FF:(SG)Pyarasa LoveStory... part 41&42 Aug/13/09

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Friends,

I am Bunny, I have been writing an FF on Shiv Gauri in KAA forum. and since the Show is going out of Air and I won't be able to complete it on time I am posting the FF here so that I donot disappoint the readers to my FF.

I would be glad if people here like it too....

Do leave your comments for me.... It gives me the advise required for me to know what is good to write and what is boring .... so that I can improve...myself....

Bunny.

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Posted: 16 years ago

A sneak peak into the Story .....

This story is about the sweet little times that you have before and during and after marriage when every thing looks romantic and everything feels pleasant and everything brings a smile on your face? so, there is no negative thing ?VILAN? here ?
Its about.. how two people ? who are both reserved but good at heart? get married?. And ?. How they come out of the uncomfortableness, anxiety and excitement that is there in the first few months of marriage between the new wedded couple?which is apparently a romantic site to the people watching them?
So, I have tried to make it as romantic as possible..Although, I enjoy romantic things like romantic movies, roses, chocolates as gifts.. candle light dinners with the person you love....but donot know if I will be able to bring out the romance in my writing?

So, please give me suggestions ?if you want any thing you feel that can be added? as its our fanfiction?we can turn it the way we want it?

All suggestions are always welcome?

Shiv: The eligible bachelor of town, very reserved and very serious looking, is seen smiling only with his close friends and family. ?The most busy man with hectic work shedules in one word work alcoholic? is what one sees in magazines about him?, But no one knows who the actual shiv is like? as no one has seen him how he is at home? or how he is with his family and friends? and how he is not a work alcoholic?

He has done his studies from abroad? but, did not get much attached to the western culture and he has come back to make a mark in the Indian industry? helps his father with business and other things? and is now one of the top business tycoons in India?

Loves traveling and exploring places? he has been to almost all famous places and is waiting for the one and only person with whom he wants to share his life with?

Mahen and Nikhila kapoor?s only son.

Gauri: Girl next door, doesnot dream of big things to happen in life out of blue. She enjoys playing with kids, enjoys humming music and enjoys all little things happening in life, very cheerful and bubbly always and gives out a smile as she thinks giving a smile doesnot cost anything and its good as other person feels good.
Always family comes first for her.

Most eligible girl in the sense ? adorable, friendly, any good guy wanting to marry would want to marry gauri as she has all the qualities one would expect ? patient in listening to things, a beautiful smile and expressive eyes, expert cook, sexy figure, respect for elders, all maners in tact.
Very introvert never expresses her feelings easily.
She is also rich and has done her studies from good universities.
Gauri chaterjee, Alok chaterjees daughter.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part1:
One fine morning:

It was a beautiful day with a clear blue sky and birds flying around making chirpy noise, and the streets of Mumbai are busy ..buzzing with people? and we are going to the suburbs of Mumbai? and finally to a bunglow where at the gate is a security guard and as we move into the house ..its pretty calm and we can see a number of servants going around cleaning the house and keeping things in place.

Then we see the dinning area of the house where, shiv and mahen are both sitting and reading papers and nikhila is serving breakfast to them, and she sees that both are reading papers and talking about business and not interested in whether she is there are not..
She pulls the papers from both their hands and immediately...
"Nikhilaa....Mom...... "
"Kya Mom .... Phle dono.... breakfast karlo... phir panda aaram se Yeh tumara Paper....."
"Tum donoka kuch nahi hosaktha.... Main is ghar me akeli hogayi hu....Tum donoke hote huye bhi.... yeh to aisehi hai..lekin shiv!! Tum to phle mujse bat karthatha..lekin ab tubhi inke thara hogaya hai....jab se office join kiya hai..... tu bhi mujhse kam bat karne laga hai..."

"Mom.... aap eise kyun kehrahi hai.... bus thodasa busy hu... aur kuch nahi... acha.... tho aaj shyam ko hum dono dinner keliye jayenge ....sir hum dono ....papako chod kar....!!!"

