Hey guys. . . I am writing a new fan fiction. . . I hope you guys enjoy it!
Mene Naa Janaa
The Walia Family
Jay Walia- Jay is the father of his 4 sons and he is a very serious father. Jay had become very serious after his wife's death, Bani Walia. Jay loved his wife so much and then she was kidnapped and then they had heard that she had died. Armaan, his second son, had just changed his personality and Jay started living sadly.
Angad Walia- angad is a very honest and very handsome man. He is a very educated and caring person. Basically, in all fan fictions, angad is all flirty and he has attitude but in this story, it's different. Angad is not really flirty and he cares about his studies and he wants to grow up to be a singer.
Armaan Walia- armaan is a very serious guy. He used to be very hyper and flirty but then his mother died. Armaan stays very sad and he doesn't crack up anymore. Armaan's three brothers try to cheer him up but it never works. His bothers are very sad about armaan and miss the old him. Armaan is a doctor at the Sanjeevni hospital.
Prem Walia- Prem is of course, as you know a very handsome and flirty guy. He is the most hyper and crazy one from all 4 brothers. No girl ends up marrying him, as he never wants to marry. Prem is the one who is always trying to make armaan his cheerful brother again. Prem is also very sad of his mother's death but still he lives his life to the fullest.
Hussein Walia- Hussein is the youngest brother and he is the one who all brothers take care of. Angad always takes responsibility when Hussein is in any kind of trouble. Prem teaches him to flirt around. And, armaan just takes over for him when somebody messes around with him. Hussein's 3 caring brothers are always reliable and he can always go to them for any help. Hussein also tries to make his dull brothers his hyper brothers again.
The Gupta Family
Kripa Gupta- Kripa is a fashionable and caring girl. She is the oldest one from all of her 3 sisters. Kripa really cares for her sisters and lives with her parents. Kripa loves Ridhima the best from her sisters. She loves Ridhima the most because Ridhima is always with her and they are really close. Kripa finds her younger sister, Mukti very boring. Kripa is a girl who would fall for a person like angad.
Ridhima Gupta- Ridhima is a very hyper and nice girl. She is the whole opposite of armaan. Ridhima loves her 3 sisters and she is a doctor also. Ridhima is very thankful for her loving family and she is the bubbliest one. Ridhima can make a person smile by her sweetness and cuteness. Armaan and Ridhima don't know that they work together.
Mukti Gupta- Mukti is very studious and religious. I find Mukti very boring too. Mukti's room is all decorated with boring and studious things. Mukti doesn't speak very much and she is always reading books when she is bored. Mukti and Prem are best friends in school. She likes half of him. Prem is always hyper and crazy and she likes people who are hyper and crazy. Prem and she are friends in high school and what I can compare them to is Anjali and Rahul in Kuch Kuch Hota Hai.
Me J- I am a girl who is fashionable and I worry too much. When there are family problems or any tension, I start to worry and the girls have to take care of me. I have a boyfriend, Hussein. Hussein and I started going out when we met in high school. I didn't tell any of my sisters about Hussein and me.
So. . . umm this is the characters introduction and here is a promo of my first part.
Promo:
Prem: Good morning Mumbai! Good morning guys.
Armaan: Prem, mey abhi mood mey nahi hoon. Tu akke behtja jaldi sey.
Prem: Cheea. . .like you're ever in mood!
Hussein: Guys. . . mey ajj na bahar jaonga and I'll be back at like 7 okay?
Angad: Kahan jaoge tum Hussein?
Hussein: oh, I just have to go out . . . you know just spend some time outside. . .
Prem: go out? Now you're my brother!
Hussein- Prem it's nothing like that
Prem- come on tell me who the girl is
Angad- what is Prem talking about Hussein?
Hussein- err
Armaan- will you guys hush up? I have a major case today so please
Prem- okay okay we'll shut up but Hussein has to tell us who he's going out with
Hussein- arey . . . prem? Gosh! Ok so I am going out with this cute girl . . . and we like each other . . . her name is Arfa and she's Mukti's sister
Prem and angad- oohooo. . . wahh bhi wah
Armaan- god Hussein! Ab tu bhi in dono ki tarah baand gaya? (He's rolling his eyes) Ok bye guys meh ab jara hoon
All three of them- ok bye!!
Angad- dekh ke jana! Ok armaan?
Prem- yeah yeah so Hussein what were you saying? She's Mukti's sister? Ok let me ask her on the phone about this Arfa.
(Just before prem dials the phone)
Hussein- no prem! Don't tell her . . . look try to understand . . . Arfa doesn't want to tell anybody
Prem- ooh . . . toh yeh hai story??
Angad- guys just stop talking about this and Hussein you can go okay?
Hussein- thanks bhai!
Prem- yo Hussein I gotta check out your girlfriend too so I'm gonna come with you
Hussein (sighs) - ok prem but please don't flirt around with her . . . uska bohut chotta dil hai
In the Gupta house
Kripa- good morning guys
Ridhima- hey sis good morning to you too
Kripa and Ridhima do their secret handshake
Mukti (sighs and rolls her eyes)- guys please don't start
Me- mukti are you busy today?
Mukti- nahi arfa meh busy nahi hoon
Me- oh ok . . . so then could you come with me today? Me and my friend are meeting an we're going to drink coffee
Ridhima- hey Arfa mujhse kyun nahi puccha?
Me- didi apko janaa hai na sanjeevni
Ridhima- oh haan meh toh bhool hi gayi!
Mukti- ok arfa I'll come with you
Kripa- hey guys I forgot to tell you that I'm going to go to the singing audition today so nobody is going to be home
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It was 3:30 and Mukti and I were getting ready to go meet Hussein
Prem and Hussein got ready and were going to the caf
I wore my pink shirt with a mini skirt and Mukti wore her pant shirt.
Mukti drove us to the caf and while we were going, I was talking to Mukti
Me- hey mukti . . . I wanted to tell you something
Mukti- yah arfa tell me
Me- I wanted you to know that I have a boyfriend named Hussein and that's who I'm going to meet
Mukti- what? Arfa? You have a boyfriend? And his name is Hussein? Hey! That's Prem's brother! Hey I gotta tell him about this
Me- so you're not mad at me that I have a boyfriend?
Mukti- I am
Me- oh (sighs)
Mukti calls prem and she's talking to him
Prem- hello? Mukti?
Mukti- yeah prem it's me and I have to tell you something . . . you know my sister, arfa, she's going out with your brother Hussein!
Prem- yeah I know that . . . Hussein just told me . . .
Mukti- oh he did? Wow could you believe it?
Prem- yes
Mukti (sighs)- okk so where are you right now?
Prem- oh I'm just with Hussein going to a caf where him and his "arfa" meet
Mukti- what?? I am going there too! Ok let's meet there and you can see my sister and I can see your brother
Prem- alright bye!
Mukti- bye (mukti cuts the phone)
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