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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice part do continue soon.
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hey gr8 work......lovely.....post next part soon
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hey it ws mindblowing yaar nd now arridz bcm friends thts grt nd raj wowwwwwwwwwwwww nd ridz bstfriends nd ar got jealous frm him hmmmmmmmmmmmmm but whts tht ridz nd raj ws tlking abt nd ar thinks tht abt their relationship hehehe pagal hai pura nd ar wht he ws hiding nd muski wo bhi hm kuch gadbad hai nd luvly full of passion nd so much purity in it lvd it totaly cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooooooooooooon
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PART 71


Next day in the hospital ridz was quite busy so she didn't notice that Armaan was not in the hospital.

She came in his room to that they can have coffee together. but when she entered she found Armana no where.

She asked Rahul: Rahul did u see Armaan.

Rahul: ya ridz she went out 4 some important work wid Muskaan.

Ridz: wid Muskaan n she whispered not again Armaan.

Rahul: did u say something.

Ridz: no nothing.

Rahul: ok me going for coffee u wanna join me.?

Ridz: no Rahul I am not in a mood just tell me if u see Armana anywhere.didi u ask Muskaan where is she going.

Rahul: no I didn't was it necessary?

Ridz: no it's not but since she is ur wife that's why I thought u must have n idea about her whereabouts.

Rahul: I trust her completely when u love sum1 then u have to trust her it's the core ingredient in any successful relationship.

Ridz: ya u r right but some times things just didn't work properly.

Rahul: whatever happens ridz we have to give our partner that confidence that we are wid them always all our lives.

Ridz: but Rahul when the circumstances made us believe that dere is something our partner is hiding 4m us then what should we do.

Rahul: we have to wait till he or she tell u. is everything ok ridz?

Ridz: ya every think is f9 now Rahul thanks a lot.

Rahul: thanks but 4 why?

Ridz: just sharing ur gud thoughts.

Rahul: o common don't be.

Then Rahul n ridz leave for cafeteria n ridz decided 2 wait till Armana tell her about the mystery. She decided to trust him completely. coz she thought is Rahul can trust his wife then why not she n she know Armaan can never betray her he loves her.
Armaan nd Muskaan are in the car.

Muskana: armaan kis tujhay yaqeen hai hum is sab main kamyaab ho jayain gay.

Ar: array yaar tu bhi na chup kar kay beth .

Muskaan: mager Armana tum keh rahayho kay ridz ko hum pay pehlay hi shaq ho gaya hai don't u think u we should tell her.

Ar: Nahi main ussay surprise daina cahta huns don't worry I know she trusts me.

Muskaan and Armaan came out of the car nd went in some property dealer office.

Ar: hello shuklaji armaan mainay aap say phone pay baat ki thi.

Rajjan ji: hello have a seat plz. What will u have tea or coffee?

Armaan: nahi sir thanks bas apa humain kuch affordable ghar dikha dijiyay humaray pass wact kam hai zara.

Actually Armaan is planning this whole thing is 4 Atul he just wants him to settle down he know 4m the very 1st day that Atul loves Anji a lot . So he is finding some affordable house for him so that after wards he can propose her. Even Atul is unaware with his plan. He wanted to give his beautiful wife a surprise coz he know that she really wants Anji to settle down nd Atul is the best choice for Anji. He decided to tell Atul today after finalizing the house nd then he will arrange aparty in which Atul can propose anjili officially.

raajan ji: yeh kuch ghar hain aap inki pics daikh lain aur final bata dain phir hum sath man daikhnay chalay jayain gay ager aja nahi to kal sahi.

ar: nahi aaj hi hum abhi jayain gay.

then ar nd muski watched those pics nd liked 2 houses.

ar: yeh 2 achay hain.

rajaanji: bilkul apa ki choice buhat achi hai yeh dono ghar buhat achi locality main bhi hain sanjeevani kay pass hi rahain gay.

muski: maira khayala hai humain chalna cahhya.

then armaan nd muskaan leave in armaan's car nd followed rajjan's car.

on their way at the signal dr shashank noticed armaan he thought he must be wid ridz so he waved him but he din't notice nd left.nd shashank saw muski in the car.

shashank was surprised to see them in their duty hours together.



PART 72



armaan nd muki went to 1st house its a sweet house wid light blue color outside when they entered in the house they found windchamps at the enterance wow how romantic.

rajjan: ya u r right yeh aik couple nay banay atha mager now they r shifting to uk so wo cahtaythay kay yeh ghar kisi new couple ko hi dia jayay.

then they saw the whole house is a sweet house wid 2 bed rooms a corridoor adrawing room kitchen nd a balcony wid the master bedroom.

armaan decided to final the house nd muski agrred.so they gave rajan sir initial payment n left for hospital coz armaan have lot of things to do
Armaan and muski towards their way to hospital.

Muski: wow kitna maza ayayga na .ridz will be so happy na. tu ridzi say kitna piyar karta hai na.

Ar: haan main us say buhat piyaar karta hun ussay khush karnay ko main kush bhi kar saqta hun.

After cuming back to their duties Armana in his room.

Ridz: hello armaan .

Ar: hello wife he kissed her on her fore head nd gave her a tight hug.

Ridz: kia baat hai janaab buhat piyaar araha hai biwi pay.

Ar: array janaab aap humain mouqa to dainyeh nacheez banda piyaar ko 24 hours hazir hai kaho to abhi ……………..

Ridz: bas bas yeh hospital hai aap ka bedroom nahi.

Ar: aysay lagta hai buhat din baad tumhain daikha hai piyar kia hai.

Ridz: hello husband subha hum milay thay mager baad main aap busy thay.ab apa ko itna piyaar a raha hai biwi pay sara din to nahi aya.

Ar: wo main actually………

Ridz: put his fingers on his lips mainay aap say kuch poocha kia.?

Ar: kissed on her hand.itna bharosa hai kia.is ka matlab main kuch bhi karsaqta hun mairi biwi nay mujhay kia kehna hai.nd winked his eye.

Ridz: khud say ziyada waisay bhi yeh saza God nay mairay liyay hi likhi thi.

Ar: just bring her closer maira piyar saza hai kia.?

Ridz: nahi armaan tumhara piyaar mairay jeenay ki wajah hai.

Ar: pocho gi nahi kuch?

Ridz: nahi armaan tum khud jab chaho mujhay bata daina .

Armaan was about to cry he just wanted to hugged her so tightly but just then ridz got a pager.

Ar: ridhima I love u love u so much. kal main tumhain sab kuch bata dun ga thanks 4 trusting me.nd then Armaan started to plan for tomorrow's party. aur abhi ussay atul ko bhi to batana tha sab kuch.





PART 73(Flashback)



Armaan Riddhima's eye lock remained for what seemed eternity, there was a series of emotions yet unknown to them, which they experienced in those few minutes, just then Anjali's voice came ringing in their ears,

Anjali: Guys, Armaan - Riddhima, yeh kya ho raha hai?

Armaan immediately let go off Riddhima in a reflex and she fell on the floor.

