Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey pinky..hii sri
this is sri....
i have recently read a part of u r previous fic in DMG forum.."laaga chunari mein daag" n it was so interesting that i read the whole fic..its was really good,,the whole concept the way u unfolded it n then ended it very nicely!!...
everything was really good.,,especially u r dialogues...i felt they were very good....n the way u moved the story is great!!
i am also reading bhulbhulaya..
will comment on both in detail again..
i thght to comment on it..but the posts was closed!!! :(
thankssss sri for your lovely comment.....i'm glad u liked them......yes the posts will be closed since I had written them long time back....😊
Now coming to this one..Unsolved mystery as the name suggests - Its really thrilling n filled with suspense 'also to add the lovely romance of armaan n rids..it highly engroving....till the last part I read'..want to know whos the killer...now..
and muskaan death is a part of u r fic n i think to make the story go in the way u thought ..dont bring her back...it would be interesting to see how it goes...n how rids give back to the killer...i think the story is at the urge of revelation.....great suspense...
great one!!!!
good wishes..
thankuuuuuuu soooooooooo much......i'm so happy to have reader like you....😊
waiting for next part soon!!!!!!! yes i'm updating in sometime......
will comment on the other two soon..u need not....the topics might be closed.....its ok....😃
sri:-)
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