Nikhila gives a smile..

"I love you Mom.....See you in the evening....be ready for a Date with me....!!!"

Chal Badmash!!...

Ok..bye Mom..!!!

Bye...

She turns and sees Mahen looking at her lovingly....
So, she curiously asks..

"Aaap kya dekhrahe hain...."
He walks near her.... holds her with his left hand and ..
I Love You Nikhila ..... and gives a peck on the cheek....
She gives a curious look and says....

"Oye Hoye!!! Suddenly ....ithne romantic hogaye.."
And mahen says..
"Nothing Just like that.....Ok..bye!! mujhe office keliye derhorahi hain.."
But, Nikhila knew deep down that.... both of them loved her a lot....this was her world she could go no - where but here....
Shiv was mahen and nikhlas only son and their jaan.... and it was the same with Shiv....

Shiv Kapoor would never smile or laugh in public, he was considered as a very serious business tycoon. That was one thing every one wished to capture. But it was nothing that real shiv was?

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Please Let me know if you want me to continue...I was writing it for myself and then posted it here...

Thanks, 😉
Donot forget to comment!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part2:
A Honda Assent car came to the opposite side of the road of shiv's home, and the driver of the car came out and opened the behind door, and we see some one stepping out wearing yellow heels, its a girl...and as she steps out, we see she is wearing a yellow chunidar... that is hugging her figure and has a umbrella stich and her physique is so admiring... and she gives a sweet and friendly smile to the driver saying 'thankyou' and turns around... and we see a cute face with a beautiful smile... 😊 and that dimple in her cheeks and those serine kohl layered eyes and her hair let loose falling on her shoulders. And you all know whom I am speaking of... 😉 the one and only Gauri. 👏 👏

And then we see a man with spectacles getting down from the other side of the car, he smiles at her and says 'beta… andar chalen..' and she nods her head and they they open the guards open the gates for them to go in. That was Alok Chaterjee gauri's father.

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Part3:

Gauri and Alok come to Mahen's house and knock the door bell… and servant comes and opens the door… and asks whom do they want…
We want to meet the owner of the house…. The servant goes and says nikhila some one wants to meet you and nikhila comes down…

She sees Gauri and Alok and thinks…who are these people and why do they want to meet me…
Nikhila with this thought comes down and says namaste…and asks them to come in… Nikhila asks them… "Mafi chahatihu… paar meine aapko pahchana nahi.. kya mein aapko janthi hu…" with a questioning look..

Alok smiles and says… " ji …. Aap hame nahi janti hain… hum kal hi… aapke samne vale ghar me aye hain… mera naam Alok chatarjee hain …aur yeh meri beti Gauri hain…" and then Gauri smiles at Nikhila and says.. "Namaste aunty… Humare Ghar me Kal Durga maa ki puja hain.. hum yaha naye hain…isliye... aspas ke subko bulaya hain.... Hum apko bhi..Durga maa ki puja me bulane aye hain… App aur Appka parivar hamare Ghar kal puja keliya zaroor ayiyega…"

After listening to this… Nikhila says… "Ohh… acha acha… achi bat hain…hum zaroor ayenge… agar koi kam ho… to bejijak bata dena beta…" and then Gauir says… "Acha ..Aunty ab ham chalthe hain…."

And Nikhila says… "Ayise kaise ja sakthe hain..aap hamare Ghar phli bar ayehein… kuch lentho padegahi… aap kadekun yehin beytiyen… mein abhi aap keliyen kuch latihu.."

Gauri says.. "Aunty… koi formalities mat kijiye aunty… hum ab chalthe hain… bahut kuch kar na baki hain… phir kabhi aaram se ayenge.."

