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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amsjms

sure nishi!

ta ar bolte? kemon aachish tweetybird?

love you a lot!

ami bhalo achi.
tumi bhalo to?
love u.
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Posted: 15 years ago

thanks a lot jolpori!

INSHALLAH, we'll all be great in our lives (including family and corporate). btw pressure ta khub jacchhe, training e, asha korchhi next week, purodame job shuru hoe jabe.

mouri naamta bhalo legechhe? actually amaro naamtar chhandota besh laage! besides amar ekta frnd ache mou naame (jadio mouri er shathe or kono mil nei) ar aami kinda pathetic dumbness er karone or shathe out of connection hoe aachhi! ei jonyo o khanikta nijer monke bujh deitei ei naamta bachhlam hoytoba! karon o ifian noy moteo as far as i am concerned!

luv u jolpori!

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Posted: 15 years ago

rimi is okay, monu!

she was just at the other side of the deck, lost in to her own thought, benji ran to her not paying the slightest notice to mayur as he located her and uday followed him and by mistake hit mayank on the way.

hope its all clarified darling! how are these days monu?

thanks yaar! pray for us!

love you

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Posted: 15 years ago

its okay drishti sweets!

thanks a lot for ur wishes!!! and yeah i am gonna miss yoy all too,.

really glad u liked rim's plans, well she needed a back up right?

i mean the way she is, haath pe haath rakh ke baith jana is not her type, at all!

love youy hunny

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishithini

ami bhalo achi.
tumi bhalo to?
love u.

u too!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

dear mjhtians orexcelians! or simply crazy lovers!

i hope from next upfdate nihu is gonna take over thisff,crazy love, i know she will keep you all very happy with her magic!

sorry, if i have hurt anyone anyhow, and take care!

pray for us!

love you!

jms.

and this one goes to my beloved family, tho they dont care much about my cl updates!



Update 23

Banquet hall

Miss. aha takes the spotlight as mou whispers something in her ear, after the completion of the latest song.

Aha: may I have your attention please? A new segment is just about to begin, which is couple dance! (ppl mutter , aha smiles) I know, u are thinking 'wats so new about it?' right? Well, isme naye baat ye hain ke couples sirf batchwise chune jayenge, yaneki a dance for each batch separately, aur couples ki chunav hoga bilkul random, (showing a couple of jars full of chits at the corner) in dono jars ki ek me hain guys ki naam or dusre me hain girls ki, ek sath in dono jar se ek ek chits uthaya jayega , aur aise hi pairs select kiya jayega. Now, I wud like to call upon miss mirza on stage to announce our pairs, give her a big hand !

Mou (nodding at the appreciation): lets begin with the 32nd (which is of sajan's) batch!

Deck

M (screams) : nupur!!!!!!!!!!!!

The second ticks by like an hour, nupur is being seen to put a weak fight against the hostile waves and soon enough to be out of frame.

M (yelling and pulling himself free from uday and benji's grip) : getoff me!

B (gasps): mayank, dont! (the rest of the sentence ' lets get some help' dies away as mayanks already dived in to the water, paying no heed to benji)

Hall

Mou: samrat is gonna be paired with,,,(looking at the chit, on which there is clearly written the name 'dia', mutters in her head, 'I know u will forgive me dia', exhaling loudly smiles) gunjan!

At this gunjan takes a few backward steps, trying to sneak out but cant as the spotlights have already located her and samrat like the other couples, the time has stood still, to gunjan every sound has got muffled apart from his slow motion steps toward and her raising heart beats , and seeing samrat's expression its easy to tell that he has got temporarily blinded, cant see anything but her.

reaching her, he kneels b4 her, spreading a hand towards her, as if, begging for her from herself, craving not only a dance but also a second chance, a wordless moment passes by,

s (in a barely audible whisper): please?

Deck

R (forgetting her differences with benji for now,with utmost urgency): uday, hit the emergency button! (running for the buoys) ben give me a hand!

U (shaking b4 the switch board, no one is there in the wheelhouse too, as the ship has been anchored nice and tight, he looks utterly confused): wo switch kaunsa hoga! ( touching a one then shifting to another) ye? Ya phir ye? (making his mind) shyad yehi hoga! (presses it hard but in lieu of siren, fog light gets turned on) damn! (turning off the switch he starts hitting one after another)

B (tying a long rope to a big buoy): ye uday kya kar raha hain! Ab tak toh

R (running toward the railing with benji, carrying the buoy): forget about him! Tumhe wo dono deikh raha hain kya benji? (her voice almost cracks) mujhe toh nahin dikh raha!

