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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

hey sorry for late reply for last upadte
ek bari dekh lena maine 20 page pe reply kiya hai
dekh jrure lena taki mujhe pata ho aap humein bhi apne reader ki trah janti hai
and ill reply for this upadte lil late but definetly

and yes belated happy birthday


chalo amien rreply ker hi diya ... you must be irritated of me ki ye ladki kitna lte reply kerti hai
usk liye big sorry
but the update was really dramatic and mast...ranbeer mast kaam ker raha hai vaise naian kafi badal gayi hai per i think she is still waiting for him.... kash RAj kuch kahe usse ... per nahin he will not, never...yaar ek baat to apkki hai is RAj ko ladkiyo k dil ache se todne ate hai niana[pyar], sherry[dost] ...kya yaar..
aur vo naina uska kya kerun main vo bechari jisse dur bhag rahi thi ab usi k sath kaam kerna hoga... jisk liye usne apni duniya chd di apne dost apana sabkluch usi k sath ab phir se use kadam se kadm milana hoga... kya duvidha bechari ki...
i relli got a shock ki ab phir se vahi sab hoga kuch sec k liye mujhe lag ranbir bhi sath hoga per nahin yahan to sirf naian kaam kregi suk sath... but i must se usk style kafi badal gaya hai...
per uski ankhe nahin uski vo to ab usi se payar kerti ahi phir vo aksie badalti

yaar ye dono
aur ... kya kahe
i like the update fully...
i think you have updated the next part let see kab mujhe time mile nest ka sorry onec again for late reply

hii h r u ???
are nahin tum jab dil kare tab comment karo aisi koi baat nahin hai main janati hoo na busy life main se time nikaalna bahot mushkil hota hai mujhse jayada kaun jaan sakata haiπŸ˜†
aur ha naina mission main jaa rahi hai aur sach kaha jisake liye usane sabko apne aap se dur kiya aaj usi k saath use jana hoga πŸ˜•dekho ab aage kya hota hai tumhe ranbeer ka na jana accha nahin laga kya sabko tha k ranbeer na jaaye par chalo koi to hai jise ranbeer accha lagaπŸ˜ƒaur ha sahi kaha raj ne dono ladakiyo k dil tod diye😭par raj ka dil bhi to tuta hai😭😭😭.
thx 4 commnet.
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sanaπŸ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothilakshmi

hi

The update was just mindblowing and awesome.

when Raj had told sherry that naina was not in this mission to mujhe laga ki ab kitna din aisa hi jane wala hai in dono ka, but all thanks to u for this beautiful update. Good the whole gang has been included in this mission but without our heroine naina. Every one was given some duty in which hood the great ws given the role as a cook and abhi as driver, saad.

huda cannot meet his wife komal and abhi cannot meet sherry, haa haa haa great. when i was going thru the update i only wished naina should be there in the mission.

when the whole gang just enjoys the site at shimla some one calls from behind and that person is none other than ranbeer to which sherry indicates alekh that he is ranbeer naina's friend. very nice.
Ranbeer and raj meet at one place where ranbeer asks raj to update the whole thing once started and also tells raj that he doesnt have to do anything and if anything has to be done then it will be done by her . When raj enquires about who her is ranbeer asks raj to turn around and to which raj is surprised as well as shoked to see naina there who is also now the part of this mission, so the whole gang is complete, u will not believe i ws extremely happy when i read this particular part. I ONLY WISH RANBEER DOES NOT COME INBETWEEN THESE TWO LOVERS. HOPE HE HELPS SHERRY AND ALEKH IN UNITING RAJ AND NAINA. THAT WOULD BE VERY NICE ON HIS PART. HOPE THIS HAPPENS.
Atleast now hoping that everything will go fantastic and raj will come to know htat naina still loves raj and naina will also come to about raj's love for naina. Badly hoping that naina gets to read Raj's dairy. Hoping that in this mission raj and naina will get united and confess their undying love for each other.

please update soon, eagerly waiting for the next part.

