Contract Marriage4[AR]UPD 13/8 Pg148~Note pg 151~ - Page 52

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Armi-Shilpa

I think option..........................😕.......................................A or C....

Aap jaisa likhna chaho likh sakte ho.....but as i m under 18 jyada romance matt daliye.....yes i want their sweet and cute moments but not toooooooooooooooooo toooooooooooooooo toooooooooooooo much Romantic.........
So i suggest u to write as u like but instead of writing too much Romantic part u should write sweet and cute parts of KaSh..i mean Armaan and Riddhima....
This is my opinion....but choice is yours......
But i will still suggest u to not to write too much romantic parts....
Main janti hoon.....ab baki sab mujhe marne wale hain......so Bhaiya please save me......
Ur Little Sissy (Who is now in danger)
Ankita




Yup...was the last part romance okk...?? it was not that intense naa?? They were just attracted.

okies what i will do five feet romance from now....!!! Armaan standing five feet away from riddhima.....😆

what say???😉



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Posted: 16 years ago
lol bhai.. do u realli have to ask...... my chopice is crsytal clear.. nice n slow n loads of romance in the way... hehe..... but don't do an overdose...lol.. i think i missed sum parts... wat to do... juggling between books n trying to avoid IF.... hehe.... ly...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rohit86




Yup...was the last part romance okk...?? it was not that intense naa?? They were just attracted.

okies what i will do five feet romance from now....!!! Armaan standing five feet away from riddhima.....😆

what say???😉



No the last part was not too romantic...it was totally ok....
But the Five feet romance wala idea kafi acha hai......wow😉😉😆
Bara maza aayega......
Armana standing five feet away from Riddhima and Kissing her...wow....kitna maza aayega....😆😉😉
Aap bhi na Bhai......dekho aapka parts utna bhi intense nahi rahta hai but jab aap kissing scene ko describe karne lagte ho na😳 tab kuch jyada hi ho jata hai..samjhe....so pl. aap kissing scene dalo but usko describe matt karo hum khud imagine kar sakte hain.....😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ Rav

Yeah mujhe pata tha, its not a question to ask, thats why i gave option three. stop my blabbering and continue it.

@ Ankita

oopsieeee.....thik hai, aab se describe nahi karronga. *Kiss ko* He kissed her. Thats it.

Mujhe pata hi nahi chalta when i write suddenly i go overboard and then when i reread it i feel that its more intense. but i will take care from now.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rohit86



@ Ankita

oopsieeee.....thik hai, aab se describe nahi karronga. *Kiss ko* He kissed her. Thats it.

Mujhe pata hi nahi chalta when i write suddenly i go overboard and then when i reread it i feel that its more intense. but i will take care from now.

Good..Thats like a good boy..and my good brother........
So from now onwards u don't hav to describe the **Kiss**.....GOT IT.....kuch jyada hi daant diya....😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rohit86

Thanks guys for sharing views, i will start to write, ieven my preference is b and c, but ff will become too large😆

@ Farwa

I Will see if there is more request of option A then you would get what you want😳😃😛

Update may be tonight or tomorrow. Not written at all, cant promise😛

Rohit yaar even i'd prefer B or C
but as u said it'd go to long.....
so i said A
rest tumhari marzi...i'd love to read the present widout misunderstandings...hehe
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rohit86

@ Rav

Yeah mujhe pata tha, its not a question to ask, thats why i gave option three. stop my blabbering and continue it.

@ Ankita

oopsieeee.....thik hai, aab se describe nahi karronga. *Kiss ko* He kissed her. Thats it.

Mujhe pata hi nahi chalta when i write suddenly i go overboard and then when i reread it i feel that its more intense. but i will take care from now.

Aray nahi yaar..he kissed her se thora aage ka b tu describe krna chahye na..lolz
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Posted: 16 years ago
i love the way u write..so its C for me..
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
your story is so cute.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Do u need to ask suggestions now? I think ur ff is fine as it is. Rohit u rock dude and we cannot control what u type. So just get off ur a** and get typing .. heheJ

<3 Misha

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