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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 10

**Shimla (the same day as Abhi's wedding to Muskaan)**

It was a very foggy morning in a small village in Shimla, a young lady, age 24, sat on a small swing deep in thought…

Flashback

In the Same area 10 years ago

Little Boy: NIKKITA!!!

Nikkita: Hey Abhi!! You took so long to come out today…where is Anji? – smiling at the sight of her best friend

Abhi: I don't know…here these are for you - gives her flowers

Nikkita: Thank you! - sweet smile - Here comes Anji…come on lets play

Abhi: OK! Hi Anji…

Anji: Hey everyone!!

Nikki: Hey come on let's play doctors our usual game!

Abhi: Yeh come on Nikki…


End of Flashback

Niki: - to herself– Who would've thought this day would come so soon…I'm going to be a doctor without my friends…and this was our dream together…

Sonia: Nikkita are you still sitting here? Are you not getting ready? Your train leaves in an hour…

Nikki: Yeh I am going – standing up

Sonia: Are you crying? – stops her from walking away

Nikki: No… - wiping her eyes – I'll just go and get my things.

*An Hour Later*

Nikki: Bye Mamma - starts crying

Sonia: Bye Beti when you reach phone ok - they hug each other and Nikita gets onto the train


**In the Same area a day after Nikki Leaves**

Puneet: Hey you get out of the way! - pushes a man out of the way from getting run over

The guy turns around and Puneet recognise him, his features were the same as they were sixteen years ago…the only thing different was he had grown in height but other than that he still had his naughty grin and sparkling eyes…

Puneet: Abhimanu Modhi?

Abhi: Yes! - takes a while to recognise his best friend's uncle – Uncle?

Puneet: Oh my gosh! Is that you? Look at you! You've gone so big and where have you come from? And where are your parents?

Abhi: Wow calm down uncle… - laughs

Puneet: Yeh sorry… - calms down – You must come home… - takes him to his house

Abhi: Sure uncle…so where is Anji she must be all grown up now?

Puneet: Yeah she's very big now…but I haven't seen her for a long time…

Abhi: Huh? What do you mean? Where is she? – a little concerned

Puneet: A year after you left…Anji's dad came and…and took her with him…I saw her five years ago…when I went to visit them in Mumbai but…since then…

Abhi: Oh… - didn't know what else to say - Nikki is still here right?

Puneet: Umm…no… - looks up at him to see his face fall- she's gone as well…she went to complete her studies at the Sanjeevani hospital where she got the chance to do her internship...

Abhi: oh…ok - thinking

Puneet: So tell me…how are your parents? How come you've come back here?

Abhi: It's a long story…

Flashback

Reshab: Abhimanu… - knocks on his son's room door and walks in

Abhi: Yes dad? – looks up from a book

Hid dad sits down next to him and gives him an envelope.

Abhi: What's this dad? – opening the envelope

Reshab: We've found a bride for you

Abhi: Dad I do not want to get married I want to complete my internship first – quietly - and I want to get married to Nikki not any random girl

Reshab: Well this time you have to because I made a promise with her dad

Abhi: But dad…

Reshab: I don't want to hear no for an answer, she's a very lovely girl and I want you to make her my daughter-in-law…that's final

He walks out of the room and Abhi fall onto his bed letting out a loud groan.

*Morning of the wedding day*

Abhi: I cannot get married not now I have to find Nikki and tell her I love her I have to get out of here.

Nakul: No problem…our plan will work…you just need to write that letter…I'll get it to her…

*End of Flashback*


Abhi: Yeah…so I had to leave from there yesterday and came straight here…I wanted to be with Niki…

Puneet: You should have told your parents this is not right…

Abhi: I know…but they wouldn't listen…you know what they're like…you know why they left this place and you still think that they would have a heart to let me married Nikki I did not have a choice.

Puneet: Ok so…what are you going to do now?

Abhi: I'm going to apply for the internship at the same place as Nikki and I will tell her the truth…

Puneet: Ok but promise me you'll let me know how it all goes…

Abhi: Yeah sure Uncle… - thinking for some time – umm…when do you think is the next train to Mumbai?

Puneet: There are always two trains a day…one in the morning and one in the evening…I think Niki was saying internship starts this week…so you might just be able to make it just in time to talk to the Head Doctor and get a place if you take this evening train…

Abhi: Yeah…that sounds good

Puneet: Ok then…I'll book your tickets…

Abhi: There's no need Uncle…I'll…

Puneet: I don't want to hear anything…I'm going to book your tickets… - he gets up and calls up the station

Abhi smiles to himself and walks out of the house into the little garden infront. He walked towards the little swing in the middle of the garden and sat down. He began to let his memories rush over him as he looked at the swing and around him.

Flashback

Abhi: Nurse Nikki we will need more tissue

Nikki: yes doctor - gives him tissue

Abhi: Oh no were losing her quickly

He pretends to give her an electric shock and Anji burst in to giggles

Anji: Oww that tickles

Abhi: Oh Anji you spoiled it

Anji: Sorry… but that was funny

Nikki: Trying not to laugh because Abhi was angry

Abhi: Ok are you finished laughing? Let's start again

Anji: Wait Abhi remember you brought that new toy from that shop? Go and get it and we can use that to play…

Abhi: face lit up - oh yeh! I'll just go and get it wait!

