NEW BEGININGS (AK/ AR) part27 pg59

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Hi

I am new and i am not so new to india-forums... as in until now i just came here to read all the wonderful fanfic wriiten by many of u. But as I have been a angad Kripa fan I have longed to write my own fanfic about them but never found time.

But now I have the time... so here is my first FANFIC...about Angad and Kripa..

do let me know what u guys think.

to New Beginings

He was like the wind to her . gentle and stoothing like love and with a bit of power and intensity he was the storm that stirred her heart up and left her lost and exhausted yet somehow hopeful of a new beginning..

 

 Since he had stepped into her life it had been like she was someplace else' someone else.

 

And now the marriage proposal. They are all in for it. Dadi is very insistent that it would be the right thing for both of them. For her and for Angad. Ridhima agreed that both of them 'Kripa and Angad'. needed new beginnings and its would be best. Ridhima longed to see her beloved brother happy again. Now it is upto Kripa to decide and ofcourse it is finally Angad's descision.


What will they do .. will they be ready for their new beginnings'


I will also post the first part in some time... mostly about kripa and her past.


do let me know

just msme




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hi I am posting the first part
Its mostly kripas part of the story ...its before Kripas story becomes Angads story too

Kripa had known Dadi and Ridhima only for a couple of months. Since the day she had stepped into this huge classy mansion that belonged to the restaurateur Khanna's she was warmly welcomed by Dadi and easily befriended by Ridhima. And now her life centered around her new home The Khanna Mansion , around Dadi…Riddhi and ofcourse ANGAD.

Angad, who had saved her from the worst that destiny had in store for her….or was it that Angad had actually brought her to where destiny had truly wanted her to be.

Memories of the unfateful night flooded in the mind. Her father had worked at the Khanna Resorts Restautants and Spas all his life. And until the time he passed away her had kept his family sheltered under a small house that he had built himself from scratch. They were a small family of a hardworking man and his devoted wife and a cherished daughter. They strived to meet ends but they had each other and they had love to keep them happy. It was perfect.

Yet as if it was too perfect one unfateful night in a freak road accident her almost perfect family was ripped apart. Her parents had died on the spot and she was left alone. Her parents had brought her up to believe in God and his ways so kripa had picked herself up and taken up a job in a small nursery run by her neightbour Mrs Lobo. Thank God she had the house but she had no one else. No one to hold her while she cried after the loss. No help from anyone except a cheque for the settlement of her fathers final pay from his employers The Khanna Enterprises and a heart felt letter handwritten with love from Mrs Devayani Khanna. There was also an offer for a typical 9 to5 job at The Khanna Enterprises.. Kripa had replied to the letter and the offer with grateful words but declined the offer for the job . she was happy working for the nursery. The work not only paid her enough but also the tender fragrant flowers soothed her. She felt happy to grow the beauties and tend to them. Its was therapeutic to her.

But yet again fate had more in store. One morning one of her far way relatives landed on her door. They had heard of her loss and come much later to hold her while she cried. Her mama and her mami whom she had never met but heard plenty of from her parents. They were both good to her. Once again she felt like she had a family to belong to. Mami seemed to dote on Kripa as she had no children of her own and mama helped her to take care of all her fathers monetary obligations. There was the insurance money…the lawyers… the police etc to be handled as her father died in a road accident.

Days passed and life seemed to fall in pace. Like they say life moves on. She had learnt to live with what she had lost and what she had found in her Mama and mami until one day she decided to meet her lawyers personally to check on the progress of the pending insurance money. She had made up her mind to donate half the money to childrens charity and keep the rest for a rainy day or may be when she was ready to have her own nursery. But sitting in the lawyer office she had discovered that she had none of it . Her mama had cheated her . he had made her sign some document that gave him all the right over her fathers savings, the insuarance money and also the house.

She later stormed into her house to find her Mama sitting with man a little younger than himself. He was mamas friend from his village. When mama saw the anger on Kripas face he realised that she finally knew the truth. He did not even pretend otherwise. He had told her that this was the only motive why he had come to Mumbai and to her life. Kripa had felt numb. She could not believe it when she found out that her mami was aware of all this and was a party to the treacherous plans. She did not know what could she do …how much could she save … how would she deal with them and the stress took a toll and she fainted.

When she woke up she saw her mama and mama hovering on her head. She smiled at first in daze but when sense came back to her she sat up with a jerk and tear streamed on her cheeks. She felt heat on her face … from the tears and from the anger.

Mama then very clearly told her that there was nothing she could do to get the money or the house back but she could definitely do something to save her dead fathers name from the blemish that he was about to put on him. It was worst than what she knew already. Mama had forged her fathers signatures and robbed a lot of people of their money long back and now he threatened to dig it up to scar her dead fathers image .

That was something Kripa could not take. She knew she had to stop it somehow. But how … and mama had the answer to that . he told her that she simply had to marry his friend and mama would just bury the past and not blemish her fathers name. Apparently mama owed huge sums to this " friend" and was paying him off by giving him his much unwanted neice's hand in marriage. It was too much to take. Kripa stopped sobbing and once again gathered her strength. She had resigned to her fate and was going to save whatever was left of her fathers. Not his money or his house but his name. She would marry the man and face her life as it came.


