Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 92

sorry to take these long!

i am very bz these days u know...thats why i am getting this late,

INSHALLAH, i'll wrap this ff chunk up soon so that you can take over with this ff with ur part!

love you a lot

awwwwwwww..take ur time yaar..bcoz even am busy these dayzzz..so dn't worry..haan ek request hai..yeh updts u hv them store sumwhere kya????

ur updts ????

if yes plzz mail me them na..bcoz pehle ke kuch updts...hv vanised frm my..PC..as it was repaired lately!!!and PM..toh i deleted..since i had stored it in PC

and those pgs are nt opening also..so..if u hv them store sumwhere..plz mail me..if u can...it will help me!!!..nahi hai...toh dn't worry i'll manage...

u take care yaar!!!..hwz ur ilness!???? am praying for u sweety!!!!

LUV ya lods

Nihu

lemme see wat i can do about it ok?

luv ya mate

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I am really new to dis forum! & have joined just a few mins ago!!!! I've been a SILENT READER of ur FF right 4om it's vey beginning😊 but havn't commented coz i wasn't havin any account! 😔

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Anxiously waiting 4 ur update!

Take care!

welcome to crazy love family yaar! great to know that you have been there for so long! really, its so overhelming!

be with us like that, not actually like that but much more non-silent way, as you are here already!

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i am so sorry that i am being a superlate lateef these days and kinda breaking my promises more time than i usually do, actually i am kinda bz with my new job (thanks to ALLAH that i managed to get this one, and INSHALLAH i will be a great employee to my organisation, AMEEN) pray for me guys! btw, i am not gonna make any promise now, about when i am gonna update next, but i wanna let you know about this, that i am working on the final episode of this chunk now,

and one more thing, my monitor is giving me a hard time, so, that might make it even tougher to write one in time.

love you all guys.

dont hate for this delay ok?

muah!

this one goes to my crazy love members!

Update 22

Preface

days are flying without much of events. Ppl are bz for both of the events, exam and party. Samrat, taking the last part of gunjan's conversation with rimjhim about g's missing the old samrat seriously (as he dint manage to eavesdrop earlier while she was telling rimi about her forgiving him), is more bz as he is taking regular therapy secretly, which remains unfortunately still futile. He is getting more edgy every time and keeps sulking. He isnt even trying in'gunjan patao' mission anymore as he has realised, or so he thinks, that these sort of feeble and light event will not let him win gunjan's heart all over again.poor chap! So he is taking the therapy with utmost importance so that he can give himself back to gunjan. His lack of attempt is making gunjan wonder though, but she is keeping this from everyone else, not wanting any 'pulling legs stuff' from others, and she , mocking the still angry girl, cant even give up the charade and go running to him, asking. Poor girl! Only if she knew wats bugging him that much, she wud have gone to him right away and ……anyway enough of the sulking….let's move on.

The party begins

Mayur at the albatross deck

M: pata hain nupur? Main kahi dino se ek baat soch raha hoon, kiu na hum, hamare sagai sath me kar le?

N (choking her orange juice, laughing): tumhe kya lagta hain mayank? Hamare yani mere aur tumhare sagai alag alag din me hogi?! Tum bhi na mayank! Hadh karte ho! (she starts over again)

M (mocking bitterly): ha ha ha! Mai jis hamare baat kar raha tha wo hamare ye hamare nahin hain wo (looking at the confused nupur, realising he has messed it up, tries to clear it up, as usual smugly) I mean, main mera aur tumaha sagai ki baat nahi kar raha tha,

N (outraged): kya!!! Tum ab kisi aur se shaadi karna chahte ho!!!!!!!!!!!

Bensam

At a quiet corner of the banquet hall

S (opening up for the first time in days): mera toh dimag hi kaam karna bandh kar diya hain benji, karu bhi toh kya karu yaar?

B: dekh dude, sabar se kaam le, tu hi toh kehta hain , 'sabar ka phal samrat hota hai!'

