FF 'luv ne banaa di jodi' ((upd part19 - pg27))

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Nice......Lovely...

Sooo different n unique....u guys rock!...

Yaar was that an intro or the real update?...

Awesum.....

Such cute scenes.....

It was presented in a fab way...

Keep it up....

U r getting better n better!...

TC....

-Ayesha-

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

heyy i love your ff luv ne banaa di jodi plz contuied soon

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angelwingz04

@angelwingz04

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

hiiiiiiii i am new here .....
i love reading fanfics over here 😊
they are always soo gud 👍🏼👏
and i really liked ur intro its just tooo gud..... <33
hope u will continue soon =]
TC =)

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

go ahead girl .will read it and comment :)

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@thejazzgal

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

coooooooollll!! FF poori di!! loved it..do cont ssooon...

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Khushali

@-Khushali-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

luvd ur ff idea.............start the story soon......

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MB@RT rox

@Akanksha Biswas

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

, well, guys, this story s different, ,ok starting wid the first scene, scene at the college,

nupur organising, the farewell function,

she says, are jaldi karo, thodi hi der me, princi bhi aa jayenge,

,haath jaldi chalayo,

mayank cums to her and asks, mm, main kuch madad karo,

nupur kuch kehne hi, jati ki, ek student uske taraf fan chala deta hai, aur uske baal udne lagte hai,

nupur sambhal nahi, pati,

mayank, usko girte hue bacha let ahia, sara time standstill ho jata hai,

gunjan aati hai, dii, diii, kya hua, ap gir kaise, gayee,

mayank ka hhaath chootha to nupur zameen pe gir jati hai,

to, phir mayank ko kehti hai,

tum na, ahhhhhhhhh

mayank keht hai, kya mayank too bhi kya kar raha tha, nupur jaise volcano, ko apne bas me kar raha tha,

mayank , tujhe jaan pyari hai, ki, nahi,

agar teri jaan nahi raahegi to, nupur pyar kisse karegi,

nupur pyar nahi karegi to tuu jiyega kaise

confused by his own words, he walks away in a irritated maner

, otside college

samrat distribute, sum roses to the farewell students, and says,

babes, college ke bahar jate hi, mera bike tumhare, har rah par khada hoga,

ok, the girls shy,

and now, gunjan cums,

in a sweet style, wid her dupatta,

flying,and and sammmy, ohh lala,

wid his basketball, mesmerized by the look,s and wen gunji comes,

he moves closer to hier, more closer, more closer, and says, gunjan, tumare, tumhare, baal, tumahre baal, me mujhe, kide dikh rahe hai, gunjan shouts out in freak,

oh ah0. oh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

and the whole excel college,

hil gya,

and sammy just cudn't stop laughing,

hahahahahhahahaha, par gunji chali gayi, apr uska bracelet, choot gaya,a nd sammy ne usko apne paas rakh liya,

next one poori or me

she's not here so mostli, me

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

THT WAS amazinggggg part i love it

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

wow aku.... nice updates.... luvd every1's entry......

@all: ppl... pl. 4give me.... as am moving 2 india in 3 days and cozof d packing confusion i cant update 4 a few dayz.... sry ppl... akanksha wil update.... and then i wil take over a few updates..... SRY....