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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part...
continue soon n thnx for d pm :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5

there engagement



Then they settle down in the centre stage on the swing they were again sitting very close to each other there shoulders touching and holding hands

Anjie coming on stage

Anjie: yeh jwellery set

Anjie: yeh to wahi hai na jo hum logon ne us jwellery shop pe dekha tha par tumne to mana kar diya tha na phir

Ridhi: di yeh who

Armaan: cutting between

Nahi anjie yeh who kaha hai who to hum logon ne kharida hi nahi tha

Anjie: main us set ko nahi bhul sakti yeh to wahi hai

Armaan: nahi anjie tujhe kuch yaad nahi rehta yeh who nahi hai

Atul coming bet: oye tu meri anjali se aise baat kyun kar raha hai who keh rahi na yeh wohi set hai to wohi hai bas

Armaan: champ tu to aise baat kar raha hai jaise tune bhi who set dekha hai

Atul: maine nahi dekha to kya hua anjie ne dekha matlab maine dekha

Anjie: atul stupup
Ridza tu mujhe bata yeh wohi hai na mujhe is par to bharosa hai hi nahi

Armaan: kya kaha tumhe

Ridhima: holding his hands signing him to be quit haan di yeh wohi set hai who aaj armaan ne mujhe gift kiya

Anjie: aaj par kab

Armaan: jab tum parlour main matak rahi thi

Anjie: kyat um parlour aaye the aur mujhe to
Armaan: pata kaise chalega aapko to apne sajne sawarne se phursat kaha thi aise saj rahi thi jaise tumari engagement ho agar meri jagah ko aur meri basket ke room main khus jata to holding her hand and kissing it saying very innocently

Ridhima: armaaaaan

Anjie: haan haan tumari basket to bachi hai na koi bhi isse utha ke le jata

Padma: who ws listning this aise kaise uthaega kyun armaan armaan usse mooka nahi mar dega hai na armaan kya battein ho rahi thi us waqt

(before ring ceremony the conversation held between ar were listen by padma although they were talking politely)

ridhima: blushing

padma: holding his ear oh to yeh baat thi yeh gift den ke liye tum itna betab the

anjie: betab

padma: narrating the whole incident
just holding ridhima chin ridhi tu to bahut lucky hai yeh languor tujhse itna pyar jo karta hai

armaan: langgor

padma: haan agar meri beti basket to tu languor

armaan: maaaaaaaaa

anjie: haan ridhi tu kitni lucky hai I am jelouse

ridhima: diiiiiii
atul: are anjie jelouse kyun mai bhi tumhe utna hi pyar karta hoon jitna mera babhia meri Sali se karta hai

anjie: Sali

atul: haan anjie agar meri shadi tumse hui to ridhima meri Sali hi to hogi

anjie: shut up atul

padma: tum log bas bhi karo jab dekho ladte rehto hoon aur ek yeh hai inhe pyar se hi phursat nahi milte jab dekho ek doorse ko dekhte hi rehte hai

ar were totally lost in each other eyes they just not heard any conversation which ws held between atul and anjie

Padma: again holding armaan ears aap dono ka ek doosre ko niharna band ho Gaya to khana kha le

Armaan: ahhhhhhhhh maa app hamsha mere kaan kyun khichte hai jiski wajah se main dewana hoon aap usko to kuch bhi nahi bolti pointing towards ridhima and again smiling his killing smile saying very innocently.

Padma: yeh to meri pyari bachi hai pata nahi tumari baton main kaise aagayi

Armaan: this is not fair aap ko mere taraf se olna chahiye koi bhi mere saath nahi hai making puupy face

Padma: band kar teri nautanki ab chalo khana khane ghar bhi to jana hai

Armaan: ghar itni jaldi kya hai abhi to 11 hi baje hai

Padma: haan haan tumara bas chale to tum yehi bathe baithe isse nihakre raho pointing towards ridhima

Ridhima: maaaaaaaa

Padma: acha beta ab tub hi iski taraf se bolne lagi abhi se abhi to sirf engagement hui hai

Armaan: holiding hand tighly to kua hua ab to rishta ban gaya hai poiting towards ring kyun basket

Ridhima: blushing

Armaan: oye hoe

Padma: hai bhagwan inka kuch nahi ho sakta kahi par bhi chalu ho jate hai ab chalo almost pushing them to the dinner area

They were having dinner armaan as usual holding one hand of ridhima and she is eating from his left hand