BYE AND TAKE CARE.

jyothi
PS: Actually i wanted to know do u have the full link of RN fictions from starting till now. if u have can u forward it to me, if not u then if anybody has it, it would be of great help. PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE.

hii jyothi......
thx k tumhe UD accha laga..aur ha mujhe nahin pasand k main story ko bahot jayada slow rakhu b/c i don like it..😊ha ab dekho na sab ek saath hai aur ab to naina bhi aa gayi hai aur ab story main bahot kuch hoga jo bahot accha lagega..😳
hooda aur abhi ka kaam bada funny hai aur ha ab sab kaise rahege ek dusare k bina πŸ˜†
yes ranbeer bhi waha aa gaya hai aur aalekh ko sherry ne sab bata diyaπŸ˜›
raj ne naina ko waha dekhkra shocked to hona hi tha aur ab to ranbeer bhi nahin aa raha to i m sure tum khush hogayi hogi hai na??😳ab bas aage ki story line tumhe bahot acchi lagegi
thx 4 comment.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

It is great to see the friends together again!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is teasing Abhi ke usse laga woh sirf Sherry ke orders manta hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Huda ne kaha Hindi aur English ki Ram milaye jodi!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The job allocations were great!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Huda ko cook aur Abhi ko driver bana diya!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Poor them!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Huda cannot meet his wife Komal and Abhi cannot meet Sherry!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Komal reminded Huda that she won't be his wife during this mission aur usne kaha ke woh cook se kaise shaadi kar sakti hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Its great to see their teasings and fun and see Raj relax around them!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sherry told Aalekh about her and Raj's meeting with Naina and about Ranbeer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Its very strange that Naina had told her best friend Aalekh neither about Ranbeer nor about her meeting Raj at the party!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Sherry ne sahi kaha ke Raj ki diary bas usse nahi milti jiske baare mein likhta hai woh ismein!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj pagal hai jo kehta hai uparwala yeh chahta hai ke Naina ko uske pyaar ki khabar kabhi na ho!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Sherry pehle kehti hai ke bahut bura hai woh but then said he is very nice and Raj said only she says this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I wish Raj's diary reaches its rightful place that is Naina soon and then all the misunderstandings would be cleared!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is teasing Sherry ke Chauhaan bolega ke woh Sherry ko usse dur rakh raha hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Sherry kehti hai ke woh aisa kabhi nahi bol sakta kyunki aaj ussi ki wajah se toh woh Abhi ke saath hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Sherry return to others and they are all pulling each other's leg!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Abhi is sad ke Sherry phir se jaa rahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”He loves her so much aur kehta hai iske baad woh usse kahi nahi jaane dega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Abhi Sherry se itni baar kehta hai ke woh usse kitna pyaar karta hai magar Sherry usse kabhi nahi kehti I love you!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Huda is teasing Abhi ke woh Sherry ke bagair reh sakta hai uski shakal bata rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj also joined in and said ke uski shakal pe barah baje huye hai!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Abhi Raj se kehta hai ke usse kya pata pyaar ke bina kaise rahete hai!!!!

Yeh bat Raj se bethtar kaun jaan sakta hai ke pyaar ke bina kaise raha jaata hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Sherry wished ke jo baat woh janti hai woh baat ek din Raj sabke saamne kahe!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Even I wish the same thing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sherry Abhi se mazak mein kehti hai ke woh Abhi se hamesha ke liye dur jaa rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sherry jaise kaha mujhe lagta hai Shimla mein shayad Sherry ko kuch ho jayega!!!!

Huda Komal ki tareef kar raha hai aur Neelu keh rahi hai ke Aalekh uski kabhi taareef nahi karta!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

They all joined in and again started their fighting!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj is trying hard to stop them and Sherry said ke lagta hai yeh sab ek din mein pakde jayenge!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Ranbeer comes just then and warns them ke yeh zaruri nahi hai ke unke aas paas koi na hi!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Sherry nodded to Aalekh to signal he is the same Ranbeer who is Naina's friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Ranbeer Raj se akele mein baat karta hai aur kehta hai ke usko kuch nahi karna hai jo karegi yeh karegi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Jab Raj pucchta hai kaun Ranbeer uske picche ishara karta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj turned and saw Naina and was shocked!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Ranbeer ne kam se kam kuch toh accha kiya by not coming in this mission and sending Naina instead!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

With Naina joining this mission the group is finally complete!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

I hope now all misunderstandings get cleared up and Raj comes to know that Naina still loves him and Naina comes to know that Raj had always loved her and only her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


