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rohit bhaiya.............................
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Thanks all for the comments guys...I Really appreciate all patience you guys have shown, i know it had been over a month i had updated these one, but i cant help it. I would try to give you an update as soon as i can.

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Rohit miss u.

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Part 15

.Armaan looked at Ryan; a smile escaped his lips looking at him. He was so cute. He sighed 'will he ever be able to love him like his father would do?? Will he?' He grimaced. He knew it was his own entire fault and his kid was not going to suffer because of that. He would give the fatherly love he needs, He moved toward him in anxiety holding something around his back.

Ryan was busy in his own world till he was disturbed by the commotion around him, raising his eye he looked at the tall man in front of him trying to remember if he had seen him before. Instantly he recognized him, 'How wont he?' He is the same man who made his angel cry. He huffed.'What is he doing here today?'He thought.

"He will make my angel cry again, I don't like to see my angel cry. She never lets me cry then why should i let her cry??" He groaned looking at the intruder.


Armaan tried to hold him but frowned seeing him jerk back resisting his touch as if he was scared to let him touch. Armaan frowned "What happened to him? Is he denying me too?? Disowning my love?" He felt dejected by the rejection he got, his own child was not letting to touch him. He looked at Ryan, his eyes becoming moist.

Ryan looked at the man in front of him. He had jerked back not letting him touch himself, Yes he had saved him that day but he had made angel cry too. He let out a little wail seeing no one around. He wanted his angel now, Right now she would save him from this stranger, He looked scared at armaan.

Not finding his angel and being desperate to get out of the crib he stood up and tried to jump out of it, loosing his balance in the process and to worst of his dreams he found himself falling out of crib, he wailed loudly scared to get hurt but found himself in the embrace of the stranger, instantly he felt the connection as his hands caught hold of his tiny ones and rested on his heaving chest. He felt that warmth that he gets in arm of his angel. 'Why?' he didn't know. It was not for the first time he had felt it, he had felt same on that day too when he had saved him from falling down when he had appeared suddenly in his house for first time. He had felt that strange bond. Finding him taking a hold of his tiny soft fingers in between his thumb and index and then taking it close to his lips and kissing it he giggled his heart thudding from fear that was gripped in him as he was just falling out of crib, Ryan looked in awe at armaan now. He wasn't scared now, he felt the tenderness and affection in him as he usually feels in the arms of his angel and his Buddy 'Lahul', as soon as his cold hand found its hold on his little soft ones, he let out a sigh ....... he didn't understand what this feeling was?? but he knew one thing that he wont hurt him, he didn't knew what this feeling meant but he also feels same in his mothers arm and she doesn't hurts him so wont he too'..He knew that stranger was protecting him from getting hurt just like his mother does, he didn't wanted him to fall back and get hurt by the floor nor he wanted to hurt him by his sudden grip of his hands as his grip was so tender and soft, it had all the warmth and love, Yes he was scared when he was rocked out of crib suddenly and was falling down of it but now being in his arms, for some reason he felt protected and finally looked at him smiling then something caught his eyes and his eyes sparkled, He wanted that!!


Armaan sighed with the feeling of content. He felt this strange bond as soon as ryan crashed to his chest. he buried his small frame as if he was shielding him from any pain, he was scared to death seeing him falling. Nuzzling him close to his chest he kissed him till he could hear him giggle and his heart beat was settled.



Ryan was busy in his task and enjoying his pampering as he was not being interrupted in his current task, which was, exploring the new discovery that was attached in the stranger's left ear, with his tiny chubby fingers ....... simply loving the attachment with the stranger.....'Yes he was not scared now'



He beamed in Joy, exasperating a sigh 'Phew'...... Mission accomplished......Yes his first mission which he was on since this guy 'who is not so bad now as he had felt about him at the time he entered his house' was accomplished, Ryan was hell adamant to get the bluetooth headset out of his ear as it looked something new, 'He wanted to have taste of it. He didn't knew why but he always likes to taste new things despite his mum warning and scolding him for doing something like that numerous times, 'But what can he do? He just cant control that urge.' 'Aren't they great?? Huh??' ....... and now after the hardship of 20 minute since he was in his arm, he was feeling so proud to hold it in his little hand and have a look at it, suddenly that strange urge irked him, he smiled sheepishly 'it is good chance......angel is not here too and this stranger will not say anything and why would i care if he does too??' He giggled . As he was about to taste the device, he heard his mommy's disappointing voice ..... ".....LOVE....don't do it...." she alerted her son in a calm voice.......




