The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12 - Page 53

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RECAP:

Mayu comes to know about RV-dia's relation'.Camera's found in nupur's room'.A one day outdoor trip is announced'Killer informs nupur that he will come in front of her'.

PART-11

NEXT MORNING:

Everyone were excited about the trip & having some fresh outside air.Everyone got ready & entered the bus.To everyones surprise RV came & sat near dia.Dia looked little uncomfortable with everyones glares so she started looking out of window cursing RV under her breath.Mayu smiled to himself.The gang dismissed the thought of RV sitting with dia thinking he sat with her only because there were no seats left elsewhere as everyone were sitting in couples.The trip began & everyone were taken to various lovely places which were tourist attraction.None of them had ever visited London so closely.The bus halted at museum.Most of them didn't want to go since museum is considered very boring place among models.Nupur knew mayu loves going to museums.No one ever knew that the top Supermodel Mayank Sharma was more interested in books than looks.Mayu felt sad when everyone decided to not to go to museum.He didn't know why but he couldn't blurt out that he wanted to visit the museum.Nupur alone knew what was in his heart.

Nu: mujhe museum dekhna hai'..

Everyone looked at her in disbelief that she was actually interested in visiting such a boring place.Nupur caught mayu's hand & pulled him along & got down of the bus.The driver told her the bus will remain here for another hour since the museum is quite big & it'll take time for them to look everything.Nupur thanked him & she & mayu entered the museum.Here in the bus everyone(except the gang members) were cursing nupur for spoiling their 1 hr.Some of them drifted to sleep while some started smooching their partners & the gang members decided to play something.RV didn't join the game as he wanted to talk to dia & this left everyone shocked.Samrat cocked his eye brow giving a questioning look but RV ignored it.

INSIDE THE MUSEUM:

Mayu placed his hand on nupur's waist & pulled her towards him.He was very happy for what nupur did for him.

M(whispered in her ears): thankssss'.

N(whispering): kis liye??

M(whispering): tum jaanti ho kis liye'

N(whispering): sirf thanks se kaam nahi chalega'mujhe iske badle kuch chahiye'par woh main baadmein bataoogi'..

Both got involved in going through all the antics placed in museum.As the conductor said it was indeed a huge hall & very well known tourist attraction.Both were playing with each other & enjoying when nupur excused herself to go to washroom.She had to actually search for the washroom among the huge hall.She had just reached the washroom door when someone pulled her hand & pushed her behind the pillar.No one saw as the washroom was on the extreme corner of the hall.The pillar was huge enough to hide two people.Someone had closed her mouth & pinned her against the pillar.She opened her eyes scared.Her eyes met the deep grey eyes which always drowned her.She relaxed when she realized it was mayank.

N(hitting his hand): tumne toh mujhe daraa hi diya tha'

M(smiling): kya maine tumhe bataaya aaj tum bahut achii lag rahi ho?

N(confused): huh?

Mayu went very close to her.He touched her face sensually.She felt herself going weak.An electric current ran down her body.He kissed her neck softly.He touched each part of her neck with his lips.He began to touch her face now.He kissed her eyelids,forehead,cheeks & chin while whispering a thanks for what she had done for him.He nuzzled in her hair.He bit her ear lobe.His hands cupped her face & brought her lips near his.He whispered a final thanks & their lips sealed.The soft kiss turned into passionate one as both wanted more.None of them could stop.They kept on kissing until the huge clock began to ring 'DING DONG DING' indicating it was 12 PM.Both jumped up scared & looked at the watch.Only 15 minutes were left for the bus to leave.They hadn't even completed seeing the entire museum.

Nu: oh no!!!!bahut der ho gayi hai'humme jaldi jaana hoga'

M: hmmm'tum jaldi washroom jaakar aao fir hum chalte hai'..

Nu: No ways!!!!!abhi toh tumne pura museum bhi nahi dekha'

M: its ok nupur'

Nu: no its not ok'.abhi bhi pandraa minute baaki hai'tum jaoo aur museum dekho'.main washroom jaakar tumhe seedhe bus mein milti hoon'.

