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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
hey it ws grt yaar ar ws like her shadow alwys been around her aw thts so sweeeet nd ridz nd raj goshh tht raj again lagta hai use marne ka bahut shaunk hai well if really he wnts to die thn whtelse we cn do let him die oh god ar ws so scard his ridz ws nt der wth him nd raj god knows kaha leke chala gaya lts see wht gonna happen nxt cont soooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry for the late comment!! But mindbliwing part sweety!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEYY FREDS,
I WILL END THIS FF SOON
BCOZ I AM GETTING VERY LESS COMMENTS

AFTER SAME MORE PARTS

THANK U ALL OF U FOR UR COMMENT

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Posted: 16 years ago
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no ridz plz dnt do this ur ff is really tooo gd yaar dnt end it
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Part 116


Armaan took his car nd went to andhairi where raaj live he was very worried about ridz. Raaj ager tumnay ridz ko chowa bhi na tu main tumhian zinda nahi chorun ga. Aur yeh ridhima is ko kia ho gaya tha aik baar mujh say poochti to sahi kay tum nay yeh latter kiyun likh ahai pagal khud itni innocent hai us ko lagtahai sab utnay hi masoomhain.

Scene shifted to raaj's house.

Ridz: was really scared .

Ridz: raaj tumhain kia lagtahai mujhay koi dhoond nahi apyay ga. Sab ko tumharay ghar kay baray main pata hai. Abhi daikha mujhay bachnay a jayain gay.

Raaj: sab ko pata ha imager tumharay us ashik ko nahi o sorry tumharay is so called dodst ko nahi aur Ms Ridhima ager wo yahana a bhi gaya na tu main ussay zinda wapis nahi janay dun ga.

Ridz was trembling.raaj tum aysa kuch nahi karo gay plz raaj armaan ko pehlay hi mairi wajah say buhat dard day chukkay ho tum.

Raaj: abhi to mainay ussay kkuch bhi nahi kaha ridhi.

Ridz started praying plz God plz Armana yahanana yay werna pata nahi raaj kia karay ga us kay sath .

raaj ruthlessly pulled her out of the car and dragged her inside..he made her sit on the sofa and started shouting and yelling. they heard a car stopped right outside raj's house.
raj: ab yeh koun hain?

and he went to open the door.
raj: bas tumhari hi kami thi
armaan: riddhima kahan hain?
raj: tumhe usse kya matlab

riddhima heard this heated argument and realized it was armaan
she went rushing to the door pushing raj away straight into armaan so that her head was burried in his chest.
tears were rolling down cheeks, armaan protectidly wrapped her in his arms

armaan (to raj): abbe saale tu itna geera hua insaan hain ki ek ladki ke sath aaisa karega...tune dosti ka majak udaya ...tum sachi dosti kabhi samjh hi nahi sakte...tum riddhima ki dosti ke layak hi nahi ho...

riddhima was looking lovingly at armaan while he was saying this
raj moved towards armaan and clutched his collar

raj: tum kitna jaante ho riddhima ko main isse bachpan se jaanta hu aur waise tu apne kaam se kaam rakh...aur hamare life main intefere karne ki koshish mat kar
riddhima: tumhara mere par koi hakk nahi hain hain aur mujhe lagta hain ki tum mujhe itne saalo main kabhi pehchan hi nahi paye tumse kahi jyaada toh mujhe armaan jaanta hain ...aur woh mujhe kabhi hurt nahi karega..
raj: main tumhe samjha nahi paya ya tum mujhe samjh nahi payi? tumne itne aalo main pahchana nahi ki main tumse pyaar karta hu
riddhima: tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya aur mujhe sharm aati hain ki maine tumhe kabhi apna dost mana

then riddhima looked at armaan and while holding his hands said
riddhima: chalo armaan ..issne ab baat karne ka koi fayada nahi hain

raj was standing helplessly watching riddhima walking out of his...for the first time in his life he felt defeated and now he never wanted to see riddhima's face..he hated her ...

raaj(shouting)-riddhima............if i cant have u no one will also......
saying this he started to come closer to riddhima.riddhima clutched on to armaan more tightly.........raaj came and stood right in front of riddhima.........he caught her hand and tried to pull her away from armaan.
r-raaj chodo mera haath...........raaj plz.
raaj-nahi riddhima...........tum sirf meri ho...........i will kill anyone who tries to come closer to u.
raaj fianlly managed to get her away from armaan and started forcefully taking her back to the house.
a-raaj..........riddhima ko chod do.
raaj-nahi chodonga ...........ju karna hai kar le.
a-mein akhri baar bol raha hoon.........riddhima ko chod do.


Part 117


raaj just turns back and gives a wicked smile.armaan goes to raaj and places a hand on his shoulder.raaj turns around and is abt to punch armaan when armaan catches his hand and in one swift movement breaks his elbow joint.raaj faints on the spot.riddhima is really scared this time.she had never seen armaan so furious.she had never thought that armaan could do smthing like this,but she knows that he is not a bad person.he did this only to save her.her body is exhausted with all the tension and happenings of that morning that she also faints.armaan picks her up in his arms and takes her to his car.
a-riddhima aankhen kholo plz utho riddhima.
ridz slowly opens her eyes and asks armaan
r-armaan tumne raaj ko itni buri rarah kyun mara......agar use kuch..agar tumhe kuch.
armaan puts his finger on her lips.
a-shhhh..........riddhima maine jo bhi kiya woh galat nahi hai.......jo insaan kisi ladki ki respect nahi karta woh yehi deserve karta hai........agar usne kisi aur ke saath bhi yehi kiya hota toh mein tab bhi aaise hi react karta.
riddhiam realises that armaan is not only brave but also very good at heart.before she can say anything armaan continues......
a-aur vaise bhi tumhare samne mujhe kuch nahi dikhta.....