Armaan was observing him closely, he had an idea what he was doing. He chuckled. He is so cute. He just cant stop admiring this small bundle of joy. He could have done it for ages, but was disturbed by the sweet voice which felt honey to his ears. His heart sighed for the lady in front of him. The lady with whom he was in love with. Her first word sounded musical to his ears......'How much he had longed to hear that word from her.....'for him'....'just for him'..... but he knew it was not so easy after what he had done to her ....immediately turning back to look at her after hearing that word.....for the first time in his life, he felt embarrassed at his own stupid assumption, when he realized that the 'word' was not for him BUT for his son........He sighed not knowing what to do? 'Should he be sad because it was not for him?' or should he be happy seeing the love she had for their child. How luck he was to get her love. She was Goddess.



Ryan gasped hearing her voice, 'Uuummmp....she caught me again.....How does she manages to know it?' He wondered then smiling sheepishly he looked at her. He could see her eyes bulging out at him and then it rested on this stranger, frowningly he turned to look at the stranger and noticed the sudden glint in his eyes and a smile playing around his lips, Ryan chuckled,


He could not help but think this, 'sorry dude!!! .... that was for me ......'Not you!!' .....'Hard luck this time......she is only my angel' You will not get a chance this time as you are in for a strong fight as competition is going to be with Ryan Gupta himself and he never losses any thing. Heck there isn't any competition here....as she is only mine. so back off dude then he looked at his angel, 'and sorry mommy, i know i again broke that rule to not put any 'shit' i see into my mouth but what could i do?? it wasn't 'shit' ...... I just wanted to taste it as it smelled so good .....'ummmmm...he giggled....' but never mind ..... I will be a good boy now .....He promised to himself but observed that her angel was busy looking at stranger....'anyway ...he sighed.'. back to you dude ....... that 'LOVE' was nothing ...... wait till you hear all the names that she calls me with ......'Shona, cutiepie, baby, apple...' however, I am telling you, My Mommy is the Best Mommy in the World ...... NO DOUBT ......




'aap'.....Riddhima muttered hardly believing himself. 'What are you doing here?'



'Kyun Riddhima hum yaha nahi aa sakte kya??' Atul made his entry from behind surprising riddhima, she was surprised to see them here.




'Atul sir aap yaha??' She asked confused and yet surprised. 'Hum bhi hai...yaha par....jiiii....' Anjali made her way in too. she smiled earnestly looking at riddhima who looked utterly surprised to see her here too. she could see the change in her. The innocent girl in him was transformed into a conservative women who was lot more stable and matured now. Riddhima looked at the girl confused. She didn't knew who she was.




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Riddhima looked at them all sitting on the sofa, she was confused to hell at their sudden appearance, she looked at ryan who was in armaan's arm. She didn't like it one bit but she controlled.




Noticing their awkwardness, Anjali decided to break the ice between them, ".. hmm ....it seems like i have to start off here or we all would just sit here and stare at one another.....' she chuckled. 'Hiii...I am Anjali...... as for friends its just Anjie ....." she vivaciously introduced herself.........Riddhima responded with a instant smile liking the chirpiness in her, it was after ages she was among some friends, 'Friends??' Can she call them that? She huffed when one of them was the man whom she loathed the most, diverting herself from that she smiled earnestly instantly liking the 'full of life' attitude of her. It was so like her. She was what anjali was at one time. but....she grimaced....




"Ohhh.... I know it .......you are Atul Sir's wife ....... have heard them talking about you occasionally during meetings ......" riddhima spoke.


Anjali smiled at her tone, she was really so sweet, " So they do? ..... I Hope it is not anything bad about me??!!" ..... breaking into a quick laugh at her sudden inquiry, Riddhima assured, "....no no maam ...... How could anyone talk bad about a sweet girl like you?....they are really concerned about you.." ....Anjali smiled earnestly.