Armaan(not looking at Riddhima, looking almost ashamed to be caught like that): Woh kuch nahi, mujhe jaana hai, Dr.Shubhankar ke saath surgery hai, catch you guys later.

With this he just glanced at Riddhima and left.

Riddhima(while getting up): Ouch di, pata nahi isse kya ho gaya hai? (then to herself-- pata nahi mujhe kya ho raha hai)

Anjali- Whatever, Ridzi tu ab theek hai naa? Dard toh nahi ho raha?

Riddhima: Nahi di, I'm fine. Aap chinta mat karo. Pata nahi, jabse Raj aaya hai, Armaan thoda strangely behave kar raha hai.

Anjali: Arre, Armaan toh aisa hi hai, uska mood toh chameilion ke colours ki tarah change hota rehta hai.

Riddhima(not fully satisfied with Anji): Maybe you are right di, but pata nahi.

Just then their pager rings, and both leave for their duties.


PART 74(Married life)

Recap: Armaan was planning for the surprise part along wid muski.

Ar was standing outside the general ward nd calling muski. But muski was busy with her patient so she was not listening.

Then he asked the nurse to call muski. Nurse gave her the answer nd muski immediately finish her work nd went to Armaan.

Ar: where were u?

Muski: yara I was busy wid that patient. but where were u ?

Ar: yaar I was making all the arrangements acha sun I called atul we have to talk to him before doing any other things. Clear nd now move quickly we have lot of things to do and listen did u tell Rahul about dis.

Muski: nahi yaar I didn't even he didn't ask me.

Ar: I know, he love u a lot acha chal move.

When they were talking then Shashank saw them passing by.

Shashank wasn't happy at this nd decided to talk to ridhima coz he already saw them together in the car.

Shashank in his cabin called ridhima.

Ridhima: ji sir u called me.

Shashank: ya ridz plz cum in I wanna talk to u some thing important .its not related to ur profession.

Ridz: was very attentively listening she was unaware about the shashank's worry.

Shashank: where iz armaan?

Ridz: did u call him also?

Shashank: no I was asking about his where abouts 4m u?

Ridz got confused. Nd replied papa he must be busy in the hospital .

Shashank: no he is busy in some other things.

Ridz: papa what r u talking about I can't understand?

Shashank: I know u love him a lot but just keep an eye on him u know him better than me but I am just warning u .

Ridz: papa 1st of all thanks for ur concern I know u love me a lot but the thing is that I love armaan lot so as armaan nd most importantly we trust each other so there is no space for any doubt .i know about every thing but papa u taught me na that every relationship require some understanding respect nd trust. So just relax papa nd trust me ur daughter got the most trustful husband in the world.
Shashank: but beta?

Ridz: no more discussions on that papa. If Armana came to know this then he'll be really upset so plz leave dis worry.

Shashank: accepts 4 his daughter but still have some doubts.

On the other hand armaan nd muski r in the cafeteria waiting 4 atul to come.

Ar: array yaar where is he?

Muski: look he is coming.

Atul: hey guyz u called me.

Ar: ya champ I called u we wanna talk 2 u some thing important.

Atul: ya I am listening.


PART 75


Ar: champ u always called me ur brother na so I have taken an important decision on ur behalf. I know u wont agree wid me but if u ever called me brother with sincerity then u will understand me nd support me.

Atul: Armaan u r making me confuse yaar I called u my brother nd I mean it u r like my brother.

Ar: champ look we all lknow that u love anji.

Atul attentively listening armaan.

Ar: I know u always wished her 2 be ur life partner .nd I also know 4 that u need a house. Champ don't take me wrong me nd Muskaan decided to buy a house 4 u .we already selected 1 beautiful house 4 my brother. nd now I am planning for a party in which u have to propose anji.


Atul: got sentimental at dis nd started weeping.
Ar: array yara why r u crying look I told u that don't misunderstand me we did dis only we care 4 u we all love u . Don't take dis as we tried to hurt ur self respect.

Atul: no Armaan its not like that I am crying becoz today I got real brother. I brought up without my family nd always found my small happiness in-between my frnds I never thought u will do some ting bid 4 me.

Armana nd atul hugged each other.

Muski: oey u r forgetting me I also have some contributions.

Atul: I know muski u r my little sis u always helped me .thanks a lot guyz 4 every thing

Ar: now stop thanking us nd now just concentrate on ur part.

Atul: got confused?

Ar: stupid practice coz u have to propose anji nd I don't want u to be sloppily propose her. So be a man.u heard dis dictum na practice manke a man perfect so I want u to be perfect 4 anji.

Nd now move muski we have to plan lot of thing 4 the part.





PART 76



Ar and thinking about his surprise he can visualize ridz face nd ridz happy face he worked very hard for that moment nd now dis moment is coming closer nd closer he can't wait.

Ridz: came in the room nd noticed Armaan in his thoughts standing in the balcony.

Ridz just checked the kids they were sleeping peacefully nd she went to armaan. She hugged him 4m the back.

Ar: o when did u come?

Ridz: when u were lost in ur own thoughts. Ab tumhain mairay anay ka pata bhi nahi chalta nd pretended as if she is angry wid him at that.

Ar: turned nd hold her face in his hands mairi har sooch tum say shuru ho kay tum hi pay khatam ho jati hai . yaad rakhna yeh bata hameesha.main agla saans baad main laita hun tumhara khayala pehlay ata hai.

Ridz: hugged him tightly I know ar I was kidding.

Ar kissed her on her head . kitni dair wo yunhi kuch kahay bina kharay rahay aik dosray kay sath.

Ar: kush bolo gi nahi?

Ridz: ohunnnnnnnn main sun rahi hun.

Ar: kia got cinfused.

Ridz: tumharay dil ki dharkan jo aik aik baat mujh say keh rahi hai.

Ar: hold her face nd kissed her.i love u ridhima.

Ridz: nd I am crazy about u.

Ar smiled nd said chalo ab so jatay hain subha jana nahi hai kia.

Ridz: array wah aaj to husband nay romance ko mana kia khiar to hai na maira kaam aap nay kaisay kia.

Ar: smiled chalo chalo koi wact nahi janay daiti mujhya patanay ka chalo chup say so jao subha buhat kaam hain.

Ridz: hain subha kon say kama hain.

Ar: woooooooooooo hospital main armaan whispered baal baal bach gaya to beta warna bolnay wala tha.

Armaan dropped ridz at the hospital nd told her that he have some important work so heis not summing today on the other hand he already informed keerti that he is taking a day off.

Ar nd muski are buys in all the decorations. atul will join them in an hour.

It was big nice hall with a capacity of 100ppl.with light sky blue wall color.

The hall is decorated with lilac flowers .at one corner tables are set for dinner nd other corner dance arrangements were made. The dress code of the party is black 4 men nd lilac 4 women.

Armaan also arranged violin players nd he decided that when Atul will propose then there will be back ground violin music.