Anjie: yeh kya ridhi left hand se kyun kha rahi hai

Armaan: haan haan basket bolo na kya hua

(while ridhima trying to free her hand armaan hoding more tighly)

ridhima giving staring look to him
Armaan winking at her

Rahul: anjie tub hi na armaan ne ridhima ka haath pakad ke rakha hoga dekha nahi pure time kis tarah se pakad ke rakha tha jaise chodega to uski basket ko koi aur lekar chala jayega

Armaan: just shouted bas

Everybody who were laughing after hearing rahul comment suddenly get shocked at this

Rahul: ab tujhe kya hua

Armaan: dekho ridhima ko basket sirf main ho bula sakta hoon koi aur nahi samjhe kabhi tum use bulate ho to kabhi anjalie

Rahul: oh oh usse lekar possessive hai samajh main aata hai par naam ko lekar bhi uffffffffff

Again everybody laughs armaan making faces ridhima also laughing

Armaan: tumhe badi hasi aa rahi hai

Ridhima: haan tum bhi na itni choti si baat

Armaan: dekho yeh chotisi baat nahi hai koi bhi tumpar line mare ya basket bulaye na to mujhe bahut gussa aat hai agar aage se us rahul ne tumhe

Ridhima: relax armaan khana khao tumne achi tara se khaya nahi

Armaan: haan thik hai aaj raat ko dono milke phirse khayege

Ridhima: kyaaaaaa

Coming to real world of watching snaps on the passage armaan wedding surprise

Ridhima: armaan tum aur tumare surprises yaad hai engagement ke baad wala surprise main pehli baar tumare saath apne hi ghar ke pipe se utri thi who bhi raat ko 1 baje

Armaan: to aur kya karta tumhe koi chodne ko tayar nahi tha

Ridhima: haan pata hai pata hai

Armaan: waise who surprise yaad hai

Ridhima: achi tarah es who main kaise bhul sakti hoon uske baad se aaj tak tumne kabhi bhi meri baat puri tarah se sune bagiar mujh par gussa nahi kiya kitne badal gaye the tum us din ke baat

Armaan : haan who to hai waise main ab to tumse nahi ladta na aura age bhi nahi ladunga thik hai ab aage badte hai tasveerai aur bhi hai

Ridhima: wao yeh to wahiwaterfall hai jaha par hum log us din gaye the tumara surprise

Just the a guy bring chair

Armaan:Ridhima tum baith jao tum to waise bhi thak gayi hogi waise tum sari tasverren dekh kar unke bare main sochna shuru kardogi tumare pair dukhege mujhe unhe dubane ka koi shauk nahi hai giggling

Ridhima: armaan hiiting on his shoulder aur tum main ek aur chair man wait hoon

Armaan: are basket iski kya zarrorat hai

Ridhima: matlab

Armaan: matlab yeh just sitting on the chair and made her sit on his lap samjhi

Ridhima: par tumare pair nahi dukhege

Armaan: dukhege lekin jab tum meri godh main ho who darg to kuch maine hi nahi rakhta na basket winking at her

Ridhima: armaaaaaan kitne hassen pal the na who

Armaan: kyun aaj jo 4 ghante pehle hua who hassen nahi tha

Ridhima: now totally red blushing very badly

Armaan: oye hoye tum itna sharmaya mat karo yaar ek din meri jaan hi

Ridhima: putting her hand on his lips armaan as usuall kissing it aage se mat kehna pls armaan

Armaan: ok baba thik hai


The end guys hope u like it guys with the snaps all flashback will be there there wedding and all functions and ofcourse HW they convince dr sasnk

Prerecap surprize of armaan on engagement night and how did it change armaan behaviour
love u karan

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
fantastic ..arww thye're so cute
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
heyy dear,
nice moment
do continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Hellozzzz..
glad you're back..
you know I was just thinking to start bugging you for an update in any of ur FFs..
loved the part..
but why is Padma always twisting armaan's ears..😆..
aur likho na jaldi jaldi..
aapki FF ka update kab khatam ho jata hai pata hi nahi chalta..😕..

luv
Rucha

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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Awww this was a reli cute part...
lolzz Armaanz possesiveness... lolzz
cont. soon.. nd thnxx for da pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey very nice part..
keep it up..
thanx for the pm..
piyasa
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

part 6

Ridhima: kya
Armaan : haan aaj bhi tumare liye surprise hai
Ridhima: u must be kidding dekho main bahut thak gayi hoon aur ghar jake soungi ok

