Lost Love2[AR]!~Pt 16 p53 UPD 20/7 - Page 31

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Posted: 16 years ago
Finally u updated.. lolzzz
It was a great part rohit...
totally loved it...
plzzz cont. soon!
nd thnxx for da pm...
Luv SAZ!
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Posted: 16 years ago

hai😊

nice part.........😊 ur way of describing the baby talks is amazing Rohit..........👍🏼
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
u r 2 gud man.....i luved it.................
armaan crying like a kid....
d father n d son bond....
my eyes welled up........
cont asap
4rm debadrita
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Posted: 16 years ago
tooo gud...very well written..
thx 4 da pm..
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was an excellent update. though late it was worth wait. i just loved the baby thoughts. i just cant describe howmuch i loved it. it was too good. brilliantly written. i am in love with this FF all over again.
Edited by sonia-kashian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ RYAN ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

thanks for updating rohit....
episode....what can i say???
it was sad and emotional in the beginning as armaan cried so much...
but i liked that atul knew it was armaan's mistake...so he didnt try to save him from his guilt in d start...atul and anjali always helped him...thank god, there is atleast a single creature on this earth from whom armaan fears...anjali..😊
but
his lips slightly curved up to a smile just by mention of him as 'his son' it felted like honey to his ear, he was carving to hear it
... awww!!!!
and then how excitedly he told atul about him...He looks exactly like me yaar, My Xerox copy, so cute, I had felt so thrilled when he had touched me.......you won't believe he has that same eyes, same nose
Oh ho!!!
atul answered--so we already got a latest yet little version of another Armaan Mallik.....oh boy as if one wasn't enough that god had made two Armaan Mallik's!!!....
now two can be scary....
😉
and i frowned when armaan decided to give her some piece of her mind...he himself has got no minds at all....huh!
and now its ryan's mega entry........
it had been real hectic day for him......🤣
🤣🤣
rohit dont underestimate him...he already behaves a way over his age...so it can be hectic....ok????
anchal didn't visit him today...
wow!! riddhima's smile makes armaan skip a heartbeat and aanchal's smile did d same with ryan's heart....as father as son....looks like riddhima already met her daughter-in-law....and he hated abhi...like most of d girls' lovers do with their brothers-in-law....
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
only i know how i stopped myself from laughing so loudly at 2 a.m...
but i must appreciate my ryan haan...he is so responsible....like a BIG MAN...he takes himself equal to his mother....so wants to repay her by not letting her cry too....😆
and ryan already took those earphones and tried to put it into his ears...😆 may be he want to listen romantic songs so that he can dedicate one to his aanchal.....😆 😆 😆
but armaan and ryan's scenes were very good....totally in love with the update....oops!! i think i already wrote a huge comment....😃
Edited by kshanikaa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey rohit dada..soo soo soo sorry..aaj kal to no contact with u..!!
uurhh my bizi schedule sorry haaa..
but the part ws mind blowing sacchi..
really loved the way u prensentd..n splly the words u changed the font..n then rot,,i loved that style aswell..!!
but wen anji said she loves u as she gave birth to ur child..
i felt..it was bit incomplete bcoz..there was nthig regarding armaan;s reaction on this..
keeping this apart..
the part was amazing
reaaly well done..!!!
thnku for the PM
love
nimmo!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nimiluvkaran

hey rohit dada..soo soo soo sorry..aaj kal to no contact with u..!! Awww....Yeah dear, even i am not coming much me busy too....

uurhh my bizi schedule sorry haaa..
but the part ws mind blowing sacchi..Sachiii?? Tha kya??😉
really loved the way u prensentd..n splly the words u changed the font..n then rot,,i loved that style aswell..!! I am glad that you did, maine font kuch aur hi rakha tha, yaha paste hote kuch aur hi ho jaa hai, even italics bhi nahi hua...😡😡

but wen anji said she loves u as she gave birth to ur child..
i felt..it was bit incomplete bcoz..there was nthig regarding armaan;s reaction on this.. Yes i was going to write but got irritated to write more😆😆😆 isliye vaha hi chood diya, then i would take it as flashback after he will get his mind of mind again from riddhima😆😆

keeping this apart..
the part was amazing
reaaly well done..!!!
thnku for the PM
love
nimmo!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
Rohit one quality in u i love too much is---------- u took out Ryan's feelings like this all happened in front of u .
This description shows how tender and pure heart u have.How u elaborate each emotion with such ease -----------I love this .But one thing is sure u r too naughty .yaar crush is umar mein naeahhhhhhh. not possible .
too small for all this .Don't u feel sooo.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This pooh is for Ryan********************


Anjie and Atul both love him too much na [me too]😉

Armaan and his trance never leave him untill he get her back in his life .
Rohit did u drop that idea of khanna industries or something,take over and all that stuff????????????????
Ryan too feel connected with him nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
Child always decipher all these love ,hate emotions more quickly than a man .Its God gifted.
I wish Ryan soon get his father's love Amen


Baat hum nahi to kya nazar karti hai,
Ye baat ki nazar jubaan se jyada asar karti hai,
Hairaan na hona ki naam nahi tera laboo pe hamare,
Teri yaadein to hamari RUH me basar karti hai!!!!


ur work , ur study is ur priority dear .So do that first.
We can wait .All the best for ur studies.
Thanks for pm.
love .
ritu
Edited by janu1610 - 16 years ago

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