hii shana...
h r u ??
are mujhe is page par comment mil hi nahin raha tha phir refresh kiya to naza aaya😊😊😊
yes ab jab sab saath hobge to funny cheez to hogi hi aakhir sab ek saath dhmaal to karege naπŸ˜‰
ha hooda sabki tang khich raha tha par bechaara khudh cook ban gayaπŸ˜†aur abhi bhi bura fasa hai dono sherry aur komal ko miss karege abπŸ˜†
aur komal bhi kam nahin hai woh bhi hooda ko tang kar rahi thiπŸ˜›
ha raj kuch time k liye khush tha baki sab k saath😊
naina aur aalekh ki baat nahin hui ranbeer k topic par yeh sab aage pata chalega aur ha sherry to bechaari bas har koshish karati hai RN ko milane ki..isliye aalekh ko bhi sab bata rahi thi😊
raj ki dairy naina k haath main aaye to sab thik ho jaye par raj use de tab na😑
ha raj abhi ko bada tang karata hai sherry k naam seπŸ˜‰
abhi sherry ko baar baar kaheta hai i love u par sherry nahin kaheti ha yeh baat to hai par sherry abhi k saath hai na bas woh use tang karati hai aisa bol k aur rahi baat sherry ki k woh abhi ko aisa bolati hai k wapas nahin aayegi yeh to woh aise hi bol rahi thi😳
ha ranbeer saath nahin jaa raha aur pata hai tum isse badi khush hoπŸ˜†aur ab to naina bhi aa gayi hai bas ab aage sab accha hi hoga
thx 4 commnet
love
sanaπŸ˜›
Edited by sanabmw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RSZR

Hiiii sis...how r u...? maaffff kar dena... comment karne mein phir der kardi.. choooo choorry
aap jo saza doge woh mujhe manzoor hai...πŸ˜•

ab baat ud ki... It was awesssooooomee, mindblowing tooooooo gud..!!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
so iss mission mein poori shaitaani team jaa rahi hai..!! wah bahut zyaadaa mazza aayega.. i m waiting for it..πŸ˜‰
waise aapki chai aur coffee ki galti pakadi gayi.. hehehee..πŸ˜†

mujhe naina par bahut gussa aa raha hai.. usne alekh ko bhi ranbeer ke baare mein nahi bataya. not at all fair.. phir usse best frnd q bulati hai...??😑😑😑

wah!! huda baawarchi banega hahhaha.. bechara.. aur abhi driver.. sooo sad..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

sis patanahi q mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise sherry abhi se pyaar nahi karti.. agar aisa hai tho abhi ka dil toot jaayega aur mujhe bahut bura lagega..😭

lekin Aaj mujhe abhi par bahut GUSSA aa raha hai.. usne raj ka dil dukhaya.. aise kaise kehh diya raj ko ki tum kya jaano pyaar ke bina jeena kya hota hai?😑

Arre usse zyada yeh baat koi samajh bhi nahi sakta? iss geet gaate banjaare mein dimaag ki bahut zyada kami hai.. sachi..😑

so finaally sabhi shimla pahunch gaye.. Aur Saath hi Mr Chipku bhi.. waise usko kisne bulaya??❓nahi aata tho acha hotaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

ranbeer: main yaha hoo meri jagah agar koi dushman hota to 2 min main aap sab
pakade jate so plzzz yeh baat hamesha yaad rakho k bahar aap sab ek dusare k liye ajnabi ho.

(Mr.Chipku, raj bhi sabko yehi samjha raha tha.. tumhare bolne ki koi bhi zarurat nahi hai? HUH !! woh sirf raj ki baat sunenge.. tu rehne hi de..) useless😑

ranbeer:hii i m ranbeer ...ranbeer rai. (naam tho aise bol raha hai jaise hrithik roshan ho!!)
aalekh:bole to .... ((bole tho Mr Chipku!! Aalekh))πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Acha hua who iss mission mein nahi hai? I love u for this sis?. Ummmaaah..πŸ€—
Mein bahut khush hoon ki naina bhi iss mission mein hai.. ab bahut mazza aayega. Sab log ek saath hain?.. yipeeeeeeeee?!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

thank u sooo soooo soooooooooo much for this lovely ud...πŸ₯³β­οΈ
lots lots of loveπŸ€—
rituπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—


hey ritu h r u ??
hey mujhe sis bolati ho aur sorry bhi bolati ho😑😑 are kyun du main apni pyaari si sis ko koi saza😳
so kaisi ho tum ?kaha thi itane din??πŸ˜•
ha mission main pure k pure shetaan jaa rahe hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†ha chai aur coffee ki galati ho gayi is baar kya karu insaan jo hooπŸ˜‰
naina ne aalekh ko nahin bataya ranbeer k baare main woh sab pata chalega😊😊😊
ha hooda aur abhi ka role bahot mazedar hai πŸ˜†
sherry aur abhi ki love story main bahot kuch hoga aage bas wait n watch aur dekhna tumhe sab accha lagegaπŸ˜›
abhi par gussa aaya tumhe hahahaaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ab to abhi gaya kaam se ritu ko jo gussa aa gayaπŸ˜ƒ
ha mr chipku bhi aaya hai saath par yar usi ne to waha naina ko bhi bulaya hai dekho accha kaam bhi karata hai woh😳tumhaare ranbeer par comments bahot acche theπŸ˜†πŸ˜†bada hasi hoo main padhkarπŸ˜‰
thx 4 comment
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Posted: 16 years ago

part 78

naina raj k saamne khadi hai aur raj naina k dono ek dusare ko dekh rahe hai.
tabhi ranbeer khada hota hai aur naina ko apne saath lekar aata hai.