But Nikhila says… " koi bahana nahi chelege beti… tum bas bayto mein abhi ayi.." saying this she smiles and leaves… hurriedly…

And Gauri and Alok look at the house and admire how neatly everything is placed and how nice the lady is…

Nikhila comes back with coffee and snacks and gives it to them and sits there when …. Alok says… "Mafi chahatahu lekin …mein aapka naam nahi janta…" and Nikhila smiles and says… '"Ji mera naam Nikhila hain…aur mere pati ka naam Mahen kapoor hain…'
Then Alok smiles and says… " Aaap se milke acha laga Nikhila ji…. Ab hum chalthe hain… bas pass me kuch Ghar aur chalna hain..une puja mein bulane kaliye… phir mujhe office janahain… meri beti ko Ghar me chod ke.."

Nikhila smiles and says… "Ji… Thank you for inviting us… Hum kal zaroor ayenge…" and Gauri and Alok say namasthe and go from there…

Nikhila smiles and goes inside…

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Please Comment...how was it... 😊
and i know you all are sad...that there is NO SHIV!!! 😡 in this part...there may be some bloppers ...please ignore...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part4:

In the evening, Shiv comes home from office and says… 'Mom – Are you ready for the date… I will just freshen up and come…' saying this he opens his suite buttons and takes his briefcase and runs up the stairs…to get freshen up…

Nikhila listens to his voice and smiles and says… ' Aagaye tum beta… mein tumare liye Coffee latihu… tum jakar tayar hojavo…phir challenge…'

Shiv climbing the stairs looks back and smiles at Nikhila and says… 'I love you Mom..' and runs to his room

In his room he throws the brief case on the bed and removes his shoe pushes them with his leg to a side and goes to the bathroom… and closes the door…then after few minutes he comes out of wash room in towel and goes to his…cupboard… and opens it and starts searching for the dress to wear... he keeps looking at them puts a hand in his hair 😕 and then removes some dresses and looks at it and throws it on the bed and then removes another and throws it on the bed… and then…another…and after few minutes…he feels irritated and calls out…. 'Mom aap yaha ayengi please…' and nikhila says 'aarahi hu…'

Nikhila comes to shivs room… and she knows that he would have made a mess by now… and thinks to herself 'how could she not remember that he is very bad at choosing a dress..' and now she would have to keep all the dresses in order again…

She comes to the room and sees the mess and gives a huff... and then comes to the cupboard and picks up a dress and gives it to shiv and he takes the dress and goes to change it…and she looks at the mess and starts picking up the dresses and putting them in their place…and thinks to herself… 'who ever is going to marry him… all her time will be take away in cleaning and keeping this room neat…like her…' and smiles to herself….and keeps all the dresses properly in place…

Shiv comes out wearing a white casual shirt tucked inside the blue jeans and smiles at nikhila and asks her to get ready too… then nikhila says…that she is already ready…and shiv says 'Mom.. you are going on a date with Shiv kapoor … you should be wearing a gorgeous outfit not a saree….and think about my reputation…' smiles and winks at her…and Nikhila says 'Sharam nahi ati maa se iyse kehthe huye…agar tume itnahi gorgeous outfit pehnanahi hai…toh…jaldise… shadi karle…fir hokum karna apne biwi par…' she pulls his nose and Shiv says .. 'Comeon Mom… App ithini jaldi budi kyun bana chahati hain…' to which nikhila says.. 'kya matlab' and shiv says ' Maa..meri shadi hojayegi tho aap mother say mother-in-law banjayengi… tab tho apkeliye competition aajayegi..apki daughter-in-law and you will be called oldies Mom….phir toh aap yeh sub nahi pehan payengi…'
And Nikhila on listening smiles and ruffles his hair and goes from there... thinking 'I can never … beat him in words…'