He rushes into the house and up to his room. He grabs the toy from the shelf and rushes back downstairs, as he stepped down on the last step he heard loud voices coming from the living room. He moved a little closer to the door and stares through the crack between the door and the wall at his parents.

Reshab: We have to go from here…

Lela: No…we can't just leave like this…I grew up here, my family is here, my friends, Abhi's school, his friends…how can we juts leave everything and go…no I can't leave…

Reshab: Don't you understand?...It's good for the business we have to move I am moving and I am taking Abhimanu with me!

Abhi walks into the room and stares at his dad. After a long explanation from his dad his mum finally agreed and tried to make Abhi understand.

Lela: - crying - We will have to leave this place with your dad…you know that don't you we have to do as he says…We are going
Australia

Abhi shakes his head and runs out of the house to his friends.

Nikki: What's wrong Abhi?

Abhi: he looked at her - I have to leave right now…I'm going to leave this place forever…my dad, mum and I have to go Australia…dad got a new job there…and we are leaving now

Anji and Nikki couldn't say anything they looked at each other and then at him.

Reshab: come on Abhi

Abhi hugged Nikki and Anji and ran to his dad's car, he didn't really want to say bye to his best friends, the quicker the better.

Nikki ran after him.

Nikki: ABHI... ABHI...

The whole family got into the car and drove off. Nikki running behind the car trying to stop it at the same time she could see Abhi looking at her, there was nothing he could do but silently promised himself that he would come back to her…his best friends.

Flashback End


Abhi: - to himself – I'm coming Nikki to finish what we started I'll find you and you will be mine...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice!!!!!
plz pm me wen u cont
cont soon!!!!!!!!!11
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 11

**Somewhere in Patiala**

A day after her marriage was cancelled Muskaan had decided that enough was enough. She could not go through with another broken proposal. She tiptoed around her room like a thief gathering all her necessary belongings and threw them into a bag on her bed. When she had made sure that she had everything that she would need she took one last look around her room before.

Muskaan: Chal Muskaan…run away before anyone wakes… - looks up at the ceiling - oh God help me!

She climbs out of the window and down the pipe with her bag on her back. When she had reached the bottom of the pipe safely she sneaked around the garden and made it for the front gate, taking one last look at her house…

Muskaan: Yeeeh Bye Everyone!! See you all later - whispering

Guard: Who is there? – looking around in the dark

Muskaan quickly jumps in to a nearby bush as the guard came around the corner.

Muskaan: Come one - she had it all planned she got through the hole and was on the main roads before the guard caught her – yes…I made it…!

She walks as far away as possible from her house and when she was finally satisfied and very tired she sat down by a tree and decided to take a little nap…

Muskaan's little nap had become a very long one and by the time she had woken up it was very bright. She stayed hidden by the tree until she had thought of a plan to get away. She heard the noise of a car up a head and decided to risk it…

She laid down in the middle of the road hoping and praying her plan will work….




Rahul was driving along the road when he saw a girl lying in the middle of the road. He suddenly stops the car so he wouldn't drive over her. He didn't know what feeling took over him but he got out of the car and rushes to see if the girl was ok.

Rahul: Hello…are you ok? – puts his hands on her shoulder and shakes her

To his surprise the girl jumps up and smiles at him. Rahul jumps back startled at her action as he almost had a heart attack. He clutched his chest and looks at her.

Muskaan: My prince… - full of melodrama - oh wow you saved me from this place…please take me away with you…I have no where to go!

She stands up, dusts herself off and walks towards his car after looking at his silent reaction.

Rahul: Hey what are you doing?...get away from my car…hey! – surprised and frustrated at her actions

He runs over to his car and looks at her in disbelief.

Rahul: What do you think you are doing? What do you want from me?

Muskaan: Hey are you going to leave me here all by myself? A poor girl…stranded in this big wide world… - melodramatically she gives Rahul a sad but sly look

Rahul: - looks at her, she pretended to be crying loudly – ok…ok stop crying please!

Before he could comfort her she jumps up again and is ready to go in a flash. She gets in the car quickly and is waiting for Rahul to get in and drive.

Rahul: Help me!!! – looking up at the sky

Along the way Muskaan keeps fidgeting, looking around the car, switching the radio channels and putting on the AC so high. Rahul highly regretted that he had stopped the car.

Rahul: So…who are you? – shouting over the music

Muskaan: Muskaan…Muskaan Chadda…and you are?

Rahul: Rahul…Rahul Garewal…where are you fr…

Muskaan: ssshhhhhhh I love this song – shutting him up and then start to sing

Rahul gives up and carries on driving quietly. After a few hours of driving they decided to stop off somewhere to rest. They ordered their food and begin to have a conversation in which Muskaan tries to change the topic every time. The food arrives and they start eating.

