guys please try to comment soon as from now on i wanna update twice a week, so it wud be better if i get all the feedbacks sooner!
and the sajan's auto hiring scene is inspired from one of my faves uttam kumar movie..... so does the mayank's asking for 'pranam' in the previous is from another one of my uttam kumar's, tho i have changed and added a heck lot of in both of those!
love you all!
Update 19
Gunjan, dia, n uday r in the same car. Halfway to the college the engine stops and refuses to start once again.
D: damn it! Ye car ko leke kya karu main! Do din nahin hua thik karwai maine ab phirse!
U: deedz! Cool ho jao na! mujhe darr lagta hain!
D: Dodo!
G (stepping in): chhoro na dia, hum taxi ya phi koi auto se chale jaate hain, tum apna mechanic ko inform kar do, wo aake thik karke
D: no way! I m not riding this piece of junk once again!....aur auto se to main bilkul bhi nahin jaungi! Mera image ka sawal hain gunjan!
G: par dia ab jab'
She gets interrupted by the fourth voice coming from the halted car right beside theirs, "any problem ladies?'
Mayur
At the canteen
M: tumhe nahin lagta ab jab hamara itna bada problem solve ho chukka hain to hume kuchh aage ka bhi sochna chahie?
N:aage ka?
M: haan, aage ka.
N (laughing hard): By God mayank! Tumne to mere muh ki baat chhinli! Haan hume thode shopping wopping to abhi se hi shuru kar dena chahie hain na!
M (shakin his head): main kuch aur baat kar raha tha.
N(deemly): shopping nahin?
M: aare shopping bhi koi sochne layek chiz hain kya! Mall chalo job hi pasand aaye kharid lo! Isme sochne ka kya kaam? Main kuch constructive chison ki vaare me soch raha tha!
N; to phir?
M (suppressing a crooked smile): well, main future planning ki baat kar raha tha! Jaise ki (trwoing her a naughty look) family planning!
N (getting red instantly): mayank!!!
Car
U (protesting): kya sam! Yaha sirf ladies nahin main bhi hoon!
S (smiling): ok! Correction, any problem ladies and uday?
D: dekhona Sammie, is pathetic car ne mera mood ka bara baja diya! Tum hume college tak lift de doge na?
S: come on candy! Ye bhi koi puchhne ki baat hain ? hop in.
dia gets in to sam's car , while sam n uday pushes dia's car to the side of the road. In the whole process samrat n gunjan keeps etaling stares to each other, everytime their eyes meet, samrat smiles his crooked smile making gunjan blush. Gunjan almost lets go of her crutch while samrat winks at her.
S (to gunjan): after you.
G (to diya): tum log jao , main auto se aati hoon.
Samrat curves his brows first the smiles.
D: par kiu gunjan? yaha pe to bahat jaage
g (intercepting): dia pls. mujhe aur request mat karo,(pause) college me milte hain. ( she turns around and passes samrat, avoiding his glance)
mayur
catching up to nupur at the corridor
m (smiling at her shocked face): toh phir? Miss. Nupur bhushan ,,,correction,, mrs. wud be nupur Sharma (nupur blushes n mayank hides a laughter) kya khyal hain apka apna khudka cricket team ki vaare me?
N (forgetting to blush): kya matlab!!!
M : cricket team agar pasand naa aye to football team se bhi kaam chala sakte hain
N (understanding his meaning turns red): kya!!! Chhii! Mayank tum baat ko kaha se kaha,,,
M : kiu family planning zaruri nahin hota kya!?
N: ye family planning hain!!!! india me agar koi aisa family plan kare na to use jail me qaid karke eakhna chahie by God!
M: sochneki baat hain! (nupur gives him a winning look, mayank smiles as if he has embraced defeat then ') cricket team ja impossible hain tab' Basket ball team kaisa rahega?
N (begins to chase him with a readymade fist ready to punch): ruko tum ekbaar! Main tumhe agar,,, (but doesn't hit him as he surrenders ,holding his ears)
M: sorry!!! Sorry!!! Aacchha team 'weam ko maro goli,,, lakin Paplu-taplu ki maa banneme aitraz to nahin hain na tumhe?
N (sickened by the names forgets everything else): chhi ! tumhe aur koi naam nahi mila! Ye paplu-taplu
M : goctha! U r ok with 2!
Nupur gets shocked then punches lighly on mayank's left arm then hides her face on his shoulder, smiling, then straightens up abruptly realizing they r actually in a public place ,,tho utterly relieved to have this zone almost public free. Now its mayank's turn to smile.
Gunjan
Gunjan steals a glance at the car as is runs past her, suddenly a 'mujhe dhund rahi ho?' makes her almost jump, turning right she finds samrat smiling broadly at her.
G: tum?!
S: kya kaare? Rehna pada! (closing in) tum jo reh gayi ho!
G takes a step backwards and starts to walk avoiding him.