S (grudgingly): samrat! Wahi toh har musibat ka jar hain benji!

B: main kuchh samjha nahi dude!

S(sighing): its myself! Its my oldself which is now overshadowing me! Samnewala agar superman bhi hota toh bhi main pichhe nahi hat ta benji! Par isbaar toh mere against main khud khada hoon! Koi apne aap se kaise jeet sakta hain benji? (he looks utterly helpless now)

Mayur again

M (exasperated): you are impossible nupur!

N: dusri ladki se shaadi ki baat tumne ki aur impossible hone ka tag mujh …

M (cutting in): main hamari aur gunjan-samrat ki baat kar raha tha!

N: bilkul nahin!

M (confused and shocked at her expression): shyad tum abhi bhi samjhi nahi , main to sirf

N (snapping): thik hi samjhi main ne! main thodi si filmy kya hoon tumhe toh ….main kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti thi ke tum mere sath aisa bhi kabhi kar sakte ho, mayank!

M (bewildered): ab maine kya kiya, nupur?

N: tumhe agar meri thodasa bhi parwa hota na mayank toh tum ye kabhi nahin chahte ke gunjan aur meri sagai ek hi din ho!

M: par tumhe toh khush hona chahie ke

N: mujhe gunjan ki sagai me nachna nahin hain kya? (mayank looks even more shocked seeing her problem, then hides a laughter) Enjoy nahin karna hain kya? Par tumne toh!.........tumhe agar meri ye thodisi filmy problem se itna problem hain toh mujhse pyar karne se pehle ye sab ki vaare me soch lena chahiye tha na?

M : mujhe tumhari nautanki ya phir filmy nature se koi problem nahi hai nupur! Tum hamari sagai me jitna nachna chahti ho nach sakti ho!

N: haan ! taaki logo ko ye laage ki 'dulhan hain ya hir bandariyan!' (thinking hard) phirbhi thodi sit oh main nach hi lungi ,,,par yaad rahe hamari aur sajan ki sagai ek hi din me nahi hogi! Kiuke

M: tumhe dher sari maze jo karni hain, I understand.

N (throwing a suspisciou look at him, searching for any trace of 'mazak' ,smiles finding his face full of sincerity): very good! ,,,(recalling something her smile broadens) aur jab tumhe meri filmy hone se koi problem nahin hain, toh chalona titanic khelte hain!

M: kya?!Kya? Kya? Kya?!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Back to bensam

B: dude! Tujhe is loser si shakal bilkul suite nahi karta! Come on sam! Tu ladhai se pehle har manlenewalon me se hahi hain yaar! Toh phir abhi se hi ye

S: tujhe kya lagta hain, maine ye

B: dekh dude, rimjhim se main ek chis sikha hain, wo hain balance karna, tu ab bahat hi emotional ho raha hain, jis petera koi haath nahi us chis ke pichhe bhag raha hain, bangla me ek baat hain(thinking hard) haan, 'shanar harin (correct pronunciation is shonar horeen)' yani ke sone ki hirni, rimjhim kehti hain, uske pichhe jitna bhagega wo tujh se utnahi dur bhgta jayega, memory lautna ya na lautna toh luck pe hain na? uske liye ye moping kaisa?

S: par benji,

B: par-var ki waqt kabka paar ho chukka hain dude! Nikal chukka hain!! Apni dukh me dubna bandh kar sam! Its action time ,buddy!

S: tu thik keh raha hain yaar, I have been stupid,,, par aur nahin, I have to face it! And I have to win over it! No matter what! ( his face is full of determination, benji smiles )

Mayur entering the banquet hall

M : nupur suno toh!

N (haughtily): jabse maine titanic dekha hain tabse maine ye than liya ke mawka milne par main bhi mere safed ghodewale rajkumar ke sath jack aur rose ki us superhit pose ka nakal utarungi, lakin nahin! Tumhe toh sab kuchh me apna hi hitlery chalani hain nah?