He also gave atul ridz new dress it was a beautiful lilac gown sky blue stones on it without sleeves

Armaan called atul nd asked him to give his gift then he called ridz maira gift mila

Ridz: haan armaan mila mager yeh kis khushgi main.

Ar: yeh mairi zindagi main anay kikhushi main.

Ridz: armaan. Yeh aaj aap ko pata chala hai husband.?

Ar: jokes apart theik sham 5 bajay tum sab ko lay kay enidma hall main a jao gi ok.

Ridz: enigma hal main kyun kia hai wahaan.

Ar: yeh tumhain anay kay bad hi pata chalay ga ok.

Atul joined tehm in the hall nd touched to see all the preparations made by his frnds he thanked muski nd armaan. Nd showed then the dress which he brought 4 anji along wid the delicate beautiful ring.

Atul brought a cool sky blue knee length skirt coz he knew that Anji love skirts.

It was 4:30 pm armaan is desperately waiting 4 her beautiful wife to come he wanted to see her in her dress nd want to disclose the whole surprise.


PART 77


Armaan was dressed in jet black suit with lilac flower attached on the jacket. muski wore lilac nd blue kalidar dress with pajama she is giving a complete traditional touch coz she knew Rahul will love it she also wanted to sorry him coz she didn't tell her about her plan. But she knew that Rahul will always be wid her.
Atul cane wid black blazer nd trousers. Ar whistled and smiled aaj to koi gazab dha raha hai kiyun muski.

Haan na anji to gayi.

They are anxiously waiting for the gussets to come.
Recap: Armaan atul nd muski waiting 4 the guests to come.

Ar: array yaar 5 baj gayay hain kahaan reh gayay hain yeh loog.

Atul: hana yaar anji ko mainay 6 bajay ka kaha hai us kay anay say pehlay sab ko batana hai na.

Muski: chill guyz its just 5 pm a jayain gay 10 min tak.

Nd then they heard the door lock noise nd they all loudly said agayay.

Then armaan atul nd muski wecumed all the guests dr shubhankar , nana, keerti, sis lovely, Rahul, padma, Shashank, nikita, nd almost all their hospital staff.

Armaan looking around 4 her love nd asked from sisi lovely where is ridhima.

Sis lovely: o ji dr armaan wo to chaar bajay hi ghar nikal gayi thein ati hun gi ji.

Armaan was worried chaar bajay ki ab tak to ussay a jana cahyaytha its now 5:20 I must call her.

Nd then he called her nd heard the ring tone he turned around nd ridhima was standing right infront of him.her love who was wearing the lilac dress which he brought 4 her and straight black hair she was also wearing high lilac heels.. Armaan looked stunned .nd moved forward to welcum her.

Ar: u r looking just out of dis world .thanks husband waisay aap bhi kuch kamnahi lag rahay.

Armaan took her anger 4m rosy suhana was also wearing little lilac frock nd looking so cute. Armaan kissed her nd said mairi princes to aaj apni mama say bhi ziyada piyari lag rahi hai.nd winked ridz.

Ridz: ab tu bata do party kis khushi main hai?

Ar: gave suhana to rosy nd came closer to ridz while looking into her eyes he said ridz I know u love ur sister a lot na to aj ager ussay us ka life partner mil jayay tu tumhian kaisa lagay ga.

Ridz: armaan I'll be really happy mager kun kahan hai .

I knew it issi liyay mainay yeh sab arrangement kia then Armana told her his all efforts behing anji's marriage. Nd after listening he notices ridz eyes were wet.

Ar: hey sweety kia hoa kia tumhain lagta hai kay mainay kuch galat kia ya atul anji ko khush nahi rakh paya yga.

Ridz: nahi armaan main itni khush un kay bata nahi saqti. Tum jantay ho aja mujhya yaqeen ho gaya hai kay mainis dunya ki sab say luky larki hun.

Ar: smiled nd whispered in her ear to aaj say tumhara name basket ki bajay lucky rakh daitay hain.

Ridz: armaannnn.tum bhi na.aur hana atul say behtar choice koi di kay liyay ho hi nahi saqta.

Ar: acha ab yeh tumhara kam ahai mom dad ko batana ok aur anji ko bhi tum handle karo gi.

Ridz: ok boss aur koi hukam bandi hazir hai.

Ar: ahaan aik kiss ?

Ridz: armaan .

Ar: ab mainay itni mehnat ki hai aik kiss to banti hai na.

Ridz: haan baba mager yahan nahi ghar ja kay.

Ar: yahan kyin n ahi main loon ga to yahan hi loon ga .nd he pretended to be angry wid her main tum say tab tak bata nahi karun ga jab tak tum mujhay kiss na day do sab kay samnay.

Then anii came with blue skirt nd atul went to her nd kissed on her hand.then the real party starts atul proposed anji as planned with the beautiful violen voice on his knees with the ring in his hand he said anji mujhay lagta hai kay main is dunya main tumharay liyay ayah un mujhay lagta hai kay tumhara sath hi atul ko pora karay ga. Mujhay lagta hai mairi har khsuhi tum say shuru hokay tum hi pay khatam ho jati hai.main janta hun main waisay nahi jaisa life partner tumhain cahyaytha .mager main tun say wada karta hunk ay main tumhain palkun pay betha kay rakhon ga will u marry me anji .i love u.

Every body listening quietly.

Cum on di hana bool do na. muski: cum on anji.

Anji just smiled and said yes atul I know tum waisay nahi jaisay partner mujhay cahyaytha but I know kay ager main is dunya main kisi kay sathkhush reh saqti hun to wo tum ko.
I know kay ager koi mairay nakhray utha saqta hai to wo tum ho.i love u 2 atul nd then atul wore her the ring.

Every 1 clapped.nd congratulates the duo.

Armaan was luking annoyed wid ridz nd not talking to her properly.then ridz sand the song.

Chura lia hai tum nay jo dil ko nazar nahi churana sanam .
Badla kay mairi tum zindagani kahin badal na jana saman.
Lay liya dil o hai maira dil
Hai dil lay kay mujh ko na behlana.

Nd while walking she kissed Armana as every 1 was busy in the dancing.

Then Armana sand

Sajaoon ga lut kar bhi teray badan ki dali ko
Laho jigar ka dunga haseen labon ki lali ko
Hay wafa kia
Is jahaan ko
Aaj to batlaoon ga mian dewana.

Armaan hugged her .nd ridz said thanks Armaan thanks 4 every thing.




PART 78(flashback)


after finishing their respective duties all the interns r once again gathered in the locker room.
m-hero yeh tu kya kar raha hai.
ar-matlab maine kya kiya....
m-tu itna khoya hua kyun hai....kissi ne kuch kaha kay........ya kuch kiya.
armaan looks at riddhima and sees her blush for the first time.he smiles to himself and then suddenly realises that they arent alone.
ar-arey nahi muskaan .......its nothing like that.
m-pakka.
ar-hain pakka.
raaj-riddhima mein tumhe ghar chod doon.
armaan gets a little restless on hearing this and is just abt so say smthing to raaj when there is an announcement
"DR RAAJ PLEASE REPORT TO DR KEERTI"
raaj leaves immediately.
ridz-chalo di ab hum chaltein hain.
an-nahi ridz , aaj meri night duty bhi hai........hitler ka order.
ridz-toh mujhe ghar kaun chodega.
anjali looks around and finally smiles........"armana hai na,i am sure he has no prb in dropping u home....do u armaan?"
ar-no anjie...........not at all.
an-its settled then,u can drop ridz home 2day......saying this she leaves from the locker room
armaan coming close to riddhima"riddhima,chalein"
ridz looks at him and thinks"omg ab mein kya karun.itna sab hone ke baad mein iske saath kaise jaongi"

Ar and ridz cuming outside.