M: par'

N: no par'.tum dono ka waqt barbaad kar rahe'chup-chap jao warna aaj ke baad no kiss'.

M(surprised): NO KISS????ufff'ab toh jaana hi padhega'.theek hai chalo ab bus mein mulaakat hogi'.

Nupur smiled & quickly gave him a peck & left in the washroom.Mayank smiled & left to see remaining part of museum well keeping an eye on clock so that he doesn't get late.After 10 minutes nupur freshened & came out.This time again she was pulled behind the same pillar by someone.She closed her eyes smiling knowing that it was mayank.

Nu(eyes closed): mayank tum bahut badmaash ho gaye ho'meri ek baat nahi sunte'.abhi koi romance nahi warna humaari bus miss ho jaayegi'.

*SLAP* Nupur received a hard slap across her face.When she was expecting a kiss or a hug she received a tight slap across her face.The slap was so hard that her lips corner began to bleed.She opened her eyes with tears in her eyes.Initially she couldn't see anything since everything was blur due to tears than she realized the outline body of a man.She wiped her tears & was shocked to see a masked man with a knife in his hand.It was not mayank this time.She was shell shocked to scream.When she tried opening her mouth the person bought knife near her neck which made her shut up.

Man: kyu Ms.Nupur'kahaan tha na main tumse milne aaoga'

Nupur realized he was none other than the serial killer.He was the person who made her life hell.He was the one who spread so much fear in her.He was the one who wanted to rape her & murder her.Today she was finally facing the man whom she hated the most in this world.He wore a mask on his face.Only his eyes & lips could be seen.She saw the murderer giving a wicked smile.She wanted to remove that smile from his face.She wanted to slap him back.She tried to push him but his grip was too tight.

(M= murderer)

M: itni bhi kya jaldi hai jaan'abhi-abhi toh humaari mulaakat hui hai'main jaanta hu tum mujhse milne ke liye bahut bekraar thi'.dekho aaj maine tumhaari ichaa puri ki hai'

N: tum jaise insaan ko milne ka mujhe koi shauk nahi'..tum ek number ke buzdeel ho'kaayar ho tum'.warna is tarah se apni pechaan chupa kar nahi aate'..agar itni hi himmat hai tum me toh apna chehra dikhaao'.utaaro apna mask'

M(smiled): tumhe kya lagta hai main itna bewakoof hoon'itni jaldi tum mera chehra nahi dekh sakti'.zaraa sabar karo'.bas ab pandraa din (15 days) aur baaki hai'.fir tumhe sirf apna chehra nahi pura shareer dikhaoga aur tumhaara bhi mein dekhooga'.

He winked at her & she looked away disgustedly.

M: waise tum jaan na chahti ho yeh thapad tumhe kyu padhaa???kyunki kuch waqt pehle ye hi woh jagaa hai jahaan tumne apne aashiq ko chune ki himmat ki'.maine tumse kahaan tha na apne aashiq se dur rehna'shayad tumhaare samajh mein yeh baat nahi aayi'..

N: main tumse nahi darti'.aur tum mera aur mayank ka kuch nahi bigaad sakte'.samjhe tum!!!!!

M: achaa'.tum mujhe challenge kar rahi ho????main kya kar sakta hu uska sample toh tum already do models ko dekh kar samajh chuki ho'.kya ek aur video chahiye???ya fir yahi par tumhe ek sample dikha doo???

He came closer to her & pinned her body against his giving her no space to go.Nupur looked at him scared as he came very close to her.For the first time she looked into his eyes.She felt something familiar about those eyes.She had seen them earlier but she couldn't remember where.However she was scared at the moment & couldn't think about the eyes as the person was coming very close to her.She didn't know what to do.His knife was still near her neck.She tried to move but couldn't & within seconds his lips smashed on her lips.He forced himself upon her.He threw the knife down & pulled her face more into his.He sucked the blood that was dripping from the corner of her lips.He bit her lower lip.He was giving pain to her.She tried to push him back with all his might.Tears were coming down from her face.She felt helpless.She felt like being used.If only someone could come to save her.After few minutes he stopped kissing her & grinned looking at her tearful face.