Shiv follows her down the stairs into the living room sits there and keeps changing channels… and then nikhila brings coffee for him and he takes it and says 'thanks Mom' and they sit there…and then shiv asks her … 'Aur batayiye mom… aaj kya kiya ..apne..' to which nikhila says… ' kuch ..bhi nahi… and then says…hamare smane vale bunglow mein naye log aye hain..who subha ayethe… kal unke ghar me puja hain..aur hum sub ko bulaya hain..aur mein ne kehdiaya ki hum sub aa rahein… hain…' and she looks at shiv and shiv says… 'Comeon mom main puja mein kya karoonga… I am not coming…and makes a bored face..' and nikhila says 'beta..puja keliye naa nahi kehte…tu todi der aake..phir cheleja..' and then shiv gives a nod..and shiv completes his coffee and

then asks nikhila lets start..to go .. for dinner… and nikhila says… lets wait for Mahen and shiv is like… 'I told you it's a date for us both … 😊 ' and then nikhila says… 'you know I donot come without your father… 😳 ' and shiv thinks 'I know that too…' 😊 and thinks to himself that … 'he is happy about it, that their parents are so attached to each other…' 😊

And after mahen comes .. all go out for dinner… with shiv driving the car and mahen in the side seat and nikhila in the behind seat…and they enjoy jokes and have funny talk ... 😊 and they reach a famous restaurant and take a private seating and have their dinner and shiv is having fun with his parents…(how sweet 😊 )they come home and shiv gives a goodnight kiss to nikhila and says good night to mahen and goes of to sleep…

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So, Here goes the next part.... Please give your comments... I love to read your comments... Suggest me ideas... on how to go further... lets make it our FF...

and tell me How did you celebrate your Diwali... I work in US so... no hungama here... 😭

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part : 5

Then goes to his room closes the door and nikhila has kept a night dress out..so he takes it and changes his clothes and comes to his bed and lifts the blanket and gets into the bed and stares at his room and today he was not feeling sleepy so fast so gets up again…goes to the balcony of his room..where cool breeze was flowing…. swinging the curtains and kissing his cheek and he felt happy inside and then after sometime comes back inside and gets into bed and takes a magazine and just keeps looking at some pictures in it… and then he remembers nikhila saying get married and then you can have your wife wear what you want… and he smiles to himself and looks at the other side of the bed which is empty and pulls out the pillow and hugs it for a second and keeps it back and switches of the light and goes off to bed smiling with the cool breeze coming into the room…and full moon in the night sky smiling at the stars…bringing sweet dreams to him…

Nikhila before going to bed had told mahen about the pooja in Gauri house and he had told her …he will come there but then would leave early as he has work at office.. so next day… nikhila wakes up serves both shiv and mahen breakfast and then they all leave for the puja with mahen and shiv wearing salwar kameez…. for the puja and nikhila wearing a saree…and then they reach alok home and they are welcomed by alok and nikhila introduces them to alok and then she excuses herself to go in and meet alok's daughter… and Gauri is wearing a beautiful pink saree looking elegant and dignified with simple jewellary and going through all the things needed for the puja and asking the pandit if he wants anything else… and nikhila comes to her and they both wish eachother and gauri makes her seated and the puja starts and gauri is sitting in the puja and all the men are seated behind the ladies…nikhila and all other women are sitting behind gauri..and then the puja is started…

alok and shiv and mahen and some other guests join in…and alok lifts his hand and says that's my daughter in the puja and both shiv and mahen look to where alok is showing ..but they cannot see her face as… she is turned to the other side and doing the puja and they all get seated and puja is peformed and then… as soon as the puja is done and everyone gets up …. Mahen and shiv come to Nikhila and say that…they need to go, as there is important things to do at office and need to change their dress and hence, they need to leave…so nikhila wishes them good bye and they leave…

Gauri who was busy with other things just then brings Prasad to nikhila and asks if she came alone and nikhila says that… her son and husband came but were having work at office so they left just now..and she points in the direction where they were going and gauri looks at them leaving but is not able to see them as they are facing the other way and going out… she smiles and gives Prasad to nikhila for all of them and asks her to stay for lunch and then goes to give Prasad to others…and nikhila who knows other neighbors in the area talks to them…and then after having lunch all start leaving… so nikhila goes to say that she is leaving… and goes to talk to alok…and asks him.. about his wife not being around and alok with sadness in his eyes says that… his wife passed away few years ago… due to illness and from then his daughter has been taking care of him like a mother… and starts to say that… he is very proud of his daughter…and nikhila feels bad and says that she is sorry she enquired and alok dismisses her saying..don't worry its ok..its been long time..now..and then she looks at gauri..who is talking to some of the guests and smiling at everyone..and taking care of the things around… nikhila has a smile on her face…