Ridz: thinking in her mind di ko kia zarorat thi is ko kehnay ki.yeh raaj ko bhi aaj hi kaam parna tha.

Ar: lost in his own thoughts. Ab pata nhai kia sooch rahi ho gi mairay baray main kahaan say baat shuru karun.sorry karma itna mushkil kiyun hota hai yaar.

Ridz :Armaan tumhain aysay hi masla ho ga main auto say chali jaoon gi , di nay to bas aysay hi keh dia tha.

Ar: mujay koi masla nahi ho gat um chalo main drop kar dun ga.

Then armaan open the door for ridz nd ridz thought ahaan issay yeh manners bhi hai .

Ar: so coffee chalay gi?

Ridz: ar I think dair ho rahi hai some other time.

Ar: o hokia museebat hai is nay to mana kay dia mainay soocha tha coffee kay sath sorry keh dun ga.

Ridz: roko rook car rook armaan.

Armaan stopped the car nd asked kia hoa ?



PART 79(flashback)


Armaan stopped the car nd asked kia hoa ?

& he show 2boyson bike cathcing Riddhima duppta.

he got angry.step out of the car &
catch one boy &started hitting him badly.

Armaan was beating them very badly when rid came nd said chalo armaan kia kar rahay ho tum choro unhain.

Ar: came in the car he was luking veru upset .

Ridz: yeh kia tha armaan kia zaroorat thi unhain marnay ki.

Ar: looked her with anger kia zarorat thi? Tum mujh say pooch rahi ho yeh. Wo loog tum say badtameezi kar raha thay. Aur main yeh nahi daikh saqa.

Ridz: armaan marnay ki kia zarorat thi samjha bhi saqtay thay na.yeh kia tareeqa hoa.?

Ar: mairay samjhanay ka yehi tareeqa hai ms ridhima Shashank gupta.main aap kay raaj jitna acha nahi hun na is liyay mujhya loog to bas tang karma ata hai.

Ridz: armaan tum raaj ko beech main kiyun la rahay ho us ki kia bata .

Ar: uski baat …………………….. armaan realized wthat he was saying. Kuch nahi chalo tumhian ghar drop kar dun.

Ridz noticed armaan injured his hand and his hand was bleeding. But Armana was still annoyed wid her.

After dropping her.

Ridz: armaan tumharay hath pay choot ayi hai chalo main bandage kar dun.

Ar: koi zarorat nahi main khud kar lun ga. Nd he went leaving ridz with her thoughts.

The whole night ridz couldn't sleep she was feeling helpless in forgetting Armaan's word "main nahi daikh saqta koi tum say badtameezi karay" and even armaan was restless.

Ar: kia yaar karnay kuch gaya tha kar kuch ayah un mainay kyun kaha us say aysa.

Ridz: pata nahi armaan tumnay yeh kiyun kaha tum hameesha mujhay shocked choortay ho chaahay mujhay tang karnay main ya mujhay khush karnay main. Main kiyun tumharay baray main is wact sooch rahi hun . pata nahi tumhain ziyada choot na lagi ho .

Mujhay shayad tumhain call karni cahyay.

Then she picked the phone and glanced the clock it was 12 am o mainay daikha hi nahi tum so gayayho gay. I think subha hi milnay cahyay.nd she went to sleep.




PART 80
(flashback)



Next day in the hospital.

Muski: oey hero yeh tujhya kia hoa hath pay?

Ar: kuch nahi bas aysay hi.

Atul: array armaan mairay dost mairay bhai kia hoa tujhay mujhay bata na?

Ar: array yaar kuch nahi hoa bas mamoli si chooti hai.

Ridz was quietly watching all this then raaj came . hi frnds how r u all.

Raaj: Hey ridz kaisi ho subha tum anji kay sath nikal ayi sorry mujhay thori dair ho gayi thi.

Ridz: its ok raaj .she noticed every time when raaj was dere Armana behave weirdly.

All interns report to doc keerti……………………………

Muski: chal hero tu pata nahi aja kal kia soochta rehta hai .

Dr keerti: rd Muskaan aur dr anji aap opt. dr armaan dr raaj and dr ridhima general ward. And dr atul and dr Rahul path lab.

Now get to your work.

Even dr keerti noticed armaan was luking lost .

Keerti: dr armaan r u ok?

Ar: yes ma'am me f9.

Keerti: sure dr armaan is dere is any prob just tell me. Nd whats wrong with your hand.

Ar: thanks ma'am I am f9 its just a small injury.

Keerti: ok gud get to work.


In the general ward raaj was handling the 10yr old kid's case.

Raaj: ok kid now its time to have ur medicines

Kid: I don't want 2 it must be bitter.

Raaj: but u have to take it.
Ridz was watching all dis so she went to help raaj.

Ridz: raaj tumbhi na bachoon ko kaisay handle karn ahai tumhian ata hi nahi.

Raaj: array ykis nay kaha daikho main tumhain kitna acha handle karma hun.

Rridz: I am not joking raaj get aside.

Armaan was luking all that.

Ridz: hey baby h r u.?

Kid: me f9 who r u? I know u r here so that I take that medicine.

Ridz: I am ur frnd baby ok tell me what is ur fav game.

Kid: football.

Ridz: hummmmmmm so u love 2 beat the other team with ur lots of goals.

Kid: ya I always played really well 4 my team.

Ridz: then u can't 4m now on………….

Kid: got surprised how it is possible?

Ridz: sat with him on the bed nd said look Ur coach doesn't allow u 2 play coz ur r not fit nd how can u perform good if u'll be not ok.

Kid: what should I do I have to recover. U tell me.

Ridz: then just do it as that dr uncle is saying he is also ur frnd.ok.

Then raaj smiled .o God ridz u nd Ur convincing powers 4m where u get dis.?

Ridz: it's a magic raaj.

Raaj: Hummmmmm it must be .i know u very well nd raaj hugged him thanks ridhi 4 helping me.

Armaan was really upset at that. he had an empty injection in his hand nd he injured his same hand by broking that injection.
Raaj nd ridz rushed to him.


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hey ridss
wow yaar superb
armaan soo jelouse of raaj
heheh
i love the surprise for atul
sooo nice of armaan n muskaan
continue sooon loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
IMPORTANT NOTE

heyy Freds,
i am very Disaapointment.
bcoz i have recived very less comment.
but stell i will post next part.
For silent Reader.

plzz silent reader
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PART 81 to 95 (Flashback)

PART 81

Riddhima(very concerned): Armaan, yeh tumne kya kiya? Tum theek toh ho naa?