Part-118


ridz statted blushing.

ridz: kiyun armaan mairay liyay tum nay apni jaan khatray main kiyun dali?

pata jab raaj nay mujhya kaha kay wo tumhain nahi choray ga tu mainay kitni dua ki thi kay tum yahaan na ao aur ager yeh goli tumhian lag jati tu.

ar: tu bhi main tumhian sahi salamat ghar lay kay jata kiyun kay mainay promise kai tha anji say.

ridz: di say promise kia tha is liyay tum nay mujhay bachaya?

ar: nahi ridhima tum sooch bhi nahi saqti kay sara raasta mainay kaisay guzara hai terhana terhana kay khayaal a rahay thay kay ager raaj tumharay sath kuch bura kar daita tu.....

ridz: tu kai hota armaan...?

ar hold her face in his palms . tu main us ki jana lay laita bas aur kuch nahi . nahi daikh saqta main kisi ko tumhain hath lagatay hoyay.

they lost in each other's eyes armaan was about to kiss her when he got a call.

Ar: hello anji

Anji: hello armaan is every thing ok ridzi kahana hai plz batao wo theikhaina?

Ar: anji relax every thing is f9 now ridz mairay sath hai nd she is perfectly f9 now.

Anji: o thanks God. Armaan thank u so much plz ussay lay kay jaldi say ajao.

Ar: ok anji we r cuming.

Ar: ridz tum theik hona ?

Ridz: hana armaan I am f9 chalin ab?

Ar: whispered haan ab tu chalna hi ho ga .

They were silent . then Armana break the silence.

Ar: waisay basket tum nay aik baar bhi nahi poocha kay armaan tum nay yeh letter mujhay likha hai . kiyun likha hai tum kia baat karma cahtay ho .bas chal pari.

Ridz got embarrassed. Wo Armaan mujhay laga tumhian koi important bata karni ho gi.

Ar: aysi kia bata mujhay karni ho gi kay main tumian aysay bulaoon ga?

Ridz: whispered ban tu aysay raha hai jaisay such main mujh sya koi bata karma hi nahi cahta hai ., mujhya jaisay pata nahi hai na.

Ar: kia kaha tum nay?

Ridz: a haan kuch nahi galti ho gayi mujh say samajhnay main ab kia karun.

Ar: was really enjoying the whole situation actually woi cahta tha kay ridz kuch clue day us ko janta to wo tha kay ridz us ko piyaar karti ha imager bas sunna cahta tha.

Aur ridz cahti thikay armaan khud kahay.


Part-119
The current married track.


Recap: Armaan had a bet dat he can handle her princes emaan.

Ar: wow maiir princesnay apna milk finish kar laic halo ab hum aysa kartay hain kay khailtayhain papa aap ko clown ban kay dikhayin gay.

Ridz: papa ko bannay ki kia zarorat hai?

Ar: mrs malik apa nay kuch kaha kia?

Ridz: husband main tobas yehkeh rahi thi kay bachay parents say kia kia karwatay hain na. emaan kay papa nay kabhi yeh sab mairay liyay tu kia nahi.

Ar: emaan kay papa nay us ki mama kay liyay jitney papar bailey hain yeh wohi jantay hain. Pata beta apa ki mama itna bhao khati thein kay kia baton. Yehtu main tha jis nay in say shadi kar li warna yeh ab tak kunwari hoti.

Ridz: armaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnn I'll kill u. she ran toward armaan nd sliped nd closed her eyes with fear.

Armaan hold her in his arms. She was so close to Armaan dat he can listen her heart beat. Ridz caught armaan's shirt collar very tightly.

Ar: biwi gala dabanay ka irada hai kia?

Ridz just opened her eyes nd lovingly looked at armaan.

Ar: aysay thori girnay daita tumhain kia laga mairay samnay main tumhian choot lagnay dun ga.

Ridz: aur abhi aap kia farma rahaythay kuch dair pehlay apni beeti kay samnay.

Ar: yaar samjha karo beti pay kuch impression bhi tu banana hai na.

It was 2 pm armaan was had a clown getup nd playing with his doll emaan. He was making faces nd emaan was laughning at her fullest. Not only emaan but ridz nd arav was also enjoying a lot. Ridz took some g8 pics of her hubby with her kids.

Ridz: armaan aap shayad bhool rahayhain aap ko apnibeeti ko bath bhi daina hai.

Ar: hana to us main kiap rob hai main abhi day dun ga. Papa kay sath bath lay gi mairi beeti.

Then Armana took her to wash room nd when he droped some watter on emaan she started crying.armana was luking confused. Kia hoa mairay beetay ko?

Even ridz was listening dis 4m outside.

Ridz: Armaan kia hoa?

Ar: pata nahi basket mainay is pay jaisay hi pani dala yeh roonay lagi I don't know what to do.

Ridz: daikho pani dhanda to nahi hai na.

Ar: mujhay to nahi laga tum khud akay daih lo.

When she went in Armana was in towel.she took eman 4m him .

Ridz: maan jayain dr armaan kay yeh kaam aap kay bas ka nahi hai.

Armaan hold her 4m waist acha to yeh kaam to mairay bas ka hai na.

Ridz: konsa kaam?

Ar: tumhian piyara karnay ka aur konsa.

Ridz: Armaan kuch sharam karo tumhari beeti pass hai daikgh rahi hai sab kuch.

Ar: mrs jis nay ki sharam us kay phootay karam. Ager main sharam karta reh jata na tu aaj aap mairay sath na hoti.