And then she goes to gauri and says that she is leaving and asks her to come home some time as she is alone all day..and that... they could sit around and have fun together…and that only, if its ok with her… for this Gauri gives a big smile and says… 'Zaroor aunty..' 'mein..zaroor avungi…' then they say good bye and nikhila leaves…

She goes a little distance and looks at the house which is beautifully arranged and then gauri who is saying servants to do some work and has a glint in her eyes and keeps an expression that she is thinking about some thing… and then leaves with a smile on her face…

Days go by…
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part : 6

Nikhila has a party at her house and she invites gauri and alok to her house for the party

In the past few days - Gauri and Nikhila have been in contact and nikhila had taken her for shopping to show the shops around and they used to chat on phones and when ever Gauri made a special dish she used to bring some for nikhila and they used to have afternoon food together…
And Nikhila kept talking about Gauri to mahen and shiv on and off … and Gauri about Nikhila to Alok… But shiv and gauri never met

And the day of the party arrived …it was a party in the evening… more of a get together…and Nikhila had not called many outside guests and friends…it was more of the family and relatives and few close friends…

Gauri came in the afternoon to help nikhila with the food and preparations…. And after doing the preparation had left to get ready for the evening on Nikhila insisting her.

And then Gauri wore a white dress with pink and yellow and red small button flowers embroried all over the dress and looking simple and elegant as always with a small diamond pendant in the neck and small diamond earings…and watch matching her dress color in her left hand… and wearing matching shoes… and her hair..left loose waving…

Shiv was in his casual… Cream half hands shirt tucked in blue jeans…looking very handsome and attractive… was still getting ready in his room

Gauri came with Alok and after meeting few of them with Alok… excused herself to meet Nikhila and since the party was in the garden of the house..she searched for Nikhila and thinking that she is in the house getting ready….went in… and not finding her in the hall went up the stairs… looking around…

and Shiv by now had finished getting ready and was coming out of his room in a hurry and Gauri was passing by… when she bumped into SHIV....( 🥳.... Finally, they have met...Lets Celebrate...!!!) And immediately both said sorry…with out looking at eachother…. And then lifted their heads to see eachother and Gauri did not know who was he and Shiv was in the same state and just looking at her simplicity yet elegant way of dressing… Shiv kept on looking at her and Gauri quickly gave a glance and seeing him look at her ….

gave a smile and lowered her eyes…so as not to meet his…and said… 'sorry mein ne aap ko aate huye dekha nahi… mein…woh mein nikhila aunty ko dund rahithi…' and saying this she stopped and stood there for the other person to say something… and shiv said 'its ok …I was the one hurring out…Mom yehi kahi kongi… mama ka room who bajuwala hai…aap jake dekhiye …shayad waha hongi…' saying this he gave way for gauri to go a head…and gauri..nodded and went from there…not once lifting her head.. and shiv was standing there and looking at her leaving… with an unknown feeling cropping up in his heart…

He kept staring till she went into his mothers room and then when she disappeared into the room he came to his senses and then thought in his mind …...'Who is this girl ….' 'I have not seen her before…' 'she has a beautiful smile'.. and then thought 'ohh no…. am I getting attracted…?? 😳 ' and then thinks… 'me…getting attracted… no..no…' and nikhila who was in the kitchen getting some thing… was downstairs watching all this and smiling to herself..thinking that her son finally has seen a girl for few minutes… other wise he never cares even to look at a girl for more than 2 seconds.. and felt that may be, she knows what her son wants in the girl - that he is wating for to come into his life…

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part : 7

Gauri was thinking 'so, he is nikhila auntys son… Shiv..', and thinks that he is very good looking, handsome and attractive…thinking this she just smiles to herself and hits her head with her hand and …walks slowly to nikhila auntys room thinking ' I should not be thinking like this…'

And then Shiv comes down and sees his mom leaving with some food in her hand… he calls out to her 'Mom..ek minute…some girl was looking for you… I showed her your room…' and then Nikhila says… as if she did not see anything… 'Acha… mein jake dekh thi hu…tum yeh lejakar waha buffet may rakh do..' and saying this she gives the tray to him and leaves to go up… to her room..