Armaan let ot a groan of pain.

Riddhima: Armaaaaan..................tum apna dhyan kyun nahi rakh saktein, mein tumhe aise dard mein nahi dekh sakti.

Riddhima immidiately dreaded letting those words escape her mouth.

Armaan immidiately looked up to her, for the first time, very lovingly and affectionately. Oh! he felt, he was ACTUALLY beginning to fall for her. How could he, ARMAAN MALLICK fall for a girl!!??! Just when Armaan was cosumed in these thoughts, Raj's voice came, almost, painfully stinging, to his ears.

Raj was also utterly shocked to hear Ridddhima say that. He thought Armaan and Riddhima hated each other, and he was really protective about Riddhima, she had always been sort of fragile. He couldn't let Armaan play with her, and secretly, he did love Riddhima, at that moment he felt a little jealous of Armaan. He actually felt jealous of another guy, because Riddhima cared for that guy. But he couldn't let Armaan know this.

Raj: Haan Armaan, tum kar kya rahe the. Let me do the dressing.

Riddhima: Nahi, Raj, tum jao, aur patient ko attend karo, mei kar dungi.

Raj: Its okay Riddhima mein kar sakta hun.

He was so perplexed, he couldn't understand why Riddhima was behaving like this.Armaan was enjoying this so much, he forgot about the pain in his hand!

Armaan: Haan haan Raj, tum jao, Riddhima hai naa, she'll do my dressing.

Raj: Okay guys. I'll attend to the patients. Riddhima, tum dressing karke jaldi se aa jao.
He was upset now. He left Riddhima to attend to Armaan.

Riddhima: Yahaan general ward mein thori, chalo mere saath.

Armaan obediently followed her. They didn't say a word while walking. She took him to one of the vacant rooms. She told Armaan to sit, while she looked for the first aid kit. She got the kit and kept it beside Armaan, he had just been admiring her, she had never seemed so beautiful to her.

Armaan: Woh Raj...

Riddhima looked up to him when he said this, she knew something about Raj had been bothering him.

Armaan: Woh Raj.....kabhi tumhara peecha nahi chod ta kya?

Riddhima(while putting his dressing): Kyun? aur tumhe kya problem hai? Hum childhood friends hai, aur humari duty bhi saath mein hai.

Armaan: Nahi, aajkal, woh hamesha hi tumhare aas pass hota hai.

Riddhima didn't say anything. So this was what was bothering him. Just then a flick of her came in front of her face, it was irritating her, but she was doing Armaan's dressing. Armaan noticed her.

Riddhima felt the softest hands of her face, Armaan put her flick behind her ear. Suddenly Riddhima realised Raj was waiting for her. She hurridely finished the dressing and left with,

Armaaan, mujhe jaana hoga, Raj wait kar raha hoga.

And Armaan was left alone with his thoughts and he began to hate Raj....

PART 82

armaan came out of the room still dazed with what riddhima had said and he bumped into atul........


at-hi armaan,yeh tere haath ko ky aho gaya.


ar-kuch nahi yaar,bas thodi si lag gayi.


at-ok,but apna dhyaan rakha kar yaar.


ar-haain champ.....thanks.


then atul started to walk away just then armaan calle out to him again.


ar-hey champ just a sec.sun yaar.


atul turned back to armaan-kya hua armaan,kuch kaam tha kya.


ar-hain..wohhhh......tune basket.....i mean riddhima ko kahi dekha hai kya.


at-haan woh abhi abhi terace ki taraf gayi hai.


ar-thanks yaar.and he also goes to the terrace.what he sees there leaves him shocked.


raaj was forcefully holding riddhima.armaan could see the anger in raaj's eyes.


r-tum toh usse nafrat karti thi na......phir kya hua.


ridz-raaj whta r u doing........u r hurting me..........just leave me.


r-nahi pehle batao........why did u do all that for armaan.dosre doctors bhi toh thee na........i was there.why did u do that


ridz-for the last time raaj just leave my hands.


r-kyun.dard ho raha hai...........what abt me......how can u ignore me.


armaan could see tears coming out of ridz eyes.ridz somehow managed to free her hands and and slapped raaj right acreoss his face.raaj couldnt believe that riddhima had done that.he got so angry that e raised his hand to hit her.ridz closed her eyes expecting a slap from raaj but none came.she opened her eyes and was shocked............armaan was holding raaj's hand and looking straight at ridz.he held out his other hand for ridz and brought her closer to himself......


ar-raaj if u ever as much as lay a finger on riddhima i .....will .....

kill ....you.

PART 83

Riddhima looked at Armaan… she felt so safe with him… protected… instinctively she edged towards him… hiding herself behind his back…

Raj shoved Armaan's hand off his…

R: Acha! Tum hote kaun ho mere aur Riddhima ke beech main aane wale…

Riddhima heard that question and it rang in her head… why was Armaan so nice to her??

But Armaan had an answer already…

A: Uska dost…

The truth was far from it… he knew that… but this was not the time or place for it…

R: Acha!! For you information main aur Riddhima bachpan ke dost hai! So you keep out of it!

Armaan took a step towards Raj looking eye to eye…Riddhima got scared and held Armaan's hand who inturn squeezed it lightly letting her know it was going to be fine…

A: (in a quite angry tone) Dekh Raj…main yaha dosti ki definitions lene aur dena nahi aya… Tu apne dimmag main ek baat bethale… aaj ke baad… tu Riddhima se… har waqt… kam se kam… 5 feet ki duri pe rahega… Agar mujhe Riddhima ke chehre pe teri waja se koi bhi pareshani nazar ayi toh tu jis muh se iss waqt bakh raha hai na… who muh bolne ke kya… saans lene ke layak nahi rahega…

Raj remained quite… he knew Armaan was far stronger than him… he would fight this battle later using his brains instead…

R: (tugging at his hand) Armaan chalo… Armaan please…

Armaan looked at Riddhima's tense face and then back at Raj…

A: Aur main koi khali dhamki nahi de raha… main tujhe bata raha hu…

Giving Raj one last dirty look he manoeuvred Riddhima carefully down the stairs… his arms around her shoulders…giving her full support…

PART 84

they went to the canteen...riddhima was still traumatized ..raaj her best buddy ..how can he …he was short tempered but he was never so furious …now feelings of hatred for raj started creeping in her mind…
Armaan: riddhima!! Tum theek toh ho nah…lo..paani pi lo…do you want something else

But riddhima was just looking at him ..armaan repeated his words but no change..riddhima was just staring at him and then all of a sudden she hugged him..hugged him very tightly..feeling safe in his strong arms..she was trembling..and then she started crying…armaan couldn't do anything instead he was just stroking her hair….
Armaan: shshshsh!! bas riddhima..chup…everything is fine now…
Riddhima: I considered him as my best friend (weeping)
Armaan: koi baat nahi…its ok..chup
Riddhima buried herself in his chest..
Riddhima: how could he…
Now armaan looked at riddhima and cupped her face
Armaan: don't cry for him..he doesn't deserve your tears (wiping her tears with his thumb)
Riddhima looked at his blue eyes..

