FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 101

Originally posted by: sejusej

awesome part!!! but update nxt pare, soon, plz...
hye plz PM me, whenever you update your nxt part....

Originally posted by: crystal angel

omg mimz..finally 👏👏👏.....m sooo proud of u....😆😆😆

LOL!!!! Thank you babes, I'm glad someone is proud of me 😆

...neway bful part hon.....gunjan luvs him soooo much....n sam has 2 figure out soon y gunjan's words hurt him so much.....i mean he shudn't care ryt????😉

Exactly 😉 why does he care so much? Why does Gunjan matter? She's "nobody" right? *wink wink nudge nudge* lol 😆

...n i felt sooo sad 4 sam wen he said dat gunjan has everything coz she has a family...poor sam... 😭...update soon dear...waitin....gr8 work....cheers gunjan

Aweeehhh!!! Problems will be sorted in the last part. Samrat will be loved by EVERYONE! And I can guarantee that 😉 he'll surprise all of you!

Originally posted by: Asthuox

*Knock * Knock*

Who's there? 😲

Guess who? 😆

Im bad at this 🤣 just tell me! 😆

*Pokes head in*

Hey,

*Holds ears*

Im so sorry for posting a VERY late comment! 🤗🤗

ASTHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!! 🤗 Shut up yaar! I should be saying sory, I'm replyig like... 2 weeks later 😆

*Reads the update again for the 60^th time *

OMG stop it 😕 you'll find all the mistakes 😆

Grandilicously Brilliant + Fantabulous + Wonderfully outstanding + Traffic + Fully of surprises on nearly KILLING my baby (full deadly glare} + Beautifully written + Emotion filled + Enjoyable + Perfect = Awesome update dude and Asthu running out of words to explain it

OHMYGAWDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My equation buddy strikes yet again!! I missed those equations SOO much! They always leave me smiling like a DOOF, seriously 😆 you have GOT to stop it, I'm damn serious!

btw, off topic, but do you watch Degrassi? OMG I'm in love with this one guy in it *drools* HAHHA

@ Samrat- you wrote his POV brilliantly like always. I LOVED the changing room wala scene between them. And aw he keeps thinking about her😍! *SIGHS*🤗

Aweeeh, I'm so glad you liked it! 🤗and no I didn't, stop being so nice Asthuu, I am in DESPERATE need of criticism.... but Im GLAD you liked the changing room scene, I hope it didn't come across as a filler part 😕

@ Gunjan- you expressed her state of mind so awesomely. Great dude! And LOL Nupur is so funny😆😳 reminds me of that phone convo scene between Sajan. When samrat told gunjan to say yellowchaddi if she gets nervous for the talent parade. 🤣 🤣

OMG I don't remember that 😕He actually said that? 🤣🤣 AAGHHH! I had a feeling the underwear scene had something to do with the show, I guess I added it in subconciously 🤣 I need to go watch that scene again 😆

Aw gunjan afraid to that she will imagine Sam in his underwear 🤣 🤣 🤣

LOL 🤣🤣 can you imagine? 🤣Oh wait...don't...HAHAH🤣

@ Play scenes. Beautifully written. I love the way you have kept samrat away from his character in the sense on how he keeps remembering the situations between the real and reel 👏😳 scenes like the one where he has to laugh where his friends make fun about khushi 😲 (in the play) but he doesn't and he remembers the time benji pointed at gunjan to take her to the spring dance as a joke and samrat laughed!

Thank youuu Asthuu! I'm so glad you noticed that! I'm trying to balance the two characters of Anmol and Samrat... by keeping them apart, like the example you gave, and by keeping them as one too. I want Anmol's character to be seen through Samrat's eyes, because Anmol is basically a repleca of him. I want him to realize the mistakes he made, but make up for them through Anmol's character.

I hope I didn't confuse you there 😕😆

@ You nearly killing my baby! *Glares*! He could of dead you no if gunjan the saviour didn't rescue him. 🤗🤗

Hahah sowieee *holds ears* no more life threatening parts, promise 😆 I've actually been watching a lot of tragic ending movies and I needed to add a little action into the part before I wrapped it up 😛

@ Aw, samrat noticing how gunjan is really concerned for him 😳😳 and dia not even releasing one tear, *sighs* the girl is probably worried her maraca will smudge.

Imma use the phrase from your FF "plastic face" <<I totally LOVE that! And sadly, there are people like her in the world.

@Motives. You penned this down so wonderfully! This scene symbolised many things 😃! Samrat putting his own feelings and emotions in the dialogues and speaking his heart out to gunjan and gunjan feeling his pain but trying to avoid it thinking there isn't any chance between them. Simply fantastic! 👏 😳

Aweeh thank you babes! 😳 I am SOOO glad you analyzed all that in just that part! Makes me feel SOOOO good 😃

@ Mayur! Oh my, these two! Haha 🤣 , I liked there dialogue checking. Mayank trying to convince her the dialogues are fine, well for him of course, he has after all cut the filmy ones out *blinks* no respect for filmy things. Then the phone wale bhaiya. "You mean photographer" ROFL! 🤣
🤣🤣 HAHAHAH!! I'm so glad you liked their little part(s) hahahhahaa!!! OMG I have the PERFECT idea for these two in the last prt! Let's just say that Nupur's filmy dialogues won't go to waste 😉😆
Aw, her papa is here. Samrat must be missing his parent's no. *sends him a big bear hug*🤗

He is But you won't be feeling too sorry for him, don't worry 😉😊

@ Samrat little freezing on his track. Could it be his parents are here for him! 😲

Im not telling you!!! *lips are sealed*

Update soon, me going to post mine to. And read your pm, because at a certain time today you have to pm me back, it's bout your being first record 😆😳!

Love youuu! 🤗

LOL 🤣 I thnk I replied already 😆 Love you tooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: xxsugasweetxx

U-P-D-A-T-E

Pretty Please?

(With Imran on top?) 🤣


Come On Me misses it 😆


I wont post my one shot until you UPDATE! 🤣


Fine you asked for it. Me & Beeneesh are Gonna spam your Inbox 😡 🤣

Originally posted by: luv_sweetz

it's awsome..................but one question......WHEN WILL U UPDATE???

Originally posted by: Nikdis2468

plzzz.z....update soon...i been waiting since like 4eva...i really love ur fanfic...pllzzzz...update soon.... :((((((...pretty plzzzzzz!!!

Originally posted by: shockalot

*Cries continuously for hours and hours*

yehhhhhh kabbb update hogaaa?😳

it's like hit the CLIMAX CLIMAX and i neeeeeeeeed to read what happenss😳

Originally posted by: shockalot

STUPAANNNNNNNNNNDOUSSS!!!! 👍🏼😳🤣 Amarjeet ZINDABAAAAD!