BeeTe LamHe..NEW FF [MN+AR]ParT-2, pg-5

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: soneha
ruchi loved it and please PM me when you update it also update your other ff aswell waiting for it

thanx soneha

yaar will defo pm u😳

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: zainab.A
wooww! i love itttt!!!!!! 😊
plz PM me...
i m waiting... love the character sketch!!!!!

thanx a lot dear

will pm u for sure😳

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

gr8 story!! please pm me when u continue~

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Hey Ruchi

Oh you posted the first part!....sorry for the late reply....net was being a trouble...

Anyway, the first part was really good!! Very interesting....so Arman and Riddhima are married already and Nupur's arman's sister...and a doctor!! oh wow..

You showed her being deeply affected by whatever mayank did....very well!....I'm really curious to know as to what happened between them....so can't wait to read more!

Also, mayank as an intern in Sanjevani...? hehe...I'm looking forward to that!

Hmm...so will you be alternating between past and present or will the past be continued now...?

Anyway, update soon!

thanks for PMing me

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Oh and I forgot to add...that last line that you put "beete lamhe...."

It loved it!!

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

this is amazing...

loved it a lot..

continue soon and lease add me to your pm list...

waiting to read more...

luv

deepu :)

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

woah dear🤗 its really awesome one⭐️sound interesting😍 plz continue it soon😛 & pm me when u update it😳

"To love is to share life together,
to build special plans just for two,
to work side by side,
and then smile with pride,
as one by one, dreams all come true.

To love is to help and encourage,
with smiles and sincere words of praise,
to take time to share,
to listen and care,
in tender, affectionate ways.

To love is to have someone special,
one who you can always depend,
to be there through the years,
sharing laughter and tears,
as a partner, a lover, a friend.

To love is to make special memories,
of moments you love to recall,
of all the good things,
that sharing life brings,
love is the greatest of all.

I've learned the full meaning,
of sharing and caring,
and having my dreams all come true,
I've learned the full meaning,
of being in love with u."

With Luv: ~
Nidha🤗

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loveudaniel

@loveudaniel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

it was realy good dear... 👏 👏 👏
plz update soon...

_________________________
MJHT ROXXXXXXXXXX
Riya loves samrat

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

nice concept ruchi ... u mixed the two story .... RA and Nups bro and sis ..😊..

and sami and rids are siblings ....👏👏👏

but u didn't tell us much about gunjan except that she is love of sami ??? so who is this miss bushan ???

congrats on new one .... do continue

Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago