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Part four: Upset, i dont like him.

"Sammy" Dia exclaimed.

* Pause*
Dia Bushan. She is the collage diva. Not much is needed to describe her. She is arrogant, rude and thinks to highly of herself. She is a beauty with no brains. It's quite often when dia's caring side is being noticed by uday. She may not show it but she deep down cares for her brother.

* Play *

She yanked samrats arm as he got up, pulling him in a hug. Samrat tired to breathe feeling Dia tighten her grip. Ouch!


"Your killing my brother" Nupur shouts finding samrat squashed in her arms. Dia lets go and glares at Nupur.

"Oh doll, you wont know how it feels being away from your boy-friend" She smirks having a seat. Samrat feels relief breathing some air in and sits down.

"huuuh" samrat hears a small whisper. He turns his face and finds a blank gunjan. Gunjan drops her eyes indicating samrat to lower his gaze. He presses his lips together finding his hand covering her fingers.

"Sorry" He mutters pulling his hand back, an unexpected small smile spreads across his lips. The table suddenly stopped buzzing with conversations. Everyone went quite, Dia finally broke the ice.

"If im not mistaken, you are the new girl Bella told me about" Gunjan looked ahead. She slightly digs into her chair as Dia examiners her.


*Stop *


I stared at the plastic face as she narrowed her eyes at me. The stare was indicating something like " you don't belong here" Much to my surprise she suddenly passes a smile. It didn't even seem friendly even though I smile back.

Uday: That's Gunjan deeds.

I smiled at uday as he introduced me to her
Uday: and Gun, she is my unfortunately twin. Be nice deeds.
I swear, my eyes nearly fell out of their sockets. Dia slaps his arm with her purse. I felt his pain there. Her purse is no better then a weapon. I should be on her good side, i made a note to myself. Good side.

Benji: And im Benji.

I shifted my weight to make space for Benji. He came crashing next to me forcing me to be glued beside samrat. His arms gently wrapped around my shoulder to balance me. I flushed in embarrassment finding everyone's eyes on us. I move away slightly and sort my spectacles out nervously like always.

Dia: Sammy, come on lets go out. She asked, more like ordered. Her voice was controlling. I looked over at samrat who forged a smile.

Samrat: Sorry babes, basketballs practice. I'll check you later. Chal benji.

I watched the two disappearing in the crowd ahead of teenagers; strangely I still felt Samrat presence. I brushed my thoughts away hearing the buzzer.

*Stop *

*Fast-forward *

*Play *


I leaned my head on the floor. I covered my face with my arm, blocking the sunlight.

Nupur: I didn't know you were so fast dude.

I kept my eyes closed but twitched from the corner of my mouth.

"Thanks"

"But heck, you're fast to" I added.

Nupur: You're not into this whole moving thing are you?

I kept quiet for a while then finally let out few words.

"Not after my parents separated," I sadly whispered.


*Play *

"Sorry" Nupur muttered. Gunjan smiled slightly adding.

"Don't be"

--On the otherside of the field



"Why do you keep glancing over there for man?"

Benji, lounging on the grass passes a sober look to Samrat. For the past five minutes Samrat has been staring over at where Gunjan and Nupur were sitting.

Samrat tired to keep his voice sound calm, just smiles.

"Because I am" Or I want to? He thought.



* Stop *


Ok, so I keep staring over at where my sister and her probably new friend are sitting, Gunjan while im suppose to be running. I don't know why but my eyes automatically start to stare at her when I see her. It's odd. I shift over at Benji who keeps nudging me to talk to Preeti about their relation, which happens to have broken today.

"Your going to break my arm, idiot"

Benji rolls his eyes. "I don't care, can you pay attention on my love problem rather then stare at Gunjan all day"

I stare off ahead embarrassed. "Im not staring anywhere dude" This is so bad, if Benji noticed, soon everyone will. This staring problem has to stop, its so sickening for crying out loud. I, Samrat Lucas Smith staring at a girl like Gunjan continuously. NOT ON! I tired to keep my eyes on the glass but they forcibly looked ahead at her direction again. This is extraordinary I told myself.