Ridz: haan yaad hai mujhay sab kuch. Raaj kay janay kay baad jis terhan tum nay mujhay support kia tha aur yaad hai Armana jab main lonavla ja rahi thi to tum nay mujhay kia kaha tha?


part-120
flash back


Recap: raaj kidnapped ridz nd armaan saved her.

It was 4pm when they came back

ridz nd Armana entered in the hospital anji was waiting very anxiously.

Anji hugged ridz. Tu theik to hai na ridz?

Ridz: hana di main bilkul theik hun. Thanks to Armaan

Anji: thanks armaan tum nay mairi behan ki har baar help ki hai thank u very much.

Ar: o cumon anji yeh mairi farz tha.
Anji: acha armaan tum araam kari is say pehlay kay tumhian koi daikhay yahan akharay hoay aur sawaal karay.

Ar: hana main chalta hun.

Anji ridz tu mairay sath chal.

Ridz who want to talk to Armaan was luking helpless. Chalain di.

It was 6 pm. Shashank came in Armaan's room. Armaan got up.

Ar: sir aap?

Shashank: laitay rahyay dr armaan main aapka checkup karnay ayatha h ru feeling now?

Ar: sir I am feeling mush better now infact main kal say duty join karn acahta hun.

Shashank: gud I saw ur reports ur recovered very quickly.

Armaan looked at ridz nd thought sir kisi ki dua ka shayad asar hai.

Shashank: even I want u to join ur duties tomorrow. Nd dr armaan I came here to thank u. jo kuch aaj hoa mairi beeti kay sath ager apa na hotay to patanahi kia hota I am proud of u dr armaan . mujhay buhat khushi haikay aap jaisa dost mairi beeti ko mila hai.

Ar looked at ridz who was already looking at armaan.

Ar: sir aap plz mujhay shirminda na karain yeh maira farz tha mainay jo kia .

Next day it was 9am all interns were present to get their duties 4m keerti.

Keerti: Gud morning interns. Aaj main apa ko duties nahi dun gi.

All interns looked at each other they looked Puzzled.

Abhi aap logoon ki doc Shashank kay sath meeting hai bas wo atay hi hun gay.

Shashank came there.

Shashank: gud morning interns.well doc keerti aap nay inko bata dia hoga kay aaj ki meeting kis liyay hai.

Keerti: nahi sir mainay nahi bataya hia bas aap ka wait kar rahay thay apa khud bata dijiyay.


Part-121


Shashank: ok gud. So interns aysa hai kay WHO ki team India main ayi hai aaj kal aur wo hospitals kay sath mil kay awareness programmes run kar rahay hain.mian buhat khsushi kay sath aap ko yeh bata raha hai kay sanjeevani bhi un hospitals main say aik hai.

All interns were looking very happy they congratulate keerti nd shashank.

Shashank: thank u so much interns aap ko bhi buhat mubarik ho akhir aap bhi sanjeevani ka aik important hissa hain.. so now I am cuming to the reasoin of meeting.

Shashank: hum nay aik team WHO ki team kay sath lonavala bhaijni hai aur mainay aur aap kay senior doctors nay mil kay aik team banayi hai . aysa nahi hai kay jin ka naam is team main nahi hai wo capable doc nahi hain plz aysa mat samjhiyay ga humain hospitals main bhi apa ki zarorat hai so sab ko nahi bhaija ja saqta so no hard feeling jo naho jar raha.

Shashank: janay wali team ka naam aap ko abhi kuch dair baad doc kerti bata dain gi n I wish dat team wish u all the best.

All interns: thanks u sir.

Shashank leave the place.

Scene shifted to caferia.

Anji: pata nahi kis ka naam aya ho ga main to zaroor jana cahti hun.

Atul: anji tum fiqar na karo tum itni capable doc ho tum say acha koi aur thori hai yahaan tumhara naam sab say pehlay ho ga.

Muski: oey tera kia matlba hai aik bas anji hi capable hai aur koi nahi.actually she was pulling atul's led she know he loves her a lot.

Atul: nahi Muskaan maira yeh matlab nahi that um mujhay galat may samjho main bas yeh keh raha tha key tum loog to achay ho hi anji thora sab say ziyada achi hai bas.

Rahul: array yaar kiyun to is ko safayi day raha hai chill.

Armaan nd ridz was sitting quite they were lost in their thoughts.

Ar: in his thoughts pata nahi kis kis ka naam hai us team main ager ridz ka hoa aur maira nahi tooooooooooo.

Ridz: pata nahi armaan bhi jar raha hai ya nahi us team main.



Part-122


It was 10 am keerti called all the interns in her room.

Keerti: so interns r u all ready. Let me tell u the names of the team members.

Keerti: doc raul aap ja rahay hain.doc anji aap doc ridhima nd doc atul. Yeh 4 ki team hai congrats to u all. Aur haan jo nahi ja rahay hain plz do get disappointed doc armaan ki tabiyat abhi abhi theikhoi hai aur doc Muskaan ka hospital main jo patient hai he is very serious so I don't theink so inko us case ko choor kay jana cahyay . aur haan aap sabhi ko 1 hour main nikalna hai.

Keerti leave the place.

All interns who were going were luking so happy except ridz nd armaan they were not willing to leave each other.

Anji: noticed dis nd asked what happened to u ridzi tu khus nahi hai hum dono sath main ja rahay hain nd it's a g8 opportunity 4 us.

Ridz was unhappy coz Armaan was not going. Nahi di aysi koi bata nahi hai bas main wo.

Atul interrupted daikha naji mainay tumhain kah atha na kay tum zaroor jao gi.

Anji thanks aur tum bhi to ja rahay ho.

Atul: haan main aur tum sath sath kitna maza ayyaga na.