B (getting almost teary with the fear of losing both): mujhe bhi nahin.

Hall

still dazed g puts her a bit shaky hand on to s's palm, rising with a smile that looks more relieved than winning , sam leads her to he dance floor side by side. The salsa is on, samrat puls her by her waist right to his chest , gunjan looks uneasy and samrat is indeed dazzled.

Dia is utilizing her time with a drink as she hasnt been able to be paired as her partner benji (mou replaced samrat with benji, as that's the only guy's name from the batch she knew, apparently he is bz with something else by the time)hasn't showed up for the dance. Dia turns right to get a better view of the person who has just joined her.

Mou(in reply to dia's 'hey', nods, then gets a lil embarrassed): I owe u an apology.

D: what?! Par kiu?

Mou: I am sorry that u are missing the dance. Its all bcus of me.

D (still confused): may be, but wud u mind explaining that to me?

Mou(sighing): sure,,,actually,,,huya ye ke (a rapid soundless mumbling is shown with some back ground music) well, hope u don't mind (adds the words apologetically)

D (raising a brow): ofcourse, I do!

Mou looks shocked.

Deck

Uday (running in with some crew): waha pe toh mujhe emergency switch nahi mila par ye log(locating something in the water, shouts aloud) wo raha!

Benji and rimjhim follow his direction finding mayank struggling to keep the unconscious nupur' head on out of the water. The three call out his name together but in vain, the seconds are passing like hours, mayank (may be out of instinct) looks up getting a better control of nupur, benrim shows him the buoy, mayank hand motions them to drop it to him, on the 5th attempt he cud grab that. By that time a rubber boat has been already reached near them in some seconds the three member rescue , by who the two of them get pulled out of the water.

It was only a matter of super slow motioned seconds they get reached the lowest deck and get un-boarded. Only then a still gasping mayank notices nupur's chest is even, without any ups and downs. By the time he flings himself to nupur the three from the upper deck reach there.

The 3 (recognizing the symptoms, gasp): nupur!

Hall

D : mind toh mujhe karnahi chahie, jabke tumne ye socha ke mujhe un dono se zyada apna dance ki padi hain!

Mou : nahin main aisa kab (she stops seeing dia smiling) oh toh tumne ye

D: chhoro na ye sab baaton ko! Pehle mujhe ye batao itna sundar decoration kaunsi firm se karwayi tum logo ne?

Mou: umm, it's a bit difficult to answer, right now u know.

D: oh come on! Koi secret toh nahin hain na?

Mou: nahi yaar! Its just we are kinda giving opportunities to various firms to decorate our different parties, so , that we can choose the best one to give the contract, depending on the guests' opinions. So, natuarally I don't remember all the names and their schedules by heart, so before giving u any particular name, I will have to check on the list.

D: hmm, sounds plausible! (then freezes seeing something) wow!

Mou (following the direction of her gaze): the chandelier? Yup its gorgeous!

D (breathelessly): ofcourse he is.

Mou (confused): he? (then a smile takes over her confusion, locating, dia's object of desire)well, good luck with that (she smiles watching her own brother)!

Lower deck

B: aare, bhai koi doctor ko bulao! nupur ko

But mayank hasn't got anytime to waste on these crap, as he has already begun to work, he fills her stomach with air, only hesitates once to put his palm on her heart and gets utterly relieved, to see rimjhim taking his place instead, but keeps a hawk eye on her hand pressing, rimjhim mutters, 'school training', rimjhim stops to let mayank work on the blowing then starts once again when mayank pulls his mouth away from nupur's, after a few more tries, nupur throws up, water all around her to their utmost relief, mayank hugs her franetically, breaking down for the first time in his entire life, he actually cries, for the first time too!

Hall

On an off-balanced twist (as gunjan's stepping is still kinda faulty), gunjan's shoulder hits samrat's chest, brushing his face with her hair, just like the samrat's bedroom dance (b4 their morena prob).

S (stopping suddenly): ye! Ye! Ye pehle bhi ho chuka hain! (coming back from the sudden split second trance) hain na? gunjan? Batao mujhe? Hua hain ya nahi! Bolo mujhe Gunjan!

noticing his high pitched question has already drawn attention, gunjan tries to leave the spotlight asap.

Samrat (following her to quieter corner): gunjan, ruko!

Gunjan halts, while samrat catches up to her.