M : I still don't believe it!!! Jo tum, is party me aane ke liye itna jhijhak rahi thi wahi tum ab us railing pe chadneki soch rahi ho!

N: itna agar risk le hi liya hain toh kuchh ur kiu nahi? Jabke tum rahoge mujhe sambhalne! (grimacing again as it is not going to happen bcus of his 'no')par tum toh ,,,

M(cutting across): kitne saare log the dock pe? Tumne notice kiya? By any chance? We wud have been looking like idiots if we did so infront of them, nupur!

N (gulping for air, then biting her lower lip): toh tum mujhe yehi samajhteho, hain na mayank? Idiot?bolo?

M: nupur mera matlab wo,,,(but he cant complete as the principal begins an announcement, from the center of the dancefloor)

Principal: excelians, I know you are enjoying the party thoroughly like I am, (smiles) now, now, not willing to engaging you longer than necessary let me present you the people who have presented us with this perfect evening , mr. Al Imran Mirza, MD of albatross cruise, (a spotlight flashes on a tall, fair and handsome young man, looking only a few years older than the excel students, atleast too young to be a MD of any company, anyway, ppl cheers for him enthusiastically)

M (in a motion to keep his eyes from the distraction): suno nupur jo main (finds she has already left , still mumbles) mujhe explain toh karne dena chahie thana tumhe nupur!

P (as the applaud fades in): please give a big hand for one of the directors of albatross cruise, ms. An Nisa Mirza (a breathe taking beauty in fiery red jamdani with pale golden saree steps up with a flashing smile on her face, again too young to be on such a post, yet again ppl roar with applause)

B (mumbles from the corner accompanied by gunjan and rimjhim): par ye toh!

G (whispers): tarana hain!

S (standing next to dia at another corner): par ye kaise ho sakta hain?

Dia shrugs.

P (keeping on): now last but not the least, please give a round of applause to our very own rimjhim sengupta !( benji looks bewildered, gunjan confused, rimjhim groans) for working as the bridge between excel and albatross!

R (mutters, taking a step forward): I told them not to!

B: what!?

R (turning her head to them): I'll explain, I promise! (she hurries to play along)

B: I don't believe it! She knows that imposter from the beginning!

G (under her breathe): mujhe shyad samajh me aara hain thode bahat.

B: I hope her explanation is good enough!

At the deck

N (sulking, missing the whole part): us mayank ne mere saari armanon pe paani fer diya! Par tu kiu gussa ho rahi hain nupur! Ye bhi koi nayi baat hain kya? Tujhe toh ab tak adat dal lena chahiye tha in baton ka By God!

Some1 tabs on her shoulder. She jerks of, the same incident gets repeated twice.

n (exasperated): ab kya chahiye tumhe? Mere mood ka toh bara baaja hi chuke ho tum, ab kya mera ser (her words keeps hanging as she finds its not mayank) aap!

Banquet hall

B (still fuming ): itna young ! phirbhi director ki post! Bet , baade baap ki bigde hue

Anm (from behind, in clear but a bit slow hindi, showing lack of practice): baade baap ka??? Umm yup technically yes, jabke ye company Abbu ka hain, (ignoring the stunned look in benji and gunjan, rimjhim still looks a bit shaky tho smiling her best) par bigde hue!!! Bilkul nahin! You know carif bhaiyan (then shakes her head) I mean al imran mirza is biz grad from Cambridge, one of the most biz oriented person I ever met, aur main

B (losing temper): enough of this crap! Aur rimjhim tum! Tumne ek second bhi nahi socha gunjan ko backstab karte huye?

Anm: what!

Gunjan (mutters): benji!

R (inhaling deeply): thank you Benjamin for giving me such credit, but trust me, I don't deserve any of that! (she kinda runs away from them ignoring gunjan's call)

Anm: u don't even know wat you are talkin about!

Benji looks troubled.

