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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG this was the sadest 1 i mean i was crying while read it

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Khushali

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Posted: 16 years ago

do u always have to end wid a sad ending???u made me cry....lovd ur shot....btw,was it 1st for sajan???cuz u misplaced n wid g n m wid s....lolz

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

sindhya this is not fair yaar.....last time when u wrote "my life" u said that next one shot won't be tragic.....but u made me cry in this one too!!!😭😭😭.....why??.....well it was written very beautifully......was very good....but plz plz don't make another attempt to make me cry by writing such tragic one shots!!!.......write a happy one....u write very well...plz yaar write happy ones!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

u made me cry yaar! its not fair!

i ha ve no words to explain this! just simply beautiful!

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iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

THNKSSS GUYZZ.... srryy 2 make u all crryyy...

@prerna- this wuzz my first one shot..

i wrote it lonngg bakk!!

ppl keeep commentinggg n all!

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