"Boys back to the hall for practice" I felt relieved hearing my teacher's voice. I start to run across the field keeping my gaze ahead and not over at her. I snorted hearing Benji shout in the background. Jhoote. I stop, glancing lover and find myself 10 steps away from her. Should I?


*Play *


Samrat stares at her from the distance confused. He takes a step forward,


*Stop *

Nupur: So when you seeing your dad next.

"3 months time" I sighed as I got up.

Nupur: You miss him a lot right? She dropped her weight on the ground beside me.

"Yeah, I haven't seen him for 2 years" I dropped my eyes. I felt my eyes beginning to water.

"Everything seems even more hard without him sometimes" I choked on my words.

Samrat: You crying? I looked up and found a puzzled samrat. I dropped my head and quickly rubbed my eyes.

"No, I just got hay fever" I lied. I am actually just really emotionally. It's a weakness. I looked over at him again and forged a smile. He didn't seem convinced.

Teacher: Samrat what are you doing there? Hurry up!

Samrat smiled at me before jogging off. He seems friendly, i told myself.

*Stop *

*Fast-forward *

*Play *

I looked at my map and tried to find building 8 where I have maths. I stared at the people around wondering if I should ask for help. I gasped hearing the buzzer. Oh god Im late I repeated to myself. I look around and find everyone 10 meters away from me walking towards his or her classes. I look over and sighed finding a boy. I run over only to bump into him as he turns around. I gulp finding his face so close to mine. His brown eyes flickered with mine.

I felt my cheeks warm up. "Im so sorry, I ran over to ask for help" I drop my eyes finding him examine me.

RV: Hi, im Ranvijay, you must be Gunjan Natalia Samantha Daniels.

*Pause*


Ranvijya, also known as RV. Good, bad boy personality. It depends on the people and circumstances to which one comes out. There is something he has been hiding for few months. He is not close to his parent and this fact that makes him feels abandon most of the time.

*Play *



I flushed in embarrassment. Oh god, how does he know my whole name?

"Gunjan is fine," I slightly giggle.

RV: which building you looking for? He asked.

"Building 8"

RV: Im heading that way, I can show you.

I smiled "Thanks"

We headed left. I glance over at him; I really wanted to know how he knew me? I doubt if anyone told him. I took a deep breath and asked him. It didn't seem that hard with him. That's good.

RV: I saw you in the office in the morining"

Where was he in that small office? "And Aaron knows my dad, he rang last night and informed us about you joining Excel" He added.

I choked. He knows Aaron? Oh great!

RV: quel est le problme (What's wrong)"

"Pas, it' ; s juste qui(No, it's just that I) "

I swallow my words back. Was I just speaking French a second ago? I looked up at him and studied his face. From what I know, they only teach German, Italian, and Spanish here. I wonder if he has a French person in the family since he is speaking it fluently with a great French accent.

RV: I' ; de m Franais moiti (im half French). My mom.. "

He stopped midway. He sighed and continued. "My mom is French.

"Oh" I forged a smile. He stressed on the word mom. I wonder if he got any problems with her.

We walked towards a green building. I spotted my art class on the other side. I stopped finding Ranvijay leaning on the walls.

RV: it's the room on the left.

"Thanks Ranvijay" I began to walk again.

RV: RV. He corrected. Bonne chance. (Good luck)

He winked and headed off to his class. I smiled to myself and ran to door. I took a deep breath as I touched the handle. I opened it quickly and pushed myself in. I sighed finding everyone's eyes on me.

Teacher: Yes? He sounded angry. I had distracted his class.

"Gunjan, im sorry for being late. I was lost"

Teacher: Why do you have a map? 15 minutes off your break. Go and sit down! He shouted.

I was close to crying. I held my tears back and walked to the back of the class with my head down. I found an empty seat, someone was on the other side, but I couldn't see the face properly. He had his side to the front and his arm in the arm blocked his face slightly. I leaned across and sat down quietly.