Armaan: thik hai as u wish (in mind dekhta hoon ajj tum kaise soti hoo smiling

Padma: tumara phirse shuru ab chalo sab late ho raha hai

(then they both departed to there repected places now it 1 o clock at night ridhima is sleeping and smiling as usual dreaming about armaan

armaan as usual comes from the window and staring at her beauty while sleeping she ws looking awsum to him as usual then coming back from dreams armaan politely speak ridhima

ridhima is busy sleeping

armaan: basket shaking her

ridhima is shocked by this sudden act about to screm bt armaan at right time put hand in her mouth signing shhhhhhhhhhhhhh and at once holding her hand and almost pulling her towards the terrace

ridhima: yeh kya ho raha tu yaha

armaan: uf basket yaar kaha than a surprise

ridhima: mujhe laga tum

armaan: just hoding her from waist kya laga main mazak kar raha tha ab thik hai ab yeh lo taking out a gift packet yeh dress pehenlo aur chalo mere saath

ridhima: is waqt tumne time dekha hai

armaan: pyar karne wale time nahi dekhte madam ab jaldi late ho rahi hai

ridhima: armaan pls na main bahut thak gayi hoon phir kabhi chale pls pls

armaan: now making faces haan haan tumhe to sirf apne aaram ki padi hai iska to khayall hi nahi maine tumare liye itni mehnat se surprise tayar kya hai

ridhima: keeping hand on her cheek mere sheru ko bura laga

armaan: haaaaaaaaan nodding is head just like making kids like face
(man this guys knows how to hear yes from his love hehehe)

ridhima: acha baba abhi tayar hoke aati hoon tum bhi na itni si baat ke liye mooh phula liya
armaan: yeh choti baat hai haaaan

ridhima: ok baba sorry change karke aaun

armaan: now smiling haan jaldi

ridhima : haan baba do min

then as soon she goes to bedroom open the packet it ws beautiful capree blue pant and red top which was amazing bt ridhima as she don't wear much of this she again goes out
armaan ws expecting it before she could speak he started speaking

armaan: basket pata hai tum aise dresses nahi pehenti par kya mere liye bhi nahi pehensakti pehenlo na pls pls saying like kids

ridhima: tum na armaan kitne cute ho aise bologe to kuch bhi peheluni
just going to change armaan hold her at once and dragged toward himself as dumping towards his chest kya ha cute caressing her hair
ridhima: kyun kuch galat kaha

armaan: galat kya kaha sahi to kaha tum kuch bhi pehensakti hoon main bolu jab ya phir kuch bhi now the expression ws very naughty in his eyes ridhima at once sensed it

ridhima: tum na hitting on shoulder

armaan: mai kya coming more closer

ridhima also moving closer tum

armaan: hmmmmmmmm very romantic main kya basket

ridhima: just pushing him ab late nahi ho rahi and just laugh and run away

armaan who ws expecting something very romantic got very upset tumhe to aaj main dekhta hoon kab thak bagogi basket then smiling

meanwhile ridhima comes wearing the dress given by armaan and as usuall anjie ki kumbhkaran ki neend kabhi nahi khul saki hehehe
she ws looking beautiful her a hair were open and coming to her face she ws looking amazing armaan ws lost in her then coming back to senses realizes he is angry with her
ridhima: armaan chalo
armaan: mujhe tumse baat nahi karni
ridhima: are itna gussa acha baba sorry
armaan nodded his head still angry
ridhima: just come closer to him and put her hands around her waist ab
armaan: nahi it ws fake anger because he knew hw ridhima will make him happy so he ws wating for it
ridhima: then kissed his forehead ab bhi nahi
armaan: immediately bringing his face near to kiss his check
ridhima: armaaaaaaan
armaan: again the same act

ridhima: knows she just cannot escape now so she kisses her in his both cheeks ab chale

armaan: signaling towards lips

ridhima: is now blushing badly and want to run from there no so easy armaan itni asani se kaise jane degha guys

armaan: twisting her ankle ek kiss hi to hai basket

ridhima: acha to ab janab ka gussa chala gaya

armaan: agar kahu nahi to de dongi

ridhima: armaaaaaaaan chale late ho raha hai

armaan: thik hai kiss udhar raha shayad who shadi ke baad hi milegi pata nahi kab hogi shadi

ridhima: itni jaldi kya hai who hi ho jayegi

just then ridhima heading towards the room armaan stopped her

armaan: yaha se kya kar rahi ho humhe pipe se jana hoga chlana mat

ridhima: pipe se main gir jaungi armaan nahi mujhse nahi hoga

armaan: are baba darr kis baat ka hai main hoon na apne hone wale pati par thoda sa to bharosa rakho ridhima

ridhima: aise baat nahi hai par

armaan: par war kuch nahi chalo dekho pehle main utru raha hoon tum bhi aa jao taki agar kuch ho to main tumhe neeche pakad loo ok