Shiv stares at the steps for some time wanting to ask something to his mother…but then leaves without asking…as his mother was in a hurry…
Nikhila reaches her room and then gauri was about to come out finding that no one was in the room…and then nikhila says… 'Gauri beta agayi tum…' and gauri turns around… and smiles at nikhila and says 'Ji aunty… who mein niche ayithi… lekin apko dekha nahi..tho socha aap andar hongi…koi help chahiye aunty…'

And Nikhila looks at her and thinks how adorable she is… wish I had a daughter like her…and says… 'Subkuch tho ready hain beta… aab koi kaam nahi… bas party enjoy karo…mere sath chalo… mujhe tume hamare relatives se milana hain…'

Saying this she brings her down…. And they come to the garden where the party was going on…and nikhila introduces her to shyla, daksh, and vivan…. And Gauri talks to them smiles at them and is enjoying with them…

But some where in the party someone was sitting near a corner table having a juice glass in hand and was watching her from the moment she stepped into the garden and those eyes were following her where ever she was going.

It was none other than shiv.. he was not able to look away from her.. she was looking like an angle in the party… then she was walking by his table…and shiv bent his head to not make it obvious he was looking at her…but gauri went by not even acknowledging that he was sitting there…she was going by talking with some other girl in the party… when dupatta of her dress swept by shivs face and he felt something in him… go weak…

And a music slowly plays in the back ground… male version only..

dekha jo tumko..yeh dil ko kya huwa hai…
meri dadkanom pein..yeh chaya kya nasha hain….

(On seeing you… what has happened to my heart…
What intoxication is happening on my pulse…)

Dewana khona jaye..mohobat hona jaye…
Samalu keise isko.. mujhe tu bataaa…

( shall not the crazy person ….be gone into dreams…
Shall he not be in love…
How do i handle myself… you tell me….)

Bheign bheign.. alkonse…
Chori chori palkonse…
kyun mera sapana churayein..

Jhuki Jhuki akhiyonse..
Dhire dhire batiyonse…
Kyun mujhe apna banaayee…

(with your downcast eyes…
And with your soft talks…
Why do you make me yours…)

Shrarat hona jaye…
Mohobat hona jaye….
Samalun kaise isko..mujhe tu bataaa….

( let there be no trick done…
Let no love happen….
How do I handle myself … you tell me…)

Chahe hum … Chahe bhito…
Phehare..lagaye bhito…
Kaise din rat ko rokein…

(even if I wanted …
Even if I stop myself…
How do I stop the day and night…)

Aag bina yeh jalein…
Zoor na koi chale…
Kaise jas bat ko rokein…

(even with out fire…it burns..
And no force is able to stop it…
How do I stop my emotions..)

Yeh chahat hona jayein…
Mohobat hona jayein…
Samalu kaise isko… mujhe tu bataaa….

(let this affection not happen…
Let the love not happen..
How do I handle it… you tell me..)

From movie: kasoor (one of my favorite songs….)

And there were another pair of eyes trailing shivs eyes…and it was nikhila who was talking to her friends but noticing how shiv was following his eyes at gauri where ever she went…and was smiling to herself…

And then Shiv couldnot take it any longer… he was feeling a new feeling that he could not understand…, so he went into his room saying bye to vivan who was enjoying the party and wanted shiv to stay back but..shiv said not today… vivan thought to himself that 'what has happened to shiv..today…he used to like these parties with family a lot' and then went back to his friends chatting..shiv went up… nikhila saw that too and she smiled to herself… thinking… 'beta …ab …tu tho gaya kamse...'