At the other corner

U (bumping on to mou): oh sorry!

Mou; its ok, no problem.

U ( from behind as mouri passes by): aacchha tumne gunjan ko kai dekha hain?

Mou: haan, kucchh der pehle samrat ke sath dance kar rahi thi, ab shyad wahi khi hogi, par baat kaya hain? Koi problem toh nahin hain na?

U: actually baat ye hain ke, mujhe usko nupur ki halath ki

Mou: nupur ki halath! Matlab? Kya huya hain nupur ko?

Half an hour later

Nupur is lying in a posh cabin (as mouri hurried up to the deck and lend her cabin to nupur, and seeing no utmost danger, she suggested that sajan shudnt be bothered on this, on which everyone agreed too), on a queen sized bed, wrapped up in some blankets and a bathrobe as her water soaked dresses are sent to laundry to be washed and dried up, a mug full of hot chocolate and some pills are lying around on the table next to her bed.

R (picking up the mug): lo pilo ise, acchha lagega.

N (groaning): do do baar pi chuki hoon, aur nahin pya jata mujhse rimjhim! (she shivers by the end of her words, getting more cold)

R: see? Now, aacchhisi ladki ki terha pilo, come on!

N: nahin rimjhim, ab aur nahi! Please!

R: par nup

M (also in a bathrobe, getting in): its ok, rimjhim, use aur force mat karo,

R: I don't believe it! Tumbhi! Tum bhi use support de rahe ho! Par kiu?

M (smiling his usual smile, vanishing nupur's smile away): kiuke aate waqt maine soup ki order de kar aya hoon!

Nupur makes a face, rimjhim smiles.

M (to rimjhim): rimjhim, tum party enjoy kiu nahi karte? Jab ab sab thik ho chuka hain? tumhe bhi toh

R: par, nupur ko is haal me chhodke?

M: tum, us vaare me befiker raho, uski dekhbhal ke liye,main hoona yahape?

R (smiling meaningfully): oh! Baat agar ye hi hain toh shyad yaha se mera jana hi is waqt thik hoga!

M tries to smile back too, nupur blushes, hiding herself more under the blanket.

@ the deck (as sajan has climbed up there in searh for some privacy and tranquility right after nupur's shifting to the cabin)

S (continuing): mujhe pata hain ke shyad tumhara samrat aur is samrat me zameen asman ka fark hain gunjan, aur shyad dikhneme aisa hi kuchh lagta hain, par mera yakin mano, jobhi difference hain wo superficial hain, sirf on the surface

G (realizing that samrat took her missing 'the old him' very seriously, she tries to explain): samrat, please mere baat suno, in dino jobhi hua wo

S (interrupting her for the seventh time this evening): bahat hi painful tha, specially tumhare liye, (he looks miserable) aur wo bhi mere vaajese, yakin nahin hota! Jis maine khud tumhe lekar apna khudka ek swarg rachna chahta hain, usi maine kaise apnehi haaton se tumhari duniya nark se bhi battar banate gaya! Damn! (he punches the railing hard)

g (with water eyes reaches for his hand, to check if he is hurt aur not, gasps): samrat!

Mayur

M (haughtily): isiliye, isiliye, main hamesha kehta rehta hoo, films bekar hote hain! ye sab pe picche apna time aur energy barbad karna bewakufi hai!

N (firing up, taking the shawl lying next to her ): tum phirse yehi kehneki kishish kar rahe hona, ke main bewakuf hoon?!

M:koshish nahin kar raha hoon balki keh raha hoon! Tum'

N (wrapping the shawl comes out of the bed and dashes past him toward the oval shaped window): aur tum kaya ho? Haan? Dimag ka factory? Agar itnahi dimag hain tumme toh mujhe girne kaise diya mr. mayank Sharma?!!!

Sajan

G (tending his hand): tum pagal ho gaye ho kya? Koi aise apne aap ko chot pauhchate hain kya? Kitna dukhh raha hoga ye

S (holding her hand with his free one): ye chot, ye dard us dard ke samne kuchh nahi jo maine tumhe pauhchaya! Us dard ke samne kuch nahi jo ab mere dil me hain! tumhe dukh dene ki dard!