Deck

U: nahin nupur mujhe tumhara ser se koi matlab nahi hain, mujhe toh sirf, (showing a bunch of medicines in his hand) ye janna hain ke inmese sea sickness ka goli kaunsa hain?

N: uday bhaiya, pehle ye bataiye ye dawaiyan apke pass kaise aaye?

U: maine kharida thana? Dispensary se, cruise ke preparation me!

N: toh phir ye aap ko pata hona chahiye na, kis dawa kis liye hain?

U: wo, prescription maine kho diya, (apologetically) aur mujhe kuch yaad bhi nahi hain!

N (exasperated): uday bhaiyan, aap bhi na, ek kaam bhi…khair chhorie, ek baat bataye, Kya main aapko doctor lagti hoon?

U: nahin

N: ya phir mayank jaisa koi general knowledge ki gudam?

U (scratching his scalp, smiles): thank you nupur!

N: par kiu?

U: mujhe raha dikheneke liye! Main mayank se abhi puchhke aata hoon! (he runs leaving a b4 confused and after satisfied nupur behind)

Hall

S (from behind): haan tarana,

Anm (interrupting) : tarana nahin samrat, nisa, or u can go with my nick too, mouri,

S: fine, mouri , I wanna know the whole story.

Mou: ok, lemme give you the summary now, the whys and hhows can wait.

G (looking at benji's face, clearly recalling rimjhim): yehi sahi rahega.

Mou: I believe so too gunjan, btw,it still requires some background info, so , lemme fill u in with those, I took some of my classes with rimjhim in junior high for two years, actually, we had been a trio me, rimjhim and (with an uncomfortable lil pause, completely showing that she is up to date with the updates) elora. (benji and gunjan steals a glance while samrat looks confused as he cant remmember elora at all) anyway, when elora took the wrong turn me and rimjhim kinda got into a much stronger bond, knowing already how it feels to lose a friend, we decided we wudnt ever be parted from each other, but that dint work out either (she shrugs)

S: kiu?

Riyank and uday

Mayank (looking tired, standing right next to the staircase to the deck): kaha jaa sakti hain wo? Pura hall chhan mara phirbhi (he stops as a horribly upset tries to run past him) rimjhim, (grabbing her by elbow) baat kya hain? Itna upset kiu dikh rahi ho? Ankhir aisa huya kya hain jis liye tum

R (freeing herself): mayank please! I need some fresh air, mujhe thodi der ke lye akela chhod do,

M: par

R: please mayank?

Mayank nods, rimjhim walks past him toward the stair, nodding.

U (muttering to himself, coming down to the hall): ye rimjhim ko kya ho gaya! (he halts, staring at still searching mayank and forgets about the sulky rimjhim he just passed and catches mayank by surprise)mayank! Thank God tum yaha ho!

M: dekho uday main thoda bz hoon, tum mujhse baadme

U: please mayank, tum batao na, inmese sea-sickness ka pill kuasa hain?

M: kiu? Tumhe ulti araha hain kya?

U: abhi tak toh nahi! Par khaneke baad agar aa jaye toh ? dekho na itnse saare food hain lakin main darr ke (mayanks turns away from him, uday mutters) shyad isko bhi pata nahin hain, par nupurne toh (mayank almost flies back to him)kahatha ke

M:nupur? Tumne nupur se mila tha? Kaha hain wo?

U: deck pe!

M: thank you uday! (he is about to run, but uday grabs his jacket)

U (letting go of his jacket abruptly as mayank satres back at him): thank you nahi chahie! Dawai chahie mayank!

M (looking at his handful of meds and the stairs): ek kaam karo, tum is ship ka doctor ko dhundke usse hi pata karlo ok?

U: good idea mayank! Main abhi jaake puchhta hoon!