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part : 8

Then, everyone was enjoying the party and food and gauri was chatting with some of the guests at the party standing with Nikhila when some one went by pushing her… and the food spill on her dress… and Nikhila said her to go wash her dress and change into some of her saree or chunidar… for now…in her room… so gauri made her way to nikhilas room… and she was going by shiv's room looking at her dress…and shiv who was sitting on his bed with his glass of juice saw some one go by and came out of the room to see and found… gauri walking by humming a song
'Tum bin jiya jaye kaise…
kaise jiya jayea tum bin…
sadiyonsi lambi hain ratein…
sadiyonse lambe huye din…
aa ja lotkar vapas…
yeh dil keh raha hain…'
thinking that no one was around…as she only hummed songs when she was alone…

She was singing really sweetly …and there was no one in the house… due to which the song was beeming in Shiv's ears…

Shiv kept watching her go to nikhila moms room and he was listening to the song… and felt his heart jump with joy listening to her sing…he wanted to listen to it more… 'but …why did he want to listen to it more…' … 'why he was feeling this unusual feeling…from the time he saw her…'

Then she went into nikhila's room… went into washroom and washed her dress and then went to nikhilas cupboard and took out a light peach color saree… which had embedded light embroidery… in it… and took it changed to saree and came out… and Shiv stood there for some time.. and then went to his bed and sat down again… and recollecting the song gauri was singing… and thinking… 'why is all this happening to me… ' he was feeling confused…

Then Gauri came out of nikhila's room and was walking to the stairs… when she passed shivs room… again shiv cameout… to here her sing…

'Hum bewafa hargiz na the ….
par hum wafa karnaske…
hum ko mili uski saza…
hum vo katha karna sake…'

and shiv saw her in saree from behind and then when she got down the stairs he saw her from side…she looked adorable…in the peach color saree… and he thought… 'Wow… She is so beautiful… 😛 ' and then immediately thinks… 'what has happened to me…??' 'I have seen more beautiful girls before….???' 😕

He took his empty glass and came down behind her… gauri did not know shiv was there in his room…all the while…

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 16 years ago

#10

Part : 9

Gauri came back to the party… and found most of the guests have left and it was nikhila's family and relatives that were there… and then looking at them talking..she went to nikhila and said 'aunty I will leave now..i will bring this saree tomorrow..' and Nikhila said..beta… 'Thodider aur rukjao.. phir jaana… aao…mere sath beyto…aur yeh saree tumpar bahut jachti hain..' and Gauri couldnot say anything just nodded and smiled…

And then all the young crowd from the relatives joined together and all girls and boys started playing 'Antakshari' (the famous game..right)

And they took gauri in too..and shiv and vivan and all were there… in the boys gang…and gauri along with others in the girl gang…

Gauri was sitting behind everyone… as she did not know anyone..much… and was feeling a little lost…but she enjoyed songs and hence was enjoying all the songs that were being sung… and Shiv who was sitting along with vivan in the first row was looking at her from the corner of his eye from time to time..

The girls were stuck with 'tha' letter and not knowing what to sing..

and were confused…so one of them asked her and she said 'tujhe dekha tho ye jana sanam' and every one started to sing…and our shiv being shiv …said.. 'jiska gana hai..vahi gaye… varna koi aur gana gaye.. 😊 ' and every boy supported him… and all girls requested gauri to sing..but she was all shy and not willing to sing..but finally she sang… and the moment she started every one became calm…

Gauri's eyes were down cast as long as she sang the song…

'tuje dekha tho yeh jana sanam …
pyar hota hai dewana sanam…
ab yeh hase kaha jaye hum…
teri bahome marjaye humm….
Tujhe dekha tho yeh jana sanam….'

Gauri closed her eyes in the end and shiv was looking at her as she sang…and the moment she completed every one clapped for her and girls said..you have a sweet voice… and gauri was in smiles… 😊

They played for some time…then every one started to leave… and gauri also left after some time with alok… and shiv kept on looking at her all the while … from the corner of his eye… without anyone noticing him… and smiling to himself from time to time… 😳

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