"Ahhh...." Atul moaned keeping his hands on his heart. 'You hurt me anjali? How could you think that i will talk anything bad about my anjie??" He expressed dejected.




Riddhima giggled seeing his dramatic expression, He was really sweet. He was the one whom she had connected with during her job at Mallik house along with muskaan. 'ohhh....How she missed those days!'


'Stop being dramatic Atul! Just stop that!' She warned him. Atul winned.


She looked back at riddhima, who was smiling looking at them. "...so you think both of them are caring.. huh?!!" she attempted to confirm ....... nodding her head in an affirmative, she reassured, ".... yess .... they are...." ....... " ok that conveys a good 'sign' " almost spitting it out, she bit the tip of her tongue ......and then yelped in pain as she got a blow on her feet. It was from armaan who was sitting on his left. He glared at her seeing which anjali glared too.




Riddhima looked confused at her statement and asked her, ".... umm .... what sign Maam??" ....... in attempt to divert her attention Anjali continued, "erm .... nothing yaar ...... and what is this maam?? ...... call me Anjie NOT maam ......." winking at her new friend, both the ladies shared a giggle....



Armaan smiled contently, He was so happy to see this day, he had never dreamed that he would be father so soon and it felt great. He wanted to thank her. Thank her for everything she did.
thank her for bringing the symbol of their love into this world ....... thank her for giving the best gift that he could ever ask for ...... thank her for gifting him a new life ....... not trusting his own mouth and his mental condition, Armaan decided to keep it shut before he would blurt something otu that would spoil everything and let the heart to pass over his gratitude towards her ...... when his heart whispered '...th-a-n-ks...' ......her eyes instantly flew up to look at him at his gesture, what was that if it was not love? as if she heard what his heart had said, feeling an unusual beat in her heart rising instantly wanting to respond to the appreciation that he had shown .......but found nothing but his passionate gaze on her, being caught by his passionate gaze, she looked away..... ".....I will be right back...." saying that riddhima excused herself to leave for the kitchen in order to avoid the situation......




Riddhima made her way into the kitchen her mind clouded with numerous questions about their appearance, it was ages after she was meeting them. The recent meeting with the man who she hated most was still so fresh to her and she was not anticipating this meeting so soon so she had decided to be silent not knowing what to say. 'why are they here' she looked from the corner of her eyes at Ryan who was still in his lap from the kitchen. That scared her. 'Why are they here'




"May I come in??".....looking up at the door, she replied with a smile, "... arey?? Aap yaha?....You should have not bothered yourself...aap ko itna stress nahi lena chahiyee" ........seeing Anjali enter from the door, riddhima grabbed the near stool for her, feeling concerned for the would be mother......




Anjali smiled at her concern, feeling sorry for her, How could he had done this to her. How could he think of her to be like those chicks? How? She just cant believe. At this moment she wanted to pull armaan out of the apartment and give him some piece of his mind. This guy lacks judgment. How could he judge so wrong of her. she looked earnestly at her then sighed, But he really loves her and she has to do something for them. "Arre relax yaar.... it's been only 6 months..." taking a washed carrot from the bowl, she took a bite from it while sitting on the stool carefully......." ...So, what are you doing now??" Anjali asked her taking a bite out of it.


".....making some fresh mango juice for my guests..." she answered while putting the cubes of fruit into the juice maker .......Anjali let out a chuckle and corrected herself, "....Arre yaar I meant, what are you doing for living??..I Hope not making fresh juices for your guest??" .....giggling with the young lady, she notified, "...I am working at the Garewal's as a fashion designer...." Anjali heard her. .....confused Anjali verified, ".....but Armaan said you were in the management position at his office......" ..... "....yes I was ...... actually I have done graduation on Fashion Designing but management was just an experience" Riddhima cleared her confusion........impressed by her talent, Anjali confessed, "....woow.....kudos to you Girl......You are all rounder haan? Bhaia must be proud of you eh!!!"......