M(sighing with relief, faces the stairs, and then a sharp blow of horror hits right on his face): kahi nupur, apne aap toh,,,,(his words remains unfinished as he starts climbing up the stairs at the maximum speed)

Sajan , benji and mou

Mou (biting her lower lip): sorry, I guess, I misinterpreted, actually I meant , it dint work out the way we planned as ammu succeeded in persuing abbu after years of trying that our country also serves the same standard of education as india (benji interrupts, 'your country?' mou smiles,' ur next door neighbor, Bangladesh'), so I shud be called back home, (smiles passionately) the best mom I cud ever have, that lady is! Anyway, I got my admission in scholastica back home, and rimjhim remained here, with time we realized no matter how many miles be put between us our friendship wudnt be ended, so, when we, me and bro, came here to expand our business, I contacted her right away, and found out her other best friends' love life had been jeopardized, (she winks at gunjan, as if they are friends forever)and she needed some1 exactly like me to execute her back up plan.

B (incredulously): mujhe ye samajh me nahin aa raha, tumhe samrat se nakli pyar karwake wo gunjan aur samrat ko ek karwaneko (gunjan looks at samrat and looks down abruptly seein him staring back at her) kaise

Mou: oh benji! U are so nave sometimes! Suno, she needed me to keep samrat away from titliyas! U know, ishita or ishika whatever! And girls like her, she wanted some1 much better to hold his attention in one place, becus samrat was playing Casanova those days, remember?

(Sam looks disgusted with himself by the memory, gunjan notices this in silence, while benji looks a bit mortified as the true story was sinking in to him) so, she needed me, who wud just wipe away all those girls from sam's concern and preserve him for gunjan only, with who their love life can be trusted, until samrat's was ready to accept his love for her, that's it!

B (making one feeble attempt to justify his behavior towards rimjhim): but wat if it dint work that way? Wat if, samrat wud fall for u instead?

G: benji, tumhe ye nahin lagta ke is waqt in sab sawalon pe dhyan dene ke siva tumhe kuchh aur karna chahiye?

Benji grimaces.

S (confused): kya hua hain gunjan? Benji? Kuchh ghalath hua hain kya?

G (speaking without bitterness for the first time in days): benji ne rimjhim pe backstabbing ka arope lagaya hain.

S (shocked): kya!!!!!

Deck

M (reaching nupur, hugging her tightly): thank God, you are safe!

N (forgetting her anger for a moment, seeing mayank's intensity): kiu? Mujhe kya hone wala tha?

M (letting go of her): mujhe laga you wud try something stupid (nupur gets cold once again, but mayank doesn't realize as he is too happily relieved) mujhe laga, tum khud try karogi wo

N (snapping): pehle idiot, ab stupid, (mayank freezes) tum shayad thik hi kehte ho mister mayank sarma, ab jab mere akal pe tumne itne saare tags laga hi chuke ho toh shyad mujhe bhi us tags ko sambhalne layek koi kaam kar lena chahie!

M: nupur main,

N: tum nahin main, ab jobhi karna hain main hi karungi mayank, tum dekhte jaao!

She begins to climb up the railings, mayank keeps looking at her, horrified.

Sajan and co

Mou (sighs): guys, guys, guys! Its not a very good time for throwing tantrums u know, (to benji) tho gunjan is right that u shud go and apologize to rimjhim right away, I still prefer to clear up ur confusion, in reply to ur question, tho we were pretty sure of that samrat wud recognize his true love, we had another back up plan, nice and simple one, but effective, I wud simply get caught cheating on him,(she smiles at the idea)bhaiya wud play my another bf for once, and he wud lose faith in cosmo type, and wud realize how special she is to him, and once he wud see it their wudnt be any turning back, not ever (adding naughtily, seeing samrat's eyeing gunjan and gunjan's doing the same) see how unbreakable their tie is! (gunjan flushes red, samrat smiles so does mou, not noticing benji's exit)

Uben

U (bumping on to benji) says together, 'tune use kahi dekha hain?'

U: tujhe bhi usse kuch mangna hain kya?