Ri: Thanks a lot Armaan…

Ar: Sshhh…

He puts finger on her lips, she gets a shiver… she doesn't understand why his touch affected her so much… but it's something that she likes…

Ar: Thanks kehna ki koi zaroorat nahi hai…

Ri: (tearfully) Agar tum na hote toh…

Ar: Lekin main hu na! (cups her cheeks) Humesha…

She smiled weakly… looking into his eyes gave her strength… she felt like with him she could fight the whole world… Armaan was feeling very protective… he felt like beating the hell out of Raj but he knew that would upset Riddhima even more… right now she needed him…

Both had the urge to hug again but were refraining themselves… they were so close yet so far away… simultaneously both were going to come close…

Ke: Dr Armaan!!

Both leapt back… suddenly realising what they were going to do in the canteen!

Ke: Main aapko pureh Sanjeevani main dhoond rahi hu aur aap yaha canteen main hai!!

Ar: Doctor Keerti woh… actually…

Ke: Maine aapse koi sawaal nahi kiya Dr Armaan… Aap mere office main aye abhi issi waqt…

Ri: Dr Keerti…

Ke: Dr Riddhima behetar hoga ke aap apni duty pe jaye…

PART 85

Keerti waited for Armaan to follow… Riddhima looked on helplessly watching Armaan go away… she didn't know why he was being called to Dr Keerti's office but she had a really bad feeling about this… Armaan turned back to look at her as he left… he gave her a reassuring look and went out…

For the first time Riddhima didn't feel better because of that look… She was scared… for Armaan…

SCENE CHANGE

DR KEERTI'S OFFICE

Ar: Lekin ma'am maine aisa kuch nahi kiya!!

Ke: Dr Armaan don't try to insult my intelligence!! Mere saamne reports hai jinme medication change likha hua hai aur mujhe ek reliable source ne bhi inform kiya hai iss bare main!

Ar: Ma'am please…

Ke: How can you be so careless?? Aapko ehsaas bhi hai ke ek critical patient ki medication itni drastically badal dene kitna dangerous sabat ho sakta hai!! Aapne mujhe consult karne bhi theek nahi samjha!! Jab ke woh mera patient hai!!

Ar: Ma'am main waha rounds pe tah lekin maine aisa kuch…

Ke: You know what Dr Armaan…main aapki excuses nahi suna chahati… in fact iss waqt main iss hospital main aap jaisa ghair zimedaar insaan bhi nahi dekhna chahati!! Iss waqt aap ghar chale jayi… you are under investigation… main aapko koi bhi duty unsupervised nahi dungi… kal se you will have one of the interns as your in charge…

Ar: Lekin Dr Keerti…

Ke: Right Now Dr Armaan!!

Armaan left the office… as soon as he came out he knew who the 'reliable source' was…

Ar: Raj!!

His jaw muscles tensed but he knew he couldn't do anything right now… He left to go home in anger…

SCENE CHANGE

SPLIT SCENE= RIDDHIMA'S BEDROOM & ARMAAN'S BEDROOM

Both are tense and restless… Armaan because he is worried about his reputation and also what Riddhima might think when she will hear of it…. He wants to talk to her but is afraid of her reaction…

Riddhima because she has found out but knows in her heart that Armaan could never be so careless… she wants to talk to him but is too scared to do so…

Finally Armaan decides to call…

Ri: Hello Armaan??

Ar: Riddhima woh tumne job hi suna hai…
Ri: Woh sach nahi hai… main jaanti hu…

Ar: (lets out a sigh of relief) Maine aisa kuch nahi kya…

Ri: I know…

Ar: Mujhpe yakeen hai tumhe??

Ri: Purah yakeen hai…

Ar: Kya main tumhe milne aah sakta hu??

Ri: (looks at the time) Armaan 11:30pm hai… torha late hogaya hain…

Ar: Please… bohat mann kar raha hai kisi se baat karne ka…

Ri: Ok… aajao…

They put the phone down and the 2 minutes later Riddhima gets a text…

Riddhima main tumhare ghar ke bahar kara hu… please mujhe aake milo… jaisa tumne suna hai mene waise kuch nahi kiya… please mera yakeen karo… I'm waiting for you… Armaan


PART 86

She found this text very weird… she had just told him that she trusted him… then what was he talking about?? And how did he reach so early?? Nevertheless she went downstairs and outside quietly so that no one would hear…

She could barely make out a body shape in the dark… she wasn't getting good vibes…

Ri: Armaan??

Main tumhare hi intezaar kar raha tah…

That didn't sound like Armaan's voice… Riddhima knew it was definitely someone else's voice…

Ri: Kaun hai??

Ra: Acha itni jaldi apne bachpan ki dost ki awaz bhul gayi!!

Raj turned around and stepped forward in the light…

Ri: (angrily) Tum!!! Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?? Chale jao yaha se Raj! Main tumse koi baat nahi karna chahati!

Ra: Lekin main toh karma chahata hu na! Kya baat hai Riddhima uss Armaan ke liye tum mujhe bhi piche chod dogi!
Ri: Tum kehna kya chahatein ho Raj?? Batemeezi tumne ki thi… humara dosti ka rishta tumne kharaab kiya!

Ra: Acha!! Dosti huh!! Tumhe kya lagta hai! Itne saal main tumhare aage piche sirf dosti ke liye ghumta raha!!

Riddhima was shocked… what the hell did Raj mean?? She was really getting scared now…she looked around to see if there was anyone who could help her get out of this situation but there was no one…

Ra: Aur ha… for your information… woh jo tumhare Armaan hai na!! Usse toh maine uski aukaat dikha di hai!! Woh to ab humesha keliye suspend hi hoga!

Ri: Kya matlab hai tumhara???

PART 87

raj was walking towards riddhima..

he had a wicked smile…

riddhima was scared she was moving backwards..


Riddhima: tum ..tum ..ne armaan ke sath aaisa kyun kiya..uaska pura career kharab hojayega (stammering)


Raj: mere aur tumhare bheech job hi ayega uske sath yahi hoga


Riddhima: pata nahi tumhe kya ho gaya hain..kuch bhi bol rahe ho


Raj : tumse pyaar...tum jaise khubsoorat ladki ke sath kuch pal beetane ke liye maine itne saal barbad kar diye (dirtily)


Riddhima: kya matlab hain tumhara?? (astonished)


Raj: tum itni sundar ho ki ..( he started brushed her arms with his palm)


Then slowly he grasped her hands …

he was touching her face …

riddhima was scared she was feeling very uncomfortable..

she tried hard to run away but raj was holding her very tightly


Riddhima: tum kya kar rahe ho raj..


Raj: jo mujhe bahut pahle kar lena chahiye tha


He threw her dupatta and stared misbehaving with her forcefully touching her ….