Anji: atul plz hum wahaan mazaa karnay nahi kaam karnay ja rahayh ain nd now guyz we have to pack our luggage.

Scene shifted to lockerroom.

Atul: array armaan mairay bhai tu pata nahi mujhay miss karay gay a nah imager main tujhay wahana buhat miss karun ga kitna maza ata na hum sab sath hotay.

Ar wasn't listening. He was luking very disturbed.

Rahul: array Armaan tujhay kia hoa hai tu kiyun itna sad hai.

Atul: I know maira bhai mujh say door nahi reh saqta na Armana tu mujhay miss karay ga na.

Ar: looked at him he was luking very restless. Main chalta hun champ.

Atul: array tu kahaan ja raha hai mujhay bye bhi nahi kahay ga .

Ar: nahi champ.

Ridz in the corner quietly listening their conversation she was also very sad. All were luking surprised nd asked why…………………..


Ar: kiyun kay champ.

Kisis ko alvida kehna buhat takleef daita hai

Ridz: looked up at armaan with tears in her eyes.

Atul: array wah tu poetry suna raha hai suna na plz

. kisi ko alvida kehna buhat takleef daita hai

umeed toot jati hai

yaqeen pay bayaqeeni ki kuhar kuch aysay charhti hai

dikhayi kuch nahi daita

sujhai kuch nahi daita

gumaan bas aysay hota hai kay jaisay mil na payain gay

yeh gehray zakham furkat kay kay jaisay sil na payain gay

mager aysa na ho ya rub

armaan came near to ridz nd looked her

mager aysa na ho ya rub

duain maan laita hai

diloon ko jaan laita hai

tu koi moujza kar day

tu aysa kar bhi saqta hai

mairay hathoon ki janib daikh ( he looked at his hands)

inhian tu bhar bhi saqta hai

tujhay maloom hi kia hai

judai ka yeh ara

dil ko kaisay khoon karta hai

judai 2 pal ki ho tu koi dil ko behlayya

judai 4 pal ki ho tu koi khud ko behlayay

judai umer jaisi ho tu kia chara karay koi

kay aik milnay ki khuwaish main bhala kab tak jiyay koi

Tears were rolling down 4m ridz checks. Every 1 was listening as if they were in some trance.

mairay moula karam kar day

mairay moula arz sun lay

kisi ko ailvisa kehna buhat takleef daita hai.

Ridz leave the place.



Part-123
current married track

Recap: ridz asking armaan, tumhain yaadhai tum nay kia kaha tha jab hum lonavala kay liyya nikal rahay thay.

Ridz: armaan I just love ur poem aur jab tum nay maira pass akay kahatha aik pal ko dil kia tha bhaag kay tumharay seenay main chup jaoon. Kisi ko na daikhon kisi ki parwah na karun.

Ar: hum issi liyay aap mairi poem sunnay kay baad bahir chali gayi thien aur main samjha patanahi kai hoa hai.

Ridz: yehi to masla tha armaan humaray stah kay hum aik dosray say itna piyaar karnay kay bawajood aik dosray ko keh nahi pa rahay thay.

Ar: aur yaad hai jab tumharay janay wact mainay tumhara hath pakra tha…………………

Flash back track.

Every 1 was leaving 4 lonavala except armaan nd Muskaan.

Anji: chal ridzi dair ho rahi hai atul is waiting 4 us. Ok Armana bye tc see ya.

Armaan was luking very sad standing in the corner nd luking down.

Ridz was luking at him nd when she was leaving the locker room armaan hold her hand.

Ridz turned around.

Ar: mat jao basket. Plz mat jao.

Ridz: kiyun?

Ar: tumhain nahi pata kiyun?

Ridz: thought in his mind janti hun armaan main tumharay moun say aik baar sunna cahti hunt um aik baar kaho gay to main nahi jaoon gi aik baar keh do plz.

Ridz: nahi mujhay kia pata tum keh rahay ho tumhian pata ho.


Ar: thought in his mind to theik hai ridz ager tum mairay bagair reh saqti ho to main bhi reh saqta hun.

Ar: wo kia hai na basket main tang kis ko karun ga.

Ridz: kiaaaaaaaaaa is liyay tum mujhay rook rahay thay?

Ar: haan tumhain kia laga?

Ridz: kuchnahi maira hath choro I am getting late.

Nd ridz left him. Armaan went outside but she sat in the car nd they leave 4 lonavala.



