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Jessi

@mz.jess

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

What an awesome chapter! I loved the length and do not even mind if it's longer! Your FF is something i look forward to reading alot!

I am loving this interaction between Aditya and Hina. Hina sounds very self-conceited and I loved the way Adi talked to aside from her beauty. Oh, I hope you put more Rajeev Khandelwal in the next chapter or chapters coming up!

Overall, This chapter was really intriguing and Hope to see more of Karan as well!

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rozia

@rozia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

LOVED THIS PART SO GONNA RIGHT A LONG REVIEW LOL

1. Just give me your general impression of the chapter

Ok so lets start with Aditya the funny guy he is tryin to impress people by his sweet flirtatious comments which dont hurt the opposite person he also is really good at socializing wen he gave tht comment to carissa n just clicked on with her.

The next person is Neelam I love her character coz he is like a really shy person but still stands out coz of her innocence simplicity. I love the way her and Aditya's freindship is bonding.

Deepali is a really bubbly and nieve character she and her love for art is so cute. I really felt sorry for her when she was feeling left out n thought rehaan was tryin 2 embarass her.

Zaid is a real sweet character i like the brother n sister bond he has with samira n his freindhip with aditya like brothers. He is an easy going person and really loves his sisters never wants 2 bring a upset face on samira. Always trying to bring a smile

Next is Hina she is a really ambitious person who wants 2 hit the top of life wants to achieve everything. She is over confident and is also really funny at times with tht debate she was having with aditya lol.

Next is rehaan i think he is sucha sweet character n feel sorry bout him n zeenat. I luv his freindship tht he has wiv samira.

Samira is a really sweet funny charcter i love her obsession wiv organising she had to organise her pack of coloured pens coz they wrent in the rite order lmao i also like the way she can bond wiv someone and the way she is really strong

Hey relli luved this part the characters realli interacted wiv others n we will c them bond 2geva luv the way u set them in groups lol feel sry 4 deepali n group 2 lol coz they hve 2 put up wiv hina n aditya fighting lol

Great job cnt wait 4 next chapter lucking forward 2 it

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Shelly

@Bubbly_Shelly

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Great chapter! I actually really liked it. Hm.. i wonder how Deepali and Rehaan are going to do in the upcoming chapter. Ooo, something good coming up in Chapter 3? Definitely looking forward to it.

I personally didn't mind it being this loong. I wanted to read even more after finishing it. Hope you can update soon.

Do pm me the next time you update. 😳

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Madiha

@Dark Love

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Reserved...I owe you two comments! 😳

But just so you know...I read both chapters...already told you about first one...but will leave details soon...second one was amazing, I was totally into it, which was good because nowadays when I read FF's I get distracted...this one kept me to my seat. It was more character intros though, I'm looking for more action 😉 Okay before I blabber on and on I'm gonna go...be back in an hour or so? 😳

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nitu

@nitu07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

awww... problems betn Deepali and Rehan..
hehe..
I liked the interaction between the characters.. made me feel like one of them.. maybe a silent observer.. !!😳
and I really wouldn't mind longer chapter!! 😳

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Mallika

@mallika_14

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

haha!
That was really amazing..
do continue soon."D

Edited by mallika_14 - 16 years ago

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Aditi

@UnderControl.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

amazinggg part rabia ..liking the way story's progressing ..luving samira n rehaan ..hope neelam n aditya get more into each other .....waiting eagerly for the next part....... ..great work.. keep goin ......

Edited by all-yours.. - 16 years ago

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missynhassy

@missynhassy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

wow this is such a great fan fic better than sum of em maybe because u have alot of genre and its based on real life situations carry on the gud work

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Heyy Rabia!!

It was an awesome part 2, i loved the way you wrote about each different character, from their personaility traits to there characteristics..

it felt like i was sitting at the back of the classroom.. listening in to the conversations and looking at the scene folding out below me..

and i commend u for that.. i love how you took us into the classroom like we were a student..

Please do include me in ur pm list.

thanks for the pm too..

XXSonia

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Sonam

@sonam_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Awesome! I'm so sorry I took so long to post. Had some relatives come over and you know how it is. I love the story especially the dialogues and interaction between the characters. It's all very real and the best part about it is that it's very easy to put myself in the position of the characters because it's pretty realistic.

Keep it going hun. I hope the next chapter will have a little bit of romance as i'm a sucker for it. When is the love story going to start? I'm very excited about that.

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