G: samrat please! Aise khudko

S (looking completely oblivious to her words and his pain): yakin karo, gunjan, jis samrat ko tumne chaha tha, jisse tumne pyar kiya tha wo abhi bhi (keepin her hand on his heart) yehi kahi chhupe hain, main use dhundneki koshish kar raha hoon gunjan! Aur tab tak karta rahunga jabtak wo mujhe na mil jaye! Tum dekh lena gunjan, bahat jald wo tumhare sath, tumhare pass hoga, par is liye tumhe bhi mujhe ek mauka dena parega gunjan! Us samrat banker dikhaneka! (holding her by her arms keeping his intensely pleading eyes into hers, samrat asks) tum mujhe wo mauka dogi na gunjan?

G (closing her eyes bites her lip for a while): ab uska koi zarurat nahi raha samrat, (samrat's hands drops to his sides and he looks horrified)

Mayur

M (stunned): tum shyad thik hi keh

N (cursing herself for getting so hypered and saying those crude words to him): mayank suno mera matlab wo nahin tha, yakin karo main to sirf

M : nahin nupur, main hi laparwa tha jo tumhe girne diya, (as if nupur hasn't said 'par wo toh sirf ek hads tha' thing) main hi gair zimedar tha jo tumhe wo karne diya, saare ke saare galathi meri hain!

N (firing up once again): mayank Sharma! Khabardar agar tumne ab phirse aapne aap ko zimedar thehraya toh! Ghalathi meri hain! maine tumse wo karwarya, aur uparse tumpe hi baras padha, apne films ko bachaneki chakkar me'

M (pulling her to his chest with sudden iron grasp): films, films, films! Tumhe pata bhi hain aaj is films ki liye main tumhe kho dene wala tha! Tumhe pata bhi hain mujh par kya guzra tumhe us halath me dekhne par? Tumhe andaza bhi hain mera kya hota agar tumhe kuchh ho jata toh?...

They keep staring at each other intensely, even without recognizing their proximity.

Rimben

R (exasperatedly): Benjamin, agar tumhe ye lagta hain ke, us hadse me ek dusre ke sath den eke vaaje se maine tumhe maaf kar diya toh tumhe

B (miserably): bilkul ghalath lagta hain, I know, I can see that.

R (surveying his face for a while, smiles): galath! Hamesha ki terha!

B (incredulously): kya tumne mujhe maaf kar diya! Wobhi bas aise hi?

R: for the last time, aage se dhyan rakhna

M (adding, joining in ): taaki aisa kuch phirse naho?

R(nods): exactly!

Benji nods too, looking helpless between the two ladies.

sajan

g: kiuke mujhe abhi se us samrat ki maujudgi ki ehsaas ho raha hain samrat, is liye, mujhe us samrat ki koi bhi intezaar nahi hain, khans karke jab tum mere sath ho.

S (looking in to her eyes, with intense pleasure and a trace of tears, too happy to speak): sach??? Yanike tumne mujhe'

G: samrat, atit me bahat ji chuke hain hum, ab mujhe aaj me jina hain, tumhare sath,

S (completing her words): aanewale kaal ke liye!

They both smile, suddenly a blasting sound makes gunjan hide her face in samrat's shoulder.

S (smiling): ye bomb nahin hain gunjan! Fireworks hain! (samrat looks startled as if he recalled something)

Mayur

Their hearts melt as their eyes meet, after a few uncomfortable moments nupur tries to free herself, doing that her shawl drops on tye floor and she freezes once again turning red as the bathrobe is kinda leaving her too revealing, following mayank's eyes (unintentional gaze) she turns her back to mayank and closes her eyes feeling his presence right behind her .

N (feeling mayank's mild touch over her shoulder she pleads exhaling deeply): nahin mayank, please!

Sajan

S (gripping gunjan's arm in his iron grasps unintentionally, mutters to himself): dj vu!

G: kya!

S (turning out of the reverie , staring at her anxiously): pehle wo dance-twist, aur ab tumhara fireworks ko bomb samajhna, ye sab hamare sath pehle bhi ho chukka hain! hain na gunjan?

G: wo samrat baat '

S: baat ko talon mat gunjan! Please for God's sake mujhe batao, ye sab pehle kab aur kaha hua?

G (surrendering): wo fireworks, meri birthday per aur wo twist hamari pehle break up ki'

S (outraged): kya! Hamara breakup bhi hua tha! Kab gunjan? Kiu?!!!

G (looking alarmed as ppl are gathering on the deck to enjoy the fireworks show, pull herself away hurriedly): samrat! Wo bahat hi purani baatein hain! please wo sab baatein yaad karneki koshish me apne aapko aur torture mat karo.