Part-124



armaan and muskaan went back inside the hospital...........armaan went to the general ward where nana was admitted.
n-hi appple.........kya hua......itna dukhi kyun lag raha hai.
a-kuch nahi nana............aap theek ho na.
n-haan mujhe kya hona hai...........vaise woh keerti bai kahan hai aaj kal.
a-woh dr keerti..........pata nahi yaar kahan hai.
n-aye apple kya hua...........itna bujha hua kyun hai.
a-woh riddhima.............woh na
n-kaun woh lambe kaale baalon wali..........
armaan smiles a litttle.
n-kyun aaple.........kuch uch hota hai kya.
armaan unknowingly says"haan"
n-phasa.............beta usko dekha hai.....hoor pari hai.....aur tu
a-kyun mujhmein kya burai hai.
n-nahi dikhne mein toh theek thaak hai...........bas aakal ka thoda kaccha hai.
a-matlab.
n-matlab...........usee patane ke raastey bhulkar tu yahan mooh latka kar baith ahai.
a-samajh nahi aa raha nana mein kya karoon.
n-bas kuch aaisa intezam kar ki tu uske pass chala ja .
armaan thinks for sometime ..............he finally comes up with a brilliant plan.
IN THE CAR
at-anjali r u ok........tumhe kuch cahiye toh nahi.
an-no thanks atul....i am fine.
r-riddhima ji............aap itni chup chap kyun hain.....is everything alright.
ri-haan sab theek hai............mein toh bas kuch soc rahi thi.
before anyone could ask her anything rahuls mobile rang.the call was from our very own armaan.
r-hi armaan.
a-arey dheer bol.......accha sun.......tujhe yaha vaipas aana hoga.
r-kyun.
a-wohhhhhhhhhhhh.........tere liye ek parcel aaya hai jispe likha hai"strict and confidential".....aur muskaan usee kholne ki zidd kar rahi hai.
r-accha.......uss zangali billi ki toh..........accha sun mein kuch bhi karke vahan aa jaonga........magar yahan.
a-tu uski chinta mat kar...........dr keerti mujhe bhej dengi agar tu vaipas aa gaya.......aur sun vahan kisi ko kuch mat batana...woh anjali na muskaan ko sab bata degi varna.
after talking to armaan rahul remained silent for smtime.........he was thinking"pata nahi kya aaya hoga uss parcel mein..........mujhe mumbai jana hoga varna woh jungali billi ka kuch bharosa nahi hai...........woh kisi bhi waqt mera parcel khol sakti hai"
ridz,atul,anjali were asking him abt the call.
ridz-kya hua rahul..........armaan ka phone thaa.
r-haaan riddhima...bas aaise hi.
ridz-kuch pooch raha tha kya...........batao na.
r-nahi kuch nahi.....bas hamare beech ki baat hai(rahul thinks why is riddhima getting so excited abt armaan's call)
they reach lonavala and spend th efirst day checking the patients.at night after having their food all 4 of them r in the girls room....suddenly rahul starts complaining abt stomach aches..........all of them get scared bcz rahul was usually a very strong boy...........but now he was lying on the bed screaming with pain...........they tried to check him but he had purposely eaten smthing which didnt suit him so he was certainly having sm difficulty.........anjali called up dr keerti.
an-hello ma'am..mein anjali bol rahi hoon.
k-boliye dr anjali.
an-woh ma'am rahul ko food poising ho gayi hai......he is not well at all.........he wont be able to work here properly...
k-oh no.........aap ek kaam kijeyi dr rahul ko driver ke saath gadi mein vaipas bhej deejiye aur mein yahan se koi aur dr bhej deti hoon.
an-ok ma'am.
anjali tells evrything to the rest of the gang and they send rahul back.
its late at night but riddhima and anjali havent been able to sleep.......they have so many things to say to each other...........its been a long time since the sisters havent spoken to each other properly.
r-di........aapko kaise pata chala tha ki mujhe raaj le gaya tha.
a-jab mein ward mein ja rahi thi toh armaan locker room se kapde change kakre jaldi ja raha tha...........i asked him ki woh apne bed ke bahar ky akar raha hai..he told me.
r-i dont understand ki raaj aaisa kaise kar sakta hai.......woh toh mera best friend hua karta tha.
a-kai logon ke baare mein humein baad mein pata chalta hai ridzii..........ab dekho na tum armaan se kitna ladti thi pehle.....tumne kya kabhi humne bhi nahi socha tha ki woh itna accha insaan niklega.
r-haan di............i dont know how to thank him enough.......agar woh nahi hota toh.
a-i know baby sister........dad and me r so thankful to him.......he has been a true friend.
r-sach mein di............mujhe itna bura lag raha tha usee aaise chod kar aana.
a-par ridzz tujhe kyun bura lag raha tha.......yeh toh hamari job hai.
r-hain hain di......mera matlab tha ki mein usee theek se thank u bhi nahi bol payi aur yahan aa gayi.
a-oh..........koi baat nahi jab milegi toh bol dena.
both of them then go ot sleep.early next day riddhima gets up and goes to the lake near the orphanage.......she loved doing this .......she loved the water and bathing in it........wearing her night suit only she slipped into the water...it felt so refreshing.she was bzy enjoying herself that she dint notice that a car had stopped near the orphanage gate and smone was comin out of it and coming closer to her............


Part-125


he stopped just behind a bush and stared away at the beauty infront of him.the way she was playing with water,her skin was glowing under the sun her hair was glistening with water,she was abt to come out of the lake when her foot slipped and she was abt to fall,she closed her eyes not wanting to feel the impact just when she felt an a strong hold on hershe was held at the waist by two strong hands..there was smthing very familiar abt the touch,she opened her eyes to see who it was.....
r-armaan!!!!!!!
a-haan basket mein.(he kept smiling and looking at her)
r-tum yahan kya kar rahe ho
a-tumhe girne se bacha raha hoon.
ridz looked at his hands wraped around her waist and started blushing.she tried to get free but that made her slip further and armaan holding her even closer.she was mere inches away from him.both of them were staring at each other when they heard smone screaming at them.they looked around to see who it was........it was our very own gappu.
g-arey aap log kya kar rahe hain.
armaan riddhima get away from each other.
a-kuch nahi gappu.......tumhari riddhima didi gir rahi thi toh maine unhe pakad liya.
g-accha........mujhe toh kuch aur hi laga tha.
r-tum bahut pictures dekhte ho........jao yahan se
gappu goes from there.armaan riddhima look at each other and start walking toward the cottage.as riddhima starts going back into her room armaan stops her.
a-riddhima........mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.
riddhima lowers her gaze...
r-armaan woh mein bhi........
as she was abt to speak anjali comes out and finds armaan standing at the door with her sister all wet.
an-ridhima yeh kya hua.tum kahan gayi thi.
r- di woh main lake par gayi thi.
an-accha toh tum lake par gayi thi........riddhima tum bhi na..bata kar toh jati....mein itna pareshan ho gayi thi.armaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho......oh to tum woh doctor ho jise dr keerti ne bheja hai.