ranbeer:naina come...aao betho yaha.tum inko to janati hi ho.

naina raj ko dekhti hai.

raj:helloo....

naina kuch nahin bolati bas sir hilaati hai.aur raj ko naina ki yeh harqat bahot buri lagati hai.

ranbeer:so naina tum betho main zara baki sabko bhi yahi bula lata hoo.maj.main bas aaya 2 min.

ranbeer jane lagata hai par raj use rokata hai.

raj:nahin aap yaha betho aur baate karo main sabko bulakar lata hoo,waise bhi inhe aapki company
jayada sahi lagegi.

raj yeh bolkar naina ko dekhta hai aur naina raj ki side dekhti hai heran hokar.aur raj waha se chala jata hai.

ranbeer:are inko kya hua....??? ek to inke liye kar raha tha aur yeh hai k.......
naina:.......

next scene

pooja:ali tumko hindi aati hai na??
ali:pooja hindi hamari rashteey bhasha hai.
pooja:kyaaaaaaaaa??
aalekh:lo yeh to abhi se apne role main gus gaya hai.
hooda:to acchi baat hai na qaidi.
komal:accha to hooda jao na plzz mere liye khana bana k lao na.
hooda:are main...main kyun yaha hoga na koi cook.
komal:kyun tum bhi to cook ka role kar rahe ho,to banao na kuch accha sa.

saare hasane lagate hai.

hooda:komal tujhe main nahin choduga ruk tu.
yudi:oye tameez se baat kar cook yeh teri madam hai.
hooda:abe chal meri biwi hai yeh.
neelu:hooda tum zarur marwaoge hum sabko.na tumhe kuch pakana aata hai na komal se dur rahena.
hooda:are nahin mujhe pakana aata hai.
aalekh:kya apun sab ka bheja.
hooda:nahin qaidi mummy jee se sikha hai banana.
shalini:sach hooda.
sherry:ha mujhe bataya tha hooda ne use sach main cooking aati hai.

tabhi waha raj aata hai.

raj:aap sab mere saath anadar aaiye.
saare:okk sir.
sherry:RK kya hua tum .......
raj:anadar chalo sherry..plzzzz aur kuch nahin.

sab raj ko aise dekhkar ek dusare ko dekhte hai aur phir saare room ki taraf jate hai.

aalekh:bole to baat kya hai ?
pooja:pata nahin ..
ali:rajveer sir to bade ajeeb lag rahe hai sayad kahin koi galati to nahin ho gayi na humse.
hooda:pata nahin andar jakar hi sab pata chalega.

sab andar jate hai 1 by 1 tabhi pooja naina ko dekhti hai.

pooja:OYE YEH KYA TU KAHA SE AA GAYI.

sab pooja ki baat sunate hai aur saamne dekhte hai jaha naina bethi hui hai.sab naina ko aise apne saath
dekhkar khush ho jate hai.aur naina bhi sabko dekhkar unke paas jati hai.

naina:kaise ho tum sab mujhe bhul to nahin gaye na???

sab naina ko dekh rahe hai kuch nahin bol rahe.

naina:come guy's main naina....bhul gaye kya???apni dost ko.
shalini:yeh sawaal to hum sab tumse puchana chahte hai.
pooja:tujhe ab furasat mili humse milane ki.
yudi:naina this is not good haaa.
hooda:oye tujhe koi bhul sakata hai tere bina to hamara gang adhura tha.
naina:to ab main aa gayi hoo na ab ho gaya na pura.

saare naian ko dekhte hai aur naina unko dekhkar smile karati hai.phir sab ek saath naina ko hug karate hai.
naina bhi unse gale milati hai aur sabki aakho main aasooo hai.

aalekh:bole to tu yaha kaise naina..bataya bhi nahin apun ko??
naina:woh ..mujhe khudh bahot late pata chala isliye tumhe bata nahin saki.
pooja:chal accha hai mission k banahe se hi sahi tu aayi to.
ranbeer:bilkul yeh to mujhe thx bolo aap sab main hi tha jise naina na nahin bol saki.
sherry:aap..??
ranbeer:jee ab meri sabse jayada close...close...

