FF 'luv ne banaa di jodi' ((upd part19 - pg27)) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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😳😳it's show time, and

out there in the bak stage, two secretive eyes😳, are admiring a beauty,😳😳😳 a beauty of his dreams,whom he wishes to share wid no one,,as if life had been waiting to be relived by her company only, 😳she was a beauty,😳 and the eyes cud'n't rresist it,😳😳😳

there an handsomely dressed man, 😉😉with his killing looks, proceeded the carpet as if, the mehfil was waiting for him to come, the girlzzzz heart began beatin faster, they tried get get one hold of him , one look of him, , one smiile frm him,😆

but, there our gunjan sahani, was out there not bothering him at all,makin herself dressed up 4 her performance she was abt to give,

she was searching 4 her friend di,atthe same time, a blak car arrived, with a girl stepping ou⭐️⭐️⭐️t, wid high red glossy heels, tapping the floor, mesmerisin the boys, she walked in attitude, her eyes wre seemingly intoxicating for the audience, and in a loud voice she shouted out,

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sophia collegeeeeeeeeee,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

are u ready,?????????????????//

the handsomeli dressed man pleasingli, gave her a hug, and the girl wid attitude said, hey, my lucky boy, samrat,kaisa laga yeh arrangement, at tat time our bubblipie nupur intrudes in, haa samrat bolo na, aakhir nupur ne jo mkiya ghai, yeh sab,😆

dia angrily bioling over nupur for her cooments,samrat answered, jaisi nupur sahani, waise hi hai, yeh shaam mastani,aur yeh mast decoration kar rahi hai mujhe deewani, bohot khub khubsoorat khubsoorat nupur sahani,nupur blushing,, AND SAYS, wah samrat kya baat hai, aaj kal tum badi shero shayari karne lage ho,sammy laughs smirkingly😆😆