Armaan : haan Anji
he was really happy to be here. Riddhima was happy to.

At night:
Armaan couldn't go to sleep and was roaming outside, and neither could Riddhima sleep, so she deciced to go for a stroll.
Riddhima saw Armaan, she went to him. He noticed her approaching him, he went near her,

Riddhima: tum, itni raat ko, yahaan, kya kar rahe ho?

Armaan: Shhh..(keeping a finger on her mouth), kuch mat kaho..

He then slid his arm around her waist and put her hand on his shoulder and one hand of hers clasped in his hands, they danced under the stars.



Part-126


riddhima and armaan kept on staring at each other lost in each others thoughts...
r-(omg ,mujhe yeh kya ho raha hai.......mein armaan mein kyun khoti ja rahi hoon........uski baatein mujhe kas se acchi lagne lagi hain.......why dont i find him as irritating as i used to b4...........why is he so nice to me now........mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha.........plz help me)
on the other hand armaan was thinking abt riddhima.
a-(why dint i notice b4 that riddhima is so beautiful............she is so pure and pretty.......she is so cute...........ridz un ladkiyon jaisi bilkul nah hai jinhe mein ab tak date karta aa raha hoon...........she is so innocent............i just love her)
r-tumne kuch kaha.
a-woh woh main.............kuch nahi.(shit why cant i tell her what i feel..........mera mooh kyun sookh raha hai..........armaan champ jaise behave mat kar............tu armaan hai.....armaan mallik............u can do it)
a-riddhiam woh main tumse kuch..........
just then there is a scream from riddhimas room...........its anjali..........she has seen a lizard on teh floor and starts screaming...........armaan riddhima go inside the room to find her on her bed in a terrified state.........when riddhima sees the lizard even she starts screaming and jumps into armaans arms.........he is puzzled looking at teh gupta sisters.
a-what is wrong with u 2....it is just a lizard.
an-r u mad..........look at its size.
a-anjali tum bed par ho..riddhima meri bahon mein hai.......and lizard zameen par hai............what can it possibly do 2 u.
r-armaan shutup..........plz uss lizard ko bhagao...........i cant sleep here otherwise.
Well then Armaan landed Ridzon the ground n then he finaly made the lizardgo out of the room.In such a chaos all Atul also woke up n came 2 see what's happening..
AR:kuch nahin yaar yeh ladkiyan bhi na ek lizard dekh kar tna cheekh rahi hain jaise ki inhone bhoot dekh liya ho.
AT:cha main toh dar hi gaya tha.Anjali tum theek toh ho na.
AN:haan Atul
AR:waise yaar champ ladkiyan sach mein bahut darpok hoti hain pata hai meri pehli girlfrnd bhi cockroaches se bahut darti thi
Ridzy's facewas now grown pale.
she was irritated by this dialogue of Armaan
RI:haan haan ladkiyon ka sabseacha experiencetoh tumhein hi hai na
AR:main toh bas ek eg. de raha tha.
RI:aise aur bhi kai egs honge na tumhare paas jaise ki tumhari 2nd g.f. ko kisi aur cheez se dar lagta hoga,3rd ko aur kisi cheez seprblm hogi.
Armaan was abt 2 speak wen Anjali interrupted in b/w.
AN:guys ab adhi raat ko tum donon phir se ladne mat lagna raat bahut ho chuki hai isliye tum log jao.
AT:haan chal Armaan
AR:gud night Anjali,gud night Riddhima
Riddhima was lukn at the other side.

Then the guys went 2 sleep.

Part-127


Next day in the morning
Armaan got up early though he was not used 2 this but woke as he knew that Ridz gets up early.He got upfresh hastily.
He came out of the room n found her dryn her wet hair with towel in the lobby.
She just tuk a bath.
She was not aware tht Armaan is at sum distance.Armaan was lukn at her with intense luv in his eyes admiring her beauty.He was having her side luk
ARbina make up k bhi yeh kitni khoobsurat lagti hai.apne dil ko kaise ambhaloon??)
Ridz was murmering
RI ata nahin kya samajhta hai apne aap komeri pehli g.f. ko cockroach se dar lagta hai.apni sabhi gf's yaad hain usey flirt kahin ka...

Armaan was smiln after listening this.He went upto her.He was facn her back.she was still dryn her hairs.She sensed that sumone is behind her as she turned back all her wet hairs hit his face.She wassurprised 2 see Armaan awake in the early morning.They were very close 2 each other.Armaan's face was wet bcox of her hairs.
RI:tum yahhan(she was getting nervous standing so close to him)
Armaan was just lukn at her n she was feeling awkward by his constant gaze.
Then he put a curl of her hair behind her ears n this brought nerves 2 her spines.She closed her eyes n then opened it.
AR:tumhein pata hai tum si duniya ki sabse khoosurat ladki ho.
His palm was still on her face
She blushed but then remembered the last night's incident n immediarely moved away 4m him.He was astonished.
RI:aur kitni ladkiyon se yeh baat keh chuke ho??
AR:Riddhima tum?yeh kya keh rahi ho?
RI:kyun maine kuch ghalat toh nahin kaha after all tumhari itni sari gf's hain toh sako aise hi kuch ghisey pitey dialogues se pataya hoga!!
she was still angry with him
AR:acha toh tum kal raat wali baat se naraz ho?tumhein jalan ho rahi hai.
RI:jalan aur mujhe.my foot. main kyun jalne lagi tumse??
AR:acha toh phir aaj naraz kyun ho
RI:main naraz hoon kyunki....