ranbeer naina k paas ja raha hai aur sab use dekh rahe hai k woh kya kar raha hai.raj ka dyaan bhi
wahi hai par woh jaan k anjaan ban raha hai.ranbeer naina k paas jaa raha hai aur naina kuch nahin bol rahi use.
saare log yeh dekhkar heraan hai.

ranbeer:bahot jayada close F hai isliye mana kaise karati.
naina:ranbeer...tum na.

saare chup hai.

ranbeer:hahahaha,,,are aap sab ko kya hua mera aur naina ka yeh sab chalata hai.
ab meri bahot acchi dost hai aur naina mujhe janati hai.
naina:ha k tum ek number k juthe ho.
hooda:oye yeh to mere jaisa lagata hai.
aalekh:ha bole to ek dum bindaas.
ali:kya aap bhi hamare saath mission par aaoge.
ranbeer:nahin..

sherry dheere se bolati hai.

sherry:thank god.
ranbeer:jee kuch kaha aapne....?
sherr:nahin...main bas bol rahi thi k god kare k hum is mission main kaamyaab ho.
raj:sherry plzzzzz....

sherry raj ko dekhkar smile karati hai.

ranbeer:bilkul hum is mission main zarur kaamyaab honge.
naina:par ranbeer hume jana kab hai.
ranbeer:bas aaj hi aaj raat ko hi aap main se kuch log waha jayege but turn by turn,baki log
kal subah.
raj:ok to ab hum chale apne rooms main.
ranbeer:as u wish.

raj waha se chala jata hai aur naina bas raj ko jate we dekh rahi hai.tabhi aalekh waha aata hai.

aalekh:naina chal apun k saath aa zara.
naina:accha.

naina aur aalekh bahar jate hai.aur dono ek saath chal rahe hai.

aalekh:naina yeh kaun hai ?
naina:kaun ?? ranbeer.....aalekh main janati hoo tu kya soch raha hai.
aalekh:apun kuch nahin soch raha apun bas sach janna chata hai.
naina:kya janna chahta hai tu.
aalekh:yahi k tune apun ko isake baare main kyun nahin bataya.
naina:kya nahin bataya.
aalekh:yahi k yeh hai kaun??
niana:bata dugi sabkuch bata dugi.
aalekh:kahin tu isse....

aalekh ruk jata hai aur naina aalekh ki baat sunkar use dekhti hai phir aage ki taraf chalati hai

naina: sach yeh hai k main kisi se pyaar nahin karati kisi se nahin.
aalekh:naina bas apun sab samajh gaya.
naina:kya samajh gaya??
aalekh:yahi k tu jisse bhaag rahi thi jis k liye tune hum sabko choda tha 2 saal pehele
tu aaj bhi usi insaan se pyaar larati hai.

naina aalekh ki baat sunkar ruk jati hai aur aalekh naina k paas jata hai.

aalekh:chal aa beth idhar.

naina ko lekar aalekh ek jagah bethta hai.

aalekh:kyun aayi tu naina bata kyun aayi??
naina:aalekh .....

naina aalekh se milkar rone lag jati hai.

aalekh:bas naina ab bas kar de aur kitana royegi sir ko bhul ja.
naina:kaise bhul jau kaise bhul jau aalekh tu hi bata.kya maine koshish nahin ki,sab se alag ho gayi
kisi se milati nahin thi sab yaado ko bhulane k liye tum sab ko chod diya par nahin rajveer sir ki yaado
ko apne dil se nahin nikaal saki aur na hi unke pyaar ko.main nahin bhul sakati unko.
aalekh:to phir yaha kyun aayi aur apne aapko yu kyun saza de rahi hai.
naina:aalekh mujhe nahin pata tha k ranbeer mujhe yeh mission main laa raha hai.agar janati to nahin aati yaha.
aalekh:ab to jaan gayi hai na to laut jaa naina yaha tujhe bas gam milega.
naina:ha sahi kaha sir ki aakho main mere liye koi pyaar nahin hai main aaj hi wapas chali jaugi.
aalekh:accha chal ab rona bandh kar aur yeh bata kya kahegi ranbeer se.
naina:kuch bhi bahana bana dugi main abhi usse baat kar k aati hoo.

next scene

raj apne room main hai aur sherry usake paas aati hai.

sherry:RK kya baat hai tum aise kyun aa gaye??
raj:kuch nahin bas socha thoda aaram kar lu.
sherry:tum kab se aaram karane lag gaye yeh kyun nahin kahate k tumse naina aur ranbeer ki nazdikiyaa dekhi nahin gayi.
raj:..................
sherry:RK ab bhi mauka hai naina phir se hum sab k saath hai use bata do.
raj:mujhe kisi ko kuch nahin batana suna tumne aur ha mujhe koi faraq nahin padata main bas yaha mission k liye aaya hoo.
sherry:thik hai jo dil main aaye karo aaj k baad main kuch nahin kahugi bas aaj aakhiri baar bolana tha bol diya.