S: par gunjan'

G: samrat please, mere baat mano, hume ab sirf aage ki sochna hain ok? Bite huye kaal ka nahi, ok? (she holds his hand and smiles) fireworks enjoy kare?

Mayor

A naughty smile illuminates mayank's face as he has just manged to astound nupur by wrapping herself up with the shawl.

Nupur (feeling the presence of the shawl, turning to mayank with a surprised yet satisfied face): mayank! Tumne ye'(she lowers her lashes as she cant utter what she thought about his coming near her)

m (coming a bit closer): maine kya nupur?

N(searching for a perfect cover): wo, wo ,wo'main'mera matlab hain ke (the door knock comes as her savior this time, she in the process of getting away from mayank) come in!

(she bumps on to him, as her shawl's end has been stuck to his watch, and the door opens as mayur are battling to get away from each other trying to free the tagle)

r (with the washed and dried up clothes in her hand): sorry! Main shyad galath time pe '

N(freeing herself, turning scarlet): nahi tum galath soch rahi ho! Hum toh sirf

R (smiling ironically): boxing kar rahethe! I got it!

M: wo rimjhim actually

R (now half laughing at his bright red color): actually, u know guys, boxing khelna aacchhe hote hain, par ab jab nupur fit as a fiddle ho hi chuke hain toh tumhe nahin lagta ke tohda bahat party bhi tumhe enjoy kar lena chahie? Jabke aagle ek ghante me hum laut rahe hain?

Hall (after half an hour or so)

A guiter sound draws everyone's attention, people applauds as rimjhim begins.


Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

Ppl start to hit the dance floor with their partners while gunjan stares at samrat looking horrified as tho samrat is ready to accept his past gunjan is still not so sure that whether his mind shud be put under pressure or not, that too so frequently. To her relief samrat shows no hint of recalling this song other than spreading his hand to her to get on the dance floor as everyone else.


Oh, Le Liya Dil, Oh Haai Mera Dil
Haai Dil Lekar Mujhko Na Behlaana
Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

She turns to benji with a twist, while mayank takes on, circling nupur with a crooked smile,

Bahaar Banke Aaoon Kabhi Tumhaari Duniya Mein
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Nupur also copies his expression and poses to leave arrogantly but mayank holds her by dupatta and touches his ears,

Tum Mere Ho, Ho Tum Mere Ho
Aaj Tum Itna Vaada Karte Jaana

Nupur smiles and begins

Chura Liya
Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

They departs the spotlight as she finishes this segment, and then samrat goes on rplacing mayur with gunjan in his arms,

Ho, Sajaaoonga Lutkar Bhi Tere Badan Ki Daali Ko
Lahoo Jigar Ka Doonga Haseen Labon Ki Laali Ko

Gunjan puts her palm on his lips shaking her head a bit, samrat's eyes smile as he removes her hand then begins to dance once again

Sajaaoonga Lutkar Bhi Tere Badan Ki Daali Ko
Lahoo Jigar Ka Doonga Haseen Labon Ki Laali Ko

With another twist he comes in front of her and puts his eyes in hers and for a moment theyforget to dance at all as samrat makes his promise to her,

Hai Vafa Kya Is Jahaan Ko
Ek Din Dikhla Doonga Main Deewana

They keep staring in each others' eyes forgetting about the audience completely'moments tick by then benrim, mayur and other pairs hit the dance floor around sajan singing together

Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko
Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam
Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani
Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

Sajan's trance is broken and they smile staring at each other with gunjan blushing, samrat taking the advantage of the crowd bring gunjan as close as possible and begins to sway hugging her lightly

Le Liya Dil, Haai Mera Dil
Haai Dil Lekar Mujhko Na Behlaana

Suddenly smarat's vision gets dizzy as the song continue, he looks around over gunjan's shoulder to get a clear view but in vain, the dizziness is still on,

Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko

Getting tired of his dizziness he looks up at frustration and suddenly it hits him! He sees the bright-light of the chandelier dropping right on to them, and without second his groundbreaking scream muffles the song as he flings himself on to gunjan to save her from whats coming, yelling her name, the name he has given her ages ago, the name he forgotten for ages, 'chashmish!'

Hospital

The giddiness has been worn off finally, as samrat opens his eyes to find the anxious faces around him full of hope and fear at the same time, his stare gets settled on gunjan, he tries to smile but feels kinda weak to do so.

B (breaking the silence): finally! Dude tune hume dara hi diya tha!

Dia; haan Sammie, u cant even imagine ye dhai ghante humne kaise guzare!