Riddhima was crying she was begging him to leave her but raj was determined to fulfill his evil intentions
By that time armaan reached gupta resident


He messaged riddhima asking her to come down..


He was waiting but she didn't come down..

he thought that she must have not read the msg so he called her…

the phone was ringing but no1 was picking up the phone
He again called her …

now he realized that riddhima's phone was ringing in the garden…

he rushed towards the sound..

and what he saw left him numb…


riddhima's dress was torn and raj was powerfully holding her and

then a sharp sound shook him Raj had slapped riddhima
now this was enough to surface armaan's pent up anger…

he ran towards raj…

he grasped raj by his color and pushed him away ..

raj fell on the ground…


riddhima rushed towards armaan and hugged him very firmly …

armaan picked up the dupatta and wrapped it around riddhima….


Then armaan saw raj…

he was fuming with anger…

he picked up raj and started beating him brutally ..

hitting him very hardly..raj was bleeding but armaan was thrashing him mercilessly….


PART 88

Riddhima had never seen armaan so wild and unruly….


Just then shashank arrived..

he saw armaan beating raj ..

he ran towards then and then saw his daughter in a condition which left him flabbergasted


it dint take any timefor shashank to realise what had happened.he quickly rushed over to his daughter and wrapped his arms around her.riddhima was to shocked to respond and she fainted in her fathers arms.

shashank couldnt control himself and he finally shouted for armaan.


sh-"armaan........plz idhar aao.riddhima behosh ho gayi hai.plz meri madat karo."


armaan who had been beating raaj just left him thereand rushed to

shashank.armaan picked up ridz in his arms and took her to her room.

he made her lie on her bed and started patting her cheeks.


ar-riddhima..........riddhima........plz aankhein kholo riddhima......riddhima utho riddhima.


mean while even shanshank couldnt control himself and started crying in front of armaan.

he kneeled down in front of riddhimas bed and said"beta plz utho riddhima.......riddhima utho plz"

armaan rushed to him and started consoling him.
ar-sir.........plz sir.......riddhima ko kuch nahi hua hai.she is fine.woh theek ho jayegi.aap plz raaj ko ja kar dekhiye.


on hearing raaj's name shashank could feel himself burning with anger.

he rushed to the garden but it was empty.

PART 89

raaj had left.

shashank came back to riddhimas room only to find her conscious,

but she was so shocked she wasnt responding to anyone.


sh-riddhima tum theek ho na beta.kuch bolo na beta.plz
riddhima was quiet.

all she could feel was that her best friend had tried to molest her.she couldnt believe it.dint want to believe it.then armaan kneeled in front of her........the moment she saw armaan she burst out crying and hugged him tight.

Shashank couldn't control his tears, he excused himself.

Just as Shashank left, Riddhima's grip on Armaan tightened, Armaan didn't really know what to do,

Armaan: Riddhima(moving a little backward, taking her face in his hands and lifting her chin up, tears were just flowing out of her eyes), mein hu naa tumhare saath, don't worry, sab theek ho jaye gaa.

He began putting strands of her hair behind her ear, so that they would stop coming on her allready wet face. He gently put took one of her hand in his and began rubbing her palm, he wanted to comfort her.

Riddhima finally spoke : Armaan, yeh sab mere saaath hi kyun hota hai? Raj mera childhood friend hai, humne pehle kabhi ek doosre ke baare mein aise nahi socha, aur phir...........


PART 90

He lightly cupped Riddhima's cheeks…

A: Shhh…. Bas…. Uss bareh main aur sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai…

Jo hagaya so hagaya…

R: Lekin kyu Armaan?? Kyu huwa yeh sab??

A: Kyunki har koi tumhari tarah bhola aur sacha nahi hota Riddhima…

har koi apne emotions or feelings truly display nahi karta…

R: (to herself but loudly) Yanike meri hi ghalti hai…

main hi bohat bholi hu…

meri hi wajah se Raj ko ye laga ke…

A: (making her look at him… a bit roughly) Tumhari koi ghalti nahi hai Riddhima… tum bohat achi ho…

dusre bureh hain isme tumhara kya kasoor…

R: (whispering) Main hi bohat pagal hu na Armaan??

A: Tum jaisi bhi ho bohat achi ho… sabse pyaari… sabse pyaar karne wali… Riddhima… Meri Riddhima jo kabhi bhi kisi ko bhi muskhorahat deh sakti hai…

Riddhima's eyes filled up with tears… she hugged Armaan again… tightly clasping herself to him… feeling secure with him and only him…

Armaan felt like saying how much he cared for her… they broke apart and Armaan kissed her forehead… they were close… only an inch apart… Armaan looked at Riddhima's lips which were quivering in anticipation… they could feel each other's warm breath…

At the last moment Armaan controlled himself… he moved backwards… he knew Riddhima was most vulnerable right now and he didn't want her to do something which she would regret later… although he knew that even she understood that they had a special bond…

Riddhima was disappointed that Armaan had stepped back… but then she realised what she was feeling and felt really embarrassed…

Armaan stood up and made Riddhima lie down again…

he put the blanket over her…

still looking into her eyes…

time stood still for a little while…

they were both immersed into each other's thoughts….

Just then Anjali came back from her night duty…

she heard what had happened and ran into the room…

An: Ridzi!!

Armaan and Riddhima's gaze broke…


An: Ridzi tu theek hai na??

Riddhima nodded…

and looked back at Armaan thinking if he was around she'd always be alright…

as though coming back from her thoughts Riddhima got embarrassed again and looked away…

Armaan thought that she was tired and decided to usher Anjali away…

A: Anjali tum chalo main tumhain sab batata hon…Riddhima tum araam karo… (he turned to go)

Ri: Armaan… please mat jao…(calling out)

A: Main yahi ho Riddhima… bas thodi dher bahar bhet ne laga ho…

Ri: (like a child) Promise??

A: (smiling) Pakka Promise… Ab so jao…

Armaan went into the living room with Anjali where they calmed down Dr Shashank… Anjali was extremely angry and upset…

in fact she could've gone and murdered Raj right then…

but Armaan made her understand that Riddhima needed her loved ones right now…

PART 91


Everyone made him stay in the house as it had become really late and it would not be safe to go home so late…

Plus the weather had taken turn for the worse…

it had started to pour down…

the rain was fast and furious much like Armaan's temper…

The occasional thunder subsided and Armaan fell into a light sleep on the sofa…

he had been given the guest room but he had been very restless there…

it was too far away from Riddhima…

4am (only 3 hours after the incident)

An: Armaan!!

Armaan woke up with a start… it was dark and he looked around for the source of the noise…

An: Armaan main ho Anjali…

A: Anjali?? Kyu hua??

An: Woh actually tum upar kamre main aa sakte ho??

A: (getting up) ha… huwa kya hai??

An: Actually main pani peen eke liye uthi thi… socha ke Ridz ko check bhi karlo… usse haath lagaye toh I realised ke usse bohat tez fever hai…

A: What?? (ran up the stairs to Anjali)

An: Jab main soyi thi tab tak toh theek thi… Lekin I guess it's the stress and bad weather outside that she went in…

Armaan felt a surge of anger… this was all because of that Raj!!! His jaw clenched thinking how much pain Riddhima must've gone through…

A: Hosh main hain?? How bad is it??