itana bolkar sherry waha se chalai jaati hai.

raj:sherry.....baat to suno..

raj sherry k peeche jata hai.

next scene

ranbeer bahar garden main hai aur naina usse milane aati hai.aur wahi raj bhi hai jo ranbeer se naina ko baate karate dekh raha hai.


naina:ranbeer .
ranbeer:ohh naina aao na.
naina:kya baat hai tum aise bahar kyun bethe ho??
ranbeer:bas maine socha tum to apne old F main ho busy to yaha aa gaya.
naina:are aisa kyun bol rahe ho.yeh old aur naya kuch nahin hota.
ranbeer:mazaq kar raha hoo hahaha.....pata hai mujhe k tum aisa kuch nahin sochati.
aao betho.

naina ranbeer k paas jakar bethti hai.

ranbeer:hmm so naina ab pata chal gaya k main tumhaara sabse pyaara dost hoo.
naina:accha kaise ??
ranbeer:dekho na tum apne dosto se mili par laut k mere paas hi aayi ho,isaka matalab yeh k i m the best.
hai na????

naina ranbeer ko dekhkar hasati hai.

naina:ha u r the best tumse pyaara koi nahin hai ab khush.
ranbeer:thank u thank u.....chalo ab batao kya baat hai??
naina:tumhe kaise pata chala k mujhe kuch bolana hai..??
ranbeer:naina 2 saal se janata hoo tumhe aise hi nahin kaheta k tum meri dost ho.
naina:ha woh yeh bolana tha k mujhe yaha se jana hai.
ranbeer:WHATTTTTTTTT ....????
naina:ha mujhe is mission main nahin jana ranbeer.
ranbeer:par kyun naina??? wajah to batao.
naina:koi wajah nahin hai bas main ......
ranbeer:naina suno meri baat..dekho main is mission main tha par kisi aur kaam ki wajah se main join nahin kar saka,mujhe jab pata
chala k yeh sab tumhaare F hai to hi maine tumhe is mission main join hone ko kaha.
naina:par..
ranbeer:naina mere liye plzzz yar mujhe kaun batayega k yaha kya kuch ho raha hai.
naina:tum kisi aur se puch lena.
ranbeer:tum mujhe ek baat batao tum inkaar kyun kar rahi ho,koi baat hai kya...

naina kuch nahin bolati.

ranbeer:naina hey naina...kya baat hai ?

naina sochti hai k woh kya kahe.

naina:woh tum nahin ho na isliye.
ranbeer:hahaha...accha accha ab samajha meri aadat ho gayi hai.par capt.nana har mission par aapko
aapka dost mile yeh nahin ho sakata kai baar hume dushman k saath bhi rahena padata hai.
naina:ha janati hoo.
ranbeer:bas agar janati ho to ab baat yahi finish karo,yar agar mera kaam nahin hota to aa jata sach.
naina:ranbeer......
ranbeer:plzz plzzzzz plzzzz mere liye yeh bhi nahin kar sakati plzzz

ranbeer naina k aage haath jod raha hai aur naina has rahi hai aur dur khada raj yeh dekh raha hai.

naina:ok bas karo thik hai jaa rahi hoo.par ..
ranbeer:par sirf mere liye i know thx honey.
naina:bas ab thx mat kaho mujhe batao bankar kya jana hai mujhe pata to chale.
ranbeer:ohh ha chalo aao mere saath.

naina aur ranbeer waha se chale jate hai.

raj(to him self):naina nahin jana chahti hai is mission par mujhe pata hai mere saath woh ek pal bhi bitana nahin chahti,
aaj ek ajnabi ki baat usane maan lee lagata hai ranbeer naina k liye bahot khaas hai.

next scene

saare log ek room main bethe hai aur baate kar rahe hai tabhi waha naina ranbeer k saath aati hai.

ranbeer:bas aap sab isi main lage raho aur mission main dyaan mat do.

sab ranbeer ko dekhte hai.