S (catching up): hey hello! College abhi bhi bahat dur hain! Walk karke jane ka idea bilkul dumb hain,aur is haal me (indicating to her crutch) to superdumb.
Gunjan throws him a cold look then looks around for a while searching for a vehicle but in vain. She starts moving once again.
S (muttering audibly): lagta hain phirse mere godme uthane ka intezar me hain!
G (flushing): samrat tum ,,,,
S: exactly chashmish! Main! Aur kaun! (smiling looking behind her ) main hi to hoon tumhara har problem ka solution! (calling a bit louder) auto! (gunjan turns a lil left sees the auto , then looks at him once again as he begins to speak) dekha! Main,,,aur koi nahin!
G: tum is auto se chale jao (begins to walk again) mai dusri auto me aati hoon.
S: gunjan! Dekho,hum dono me se koi bhi itne mote nahi hain ke do do auto lena pade! Huh?
G: samrat, tum kisi bhi baat pe serious nahin ho sakte kya?
S: hoona! Bahat serious hoon!
G: acchhaa? Kis vaare me?
S (looking in to her eyes, serious like anything, with every bit of fun vanished from his attitude): hamari vaare me, I am seriously in love with you gunjan.
Benrim
R: sach! Samrat ne waqehi aisa kaha?!
B: to phir main itne der tak tumhe kya keh raha hoon rimjhim?
R (smiling): wow! That's a gr8 news! Ab to koi problem hi nahi raha!
B: ek chhodke,
R: aare gunjan bhi man jayegi , tum dekh lena.
B: par use manana to parega na? aur sam to hamara help tak leneko taiyer nahi! Ureka! Tum use baat kar lo na! samrat to tumhara har baat manta hain! Shyad tumhara offer kiya hua help wo accept karle.
R: main? (biting her lower lip for a while) sure, par kaha hain samrat?
B (noticing sam's car entering the college): wo raha! Chalo abhi baatein karte hain!
Sajan
G (snapping out of the trance): isi liye hi main dusri auto ki baat kar rahi hoon samjhe tum? (and starts moving) mujhe tumhare sath kahi nahin jana!
S (getting light once again): ok to phir main tumhare sath chalta hoon! ,,,(looking at the auto) chalo bhai, aao tum bhi aao.
After a few more steps of sajan and the snail motion of the auto following them, the ppl around them starts peeping n talking, which gunjan cant ignore.
G: ye kya kar rahe ho tum?
S (acting oblivious): main? Kuchh bhi to nahi! Kya hua gunjan?
G: tum chale kiu nahin jaate?
S: tum jaane dogi tab na?
G: fine. (she gets in to the auto, utterly disturbed, samrat follows in smiling)
S (prompts the driver): excel college.
Benrim, dia, dodo
d: aacchhaa? To ye baat hain? Is liye hi to wo hume bhej diya aur khud waha reh gaya, wow! Tht so Sammie!
U: par in sab me mera bhi to contribution hain, tum log mera tariff kiu nahin kar rahe ho yaar?
B: tujhe credit diya to hamesha, creditor hi,ouch ! (rimjhim kicks him on his foot meaningfully)
R: credit to tumhe milenge hi sath me treat bhi milenge tumhe uday, mere taraf se, lakin pehle tumhe ek wada karna parega.
U (happily): anything for food, rimjhim!
D hides a smile, benji throws a sour look at rimi.
R (fighting hard to kep her face straight): hamara clearance ki vagair koi plans nahi ok?
U: aare wo! Wo promise to maine kabka kar chukaa,,,gunjan se. ab bolo kya khila rahi ho?
R: tum canteen me jaao, aur jo ji me chahe khalo, chinu bill mange to mere pass bhej dena ok?
Uday actually started off b4 she cud finish.
D (smiling): I warn you rims, dodo pura canteen hi na
R (smiling back): I will take my chances, he deserves a hearty treat indeed.
B grouches.
R(patting his arm): sorry ben! Par tum bhi na! hamesha use tung karte rehte ho, mujhe aacchhaa nahin lagta!
Benji smiles back.
D: look! (not even benrim but also everybody else in the yard gets shocked seeing samrat in an auto) I don't believe this! (she chuckles)not even a cab!
R (taking a break from her laughter) : dekha ben? Samrat sahi tha! Use hamari madat ka koi zarurat nahi!
B (noticing the 'nothing happened ' looked samrat and 'annoyed to hell' gunjan): par case to abhi bhi wahi ke wahi lag raha hain.
R (smiles following his eyes): don't worry, lets just put it this way, now, its her turn to (lookin at ben) u know wat.
B: agar aisa hi chalta rahe na tab sajan shyad hi kabhi,,,
R:aare aisa chalne kaun de raha hain? Gunjan? Nah!!! She too sensible to be angry for long! phirbhi ye samrat ka gunjan patao mission toh dekhne layek hoga!
rim winks at benji grinning
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