there gunjan gets ready, for her performance, she is in blak hazy skirts and top, with kaba boots, and samrat is her partner,😉😉
she thinks, 😡😡😡ooh god, ab yeh samrat ke saath danc e karna padega,
at that time samrat cums , so the sophia college, topper, kya aap tiyar hai,😎
he says in a challnging attitude.😎
nupur cums to wish samrat and gunjan best of luck, 😊😊
and says , ab tum dono stage pe wrestling ke steps mat karne lagna, then samrat cuts in and says, samrat jiske saath bhi rehta hia,, vo kudi humesha romantic hoti hai, and gunjan shows him a kiliing looks, and samrats pretends toto be mesmerized ,by gunjan and falls on nupur, and says ahhhhhhhhh, nupur, kash tum mujhe aise nazaron se dekhti, nupur says dhta samrat😆,
mayank observes this and is shattered a bit,🥺
miss sharma, hosts the show, so sophians, all ready for the sizzling dance of the colllge hunk and the topper, samrat and gunjan,👏
they dANCE ON move your body and shake your body,(kismat connection)
samrat enters
move ur body now and shake your body now, and gunjan too grooves on the steps with samrat,
she dances awesomely, and samrat, too holds her perfectly, both share a eyelok, ,and nupur sumtimes feels lil awkward to see them close, but then, gunjan pushes him and dances on her own grooves😉,
, on lyrics, isne na sikha darn azamane se,😉
samrat grooves on yeh kis ooljhan me pad gayi too kaise baat kar gayi,
giving a killer wink at nupur and mayank sees this too, he says, kya vo kabhi meri ban payengi,
and again looks bak to nupur smiling and claappin for the dance,
the whole college is groovin on the challengers👏, steps but sumwhere the heart is burning, yearning, mayank's for nupur ,😳😳😳 nupur's for samrat, 😳and dia's for mayanks😳😳
and gunjan, still dreamin her boy secretly,😳
look on for the next part jab ijke kismet mileyge, aur jab luv ne bana di jodi
and i knoe this this is an awesome update,this is my fav,one and do read
coomments are appreciaited,👏👏
😉
(NOTE GUYS, HERE NUPUR HAS A CRUSH ON SAMRAT , BUT GUNJAN STARTS LOVIN HIM, SO, AFTER SOME TIM NUPUR APNE PYAR KA TYAG KARTI HAI, AUR MAYANK ME DOST DDOONDHHTI HAI,AUR DIA KA MAYANK PE HUGE CRUSH REHTA HAI,)😉
this is entirely diff ff, they will move slowly and interestinly😉😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Hiii.....Akanksha...
Very different update...
Really nice...
I really like the concept....
Its really sweet...
One question....
Who does Sammy like.....coz he's always after Nupz......
Does Sammy know abt it....
Are Sammy in Gunjan in luv right now?....
Thnx....
Keep it up.....
TC....
@Poori:.......Moving?.....Khairiyat se ana......Take Care....
416391 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#23
heyy akanksha...........kya mast update tha BY GOD
its totally different from the other FF........loving it
continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
hey akanksha....
kya update tha yaar....
luvd all dialogue and mainly d poem...
@ayesha: yup... wil definitely take care......luvs...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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keep on going guys .... great work ... do continue 👏👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
wowow cooll part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
SAHI YAAR.KYA FF HAI....😉
EK DUM ALAG AHI.😊
PLZZZZZZZZZZ MUHJE PM KARNA.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😆after the show at the bak stage, samrat says that, whoa gunjantum to rockstar hio,gunjan gives a admitting look, and nupur says, aur is rockstar ki behen nupur sahani hai, vo samrat ko bajoo me lati hai, aur kehti hai, aajj date set hai, na, samrat says haa babes zaroor,, show ke babad, tum gate pe wait karna, mai apni surprise leke aaonga, nupur blushes , and samrat vanishes in awink, gunjan pata nahi kya samjhta hai, khud ko, nupur looks irritated, mm gunji, too bhi na, gunjan starts thinkin pata nahi yeh dii ko kya ho jata hia,,dia wid samrat,, dia was wlkin down the staircase, and mayank was climbing up, dia ka pair phisalta hia,vo girne wali hia ki, mayank usko pakad leta hai,dia ka crush aur bhi badta hai,says, aahhh in an intoxicating tone, thanku mayank, nupur sees this and says, good good mayank, kabhi mujhe sambhalte hoo, kabhi dia ko sambhalte ho,kabhi khud ke dimaag ko bhi sambhalla karo, dia says, vo tumhari tarah nahi hai,hmm, nupur contradicts, haa sahi kaha koi meri tarah ho hinahi sakta,, maynk is again shattered , nupur mayank ko keechti hai, apne aor, and says, are devedas babu, tum yeh dukhi atma ki tarah kyon rehte ,dekho life kla funda yrehi hai, mast se jeene ka, ekdum jhakaas, nahi to koi ladki tumhare paas, anpkin poochne ke liye bhi nahi ayegi, dil to door ki baat hai, and laughs off, mayank likes to see her smile,nupur suddenly thinks are dhat teri ki, samrat and runs off,maynk still smiles to see his bubblypie nupurrrrrrrrr, nupur at the gate, samrat in attitude sits on bak, hi meri bubblypie, kaha thi, mai kabse wait kar araha tha, nupur says sorry, ppls, are pls,sssssssssssssss the cute dude man jata hai, aur kehta ahi, abhi chalo, nahito hume naa to seat milegi, naa hi dinner, nupur says are hotel ko kaun jayega, chalo, alloo chat khane chalte hai, bygod morena me pata nahi last5 kabhi last khaya tha, chalo, na, samray says are pehle tum meri hero honda pe to baito, at aaloo chat, samrat sya, ohh garam hai, mirchio paniii, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nupur, ahhhhhhhh nupur says are are , are bhai zara pani dena, ,, piyo samrat piyo,, samrat kools down ahh, yeh chat to tumse bhi teekhi hai,nupur says kya matlab hai tumhara, >?????????????, samrat says are, mera matlab hai, maine poori 😆😆zindagi maine aaj tak itni hot cheez nahi khai na, is liye,😆😆😆 , scene two,samrat drops nupur at doorstep,bye, nupur says bye, she is just too happy, samrat, tum to bas tum ho, at room gunjan says kaha thi, pata hai, aaj mujhe zabardasti us chironjee ke saath ghar aan apada apne bifocal lenses se mujhe pj padke suna raha tha, dii, agli baar mai bhi jaongi,said gunjan, nupur says are too jake kya karegi,, date bhala koi teesra jt hai, gunjan is like dateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😲 nupur tries to pacify her, dekh gunjan dosti wala date, ahh samjhi, gunja says, acha, teekh hai, acha ab so jao, kal utna na
, at morning at coolege,
mayank walks thinking in hi own thought, or in nupurs😉 "are devedas babu, tum yeh dukhi atma ki tarah kyon rehte ,dekho life kla funda yrehi hai, mast se jeene ka, ekdum jhakaas, nahi to koi ladki tumhare paas, anpkin poochne ke liye bhi nahi ayegi, dil to door ki baat hai, and laughs off"
maynk says thek hi to keh rahi hai, har samay mai padai me ho dooba rahoonga to, koi mujhe kya poochega,
he goes to gunjan his best friend,
at staircase, gunjan,🤔 hmm to tumhe badalna hai, ek ladki ke liye,
aur vo kaun hai, maynak doesn't want to disclose it, and says, hai koi, college ke bahar bachpan ki dost hai,
then gunjan says to tum mera wait karna ok sharma maa'm ke class ke baad ok, maynk is relieved ,ok,
then after the class,
gunjan says chalo,
first they go to mall, buys a few sets of jeans for mayank and buys sum cool shirts,(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,actually, he is in a champaklal attire🤓, tat's why)
and college bag, and goes at men's parlour, gunjan waits outside, and maynk cums out, in his new attire, gunjan opens her mouth and sees the new mayank,😲
mayank is just lookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiinggggggggggggggggggg too cool 😎and gunjan says maynk tum toh, ahahahah, kash us ladki ke jagah me hoti,
mayank says sorry,😆
maynk sya par tum darna mat is dress ke piche usi mayank ka chehra hai j o tumhara best friend hai, whoa,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,gunjan says tuum to us samrat s ebhi zyada cool lag rahe h o,
att college, second shift,
mayank walks down the college campus nupur passes by, her chuna faals down, are mera choona, 😡and looks bak to give a spanking😡😡😡, aye dekhkeeeeeeeeeeeeee,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,nupur is tunned and speechless,😆
and says tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 😆
wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow mayank ka makeover i love the part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
i loved the' POORI' part.😆mayank makeover.can't wait.😊

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