"..Bhaia??".....gulping in the mouth full carrot, she cleared out, "I meant Armaan......after all he is your ex-boss" winking at her, she laughed making Riddhima shake her head with a smile ...... ".....I thought he is your friend, didn't know you are his cousin...." passing a glass of juice to her, she brought the maker to the sink.......




Taking a sip of the juice, she explained, ".....Actually no.....he is not my cousin but we are more than that......I share various relationships with him......I respect him like a brother ..... support him like a friend ..... love him like a father ....... while scold him like a son ....... trust me when he gets angry, nothing works on him EXCEPT my scolding...." giggling at her own comment, she decided to finish the juice in one go as she loved the flavor........




"So You live alone here??" She asked her knowing the answer but still she wanted to know it from her mouth.




Riddhima looked at her and replied, 'Oh no...I am living with one of my friend Rahul garewal.' She answered back.




"Just a friend?" Anjali inquired her.




Riddhima looked strangely at her question, 'Why did she ask me that?' Wondering over her query she decided not to answered her and changed the topic taking out the ice-cream bowl from the refrigerator and settling it on the tray taking out scoops into bowls. Holding the tray they made their way out.


Serving the glasses to the men in the living room, she tried to take Ryan from Armaan who was looking homely with armaan which she didnt liked. She didnt wanted them to share any kind of bond. She just didnt!


Observing riddhima taking ryan from armaan, Anjali heart went out for the guy she interrupted her, "Riddhima can I use your washroom" .....Riddhima heard her and turned back leaving ryan with armaan and took anjali to washroom.



Smirking at his understanding friend, he turned back to his son, who was sitting on his thigh, all busy in giving a bath to the bluetooth stick which was still there with him but now it was all wet by the bath of his dribble ....... smiling at his cute little bundle of love in his arm, he picked up the glass from the tea-table, taking a sip from it to taste the flavor.




Ryan looked at the yellow liquid in the stranger's arm. He wanted that too. He giggled jumping, raising his hands to catch hold of the glass, apart of the yellow thing it was his favorite thing too...'Round solid glass, it feels good to bite them....he wailed expressing his desire to taste it and looked at armaan who smiled at the little bundle of joy.




seeing his anxiety he decided to share it with him ....... as soon as he made the glass touch his tiny pinkish lips, ryan instantly started to bite the glass with his new teeth while swallowing the liquid inside his mouth ...... in attempt to touch the glass with his tiny hand while still drinking the juice, he held the upper side of the glass over his nose, giving it a jerk, causing the rest of the juice to fall over Armaan......making it spill on him.



Feeling so proud of himself, he giggled while hitting his own chubby thighs with his cute little balled up fists, expressing the happiness of his achievement ....... making both Atul and Armaan both laugh at his cute acts. He was so adorable.




Ryan yelped in anxiety, He was having fun with this man. He is not that bad. Coming back to his task. He again had a sip and blows it making bubbles out of it, giggling at his own mischief as if that was not enough he tried to get hold of the ice cream bowl that was there in atul's arm making it to topple over but this time atul caught hold of it before it could fall..




Armaan and atul admired him their eyes becoming moist. How much they have missed of him?, both father and uncle shared a five with this little man as Ryan just hit their palms with his little fists......"..too good yaar.....he is already following your steps!!! " winking at his friend, Atul laughed....... "...... akhir beta kiska hai??!!! ....." Armaan proudly announced while placing a kiss on his son's forehead.....



"Apple...... that's it!!.....see what you did??!!...." Riddhima groaned at ryan, What was he doing? He was spoiling everything.




To obey his mommy, he dropped the bluetooth right on the moment on Armaan's lap, he didnt wanted to face his angel when she is angry, he didnt liked this side of his angel. He nuzzled into armaan as if was asking him to save him from his own mother, but in the process his eyes caught look of another gem that was on the way of his hold, anxiety took over him and in a hurry to grasp the already melted ice-cream cup that was kept right in front of him ......., causing it to topple over and the liquid ice-cream to fall all over the duo ...... making Armaan instantly remove the cup out of Ryan's hold while letting out a sigh of sympathy "oh ouh!!" ....... loving the new and easy phrase from his mouth, he decided to imitate the man ...... proudly looking down at his favourite blue outfit, Ryan also let out his disappointment "ouh oh", causing both Atul and Anjali to burst into a laughter while a blushed Riddhima just looked down, biting her lower lip to hide the smile......