Rahul looks at Muskaan in shock as she stuffs down her food like she hadn't seen any in ages. Muskaan notices Rahul staring at her and she fixes up and tries to be sensible.

Rahul: ok…so… what were you doing on the road like that? Were you planning on going somewhere?

Muskaan looks down at her food and becomes a little sad.

Rahul: Umm…if you don't want to say its ok…you don't have to…

Muskaan: Actually my dad wanted to get me married to his friend's son…but I did not want to…I want to become a doctor…as I studied medicine…and I wanted to complete my internship…

Muskaan looked at Rahul and was surprised to see that he was actually interested to hear what she had to say. She didn't know what it was but she felt comfortable in telling him the truth, if it was someone else she might not have said a word, but there was something about this guy that made her speak up.

Muskaan: My dad told me to get married to this guy…he was going to be a doctor as well…so I thought we could both work together but…he ran away from the wedding on the wedding night…my dad wanted me to get married to someone else so I thought that I had to go because he won't let it go so I decided to run away and go to Mumbai for my internship…

Rahul was listening to Muskaan intently. He could see she was really upset about the wedding but he also saw how much she wanted to fulfill her dreams.

Rahul: So where in Mumbai are you going to complete your internship?

Muskaan: In Sanjeevani it's the best hospital in the whole of India…

Rahul: So am I…

Muskaan: Really…that's good – they smiled at each understandingly - So tell me about you? How did you make this choice?

Rahul: - started fidgeting - it's getting dark maybe we should get going if not we won't reach till tomorrow and it's the first day of internship…we can't be late…

The rest of the journey to Mumbai was quiet. Muskaan and Rahul both lost in their own thoughts….

Muskaan thoughts: I don't know if I should trust him…even though I told him about myself…that was okay but…he seems like a nice guy but a bit too secretive…

Rahul thoughts: I almost let it slip…but not again…what I've left behind is going to stay behind…I haven't let a anyone know about this…and I can't let anyone know about this…I just want to be normal now… - looks at Muskaan – she's a good girl…a bit of a drama queen…but very kind hearted…

They carried on driving in silence until they reached Mumbai.

Rahul: Where should I drop you off?

Muskaan: Umm… - searches her bag then takes out a piece of paper and reads out the address to Rahul

They reach her destination; she looks at him before getting out…

Muskaan: Thank you for the lift…

Rahul: It's ok…so…I'll see you at the hospital…

Muskaan: Yeh bye…

Rahul: Bye

Rahul drives away and Muskaan is left staring at the car until it disappears around the corner…

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice parts.. thanks for PM. pls continue sooon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LOVELY!!
London Dreams and This too...
That's like double fudge ice cream treat!
LOL....as always spell bounded by RM story...
Wonder what Rahul has to "leave behind"?
Muskaan is so sweet, poor gal when it comes to getting married.
Loving the plot...Internship will start soon i guess i am in for a lot of good stuff.

Update SOon!

Edited by imane568 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: imane568

LOVELY!!
London Dreams and This too...
That's like double fudge ice cream treat!
LOL....as always spell bounded by RM story...
Wonder what Rahul has to "leave behind"?
Muskaan is so sweet, poor gal when it comes to getting married.
Loving the plot...Internship will start soon i guess i am in for a lot of good stuff.

Update SOon!

heyy,,,sry i dnt kno ur name...
but thnx once again for ur comment
wow i must say u read reali fast hehe...
yep internship is gona start very soon...
keep readin :)
Anima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey beautiful ff.but seriously,is riddhima dead.i mean that probably must be the bigest twist of this ff.that made cry.anyways waiting for the next part to updayte and pm me.
oochita
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i just came acroos
it really amazing
ridhima is dead u serious
i made me cry
well i think there would be twist
looking forward
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
try to update soon
really cool check mine too when u
get time and let me know ur name plz
THANKU
LOVE HEAVEN
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhzie

hey beautiful ff.but seriously,is riddhima dead.i mean that probably must be the bigest twist of this ff.that made cry.anyways waiting for the next part to updayte and pm me.

oochita

hey...thnx for the comment...lol this is a very twisty turn fanfic..fulled with suspense romance n drama..o oh n comedy hehe...aww sry for makin u cry...will hopefully update soon and will pm u wen i do...keep readin thnx alot again
anima xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: daring66

hey i just came acroos

it really amazing
ridhima is dead u serious
i made me cry
well i think there would be twist
looking forward
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
try to update soon
really cool check mine too when u
get time and let me know ur name plz
THANKU
LOVE HEAVEN

hiya thnx for the comment...glad to hear tht ur enjoyin it
well all i have to say is sit back n enjoy this twisty roller coaster of a ff ;-)
aww sorry to make u cry...but dnt wry it gets better wen they start their internship
will try to update very very soon...my name is anima
no promises at the moment but will read ur ff's wen my wrk is done
oh n btw i hve another ff...london dreams...do have a read if ur intrested
thnx again n i'll pm u wen i update
Anima xx

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