ridhima: still not convinced bt said yes as she cannot say no to him

first armaan comes down to pipe when he comes only small portion he told her to come she ws not ready
armaan signal she is coming or again he will come up then she had to do that

she was dragging to the pipe with her bare foot tied towards the pipe (as shoes were already drppoed down by our hero)
in mid way of pipe ridhima: armaan mera haath slip ho raha hai mai gir jaungi

armaan: main hoon na dar mat bas eke k pair ko balance karke neeche aati raho

ridhima and armaan were very close now as armaan had stopped in between as he knew his basket would be in trouble

ridhima: yaha meri jaan nikal rahi hai tum keh rahi hoon ke balance karo uffffffffffff man to karta hai tume ek zor se kick karu almost kicking

armaan: ahhhhhhhhhhh kya kar rahi ho basket main gir jaung aaise itna zor se mara naak par

ridhima: sorry sorry lagi to nahi

armaan: dekho ab aisa mat larna main uta raha hoon tum bhi aao dhere dhere

armaan at once come down as he knows now is the perfect time when his basket needs him as she told her hands were swating she just cannot hold the pipe anymore losing balance

ridhima: main nahi aa parahi hoon

armaan: pipe chod do au raise hi khd jao main pakad loonga

ridhima: pagal ho gaye ho kya marwaoge

armaan: are basket thoda bhrosa karo kuch nahi hoga

ridhima: sure

armaan: haan baba pakka

she just left the pipe and shouted like armaaaaaaaaan and fall on the right place where every girl wants to be bt ridhima is lucky are ab tak to pata chal hi gaya yaar in armaan arms
ridhima still afraid and closed her eyes hold his shirt tightly
armaan: oye basket ankhen kholo tum bilkul theek hoo
ridhima: just open her eyes and found her on his arms she at once hugged him

armaan: ab aise hi rehna hai dekho agar tumhe rehna hai to mujhe koi problem nahi hai main hamesha tumhe aise rakhne ke liye tayar hoon
ridhima now bit ok hitting on his arm ab utaro

armaan acha thik hai

then taking her towards the car and kept her carefully on the seat and ask her to wore her shoes
while she ws wearing he comes from other side found her smiling

armaan: kua hua itna has kyun rahi hoon

ridhima: soch rahi hoon kya kya karwate ho tum mujhse kabhi socha hi nahi tha apne ghar ke pipe se utrongi aise again smiling

armaan: yeh achi baat nahi hai aur tum has rahi hoon winking at her

ridhima: haan haan tumari sangat ka hi asar hai jhot bolna chup chup ke milna who bhi raat ke 2 baje.

Now they were out of gupta premises waise yeh gupta family wale khode baich ke hi sote hai kyun girls hehehe

In car

Ridhima: hum ja kaha rahe hai

Armaan: surprise haina dekh lna

Ridhima: batao na pls

Armaan: nahi
Ridhima: haan
Armaan: nahi
Ridhima: thik hai ab tabhi baat karma jab pauch jaye hmmmmmmmm. Moving her face other side
Armaan are tum to naraz ho gayi oye itni door kyun ho paas aao na

Ridhima: not saying anything

Armaan just take a turn to the car that ridhima dupped towards him at once she ws trying to move

Armaan: soch lo agar hilli tp phirse aisa hi turn aaega

Ridhima: armaaaaaaan to yeh jaan pooch ke tha

Armaan: aur nahi to kya um aise to paas nahi aa rahi thi
Ridhima: tum kabhi nahi sudhroge

Armaan: pata hai

Then he stopped the car and ask her to cover her eyes with strap

Ridhima: par kyun armaan

Armaan: uffffff oh tum na kitna bolti jo kaha hai karo

Ridhima: making baby face thik hai

Then they were moving armaan holding ridhima hand as her eyes were closed

Ridhima: ab batao bhi armaan

Armaan: have patience basket ab paunch hi gaye

Ridhima: peecle 1 ghante se to yehi hi sun rahi hoon

Armaan: acha baba ab ankhen khol raha hoon ok

Ridhima as soon open her eyes ws shocked

The end
Pre recap
Armaan beutiful surprze and ridhima talking about her cpleedge best friend hw did it change armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys as i will update regularly now so no pms plssssssssssssss
thanks for loving this
karan ki dewani mithila
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
Woohooo..
first comment..
Wow.. ab se regular updates..😃.. what days will you update..?
the update was too cute..nd Ridhhima's pipe journey was awesome..
goodnite..

Rucha

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