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Experiencing the first interaction with his son, he couldn't help but cuddled onto him more close to his heart, completely not giving a damn towards being messy in the ice-cream......with a smile he looked out through the window, trying to avoid the embarrassment.....





Riddhima blazed at ryan taking him out of armaan's hold and scolding him for his mischief. Ryan looked at armaan as if he was talking to him ".....see i told ya, look this is the new one. Apple...wait there is still a bunch coming in my way....." helplessly looking at the stranger, he clutched onto his mommy's border of the saree, trying to pacify her ...." .. I am sorry mamma!!.....I Didn't wanted to do it...but that uncle made me to drink it.' He tried to answer to her mum.


Riddhima looked at armaan embarrassed with the act of her son. " the washroo....." ....cutting in on her, he calmed her down, ".... It's ok!!! .....don't worry......I am fine with it....Baccha hai masti toh karega naa...." Armaan said to her.




"Aur agar voh mallik ho toh phir kya kehne!!" Atul added making riddhima stare at them embarressed by himself Armaan bites his tongue.....how could she think he would ever dare to wash out the symbols of his son ...... this ice-cream has the memory of his cutest activity ...... this bluetooth has the touch of his tiny fingerprints ..... this juice has the taste of his dribble ..... this collar clip has the smell of his baby powder ....... how could he let them go by splashing water on them ...... looking at his son with admiration, he unwilling told her as he saw Ryan rubbing his red eyes, indicating his bed-time since it was 6 in the evening, " ......I think we should leave now ........ he looks sleepy...... " ...... looking down at her son, who already rested his soft head on his mommy's shoulder, almost hiding his adorable face in her neck, she gently placed her left hand on his soft back......



"Yeah!! we should get going now ....... It was nice meeting you Riddhima ........ come over to my home sometime ........ " lovingly touching Ryan's head, Anjali left a soft kiss on his wet juicy cheek....... "..awww he is soo cute......I couldn't even get to hold him, this 2 men didn't even let me touch him .....That's not fair......So promise me that you will come to my place and bring Ryan too...." she requested.......


Riddhima heard her, Yes she was scared to let them get close to her son but she just cant say no to her seeing her pouted look, She was at last her friend. she gently smiled, ".....I will ...... thanks for coming...."




Riddhima's gaze shifted to armaan to have a look at him, noticing him busy checking out the missed calls that he received in this 2 hours since he didn't even bother to touch the phone while enjoying the moments with his beloved son, she smiled inwardly. How much she could deny to herself but she even adored a father playing with his son, loving him, she could see Ryan sharing a bond with him and that was what scared her. Yes she was happy somewhere that a child was getting the love of his father after such a long time but her heart which was wounded by him denied to accept that, she felt that she was betraying herself by doing this. HE was the man who ruined everything for her and he could do the same now too....


Riddhima looked at him secretly. She was observing him. He was still the same but many thing has changed about him too...but was it true?? or was it all fake?? She didn't knew!! She looked at ryan muttering to herself. 'He is still the same.......whenever he is engrossed in a task, he forgets about his surroundings ..... he had no clue, when his friends left him and he is standing here alone.......she heard atul honking in the car and looked at armaan who was still so engrossed that he could not hear even it. finally deciding that she has to wake him up she spoke to ryan.


" .Cutie-piee...Hey babiiieee..... " ...making Armaan instantly look at her direction, he let out an exasperated sigh ...... "..shona get up ...... you have to get cleaned first .......look at you? you are all dirty...what have you done to yourselves?" gently caressing his silky hair, she tried to wake him up. Armaan instantly looked up at her, hearing her melodious voice, then hearing the horn he turned back to see atul waving at him to come soon. turning back he spoke, "Riddhima....I..."


"Hey shona....Wake up beta!!" She ignored armaan and turned around moving back to home. Armaan observed her uncomfortableness around him, he decided to leave the place, before giving a last glance at.....his little family......





