I LUST You Part four- Page 14 UPDATED FINALLY!!! - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I will... Thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pls dont................delay more pls do cont...............soon i luved it!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interstin i lke ure ff! plz cntd asap!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwww sonam i jus finished reading the 3 parts they are sooooo good why haven't u updated yet girl??? please do swancy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy

awwwwwwww sonam i jus finished reading the 3 parts they are sooooo good why haven't u updated yet girl??? please do swancy



I don't think that's likely
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amazingggggggg pleaseeeeeeee update its means a lot time since u updated
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey I just finished reading the three parts
it's a wonderful ff
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You guys are so sweet I will try my best to update just because I got a very sweet from PM Swancy
Edited by Bloodthirst - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Violent LANGUAGE
PART 4

"No way Mom." Anjali looked at her mother hands on hips and a scowl on her face. "I am not giving up my room to that little freak." She sat down on a chair and looked at Riddhima.
"It's okay. I'll sleep on the couch." Riddhima offered. She would've demanded her room before she realized that she's new here and Anjali had a bigger say in what happened.
"Yeah. Look mom even my Ridzi agrees." She smiled and hugged Riddhima with the biggest smile on her face.
"Ridzi? Anjali stop that!" Mom looked at Anjali raising her eyebrows. "I know you too well darling. Leave Riddhima alone. And give her your room." She raised her finger in the air as a signal that the discussion was over.
"But MOM!" She yelled.
"I do not want to hear a single word. I AM YOUR MOTHER AND WHAT I SAY GOES!" She yelled.
"Sure support the damn orphan over me." She turned on her heel and started walking away.
"Excuse me?" Riddhima raised her eyebrows as she tapped Anjali's shoulder.
"Don't touch me!" She yelled. "Now take your Orphaned a** to my room so i can stop looking at that face of yours." Anjali smirked.
"Orphan? Puh-leez. You're living in my daddy's house with a skank of a mother. So don't even run your mouth cause you sound pathetic." As soon as Riddhima said the words she felt bad for what she said about Her mother. She was really nice so she bit her tounge.
"BIT**! You called my mom a skank? Well your mother is fu**ing dead. At least i have parents." Anjali smiled as she saw Riddhima's face.
"Parents? You have a mother. My dad is not your father. You think he really likes being called daddy by some sl** who had no life other then rubbing up on guys and being a total bi*** to everyone?" She asked. But it hurt when she mentioned her mothers death.
"Ms. Orphan if you really think Dad likes you over me then you are dead wrong. When you decided to come here he was shocked and he was telling mom how he thinks you're an orphan." She smirked.
Riddhima knew she was wrong cause Shashank had forced Riddhima to move in with her after a lot of begging. " I have nothing to say to you cause you have no life other then looking into people's lives and bugging everyone." Riddhima walked away.
"Oh yeah. Well-" Anjali paused and searched for something. There was fish in the tank, that was perfect. "I'm sorry." Anjali smiled as she took a fish in hand. It wiggled.
Riddhima paused and then she turned around slowly only to have a fish smacked in her face. Shocked, grossed, and disgusted by her behaviour she slappend her. "Bi***. What the fu** is wrong with you? I though this was over. BUT NO OBVIOUSLY YOU HAVE NOTHING BETTER THEN TO MAKE OTHER PEOPLES LIFE A LIVING H***. GET A FU**ING LIFE THEN ONLY TALK TO ME. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'D STOOP SO LOW. YOU NOT ONLY KILLED A FU**ING LIVING CREATURE But ALSO ANY RESPECT I HAD FOR YOU." Riddhima rambled shocked that she could sat all that. then added, "I never had respect for you." She turned around to leave.
She turned back. "Next time try something else." She slapped her hard across the face. "BI***" That's what you get, Riddhima smirked.
"No you didn't." Anjali pulled her hair from back and Riddhima winced in Pain. "You really think you can do that and walk away?" She asked, as she Ripped Armaan's JACKET OF OFF HER.
"That was Armaan's!" She snarled and suddenly her anger rose. She tried to rip her hair off. Anjali took a lock of her hair and started pulling too. They scratched and hit each other before Shashank entered.
"What is happening?!?" Shashank's eyes popped out. "What do you think you're doing. Riddhima get off of Anjali. Anjali leave her hair alone!" He screamed, disappointed at his daughters.
"We need to talk. NOW!" He yelled.


Okay so i haven't updated in like a month and I am sorry to those who were waiting. I know there are many mistakes but I Typed it in like 20 mins so it's very short. Anyway plzz tell me if you liked it and if i should continue.
I wil ldedicate this PART TO Swancy b-cuz she PM'd me sayign she missed it.
Okay here is this par i know it's short like all the others but I am busy.So this is all i could write.

There are a lot of curses but only cause it was an angry scene. Don't ask why it's so Violent. It's cause I got into a fight with a girl so I was inspired by that.

Leave comments and please tell me what i can do to improve.


-Luv Sonam.



Oh and i will start Giving PM's out now. I hadn't before so just tell me if you want one. 😊
Edited by Bloodthirst - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
well inspiration for surses seems to have helped u.. great girl fight!!!

Do continue soon.. and it was nice to have u updated this FF

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