Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aarti-

it was amazing part....lakin neha baat kis se kar rhia thi.....thn raj aur neha ka scene bhi awesome tha raj ko bohot shok hai help karne ki....angad kripa ka scene bhi acha tha ... aur last mein yeh neha ko driving aati hai yaan aise hi chali gai...... coconut water toh peeleti.....gr88 part....do conti soon....luv aarti..........

koi baat nahi, neha ne coconut water nahi peya to kya hua tum uske jaga pelo raj k saat coconut water.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

so sweet mind blowing , i love it please conti soon.<br>

thanks angad aur kripa k scene specially tumare liye the actually avtar aur signature se pata chalta hai k kon kiska fan hai and u r fan of AK & u r reading my ff to readers ko santusht rakhna writer ka farz banta hai na.
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice update lekin ab ye neha car le kar kahan chal di koi gar bar na ho jaye plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RAdabest

very nice update lekin ab ye nehacar le kar kahan chal di koi gar bar na ho jaye plz cont soon

yeh b possible hai neha chal wo to baad mein pata chalega
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey awesome part. Do continue soon. Cn u plz PM me when u update. Thnks!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 40: neha is driving the car. Ra: o no ab yeh ladke kya karege, itna pareshan to maine b kisi ladke ko nahi kiya jitna yeh muje kar rahe (ek aadmi bike pe ja raha tha to raj uske bike lekar chala jata hai). Ne: wow bohat maza aa raha hai, isme se break k konsa hai ab yeh gaari kaise ruke gi (5 mens were in other car next to neha's car aur woh neha ko chead rahe hote hai). Ne: hi! Bhai log (they tries to overtake neha's car) o racing (raj comes to otherside) are raj tum b humare saat race laga ne aa gaye. Ra: arre wo tumare saat race nahi balki tumare saat wo sab karna chahte hai. Ne: kitne gandi soch hai tumari yeh sab to mere bhai ki tara hai, tum yeh bhulo mat i am a indian & every other indians r my brothers & sisters. Ra: to iska matlab mai b (suddenly gunde log ki car overtake kar lete hai) neha samne dekho (car hui stop aur neha comes out). G1: chal ab bohat natak kar liye tune (aur neha k paas aa ne k koshish karta hai). Ra: agar tumne use paas ane ki ya haat laga ne ki koshish b ki to (neha comes towards raj & says something in her ears). Ne: raj apne lines vapas le lo agar fighting k bare me woh bruce li hai to tum chus li ho. Ra: shayad tumne woh kahawat nahi suni pyar me bohat takat hoti hai (fights starts raj beats every1 & neha was enjoying the fight). Ne: wow tum to kafi achi fight kar leta hai aur karne b chahi yeh ab kab tak main tume gundo se bachate rahugi jungle mein b aur yaha b. Ra: haha mere ma ab wapas chalo. Ne: are wapas q hum yaha gumne aye hai. Ra: ab tume kaha jana hai. Ne: Shimla ki sabse uchi jaga (raj n neha shimla k sabse unche pahad par jate hai har jaga hariyali aur neche bohat badi river). Ne: wow itne beautiful place. Ra: ha yeh bohat khubsurat jaga hai aur bohat shaant shimla aane par main is jaga par zarru aata hu, waise jab tumne sabse uchi jaga pe jane ki baat ki thi to mai bohat darr jaya tha k kahe tumara yaha se kudne ka irada to nahi (neha was like yes yes & raj was like shit maine yeh q bola) neha muje lagta hai hume yaha se chalna chaheye. Ne: are chalna nahi try karna chaheye socho na kitna maza ayega maine bachpan mein socha tha k ek din main jisse pyar karugi to aise hi kisse pahadse khud jaugi socho na yeh thandi thandi hawa hume taize se churahe hoge aur hum zorse jakar pani me gi jayege (she lost in her imagination world). Ra:are o madam khayalo ki duniya se bhahar aao aisa kuch nahi honewala aur jo tum bol rahe ho na yeh b to ho sakta hai k hum pani me nahi sida chattano se takrae aur humare naddi mein girne k baad b bachne k chances 0 hai agar muje pata hota na k tumara ek din marne ka irada hai to main kabi tumse pyar karta hi mai ja raha hu yaha se (raj was going). Ne: tum b unhe logo mein se nikle na jo apne pyar k saat jine marne ki badi badi baatein to kar lete hai lekin wo sirf batein hi hote hai (raj stops listening this & turns & goes towards neha & holds neha's hand. Ra: agar hume marne k baad hi milna hai to yeh hi sahi (& they were lost completely in each other & they jump & looking to each other aur pani me gir jate hai sab kuch bilkul shaant ho jata hai aur woh pani se bhar nahi aate. END . Aage ki story janne k liye read the promo on Pg. 19.
Edited by afreenaamna - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice part..............the racing was funny and the last scene was emotional.......neha is stupid to even think abt the idea to jump and raj also jumped alongwith her.................. is the promo their next birth? cont soon............
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

hey nice part..............the racing was funny and the last scene was emotional.......neha is stupid to even think abt the idea to jump and raj also jumped alongwith her.................. is the promo their next birth? cont soon............<br>

muje re birth wale story pasand hai lekin woh sab isse janam mein hoga u will not beleive k ab tak mere story ka interval b nahi & neha is not stupid yeh tume interval k baad pata hi chal jayega qki Aamna is my most fav to uske liye to maine sochkar hi rakha hoga na aur ab tak to story k baki characters ki entry b nahi hui.
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part. Finally Raj ne bhi thodi fighting kar li. I luved it when Raj held Neha's hand to jump in the river. That was really awesum. I just hope they both r f9.
Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
very good update.....neha mein kitna bachpana hai phele toh pata nahi car mein break kahan hai aur baad mein raj ko fight karte dekhke enjoy kar rahi hai it was very funny ........lakin yeh end mein kya hogaya jump karliya....agye kya hoga waitng fr agla part...plzzz update soon...luv aarti...

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