An: Hosh main toh hain… it is a bit bad… kaafi high fever hain… maine socha injection deti hu… fast action hoga…

A: Ha… toh do na…

An: Woh Ridzi bachon ki tarah behave kar rahi hai… injection lagane nahi deh rahi…

A: Ok main try karta hu…. (goes into the room)

PART 92


He walks up to her bed… her eyes are closed… she looks like an angel…

A: (gently) Riddhima… (she doesn't respond… he gently touches her cheeks and they are boiling hot… he gets very worried… he taps her cheeks… it is better that she stays awake) Riddhima utho…

Ri: Hmmmm (she opens her eyes… weakly smiles) Armaan??

A: Ha… main hu…

Ri: Thanks Armaan…

A: Kisliye??

Ri: Apna promise nibhane ke liye…

Armaan felt really emotional… Riddhima was so innocent and sweet… so pure and delicate… and he promised himself and silently to Riddhima that he'll always take care of her… no matter what…

A: Thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai!!

An: Armaan yeh lo injection…


ridz-plz mujhe injection nahi lagwana.she makes a puppy face and turns away.


armaan turns her to his side


ar-riddhima plz injection lagwa lo.tumhe kitna fever hai.subhe tak theek ho jayega.plz......accha agar mein laga doon toh.


riddhima thinks for sm time and says"theek hai par plz pyaar se lagana.bahut dard hota hai.


armaan smiles at her and gently gives her the injection.she falls asleep with it holding one of armaan's hand.by that time shashank had also gotten up to check on riddhima.

he comes to her room.

PART 93

he sees anjali and armaan ther and calls them to the living room.


sh-aaj jo hua,mein cahta hoon ki iss baare mein kissi ko kuch pata nahi chalna cahiye.i want ki hum riddhima ke saath normally behave karein.i want ki woh jadi yeh sab bhool jaye.


ar-ji sir.......wwp plz chinta mat kariye.......riddhima is fine........she is a strong girl........aur hum hain na uske saath.


sh-thank u armaan.......agar aaj tum nahi hote toh pata nahi kya.......


ar-sir plz dont even think abt it..........mein riddhima ko kabhi kuch nahi hone doonga...........that is a promise.


an-par papa mujhe nahi lagta ab raaj hospital aayega.


ar-agar aaya toh zinda waapis nahi jayega.


sh-anjali mein cahta hoon ki tum plz hamesha riddhima ke sath raho kuch dino tak,jab tak mein is raaj ka bandobast nahi kar deta.aur haan armaan agar aap bhi plz riddhima ka khyal rakhne mein hamri help karengey toh i will be very happy.


ar-dont worry sir..........riddhima ki responsibility mein leta hoon.plz dont wrry abt her.she will be fine.

PART 94

He went back to Riddhima's room…

just looking at her face…

Anjali bought in coffee and they sipped it in silence…

She soon fell asleep on the rocking chair but Armaan kept awake…

watching Riddhima sleep…

At a point Riddhima's hair was lightly brushing her cheeks…

it was disturbing her and Armaan gently moved the strand of hair…

Riddhima turned to her side and in her sleep held Armaan's hand in hers… Armaan couldn't do anything…

if he moved Riddhima would wake up and at the moment she needed maximum rest…

he smiles and lets her sleep…

7am

The sunlight hits Riddhima's face…

slowly she opens her eyes…

she feels something warm and soft in her hands and as she peers down she realises it's Armaan's hand…

She looks at Armaan who is sleeping like a baby on the floor next to her bed…

with a cute innocent smile he looks peaceful…

Instinctively she reaches her hand forward to stroke Armaan's hair…

just as she was about to Armaan's lifts his head up…

PART 95


A: (blearily) Riddhima? Tum uth gayi??

Ri: Uhhh ha… abhi abhi…

A: Mujhe uthaya kyu nahi??

Ri: Woh tum so rahe teh…

A: (puts his hand to her forehead) Tumhara bukhar??

Ri: I think uthar gaya hai… (looking at Armaan's worred face) I'm ok Armaan…

A: Hmmm… check karma parega… (he puts a thermometer in her mouth)

A: Ab temperature normal hai… good…

Ri: (noticing Anjali) Arre di waha kyu so rahi hai??

A: Kyunki hum sab tumhare bareh main bohat pareshan teh… bohat tez bukhar tah… Uski thodi dher pehle hi aankh lagi thi… Main bhi pata nahi kab soh gaya…

Ri: (guiltily) I'm sorry Armaan… woh meri waja se…

A: (forcefully) Tumhari waja se kuch nahi hua…

Ri: Tumhara career…sab kuch…

A: Uski tum fikar na karo… Dr Shashank ko sab kuch pata chalgaya hai… sab theek ho jayega… bas tum theek ho na… sab theek hai…
Riddhima smiled at this…

he cared so much for her it made her heart swell with joy…

she didn't understand what she was feeling…

but whatever it was it made her feel like she was on cloud nine!

An: (waking up) Oh damn… tum logon ne time dekha hai?? Hum sab late hojayege…

A: Hmm you're right…

An: Armaan tum ghar jake fresh ho jao

A: Lekin…

An: Riddhima ko main hospital apne saath le aaogi!! Relax

Ri: (smiling) Di sahi ke rahi hai Armaan… tum jao…

A: (ruefully) Ok… main tum dono ko Sanjeevani main milta hu…

An: Bye!

Armaan left Riddhima's hand… they both felt something as their last fingers lost touch… a feeling that made them wish they had never let go…

Ri: Bye…

A: (moving towards the door) Bye…

Riddhima kept on looking at him go… Armaan turned back before going out the door…

A: Sanjeevani main milta hu… Apne dhyan rakhna… Bye…

Ri: Bye…

Rahul, Muskaan,Atul and Armaan were all in the locker room.

Armaan had just hurried home, had a bath, and left for Sanjeevani.

He wasn't his chirpy self, he was quie today.

His eyes kept going to the door, waiting, wanting to see Riddhima,

just then she entered with Anji.

She said a shy, almost scared hi to everyone and went to her locker.

Everyone wondered what was wrong but just then there was an announcement for all the interns to report.

Everyone left, leaving Riddhima to her locker,

she couldn't find her stethescope, she had a very scared look and she kept looking out, scared, if Raj came.

Armaan went to her, right beside her, and whispered,

Armaan: Don't worry, woh yahaan nahi aa sakta.

Riddhima hadn't noticed Armaan till then, she looked upto him, in scared, hushed tones: Aur agar woh aa gaya toh......?



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Sorry hadnt read it earlier but seriosuly loved the update continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow it waz grt i waz a silent reader but as u said to comment i had to plzzzzzzzzz dont stop thiz ff its grt n continue soon i wont be able to comment regularly but remember i would read ur ff surely
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good
continue soon
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