naina:are kya hua are ranbeer ki aadat hai mazaq karane ki.
ranbeer:hehehe naina yeh sab to sach maan bethe are plzzz aisi koi baat nahin hai aap log baat kijiye main bhi aap sab ko join karana chahata hoo.
shalini:ohh waise mr.ranbeer aap kaha se ho ??
ranbeer:well sahi Q kiya hai aapne naina to kabhi hum logo ko milane degi nahin b/c
use hoga k kahin main use chod k aap main se kisi ko na pasand kar lu kyun naina..??
naina:ufffff ranbeer ....
komal:lagata hai aap aur naian bahot acche dost ho.
ranbeer:jee bilkul bahot acche dost hai par dekhiye na naina ne kabhi aap logo k bare main mujhe bataya hi nahin.
pooja:nahin bataya to hum batate dete hai.
sherry:waise aap kaun ho naina ne kabhi hume bhi nahin bataya.
ranbeer:well naina ko furasat kaha hai jo kabhi kisi ko mere baare main bataye.
naina:bas ha tum to mere dosto k aage hi suru ho gaye.
ranbeer:are yeh kya baat hui main bhi to dost hoo tumhaara.

tabhi waha raj aata hai.

naina:ha maine kab kaha k nahin ho tum sab k sab mere dost ho.
ranbeer:nahin yaha maj.to tumhaare dost nahin hai woh to teacher hai right.

ranbeer ki baat sunkar sab khamosh ho jate hai aur raj naina ek dusre ko dekhne lagate hai.

raj:sahi kaha aapne main bas teacher hoo.aur kuch nahin.

raj ki baat naina k dil ko chubati hai par woh kuch nahin kaheti.

ranbeer:accha to ab aap sab ko aaram karana chahiye kal aap sab ko school bhi jana hai,
aur ha maj.aap zara mere saath aaye.

raj aur ranbeer jane lagate hai aur tabhi ranbeer rukata hai.

ranbeer:naina tum bhi mere saath aao.
naina:main...
ranbeer:ha tum.

naina un dono k saath jati hai.

ranbeer:naina aao betho.
raj:so aapne kya baat karani hai ?
ranbeer:aap dono ko sabse jayada dyaan se apna mission karana hoga.
raj:well main puri koshish karuga.k sab thik se ho.aur kuch...??
ranbeer:maine aap dono ko yeh batana hai k kal shaam ko aap dono ko ek saath jana hai.
raj:ek saath kyun??
ranbeer:aap dono ko waha dance teacher ban k jana hai.
naina:dance teacher.
ranbeer:ha ,aur ek sabse zaruri baat.
naina:kya??
ranbeer:aap dono waha as a couple jayege.

raj aur naina dono kuch samajhte nahin hai.

ranbeer:i mean husband aur wife banakar.

mujhe pata hai saare FF k mere friends khushi se apni apni chairs se girane wale honge hai na hahahaha....πŸ˜†

ranbeer ki yeh baat sunkar raj aur naina ek dusare ko dekhne lagate hai.aur ranbeer un dono ko
dekh raha hai raj aur naina dono khamosh hai par dono k dil main bahot kuch ho raha hai.


ranbeer:kyun kya hua??helloooo are ...naina.....maj.

raj aur naina dono real world main aate hai.

naina:ha....
ranbeer:are aap dono ko aise chok gaye ho yeh baat se mano k jaise main aap dono ki
sach main shaadi karaw karaha hoo.
raj:je........

raj ranbeer ko heran ho k dekhta hai aur ranbeer hasane lag jata hai.

ranbeer:hehehehe.......maj.mazaq tha aap to serious ho gaye hai sayad.
raj:nahin main kabhi aisi baat par serious nahin hota.
ranbeer:waise ek baat main bhi bata du aapko naina kabhi ha nahin karegi kyun naina.

raj naina ki taraf dekhta hai k naina kya kahegi.

naina:ranbeer plzz bas karo.
ranbeer:dekha maj.mana kar diya na.
raj:well maine aapko pehele bhi kaha tha main serious nahin hoo.

raj ki baat se naina bura feel karati hai.

naina:par ranbeer yeh zaruri nahin hai i mean main kyun...kisi aur ko meri jagah dedo.
ranbeer:naina tum hi best ho is k liye.
naina:par ranbeer is sab ki kya zarurat hai.
ranbeer:zarurat hai aap dono ek saath hoge to mujhe har tarah ki info milati rahegi.jab main maj.se baat kiya karuga,
tab tumse bhi baat ho jaya karegi tum waise bhi mere code ko jaladi samajhti ho,aur waise bhi aap dono ne
pehele bhi to saath kaam kiya hai,pehele as a teacher aur student the par ab aap dono as aofficers kam karoge.
naina:par.....

naina k baar baar inkaar karane se raj chid jata hai.