Kripa decided that she would not fight her fate or God will... she strongly believed that God always had a plan for everyone ...she just will have to wait and see what God had in mind for her. her life had shattered in a matter of few months but her faith in God was a strong as ever.


do reply and let me know


Just msme


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
nice intro n good story.
pm me wen u update.
update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice intro.......
feel sorry 4 kripa 😭
wonder who dis frnd is...
cont soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great intro .. continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey GREAT ff
you write VERY well
can't wait to read more continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great concept and loved the 1st part cont soon
can you pm when you update
Javeria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great intro.. Loved the first part..
Poor Kirpa....
Continue soon..N plz pm me wen u update...
Jess
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi u all

thank you so much for all the replies...i will try to post next part in a couple of hours ...

thanks again...since its my first fanfic i was a lil nervous but ur replies makes me feel good...

msme
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys chapter 2

pre cap. kripa was lost in her thought about her past and her marraige to a elderly man that she was blackmailed into agreeing to.
now she is in Khanna mansion. Angad Khannas house.

The knock on the door snapped Kripa out of her thoughts. Everytime she thought about that day she almost lived it again. She shivered a little. Thank God she was saved that night from getting married to that old friend of her Mamas. And now she was expected to marry her saviour. The knock on the door came again.

She wiped the tears that were flowing down her cheeks and took a deep breath before she opened the door expecting Dadi. It was quiet late in the night who else could it be .She took a step back in reflex as she saw Angad standing at the door. He looked tired and worried from the days work and this added issue of marriage brought up by Dadi.

In the days that she had spent at Khanna mansion she had known one thing that Angad would rarely say no to dadi for anything. The man worshipped his Dadi.

He was wearing a grey vest and dark slacks. His eyes sleepy and just little stubble already growing on his cheeks he looked like a hero of some romance novels she had read. The ones who always knew how to save and protect their women. She had always wondered if such heroes lived in real life. An example just stood at her door.

But it was past midnight…normally he would be in bed. She remembered she had already send his herbal tea to his room on time. What was keeping him awake and what made him come to her this late. While she was lost in her thoughts Angad just stared at her.

He raise a brow and jerked his shoulder almost asking her WHAT? . she snaped out of her daze and moved aside to let him in.

He hit to the point without wasting time. He was the most straight forward guy she had ever met.

"Kripa actually ..mmm…I am sure Dadi spoke with you about the marriage" he hesisted a bit. his next words were difficult to come " our marriage" he said finally.

He had spoken the words but she could not find any to reply. So she just nodded, walked to the window and turned her back to him. She did not know what to say. She had not thought it out as yet. He had just saved her from her forced marriage to man much older than her and now she was asked to marry him by Dadi. How could she think? Something told her that she would'nt have to. He would say "no" to her now and to dadi later and it would be done. It would be over. She would still do her house keeping duties at Khanna mansion . even tend to their flowering gardens but she would just be employed and not married. Suited her fine.

She felt him walk towards her even before he had reached over to stand behind her. She always felt it when he was near her. She could'nt know how or why. He stood there for a while …his tall and broad frame just inches away from her short and thin figure.

He let out his breath that lingered on her shoulder and finally said " I think Dadi is right. What the heck!!!! lets get married. Get this whole thing done with. Everybody will be happy. Dadi , Riddhi, me ….".

She turned at his declaration and realised now they were face to face ..inches apart . he was staring down into her eyes when he said "and YOU!!??". She did not understand if the 'you' meant as if he was asking her if she would be happy to marry him or he was taking it for granted that she would be. She kept silent.

He turned abruptly, breaking the silence once again. He was pacing the room now. " I mean I am sure dadi will get me married to you or someone else somehow now or later. And I know I will do it for her sake… now or later. I was thinking instead of marrying some random girl who would have her eyes on my money and the limelight it attracted you could fit better with me. You know Dadi and Riddhi well. Since you have started working as house keeper you know Khanna Mansion and you know ME. It just fits.

So what do you think. After all its ARRANGED marriage.

He was asking he after all. She just nodded and turned her back to him to hide the tear that threatened to flow at the brim of her eye lids.

Kripa? He asked. " say something."

She gatherd herself and turned again to face him.

"I…. I don't know. I….Angad …Sir" she played with her chain just to distract herself from the weakness she felt in her legs and the churning in her stomach. This was the storm that he stirred in her. She had felt it before… almost always when he spoke to her.

But he was the one to make the move. This time he held her hands in his." I know …this a little too rushed for you. But I don't have time to think about it. It's a mad house at the hotels. We are in this whole merger thing with the Mallik hotels and resorts. And I need to get this marriage thing out of my way so that I can work peacefully. But I will give you time to think. You must feel like walking out of one marriage and stepping into another but this one is not a blackmail. Its just….well you think and let me know tomorrow…okay"

With that he turned and left. As abruptly as he had come.

Let me know "Tommorow" was only what Kripa was repeating in her mind. So he wanted an ARRANGEMENT for a marriage. And what did she want she thought. But realised that since her parents had left her it was very little that she had wanted for herself. She was always thrown into some dreadful situation or the other. When she had thought the worst was over she found herself back to where she was.

But marrying Angad was different. Atleast he was honest and something told her this will work. Not just for now but for always. If she had known Angad … from what little she knew she was sure he was someone who believed in making things work once he took them up.

She had little choice and she would have to say yes for Dadi, Riddhi Angad and …for herself. After all… all she had to so was marry the almost most eligible bachelor in town who looked like a hero. In any other circumstances it would have made her happy. But now she had to wait and see what came from this marriage.

She opened the drawer of the small table next to her bed and took the picture of her parents out. She tried to smile through the tears and said aloud. " ma baba… I am going to get married." She held the framed picture to her chest and fell asleep.


guys the next chapter will be bout how angad ended up at Kripas wedding to the older man and rescued her to bring her to Khanna mansion and his life. It will be from Angad point of view.


do let me know what u think . waiting for ur replies.


MSME




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