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Anjali strolled back to armaan for the umpteenth time. She just cant understand this guy. What is wrong with him. Why the heck cant he tell her. Why cant he understand?? "Armaan you should convince her that you love her!" She told him. "i know she loves you too...i have seen that love in her eyes" Anjali spoke to a dejected armaan. He was missing his son terribly. He was silent from the time he was back and was now facing an angry anjali.



"I Tried to speak to her anjali, I Tried!" He spoke defeated with himself.



"Then what??" Asked exasperated anjali.




"She didn't let me say anything. She just left from there without even bothering to hear me out." He wailed at her.




"Ohhh....Cry baby....cry..i cant believe that this is the same armaan whom i am seeing now. Where is that Armaan who never looses anything. Who loves Riddhima. I Cant believe that this is Armaan Mallik....'THE ARMAAN MALLIK' " Anjali blazed going to atul who just looked at the duo and smiled. He just adored their relationship.





"So what should i do??" He asked her again, but lowered his eyes instantly seeing her glare at him. He was scared to loose her..."Armaan....Look You have to make her believe that You really love her and its not sympathy or Fake. You have to show your true love and make her believe you this time." She spoke and went off angry at her bro, He was behaving like a jerk.





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Noticing the door being open, he quietly sneaked in to see his son playing with his toys ....... before Ryan could scream out of excitement, Armaan placed his index finger on his lips, gesturing him to keep it a secret and not let his mumma get to know that he was there ......., he gestured him to not to wail as she would get to know it. Seeing the same man on the door who he just loved now, He wanted to scream in joy but he kept quite seeing armaan as he asked him with his gesture. being smart enough, he giggled before turning back his attention towards his job not letting anyone know about his appearance...... smiling at Ryan, he turned his attention to the Riddhima, "The mother of his son", He just started at her. her single look still makes his skip his bit. He cant believe how much he has missed them both in single night, He hadn't even slept in night. He wanted to reach them as soon as he can but he resisted, leaning against the wall by the main door while crossing his arms against his chest, Armaan kept on admiring her ......his heart thudding in his chest. She was still the goddess, infact much more beautiful and matured now, it was all because of this pudle of joy.




He knew that she was a perfect mother along with a perfect housewife too, he smiled grimacing.....'Perfect housewife....' Yes she would be! He tells himself.




He could not even imagine what she would have gone through, he wanted to kill himself but this was not the time now, What has happened was gone and now there was no point in remembering that again and again. He will not get anything out of it...... feeling proud of her, his lips curved up to a soft smile when eyes became soften as he just stared at her with admiration ...... how he wished he could remove those locks of hair from her face as they were blocking his view of her beautiful sight ...... and his wish was granted by her, as her splendid feature had instantly made him crave for her.....
He wanted to hold her in his arm and keep her there for eternity, to save her from all the bad evils, He wanted to be her love, to love her, to be wit her. He just let out a 'sigh' making riddhima to look at him.




Riddhima almost startled at the presented figure in her living room...."....aap??!!...." she whispered being completely surprised by his appearance......she dint expected him to be here again, why the hell is he coming here again and again.,?? What does he want from me? Cant he just leave us alone??' She thought in anger, but she tried to control herself.



Looking at him daring to look straight in her eyes, she glared. "Doesn't he has any shame??" 'She laughed to herself. "Am i foolish to even think that? Armaan mallik and shame? Its two ends of a coin' She laughed. It was a mocking laugh. Coming oblivious to his presence, she thought 'how did he get in??' then remembering her absent-mindedness, she cursed herself, "She has not even closed the door after she returned from Dia's House.
.......keeping her gaze down, she nervously removed the side locks of hair behind her ear ........ finding it hard to stand before his intense gaze, she initiated, "......When did you come??!!......" .....coming out of his staring session, he replied, "just some time back....." ......she did not want him to stay longer as she feels uneasy around him...... "....Is there anything I can help you with??...." she gently asked.......





Armaan looked at her. He grimaced 'Why does she always behaves so estrange with me? Cant she even let me speak. Cant she even hear me for seconds.??' He pacified himself to remain calm. He has to talk to her now. He has to hear her and make her hear him too....