She was stucked didn't know what 2 ans n Armaan was enjoyn her troubled face
AR:haan kyunki
RI:kyunki tumne kal raat ko hum ladkiyon ko darpok kaha.
AR:toh kya ghalat kaha.
RI:ji nahin hum darpok nahin hain.
AR:haan tabhi ek choti si chipkali dekh kar meri bahon mein aagirin
Ridz now blushed n Armaan was smiln
AR:but don't worry jab bhi tumgirogi main tumhain sambhal loonga hamesha.
She was now lukn down n blushn greatly.
RI:woh muje kuch kaam hai tumhjari faltoo baton k liye mere paas waqt nahin hai
She ran 2 her room n Armaan was smiling
AR:toh dr. Riddhima aapko meri gf's se jalan hoti hai iska matlab ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho lekin kehne se darti ho
AT:kaun kisse darta hai Armaan
AR:k k koi nahin champ tu kab aaya
AT:bas abhi jab tu apne aap se baatein kar raha tha.
AR: acha chal fresh ho ja
Ridz was sitting on her bed She was in a dilemma abt her feelings.
RIkyun uske chootey hi mujhey kuch hota hai uski aankhein kyun dil karta hai ki unmein kho jaun yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai kahion main ussey pyaar tooh nahin hum sirf dost hain phir yeh sab kyun woh mujhe aise dkhta hai.kahin woh mere saath bhi flirt toh nain kar raha.haan uski toh aadat hai.lekin main uski baton mein nahin aaungi.lekin uski aankhein unmein mujhe apne liye pyaar nazar aata hai saccha main pagal ho jaungi.omg plz help me.
Just then Anjali called her 4 the breakfast.
At the breakfast table Armaan got a chance 2 sit next 2 Ridz.He held her hand n she was totally shocked.She whispered 2 him
RIlz mera haath chodo
He nodded his head in no
RIlz koi dekh lega.
AN:Ridzy kuch kha kyun nahin rahi
AR:haan Riddhima kuch khao na
RI:haan di bas kha rahi hoon.
RIslowly)plz chod do
AR:ek shart par pehle kaho ki tum ab mujhse naraz nahin ho
RI:acha theek hai nahin ab toh chod do plz kpi dekh lega.
Armaan was enjoyn the ball of emotions on her face.He didn't want 2 leave her hand but did it...


Part-128


Recap: all interns were having their break fast.

Its 9am in the morning all interns have to go with WHO team.

Anji: ok guyz lets get ready so dat we can leave with the team.

Atul: don't worry anji I'll get them ready.

Anji: thanks atul nd u better be ready on time.

Atul: don't worry anji I'll be ready in just 5 mins.

Anji: whatever……………………. Lets go ridz he iz just waisting our time.

Ar: cumon champ stop talking nd get ready.

They got ready in 15 min nd leave the place at 9:30 am with the WHO team.

Who team consists on 4 doctors. 2 ladies nd 2 men. 3 of them r foreiners nd 1 lady is Indian.

They all r sitting in the van atul sat with anji nd armaan with dat Indian lady . actually armaan wanted to sit with ridz but when he sat with her she changed her seat. He got angry at her. So he decided to tease her.

Ar: so miss whats' us good name.
Other lady: well my gud name is priya.

Ar: o priya what a gud name I just love dis name.

Priya: thanks u can have dis name.

Ar: o no no I wanna say it suits u .

Priya: thanks.

Ar: so miss priya where r u 4m.

Priya: I am 4m Kashmir.

Ar: o wowo what a coincident I just love dat place .

Priya: I know it's a beautiful place to visit.

Ar: I would love to cum to ur place.

Priya: ya sure anytime.

Ar looked back at ridz who was pretending as if she is not listening anything but she is angry wid armaan.

Ridz: look how flirty he is.he said to me in the morning plz don't be angry wid me. Nd now …………………… well I'll ignore him.

Ar was enjoying dis situation.

amongst the WHO team there was a very dashing ,smart italian guy who was continuously staring at riddhima........she was a true beauty in every sense........but she looked like some you dint not want to mess up with also...........but this guy had never turned down a challenge..........so andre(the guy)went up to riddhima and sat right next to her.
andre-hello there......i am andre.
r-hello.i am riddhima.
andre-ri-dd-hi-ma.....wow what a beautiful name.
r-thanks.
andre-well this part of ur country is really beautiful miss riddhima
r-ya that it is.
andre-would u show me around ...............i'd love to be shown around by u.
r-dr andre i would love to but........
andre-thats settled then.......we will go ltr.
before riddhima could say anything else he went back to his own seat.now riddhima was sitting all alone.she dint notice that armaan had listened to the whole conversation.he was really angry.he came and sat next to her.
r-tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..
a-kyun jab woh mr italy yahan baith sakta hai toh mein kyun nahi.
r-tum jao apni priya-priti ,jo bhi hai usse jakar baat karo na.
a-accha toh tumhe jalan ho rahi hai.
r-mein tumse kyun jalne lagi.
a-tumm aaj usee ghumane nahi lejaogi.
r-rok sako toh rok lo.
armaan think"ab toh tumhe dikhana padega riddhim aki armaan mallik kya hai"


Part-129


Current married track.

Ridz: tumian yaad hai na armaan tum nay us becharay andre kay sath kia kia tha?

Ar: array basket mainay kuch bhi nahi kia tha halaankay main karma buhat kuch cahta tha us gadhya kay sath.

Ridz: gadha ji nahi kitn ahansum tha aur us kay features daikhay thay kia tum nay kitnay sharp aur achay thay na?

Ar: achya my foot mil jayay na ab bhi kabhi to chorun ga nahi.

Ridz was enjoying armaan's reaction. Had hai armaan tum pata nahi us becharay say kiyun jaltay ho.

Ar: mrs aap us ki bayja tarafdari karna band karain.