Samrat: Hi Gunjan

*Play *


Gunjan looked over and found Samrat. She smiled slightly. Gunjan looked ahead at the teacher not wanting to start a conversation. His voice sounded like he was up to something. She feared.

*Stop *

*Fast-forward *

*Play *

"cmo agujerea ( how boring)" Nupur complained seeing the assignment in front of here.

"It's not that bad, only have to write 600 words on a Spanish actor or sportsman"

"600 words mayank and to in SPANISH"

"It's a Spanish homework, you wouldn't obliviously write it in English"

Nupur half glared at him.

"I have to miss out of my skateboarding practice, I DON'T even know Spanish that well. How the heck im I might to do this"

Mayank shakes his head. "You can miss out on it for a day, wont do any harm. Plus it's very dangerous"

Nupur rolls her eyes. "Its NOT and you should start soon, in fact I'll teach you. We can start from today. After detention while going home"

"My mum would want her son back home alive Nupur" Mayank passes his sarcasm smile. Nupur mutters el agujerea (boring).

"Debido el Mircoles (due on Wednesday)" The teacher screams. Nupur drops her head.



*Stop *


This is so un-fair. Two day's to do an assignment in a different language. These teacher don't have a social life. Ugh! I hate Spanish. I wonder if Sam can help me. He's good at Spanish. Oh god, he's going to make me beg. Hmph! I don't have a choice now do I? Maybe if I TRY and listen, I may learn something.

I looked ahead and tired to read what was on the board. I felt my eyes slowly shutting.

" el agujerea" I dropped my head again.

Mayank: Get up! He is coming your way.

I looked up and found the teacher in front of me frowning.

"Hola" I forge a smile.

Teacher: 10 minutes, back at lunch. Nadie atrevimientos a dormir en mi leccin. (No one dares to sleep in my lesson) "

"Say what?" I stare at him blankly, I didn't get a word of anything except dare.

Teacher: Oh goodness, make that 20 minutes.


My eyes pop out, I swear if I hadn't blinked they would of fell out any minute. Oh my days, this is so unfair. I HATE him! Budda! I didn't really care about what he would do after he started his boring speaking again, I rested my head on my shoulder and closed my eyes.



*Play *


"You love detentions don't you" Nupur looked up hearing mayank.

"No, I HATE him and his boring lesson"

---Maths.

"Stop it" Gunjan jerked Samrat's hand back, every time he tired to touch her hair.

Oh my god this guy is insane. What happened to him all a sudden. Did he take a full 360-degree turn, because he is annoying the hell out of me! Gunjan thought.

"Why? Oh what's that" Samrat grabs her notepad which was resting underneath her palms.

"Give it back, please" Gunjan sighed while he flings it up in the air. Gunjan stretched her hand out to grab it.

"Ugh" She mutters taking her hand back. She looked ahead at the door waiting for the teacher to arrive. Why did he have to leave? She screamed his name as he threw her notepad across the room to Benji. Gunjan stared at Benji, who was about to pass it to someone else. He stops. He looked down at the notepad and secretly dropped it in his bag, he grabbed his notepad and threw it across the room in the bin. Gunjan stares at him in shock. She later smiles as he nodds his head lightly indicating the message. "Its ok"

"Great going dude"

Gunjan glares at Samrat. He is so rude! she thinks.

"So Gunjan, don't you want to tell the whole class about yourself"

She gasped. He wouldn't dare, she thought

"Everyone, look over here. I would like to introduce you to a new student. Gunjan Natalia Samantha Daniels"

Gunjan goes bright red. Everyone came close. She tired to search for air finding their faces so close to her's. They examin her as if she was some kind of sculpture.

"Isn't that a really long name? And what old fashion names attached" A girl shouts in her face at the volume you would use if you were 40 meters away.

"Well old fashion face, old fashion names" The boy next to her added while laughing as if he cracked a big joke.

Gunjan grabs the end of the bench. She dropped her eyes trying to hide the tears, which filled her eyes up.