N:by God! Samrat, tumne toh gunjan ki halath nahin dekha, kitna ro rahi thi bechari!

G (turning red): di!

Samrat hides smiles

Mou (hiding nupur's sorry to gunjan): sorry yaar mujhe bahat bura lag raha hain ke humare ship pe hi tumhe ye

S (making a face): excuse me, but who are you?

Everyone gets shocked,

R (mutters): I don't believe it! This is not happening!

G runs towards the door as she cant take this anymore, but halts as samrat calls her from behind.

S (laughing a bit): main toh sirf mazak kar raha tha chashmish! (gunjan turns toward him and keeps staring with her eyes almost popped out, samrat assures her smiling) sach, cashmish! Sab kichh yaad hain mujhe! Yaha tal ki mouri ki wo pathetic jhumar girna bhi!

Everyone gets shocked once again.

A month later on the benches by the jheel at morena

S: toh wo jhumar ka girna sirf mera vahem tha?!!!mujhe ye aaj bhi yakin nahi hota!

G:oh samrat, kabhi bhi kahi bhi jao, tumhe sirf us baat ki padi hain!abhi bhi!

S: kiuke mujhe ab tak ye samajh me nahi aa raha ke agar wo mera vahem hi hoga toh phir doctor ne mujhe fit kaise kaha? I mean itna vivid agar illusion hone laage toh doctor ko toh mujhe pagal kehna hi

G (exasperated by the comparison): samrat, main aaj tumhe ankhri baar samajhanki koshish kar rahi hoon, okay? Doctor ki mutabek, tumhara subconscious mind me accident ki wo light wo mujhe bachaneki koshis ye sab bahat aachhi terha sse chhap chuke the aur usdin hamare atat se jude huye bahat kuchh tumhe kuch hadh tak yaad aane laage, toh jab tumne us accidentwali din ki gaana perform kia aur hum dono itna karib gaye (she blushes a bit) phir tumhare subconscious mind ne us incidents ko ek dusre se relate karke ek pura picture create karna chaha, as a result, jab tumne us jhumar ki lights ko dekha tumhe wo illusion

S: samajh gaya maine, chashmish! Ab toh tumhari ye class khatam karo!

G (flushing): kya! Main class le rahi thi, kya? (then halts seeing samrat's smiling his usual naughty smile) samrat! ( she stands up and begins to walk away without even a proper goodbye)

S (from behind, getting tensed): chashmish! I was only pulling your legs yaar! Sorry! Come on ab to gussa chhordo!

G (looking back at him, smiles to his relief): waqt kitna huya hain dekha hain tumne? Hume ghar lautna nahin hain kya? Kitne saare tayari karni hain! Mayank ke waha se di ke liye officially reeshta jo aanewala hain!


Edited by amsjms - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Mila
khub khub valo likho tumi.
i really loveddd it.
the way mayank saved nupur was really very nice.
Pm korar jonno thanx.
valo theko.
Faria
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh i'd missed out on a lot of parts...!!
just read them now...!
Nupur fell in the sea praticing the titanic pose..!! LOL these things only happen with nupur....but Mayank dived after her....!! awwww....he's just so loving..!!
and the way you showed him crying....when she finally woke up after CPR....the whole scene was so great..!
I loved the scene in the cabin....LOL..i could just imagine them in the bathrobes....and then Mayank blaming himself....so like him...to take it all up on himself..! Then the cute somantic moment....but was interrupted..!! ohhho..! LOL
i really am crazy about that song..! its just so romantic..!! i could just imagine them dancing....*sigh*
Official rishta aane wala hai...!! oye hoye..!! wedding bells in the air..!
I have to say yaar....i still noticed all the things that happened in this FF happening in the show..!! the jail track...except it was benji here....I have huge doubts that the creatives refer to this FF for ideas..!! hehe...
aur ab Mayur wedding...!! haila....i hope creatives YEH wala idea itni jaldi na le lein..!
Awesome parts Meela..!! I'm in love with this FF yaar....! its one of my favourites..!
and another thread is gonna get over..!! wowwww....it just rocks..!
the longest running FF on MJHT forum...!
keep up the great job..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
omgg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i loved the titanic mayur scene and the rescue
awesoome yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part dear
wow i loved it for last part i was really scared for nupur i was sure also till mayank is with her nothing will happen.
wow rims forgives benji so easily .
great. and sarat actually remember everything good.
finally everything so good
do continue dear
bye sumi

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