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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-14....Naina:my son angad is alive. dileep:angad is back...karthik:its a gud news.but they announced that its zaib. dadi:but its angad.we'll go 2 dubai. N:yes,immediately. kripa tells prithvi:see i told u no,i saw him. P:yes kripa,sorry 4 misunderstanding u. misti's eyes rises thinking about her old moments with angad:josh,is it angad? J:i'm confused. M:u r his best friend & u can't make sure that its angad or not? jos did'nt no what 2 say.he goes 2 zaib.zaib did'nt mind him as he was busy with his crazy female fans. josh thinks:if it was angad,how can he neglect me like this? kripa shouts at zaib:angad...he looks at kripa:hey,who is this crazy girl? K:i'm a crazy girl?shut up angad.playing a big death drama u r here putting a mask? Z:what is this girl telling?i can't understand anything.she is mad. P:control ur tongue.kripa did'nt tell anything wrong. Z:so her name is kripa?by the way whats her relation with u. prithvi becomes angry:she is my wife. Z:O!really?when the wife behaves like this,its normal that a luving hubby behaving like this.i don't care. P:angad,why can't u admit that u r angad?why r u wearing this mask of another rock star zaib? Z:see,u r mistaken.i'm not angad.i'm zaib. J:angad..Zaib tells sharply:i'm zaib.so plz don't call me angad. K:angad! Z:if i call u by another name,wll u like it?no rite?like that i also get irritated by this.so plz call me only by my name ie zaib.only zaib. he smiles.every1 was stunned.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
i love it. continue soon. 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
👏 👏 👏
great work plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
I catched up all the series now. very good writing. plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
Part-15....Every1 was confised whether its angad or Zaib. kripa:i'm sure that its angad. prithvi:but then why shud he stay here as zaib? K:only here he can liv with a gud image.a dirty person like angad will wear any mask 2 save his prestige. prihvi feels guilty.he thinks:angad is not bad like u think kripa.its bcoz of me,still kripa hav a bad opinion about angad.if i tell the truth,kripa will go 2 zaib & if zaib is angad himself....i can't think about losing kripa. Naina-Dileep& karthik cum 2 dubai. Naina:i want 2 see my son. Josh:but naina aunty,there is no guarantee that its our angad. N:i can recognise my son.its angad. Dadi was sick.she was taking bed rest. Karthik:dadi,u take rest,we'l, go 2 see angad...i mean zaib. dadi:i don't care about my health.i want 2 see angad. K:but dadi,u r too weak 2cum.u can't even get up. dadi weeps:but i want 2 see my son. K:we'll bring him..Dadi becomes happy. K:only if heis angad. dadi becomes sad.she prays:god,bring my angad back..plz ..let zaib be angad. they all go 2 zaib's house. naina was so happy that she goes & hugs zaib. dileep:beta...why did u go away from us? karthik:bhai! Zaib:who r these mad ppl? they were stunned. naina:angad! Z:see,i've told every1 that i'm zaib,bot angad. Kripa:very nice angad..u r so hard hearted that u eeven acted rude 2 ur own family.i'vent seen such a big crooked..N:enuff kripa,don't talk rubbish about my son. K:but naina aunty,can't u see how he is behaving? N:plz stop it kripa. kripa sees zaib's smiling face. she throws sum pkotoes on his face.zaib takes it.these were angad's family photoes,photoes with josh,his photoes wit kripa of stage shows. K:now can u deny that u r not angad. Z:wow!i'm surprised that there was a man in india named angad who looks exactly like me. K:angad was not an ordinary man,he was a rock star.u r also a rock star. Z:whT A COINcidence. K:both of u r rock stars.that itself shows that u r angad. Z:rubbish! 1 lady cumes :who r they zaib? Z:i dunno aunty. Zaib tells them:this is my aunty who brought me up. they were shocked. dileep:is this right?u r angad's aunty? Aunty:not angad's aunty,but zaib's aunty.i no him from childhood.i'm like his mother. naina& dileep cry. zaib goes near kripa:u were the 1 clallenged me that u'll prove that i'm angad.now u say..i'm a angad? kripa stares at him:yes,still i think that u r angad;the cheater. she turns 2 prithvi:angad's rite arm contained tattoo.if this guy who claims that he is the rock star zaib is also having it..then its sure that e is angad. kripa loooks at zaib with a smile. she tells in her mind:Angad,u r trapped.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue yaar it is interestin
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