M: aaj ke liye bas itna hi'.aur chahiye toh tumhe thoda intzaar karna padhega'.

Saying this he left leaving a helpless nupur behind.Nupur fell down on her knees totally shaken at what had just happened.She sat against the pillar with no energy left to get up & go.The recent events kept replaying in her mind.She felt disgusted.She touched her lips & felt like removing them & separating them from her body.Just then Samrat,Gunjan,RV,Dia,Sonia came running there.

Sa: Oh god tum yahaan ho'.aur hum sab tumhe kabse dhoondh rahe hai'.jaanti ho bus kabse tumhaara intzaar kar rahi hai'aur mayank kahaan hai???

He stopped talking further.Gunjan caught his hand to shut him up.Then he realized something was wrong with nupur.She didn't reply to anything.Her lips were swollen & bleeding.Her hair were a mess.Her face was full of dried tears.She was looking somewhere lost in space.Something had horribly gone wrong.Everyone sat around her.Gunjan tried to call her but she got no response.Sonia tried to touch her but she shooed away her hand scared.

Gu: nupur kya hua???tumhaari yeh haalat kisne ki?

No response.

Sa: bataoo nupur kya hua??hum waada karte hai hum uss insaan ko nahi chodenge'

No response.

Dia(speaking for the 1st time nicely): mujhe lagta hai humme mayank ko dhoondhna chahiye'.shayad usse mayank ki zaroorat hai'.

Everyone nodded.

Dia: main jaakar mayank ko dekh kar aati hu'shayad woh bus mein hoga'.

Sa: driver se kehna yahaan ek haadsa ho gaya hai isliye humme aane mein time lagega'.

Dia nodded her head & ran towards the bus.She told the driver to wait for sometime but the driver was too pissed as everyone was yelling at him & so he gave them the address of their next location & asked them to meet there.On her way back dia spotted mayank among the crowd.She ran towards him.

D: mayank kahaan the tum???woh'.nupur'

Mayank's face became colourless.

M: kya hua nupur ko???KYA HUA??

D: jaldi chalo'

Both ran to where nupur & remaining gang members were.

Mayank looked at a lifeless nupur sitting in front of him.When he left her she was so bubbly & cheerful mood and now'..His heart piereced million times at looking nupur in this state.Nupur still hadn't spoken a word.Mayank went towards her & placed his hands on her.She jerked away his hand.Mayank made her face him.

M: nupur main hoon'.Mayank'.tumhaara mayank'

Nu: ma'.mayank'mayank'

Fresh tears formed in her eyes as she took his name.She immediately hugged him hard.

Nu: mayank'.woh'.woh'aaya tha'.

M: kaun aaya tha nupur???

Nu(crying more): woh'mayank'ser..serial'.serial killer'.

Everyone looked shocked.Mayank's painful eyes immediately filled with anger & hatredness.His eyes became red & bloodshot.

PRECAP: How will everyone react on knowing about the serial killer?The trip conitunes & another encounter of nupur with the serial killer.How will he trouble her this time?RV-Dia's relation opens up in front of everyone.Will everyone accept dia?

Okay here is next part.I know its terribly delayed this time.Hope I haven't lost my touch in writing yet.Please do comment & let me know if you feel I have lost my touch.I'll try to improve in that case.

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Edited by pinky_5 - 15 years ago
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wow dear... wonderful you are back with a bang dear.... you are simply superb.... waiting for more updates dear.. and that serial killer i think i will kill him first.. how dare he hurt nupur like that...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Pinky,
i m soooo much happy 2 c ur update.
i m waiting 4 it for a long time.
And u r back with full spark.

ur update just awesome.
loved mayur a lot.
and i just hate the killer.
u told that a suprise waiting 4 us.
What it wopuld b- but jo bhi ho plz mayank ko killer mat banana.
thanx a lotttttttttt 4 ur lovely update.

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sorry i was suppose to reserve the AR one ...wrong thread 😃
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