Ridz: laughed qasam say armaan us wact bhi tum daikhnay walay thay jaisay aaj tum say bardasht nahi ho raha us din bhi nahi ho raha tha chalo aaj tu main tumhari biwi hun us wact to nahi thi na us kay sath aysa salook kia kay touba.

Ar: wo us say bhi buray salook ka haqdaar tha.

Ridz: job hi ho Armana yaad hai tum nay kia kia tha……………………..?

Flahs back track.

Armaan was still sitting with priya but keeping an eye on ridz nd andre. Andre turned back nd he was talking with ridhima about Indian culture.

Andre: can u tell me about the traditions and culture I just love ur culture.

Armaan wishpered abay mairay pass a na main batata hun us ko kia pochta hai.

Priya: did u say anything?

Ar: a haan nahi tu main tu bas yeh keh raha tha kay Indian culture kia hai yeh koi mujh say pochyay main sab janta hun is baray main.

Andre didn't notice dat armaan was conveying dat msg to him. He was still looking at ridz.

On the other hand ridz enjoying now this whole scnerio coz she understood armaan is having prob with arndre.

Ridz: ya ofcourse I can tell u anytime it would be my pleasure.

Ar: mujh sya tu itna hash kay kabhi baat nahi karti daikho ab is ki hasi band hi nahi ho rahi hai. Tu bach ja mujh say andre kay bachya main tujhay chorun ga nahi.


Part-130
flash back


they all reached to their destination it was a village they went to the medical camp already located in dat village nd announced in the village dat a team of doctors came to examine u ppl.

Priya nd ridz was busy in the ladies sections and the other guyz are busy wid the men.

It was 3 pm in the afternoon they had a break 4 lunch Andre came to rids nd asked is there any restaurant in dis village I wanna offer u lunch wid me.

Armaan was listening all this nd came forward ya we do have very gud restaurant here me nd dr priya are going u wanna join us.

Ridz wanted to interrupt put before dat Andre replied sure sure lets go I am very hungry actually.

Ridz: o u guyz carry sorry I can't join u guyz.

Ar wanted to ask her nd want her to be with him but andre said o plz rid..dhi..ma cum along us na i just love ur company.

Ar wishpered tumjhay yeh trip bholay ga nahi bachoo.

Andre: sorry did u say anything.

Ar: I am just saying u will enjoy in my company as well nd I am sure u will never forget dis trip.

Andre: thanks.

Ridz was sure dat armaan is going to play sum prank on Andre so she went along with them.

they went to a restaurant nearby and decided to order indian food.
a-andre u wanted to know about indian culture .......so this is the best way........we are known for our food.........would u like to try it.
andre-sure dr armaan..........i've naver had indian food before ........i would love to try it.
armaan then ordered around 4-5 vegetables all of them very spicy......he persobnally went to the chef and asked him to make the food very spicy .
the food came and all sat down to have it.
a-andre have some daal andre it is very dilicious.
andre-i will but why r u not having anything.
a-oh we will andre but u r our guest so u eat first.i hope u like it.
armaan then filled andres plate with all the spicy vegetables and was bzy enjoying the look on andres face when he was having his food.
andre-is indian food always so spicy.
a-ya.........even more at times.do u want me to order that.
andre-no.........no thanks armaan.......i have had enough.
a-no andre...........it is considered inauspicious in our country to leave food..........u have to finish all of it.
armaan made andre finish everything and by the time andre was thru he was sweating like a pig.he had never had anything so spicy in his life.
andre-riddhima could u plz get me water.
r-sure ...........just a second.
a-wait riddhima ............i will get it for him.
armaan went to get water for andre and mixed lexative in it(i.e jamalgota)
since andre was so thirsty he had th ewhole thing in one gulp........

Andre's mouth was now BURNING of those hot spices, he desperatley needed something sweet, or pure water. But with Armaan around, that was unlikely.
while gng back to the camp they had to stop the car after every 10 mins.andre was in a very bad state.he was made to sit in front with the driver and armaan was sitting at the back with riddhima in between him and preeti.riddhima knew that armaan must have done this.
r(lowering her voice)-armaan yeh sab tumne kiya hai na.
a-kya sab basket.
r-zayada bano mat.....tum jante ho mein kya keh rahi hoon.
a-nahi janta...batao na.
r-tumhi ne andre ko kuch mila ke diya na pani mein.isliye hamein har 10 minute mein rukna pad raha hai.
a-badi fikr hai tumhe andre ki.
r-armaan he is our guest.
a-guest hai toh bolo ki guest ki tarah rahe.
r-usne kiya kya hai.bechara woh toh......
a-bechara........abhi toh maine uske saath kuch bhi nahi kiya hai riddhima.agey dekhna mein kya karta hoon.
r-armaan agar tumne kuch kiya na.toh mein tumse baat nahi karongi.
a-vaise bhi toh tum uss andre se baat kar rahi thi.
r-yeh koi baat hui.......tum bhi toh uss preeti se baat kar rahe thee na.
a-mein toh bas aaise hi.
r-mein toh bas aaisehi kya.tum jo bhi karo sab theek aur agar mein kuch karon toh aaise behave karte ho jaisi ki pata nahi maine kya kar diya ho......dont talk to me now.
a-fine.
r-fine.



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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice parts do continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

Awesum part hun!

Aww dont close the FF...Its really cute!
Im sure ppl are just very busy with workload etc...U have a lot of fans for ur FF!
Keep writing hun!
-Marisha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
hey plz dont stop this ff
plz continue soon
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#69
hey atleast give the finishing to this ff by giving the endpart...............because the members who has commented will be disappoint with u dear
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hey ridss
that was awsome...
continue soon
and plz yaar dont end it
i love this ff
Love Reshma

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