"Ok guys I think this is enough for now" Gunjan looked over at Benji who passes her a friendly smile. She looks at him with some hope.

"What's happening here?" Everyone looked back hearing the teacher shout.

"Sir Gunjan called us to see something" A girl shouts from the crowd. Everyone soon points at me.

"How dare you? You are missing your whole lunch. This is ridiculous."

Everyone starts to giggle.

"Now watch, the geek will start crying" The boy ahead says.

Gunjan looks down, She tries to fight with her tears but fails. A lone tear rolled down her cheek and hits on the table that catches Samrat eye.

"I hate it here" She muttered. Samrat looks down at the tear. His wipes it off and looks over at Gunjan.

Maybe, it went a bit to far. He thought to himself.

Gunjan looks up hearing the buzzer. She quickly grabs her stuff and heads out. She dashes for the door but come crashing into Benji.

"You alright" He whispers.

Gunjan nods her head and quickly walks off. She tries not to crash with anyone while running. She curses herself bumping into a guy. She looks over and meets RV.

"What happened Gunjan" He asks concern noticing the tears in her eyes.

"Nothing, I will catch you later" Gunjan begins to walk off again but RV catches her hand.

" I thought we must of became friends, what's wrong"

"What happened Gunjan" Gunjan looks up and finds Nupur and Mayank confused.

"Nothing, Im fine" She lies, no one seemed convinced. They didn't question her and went to the canteen for their second break.


*Stop *

*Fast-forward *

*Play *

Gunjan cursed Samrat on her way to her detention. She ignored him during the last lesson. He did the act of regretting to feel bad. What drama? She wasn't going to fall his tricks she told herself. Gunjan opened the door and walked in.

"Go sit next to him" Gunjan looked over where the teacher was pointing. Her jaw drops down. It was Benji waving at her. Was this the reason he spoke to the teacher? Did he? She questions myself. Gunjan speeds walks and sits behind him. She begins to whisper.

"Benji"

"Don't ask, I'll tell you"


Gunjan stared at him confused. Benji started of.

"Must be wondering why I helped you, its totally strange. I usually help Samrat but I didn't want to this time. Your seem too nice I guess. Plus Samrat is not a bad guy, he's got this image built up in his head and that's what gets him to do all this stuff"
Benji says everything in one breathe. He looks over and finds a even more confused Gunjan staring at him blankly.

Gunjan didn't know what to say. She could tell he was a nice guy but why is he telling her about Samrat, not that this will get her to like him.


"Thanks for what you did Benji." Gunjan stops there. She didn't say anything else. Benji waited. He dropped his head down on the table getting no other response later.

*Stop *

*Fast-forward *

*Play*

Gunjan places her headphones in her ears. She starts to walk towards the bus stop pulling her hoodie zip feeling a sudden breeze touch her skin.

It's might rain she thought seeing the clouds covering the sun.

---At Excel.

"Can you not?" Mayank snapped at Nupur irritated by the sound she made, by tapping the pencil on the table.

Nupur turns around and looks through the window. It was raining.

"Oh great, now a wet home walk" Nupur sighed finding Mayank complain. She turned around and faces him.

"You're a Pisces. You're meant to like water" Mayank raises his eyebrow.

"Corrections NOT all Pisces"

Nupur shakes her head. She gets up and walks towards the board. She grabs a board marker and starts doodling. Mayank sighs.

He looks over after 5 minutes curious to know what she was drawing. It's strange but he likes to watch her draw. He moves his head to the side to get a clear view. It was a cartoon of him standing in the rain with a umbrella.

"You can smile already" Nupur looks back. Mayank looks down and acts to be frowning but secretly smiles which Nupur notices.

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YAY finally updated and it's very long 😆 Ok so this might not make much sense at some points because i havn't proof read everything. On FB! So yeah, busy chatting! Hope you like the update.

Next update! Few scenes.

