armaan [naughtily] : mein teri baat nahin kar raha tha..mein BMW ke baare mein sooch raha tha
nupur looks at him with open mouth and rushes after him
Nupur : i'll kill u
they both reach the villa and stop fighting after looking at Padma and Sanjay , who were desperately waiting for there daughter to come.
nupur went and gave a big hugg to padma and then to sanjay,
padma had tears in her eyes
Nupur : papa dekho na maa ko...mein jaati hoon tab rooti hai, mein aati hoon tab bhi rooti hain
Padma: yeh...
before she could complete her sentence, Nupur interrupted
Nupur : yeh khushi ke aansoon hain
all four laughed , there whole day was spent talking to nupur , abt her health..that she is weak now...all mothers thnk alike...and her MBBS and other stuff
cuming up: mayank-nupur fighting..riddhima coming to meet nupur

hope u liked this part...plz comment and tell me if u liked it or not...be true plz....i will be glad


Edited by ruchimayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
Loved it Ruchi 👏👏👏
poor BMW loved that armaan dialogue so typical of him!!!!!!!!
n of course our hero's ebtry i mean mayu hot!!!!!!!!ufffff kya likha hai it was so good i could imagine it !!!!!!!!!😳😳😳
n aankhee hai ya button loved d way u used d dialogue here nice one !!!!!!!!!
waiting for nupz n mayu fighting !!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Ruchi!! Updated real soon yaar!!
I loved the first interaction...it was mayank in the car, right...? Who else could it be! hehe...Pehli meeing bina jhagde ke kaise poori hoti!
And the first scene when everyone was talking about Armaan and his flirtyness...it was nice!!
And I'm looking forward to seeing Ridz-Nupur interaction...and most of all Mayur fighting!
Great update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
hey loved the update plz add me 2 ur pm list thanx- misha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
janu
pehle toh am sorry to rply late...was lil busy
i knw u'll kill me for S word par..itna rocking updt parke am juss feeling BAD to read it late...so ..isliye!!!!!
hiayieeeeeeeeeeeeeee..mayu aur DOc...aha..ab toh usise treatment hoga.....
AR..tooooooooo fab combo!!!👏
am luving..ths FF....brilliant idea...so ths is for u!!!
conti soon and pm me...
PAR YEH KYA????????????😲
mera NAAM..PM LIST MAIN NAHI HAI!!!!!
*SOB SOB*..matlab mujhe bolna padega..ki dal de...!!!..chal tik hia....😳
LUV
NIHU
Edited by ILuvArjun - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
aankhen hai ya button..red signal par break lagate hain...u better learn traffic-rules !!!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
mein teri baat nahin kar raha tha..mein BMW ke baare mein sooch raha tha🤣...awesome ruchi........and so sweet....nupz and armaan really rock the bro sis jodi.......mayur ke toh khoon khoon mein jhagada baara hua hai....🥱
update soon...can't wait for their hilarious fights..........pm me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
aww!! tht was soo cute!!!!!!!!
loved it!!
arman is such a sweet bro! love him!
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
superb story! sweetie, please do continue and look forward to the fight between nupur and mayank!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
heyy ruchi..hoe are you?? 🤗 🤗
thanx so much for the PM dear... 😊
it was awesome... I loved it.. 👏 👏
plz do continue...



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