Moving nervously. He looked at her as she came out of the kitchen holding water in her hands and passed it to him. He thought to himself nervous still 'What should i do? How should i tell her that i love her! Or should i ask her to marry me instead?' His heart beamed just saying that.




"But how should i say it? should I just say that?? ..... how can I just blurt it out without any such preparation?? ....... damn me!!! .....I Should have come prepared before confessing to her. i Didnt even know how to confess real love. Yes i had tried it on many of them but her!!! She was not Many! She is the only one! She is Riddhima! It had to be different, Something different." He muttered to himself confused, anxious, worked up still. He was hell nervous, he started biting his nails. I Hope i didnt mess it up. He growled, " I didn't even take Anjie's advice., she would have helped me to prepare for this.' He cursed himself being nervous, adjusting in his seat.



Riddhima looked at him foolishly, observing him. What is he doing? she thought. she suppressed her giggle. This is not the time for all this riddhima. You have to come to your business. Why is he here? what does he wants from you? What?




Armaan cursed himself for nth time now, .....muh uthake chala aaya ...... sh*t .....kya socha tha ki jake ussee keh dega?? Par kahe ga kya?? " Yaha aakar bas uska muh dekh raha hai. Yeh itna assan thodi hi naa hota hai. Agar hota toh log ispe kitabe nahi likhte.....Aab mein kya karu.....
noticing his hesitation, she asked him again as she was being suspicious, " umm....you wanted to say something Armaan, i am getting late, i want to go somewhere?? " she lied to him, she wanted him to just go away....




Armaan looked up at her and taking up all the courage he had he finally spat it out to her, ".. yess!! ...I .....I wanted ...... to say something.. " He spoke slowly barely making her hear it in his miffed tone stammering too....feeling all nervous, he finally blurted out those words, "..I want to marry you...." after what seemed like eternity to him, he finally muttered some courage to blurt it out abruptly.




Riddhima's eyes instantly shot up to look at him. her eyes bored up on his 'Marry me??' she muttered to himself not believing what was happening. 'Was destiny playing with her?'




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Now don't even think of cursing me or killing me to stop there. i know you all must be glaring and cursing me. But i wanted to stop right here. 😆😆😆....okk...i know i updated really late but i cant help it. So to update little quickly this time, i have stopped here. I Have written something more but i will complete it and post in 4-5 days again.


and one more thing. Do you not like this fic?? I Am observing that replies are getting reduced to large extent. almost 15-20 people are not replying now. Tell me if you are finding it boring i will finish it off soon. Neways this was the part after long time. i apologize for that.


Part dedicated to Karan's archita, Ritu, Kshanika, Deepu, Anjali, Nidha, misha, susha, shilpa and many more who missed it


feel free to comment and just look down what is there and do press it if you want.😉

Edited by Rohit86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

hai Rohit😊

awesome part dear😊just loved every bit of it😊Ryan's is toooooooooo cuteeeeeee yaaar😊Armaan's feelings as a father is simply amazing😊 finally he confesses his love to her😊oh god!! u left it at that point of story . waiting to read the next part😊continue sooooooon plz😊
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Bro
How R U


woah R.S its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superb so Armaan came with Atul & Anji& tell me why u think people going to Kill u isn't it funny😆 coz its rocking sir u explained Armaan & Rayn relationship so sweetly😍 I have tears in my eyes😭😭😭 & that small kids masti😛 i m missing my Angel's😭😭😭(My Neice😛 & Nephew😛) plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"When I see KASH for the very first time,
I knew they r BEST COUPLE.
Every scene I have seen of KASH,
Has touched my life, my soul forever.
I always knew that star become inspiration,
but never did I know that KASH would be inspiration.
My love for KASH is eternal and everlasting,
Seeing KASH I consider to be my greatest blessing.
I could search the whole world over,
See so many stars onscreen but never find someone like KASH
KASH are special, Unique, in their own way.
Words don't come so easily.
I want to share my creation with KASH,
my love for KASH will last forever.
To you I give the whole me,
I want u to stay
Always in my heart,
WILL U COME BACK FOR KASHIANS"


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Nidha
Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey rohit, I am glad that you finally updated.