B (looking sad): haan yaar

U: mujhe bhi, chal sath milke dhundte hain.

B (nodding): par sun, jab hum use milenge, toh tu waha se bina kuchh kahe chale jana ok?

U: par, main toh usse kab se dhund raha hoon! Pehle mujhe mil lene dena dude!

B: dekh uday, mujhe nahin pata, tujhe usse kya kaam hain, lakin itna zarur pata hain ke mera kaam usse kahi zyada important hain, kiuki mujhe usse maafi mangn hain, so, jab main

U: yaar benji, ek baat bata, tujhe doctor se maafi kiu mangna hain?

B (looking outraged for a while): main rimjhim ki baat kar raha hoon idiot!

U: wo toh gayi!

B: kaha?

U(pointing his finger toward the ceiling): upar!

Benji takes a few steps back, terrified.

Sajan and mou

Samrat (smiles as gunjan breaks the eye contact, blushing): actually, you are right mouri, the hold is unbreakable (sighs) par …..

Mou: par kya samrat?

S: chhoro ye sab baato ko, tum apna

Mou: come on mate! There are no secret anymore, koi problem ho toh batao na? (gunjan slips away as the conversation is getting to indicating)

S (sighs, noticing that): chhoro na yaar, tum log pehle hi bahat kuchh kar chuke ho humare liye, usse zyada kuchh karna

Mou: oh please! Don't give me all those dumb courtesy ok? Just spit it out!

S: koi fayda nahin, ab jobhi kehna-sunna hain, wo samrat aur gunjan ko hi hain, (smiling) sirf ek mauke ki zarurat hain, anyway yaar, tum party enjoy karo, main mauka dhundta hoon (he leaves nodding)

Mou (curling her brows a bit): mauka!

Mayur

M (grabbing her hand desperately) : tumhe yehi karna hain na? chalo sath me karte hain?

N: kiu, kiu sath me karu? Tumhe toh ye sab stpid lagta hain na? tab tum kiu…

M: shyad hi aisa kuchh ho jo main tumhare liye nahin kar sakta nupur, (her eyes soften) aur yaha toh mujhe sirf

N (muttering irritably): stupid banna hain

M: nahi, romantic banna hain, tumhari terha,(nupur looks at him questioningly) please nupur? Sath me kare?

N after a moment, lowering her eyes nods smiling.

Uben

U (inquisitively): tera tabyat toh thik hain nah benji? Tu bilkul, bilkul umm, haan…constipated lag raha hain!

B (gulping): wo rimjhim…

U: kahana upar hain! Deck pe (benji looks confused) maine jab deck se yaha aa rahatha tab wo mujhe cross

B (sighing in relief): tubhi na uday! (pushing him out of his way, he runs toward the stairs like a maniac)

U (following him): aare benji , sun toh sahi!

Deck

Three incidents happens simultaneously.

M (smiling, spreading his hands): ab tum apna haath fehla sakti ho nupur, I have got you nicely balanced.

(benji rushes past them, locating rimjhim at the other corner, standing in dark, completely oblivious to any of these)

Nupur (standing a bit higher than mayank, giggles doing wat she has been told): by God, mayank! Ye kitna

U bumps into mayank , making him completely off balance with the unintentional push, a ear splitting scream calling mayank's name is heard)

M (screams as the splashing sound hits his ears): nupur!!!!!!!

daarun pat. tobe eta ki holo??!!!! nupur to pore gelo!! ebar oke ke bachabe? mayank nishchoi? uday ta ke dhore petate hoy.

r benjir upor amar khub rag hochche. o keno rimjhim ke orom kore bolte gelo?

ei storyline ta shesh hole ki nihu di update korbe? tobe jai hok, tumi r update korcho na mane tumi r pm korbena, ta jeno na hoy. tumi amake majhe modhye pm korte theko. emni emni e. r amio tomake pm korbo.

r tumi job peyecho?!!! daarun khobor. congo!!! I will pray for you.