plz contiue soon. that was really good. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Part-16...Prithvi:remove ur shirt. Zaib:why shud i ? karthik:bcoz we doubt that u r angad. Z:i don't hav 2 do this 2 prove myself. K:but we need proof. so u hav 2 do so. kripa:from his hesitation itself we can understand that he is none other than angad. zaib becomes angry:i told u no,i'm not angad. K:then why don't u do what we told u. Z:ok..i'll. he removes his shirt.they were all shocked,bcoz his hand did'nt tatoo. Z:now u all believe no that i'm not angad. naina& dileep weep. P:this is not angad. naina-Dileep,karthik & all went. kripa was still standing there staring at him. P:kripa,cum we'll go. K:prithvi,he is fooling us.this angad himself. P:no kripa.this is not angad. K:this is angad. P:no.. Kripa thinks:prithvi won't believe me.what can i do? K:prithvi,we'll go. they both walk out.kripa turns back.she sees zaib's smiling face. she gets irritated. she thinks:he is happy that he succeeded in making every1 believe his goat mask.a wolf like angad will do anything. Josh tells prithvi-kripa:here in dubai,all r crazy about zaib.4 a successful show,his presense is needed.so what about considering him 4 singing in our future shows. P:thats a gud idea. K:what rubbish!whats the need 4 that? P:kripa,its 4 our show. K:only if he sings well,our shows will go well?we r enuff. J:kripa...try 2 understand.its only till we go 2 india.there in india,we don't need zaib. P:yes.kripa,plz agree. K:u guys do whatever u want.i don't care. P:kripa,this is not enuff.we won't ur full support. K:how can i support u?bcoz i hate that guy. P:why do u hate zaib?what did he do 2 u? kripa thinks:if i tell that he's angad,they won't believe. Kripa pretends 2 be smiling with ful heart:ok guys.i also think that what u've decided is 4 gud. josh-prithvi smile. P:but the problem is whether a busy singer like zaib will agree 2 join us.anyways we'll contact him. Later prithvi-josh cum with cheers.prithvi hugs kripa:we've won kripa.zaib has agreed 2 do the shows with us.he has got such a big heart.otherwise he wud'nt hav agreed.bcoz tho not purposefully we've tortured him a lot telling that he is pretending 2 be zaib. kripa has an artificial smile. she thinks:thats angad himself.otherwise a busy singer like him wud'nt hav agreed 2 sing in our shows.he is trying 2 cum close 2 us.he has got sum plan.he is crooked. but what is he planning?only 2 destroy our peace.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
that was really good. continue soon. 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
Part-17....Kripa phones zaib:i want 2 talk 2 u.Kripa meets Zaib . K:u came when i called.that itself shows that u r angad.otherwise why shud u cum here?i'm a stranger. Z:u r not a stranger 4 me.i no u 4 a few days.1st i thot u r mad. kripa becomes angry. Z:then i realized that u r not mad.but makes fuss about silly things. K:stop it. Z:i came here bcoz i'm going 2 be the singer of ur show.i thot u want 2 say sumthing about it. K:u agreed 2 do this show bcoz its our's.so u r angad. A:not bcoz i'm angad.they requested me,bcoz they think that without me,the show will be a big flop. K:u r too prowd.what do u think of urself?u think u r the gr8est singer?not at all. Zaib smiles:i don't claim that i'm the biggest singer of this world.but what 2 do?here all r crazy about me.girls will die 4 me.maybe they like my style very much. K:u think so.but the truth may not be that. Zaib smiles:its ok,i don't want 2 fight with u Miss Kripa. K:not Miss,Mrs Prithvi Bose.my husband is prithvi,a gentleman,not a froad like u. Z:all the wives praise their hubbies eventho they r rude.no wonder. K:stop it.u r indirectly insulting my hubby. Z:ijust told a chance. K:all the guys r not like u. Z:if ur hubby is such a gentleman,then why r u after me? u pretend 2 be praising him.pretending 2 be a gud wife. K:shut up.u think i'm mad about u like ur stupid crazy fans? Z:then why r u after me? K:i'm after u not bcoz i luv u,but 2 prove that u r angad. Z:why r u always cuming behind me telling that i'm angad?who is angad 4 u?just a co-worker? kripa becomes angry:that u dunno? Zaib smiles:he was ur bf? kripa becomes speechless. Z:i no that u used 2 luv him. K:no never.i hate him. Z:then... u were pretending 2 be in luv with him?u were cheating him? K:what nonsense!angad cheated me. Zaib laughs:so finally u agreed that u were angad's gf? kripa was embarassed. kripa felt difficult 2 face him & goes. Zaib looks at with a smile.

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