-Samrat runs Gunjan over by his bicycle.
-GunRV phone convo.
-Mayur, helping scene.
Edited by Asthuox - 16 years ago
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*Reversed for mimi*
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XD! I finally updated. I feel proud! (Y) And because it is VERY LONGG! 😎 So now i dont need to update EARLY! YAY MEE 😆
Edited by Asthuox - 16 years ago
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Okay so I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sorry for the late reply! I told you how I saved the essay on MS word 😛😆
Okay so your chapter titles always scare the living daylights outta me!! 😡😆
I.DONT.LIKE.HIM 😕
I loveee yuir intro for Dia, I already told you that like 28597298 times through our PMs, and I love the explanation for her..."plastic face" and I really am looking forward to seeing Uday-Dia bonding moments 😳
Nupur is JOKES ! "You're killing my brother" LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
Aweeh Sammy staring at Gunjan *blushes* Benjiii my darling, leave them alone!!! hahahahhaha! I swear Asthu, Benji needs a GF here *points at myself* 😳😆
And pooor Gunjan *sobs* I'm glad Sammy wasn't covinced. I hope he tries to find out why she was so upset. And Im glad Nupz is there for her! I am SOOO excited to see where their friendship(s) lead!
RV my DARLING!!! OMG can I have a double role in your fic? LOL I want both men 😳😆 he is SOOO amaizng!! And SOOO sweet! He has his own share of secrets... Im SOO excited to find out what's brewing up in that head of his! And him and Gunji as friends *sighs too good to be true!
The MN moments made me LOL! Hahahahhaa Spanish, detention...oh gosh, I can totally feel for poor nupz! In the next part, can you add in Mayank's POV in detention? I would LOVE to read that!
Sammy bugging my POOR Gunjan 😡 but he felt bad later, so I forgive him! Benji- the supehero is SOOO sweet, he's my fave character in your fic Asthu! The way he came to detention...told her that she was different. He wanted to help her...AWEEEHE OUT LOUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am SUPER DUPER EXCITED FOR THE NEXT PART 😃
And OYE it doesn't matter how long it is, I DEMAND an update ASAP 😡 if you take another 3 months, I will NEVER talk to you again! Hmmph.
Edited by mimi0295 - 16 years ago
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HAHA, i reversed a spot for you. Will edit it! Added you on FB to! <33
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Posted: 16 years ago
cool update i loved it, i just hope sajan make up, mayur was great
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hey astha!!

I'm Lipsa !! Could like to be ur frnd !! I'm 11 yrs old😳

Thanksforthepm!!Yoursuchasweetheart😊!!

Nowtotheupdate!!

It was superb sweetie !! Absolutely mindblowing !!Don'thavewordstoexpressmyselfsweetieabsolutelysplendid!!

Now coming back to the update!!

Wow !! I still say ,What a update !! that too after so long?? 😆 😆

Welll,as i have said it superb !really amazing!!

Arrgh Dia ,Here?? In epi now she has been good but I dont think You'll display her as a postive character will you??

That crashing scene with Gunjan WAS so amazing !! haila I could imagine every line!!

I always Love Benji !! he's such a sweet guy !! glad he's now Gunjan's friend!!

That ragging scene !! auugh!! Had sent Gunjan to detention !! but atleast she knew Samrat now!!

And thattearscenewasreallycute!!

And it was really sad for Gunjan but at the basket ball court Samrat staring at her !! Haila imagining it I had goosebumps😉

Ad the mayur scene was also nice!!

And Gunjan and Rv 😆 😆 you really have started a new friendship An odd one too 😆 😆

And the coming up !! Wow !! Samrat with his cycle?? 😆
I think a cute scene there rite??

Ok!! I must Go now !! My mother will be calling me !!Goodthingtoo, If not I could have given you such a long comment 😆 😆

Ok ,Now include me to ur buddy& pm list okies ?? 😆 😆

Update soon !!

Luv
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Edited by Lipsa_mjht - 16 years ago
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awesome part.........nupur is really bad at spanish 😆........sajan benji scenes were sooo cute😳.........last mayur scene was cute too.........please update soon.....pm me
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toooooooooo goood !
sorry late comment kar rahi hoon..but i am in hostel !!
plz keep pming me :)...

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