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Sharona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Humko Tumse Pyaar Hai

Hey Guys This Is Sharona & This is my Fan Fiction Pankit & Jyoti

It's my FF after a long time.
It's a Love Story; So Hopefully You all Will Like it.

It's a mixture of Hindi && English.
It will be based on Pankit & Jyoti but will also have some different love stories.
This FF will kinda follow the story line but i will add my own parts

Please Support me through out the Journey of this FF.
Please Give me Your Point of Views; Whether it's Bad or Good Tell me.
I need Bad Comments for Improvement and Good for Encouragement.
If I don't get enough Feedback's, I will be Forced Wrap the FF Up.
So Please Do Support me. & Sorry for any mistakes and errors.
I Will Update monthly or whenever i am free Because I have School. Enjoy!

Table Of Contents:

Pg 1 : Introduction
Pg 1 : Part 1

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That way I don't have to type up a long list or search pages trying to find you. Thanks [:

Style gotten from Dhruvi

Edited by Candylover - 16 years ago

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Sharona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Meet The Couple:

He is a sweet guy who loves life, He used to be blind but can see now. He comes to the ashram pretending to be another guy and there he falls in love with a girl named Jyoti.

She is very independent, she is afraid to get close to anyone since she has been hurt in the past by her first love, but when she meets Pankit...her life changes

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Concept Of The FF:

'Humko tumse pyaar hai' builds the concept of love within friendship. A friendship slowly turning into love

In this story, Pankit & Jyoti work together, Pankit who comes there with a new name hoping to impress joyti..succeeds but jyoti does like him but is afraid, after all he could be just another guy who wants to hurt her. Slowly you will see how her fear turns into love and how they fall in love
Throughout the story you will see Comedy, Love, and Romance

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

this looks interesting 😃 i cant wait to read

and btw, just a suggestion, maybe you shouldnt make the updates tooo but I would still love to read it :)

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Sharona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: *Nishi*
this looks interesting 😃 i cant wait to read
and btw, just a suggestion, maybe you shouldnt make the updates tooo but I would still love to read it :)

thanks 😊 but what did you mean with this " btw, just a suggestion, maybe you shouldnt make the updates tooo"

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Sharona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Note : He can't see although in the character sketch it says he can...spoiler: that will be later..right now he can't see..also the story will have some parts of the serial

Part 1
Just a small part - to get this FF started 😊

Pankit came out of the office and was standing in front of the door, he could hear the sounds of laughing and playing kids but he also heard another laugh, a laugh of a young girl, she sounded happy and he couldn't help with smile. On the playground was Jyoti, who was having fun running around & playing with pooja & the childeren, she was so involved in the game that she didn't see where she was running and bumped into Pankit. His glasses fell and it looked as if he was staring right at Jyoti. She saw him and was lost in his eyes, her reflection can be seen in his eyes. She kept looking at him when suddenly a strong wind came and flew part of her duppata away, part of her duppata was now covering Pankit's face but neither one of them minded. All of a sudden a girl tapped on her shoulder and she looked away, taking her duppata from his face...she picked up his glasses, cleaned them and gave it to him, he was still standing on the same spot while she turned to see who tapped her. When she looked she saw Kalpana, her best friend

Jyoti : arre tum? tum yahan kaise?
Kalpana : tumhe lene ayi hoon?
Jyoti : kyun?
Kalpana : arre tum to bhool hi gaye ho...yaad hai tumhara scooter shop main hai
Jyoti : haan, main bhi na...aaj kal kuch yaad nahi rehta hai

Both of them were busy laughing, when Kalpana noticed Pankit standing behind Jyoti

Kalpana : Jyoti? Yeh kaun hai?
She motioned her head towards Pankit and Jyoti turned to see him
Jyoti : Yeh Sachin hai, Pooja ki teacher...aur Sachin ji yeh Kalpana hai, meri best friend.
Jyoti introduced them and they shook hands.

Kalpana : Ap hum chale, mujhe ghar jaana hai aur mom ki madat karni hai
Jyoti : acha tum ruko mein api zamaan lati hoon

Jyoti left to get her stuff and after a few minutes she came back

Jyoti : Sachin mein jaa ra ha hoon, hum phir kal milte hai
Sachin/Pankit : Hmm bye Jyoti ji aur Kalpana Ji

Jyoti and Kalpana walked away while sachin went back inside, just before leaving Jyoti turned around and looked at Pankit leaving, he felt her looking and stopped, she turned back and he continued walking.