Let me be frank... This is the only fan fiction I keep an eye on and will be waiting desperately to know what might happen next.
You do a fabulous job and the part was great as usual..
But wished you would have continued further.. Please do update this ff whenever possible...
Cant live without reading a part from here..
Really loved the part a lot !!!
It was one of the best parts ever. I loved the bond between Armaan and Ryan.. 😃😳
OMG.. I already read this part for more than 5 times...
Aww.. I loved the line at which Anjali thought how he can do like that with such a kind girl.. 😃
Ahh.. Good.... Armaan finally told his feelings for her..
I am sure that she is not going to accept him so soon.. Waiting to see how armaan will win over his family.
Waiting to see more bonding between all Anjali, Riddhima, Atul, Armaan and baby n intelligent Ryan.
Gosh he is so cute.....
Hmm.. Loved when Riddhima kept calling Ryan as Shonu, apple, cutiepie.. Soooo sweet...
And really loved about how Ryans baby mind had so many things going on in it..
I must say.. this FF is a masterpiece.. Loved it throughout..
And please dont think of ending it.. and dont make it soooo long with many twists..
Present track is extremely interesting.. and keep going in the same way 😃
I wish rahul will be dead to the world and the thoughts of riddhima for somethime so that Armaan and Riddhima speand some time with each other... 😆 LOL...
Ahh.. I felt like breaking my laptop since I did not find an update for many
days.. But what to do.. Works are also important na.. Thats why. Did not bug you for an update....
And last but not least..
THANKS A LOT FOR DEDICATING THIS PART FOR ME ALSO...
I am on cloud 9 today.. Thanks a lot again...

This is for you.. For such a nice update.

Thanks a lot for the PM.
Luv
Deepu 😃
Edited by loyal-kashian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rohit I love ur writing skill .Specially ability to peep in hearts .Really while reading even i wanna play with Ryan ,touch him ,kiss him.He is just adorable and u made him so cute .👏hats off to u.love u.
for Ryan ,my angel.

Armaan's nervousness ,his fear ,confusions all u described were commendable.Even Ryan felt warmth in his embrace shows even a toddler could feel true love.⭐️
Anjie a sis, a guide, a father, a friend !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Too many relations.😛😃😊
What else we need if some one like her we have in our life??????????
Finally he got courage to spell the beans.👏 would not appreciated and get a hard kick on his A--------------.What say ?U know u r a tough boy can't simplify situation so easily .😉
This is for Armaan.

The Key To My Heart


couple

I had closed the door upon my heart,
And wouldn't let anyone in.
I had trusted and loved and only got hurt,
But that would never happen again.

I had locked the door and tossed the key,
As hard and far as I could.
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good.

Then you came into my life,
And made me change my mind.
Just when I thought that tiny key,
Was impossible to find.

That's when you held out your hand,
And proved to me I was wrong.
Inside your palm was the key to my heart,
You had it all along.


Don't u dare to stop this FF so soon .U know this is one of my favourite ff and u took ages to appear online .phir toh aur b cum aaoge .send me ur address wahin aa kar maroongi agar tum kuch ulta plan kar rahe ho to.
If u wanna more reply i can send u. plz pm me .U don't need other's appreciation. I promise.
THIS I S FOR U .

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Did Anyone Ever Tell You,
Just How Special You Are
The Light that You Emit
Might even Light a Star

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Did Anyone Ever Tell You
How Important You Make Others Feel
Somebody out here is Smiling
About Love that is so Real

Did Anyone Ever Tell You
Many Times, When They were Sad
Your E-mail made Them Smile a bit
In Fact It made Them Glad

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For the Time You Spend Sending Things
And Sharing Whatever You Find
There are No Words to Thank You
But Somebody, Thinks You're Fine

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Did Anyone Ever Tell You
Just How Much I Love You
Well, My Dearest Friend
Today I am Telling You


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Thanks for this part .
thanks for ur dedication .
thanks for ur love u showered on me. I don't deserve that .
love
ritu


👏
Edited by janu1610 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

rohit bhaiya

the part was aweome
thanks a ton for the pm
loved armaan's and ryan's bonding
it was soooooo cute
do continue soon
love
\ susha😳
Edited by susha11 - 16 years ago

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