raj:aap aisa karo mere saath sherry ko rakho.sabke liye woh sahi rahega.
ranbeer:kyun aapko naina k saath koi pro hai.aur naina tum bolo kya tumhe koi pro hai.aap dono to aise mana kar rahe ho jaise k main
kisi do dushmano ko saath laa raha hoo.aap log pehele bhi saath reh chuke ho na janate ho ek dusare ko acchi tarah,kaafi sara time saath rahe ho.

ranbeer ki yeh baat sunkar raj naina ki side dekhta hai aur naina raj ko dekhti hai,dono ko ek saath bitaye hua saare pal yaad aa jate hai.
dono kuch bol nahin paate.


ranbeer:ok so phir done agar koi pro nahin hai aapko to maine jo socha hai wahi thik hai.
ab kal k liye apne aapko aap dono redy kar lo.kal k baad aap dono saare logo k liye husband aur wife honge.

end of part 78

ok F yeh UD kaisi lagi zarur batana next week UD kar dugi tc bye love u all😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIIIIII SANA KAISI HO DEAR?
THE UD WAS FANTASTICπŸ‘
MINDBLOWINGπŸ‘
TOOO GOOODπŸ‘
SUPERBπŸ‘
ROCKINGπŸ‘
I LOVE EACH AND VERY SCENE
AB ASALI MAZA AAYEGA
CHALO INDIRECTLY HI SAHI RANBEER RAJ AUR NAINA KO MILA RAHA HAI I M SOOOOOO HAPPY AND EXCITED BAS MUJE YAHI BURA LAGA KI DONO SAHI SE EK DOOSRE SE BAAT NAHI KAR RAHE HAI ANYWAYS JAB WAHA AKELE HONGE TOH PHIR BAAT TOH JARUR KAREGE................
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY
AB TOH SABR HI NAHI HO RAHA HAI
UD SOOON
LOVE
DEEPA........



Edited by Deepanwita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hiiiii sis hows u? kya chal raha hai..?
sis yeh part read karne ke baad mein tho aapko hug karna chahti hoon..... thank u sooooo much... ab mazza aayega....... love u.....πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

raj tho ek no ka paagal hai.. naina ko hamesha raj ki company achi lagegi than that Chipku.... dono kuch bhi nahi samajte... ullu kahin ke...😑😑

haha ali aur pooja ka phir chalu ho gaya... pooja tho kabhi nahi badalegi.. aur komal ne hooda ko khana banane ko kaha.... wah!!! biwi ho tho aisi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

hmm finally naina ne sabse mil liya... mein bahut khush hoon....😊😊

hey baghwaan iss Mrchipku ka kya karein... jab dekho tho chalu ho jata hai..😑 Iss Mr Chipku ko tho sabak sikhana hi hoga...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

naina isko keench ke ek chanta q nahi marti...??? mein rehti tho wahi karti..πŸ˜†



hooda: oye yeh to mere jaisa lagata hai.. ( arre haan hooda par yeh kuch zyada hi hai.. zabardasti gale pad jata hai!!!! tabhi tho meine iska naam chipku rakha hai !!!! )πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
aalekh:ha bole to ek dum bindaas.. ( na na.. bole tho ek dum Flirt)πŸ˜†
ali:kya aap bhi hamare saath mission par aaoge. (ali aisa mat pooch.. agar yeh aaya tho RN ka kya hoga..)πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
ranbeer:nahin.. (thank u... zindagi mein tune ek acha kaamtho kiya)😳😳

sherry dheere se bolati hai.. (kaash thoda zor ki bolti sherry)😲😲

sherry:thank god.. (sana sis dekha, sheery bhi mere saath hai)πŸ˜†
ranbeer:jee kuch kaha aapne....? ( jo bhi kaha , Mr Chipku, bilkul sahi kaha)πŸ˜›
sherry:nahin...main bas bol rahi thi k god kare k hum is mission main kaamyaab ho.. (arre woh tho honge hi.. bcas ab poori shaitaani tooli saath mein hai..
par tumhe Mr chipku se jhoot nahi bolna tha... usse pata tho chale humari soch kya hai uske baare mein)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Ž


Aalekh naina ko wrong advice de raha hai.. raj se door rehkar na woh khush rahegi aur na raj khud....😭😭

bechaara raj uss par kya beeth rahi hogi.. mein sab samajh sakti hoon.. aur yeh ranbeer uss par aur namak chidak raha hai.. bewakuff...😑😑
naina mission mein ruk gayi ranbeer ke kehne par... but raj ko phir koi misunderstanding ho gayi...
nd only ranbeer s responsible for it... iski tho mein...😑😑
😑

raj aur ranbeer jane lagate hai aur tabhi ranbeer rukata hai.

ranbeer:naina tum bhi mere saath aao..
naina: main... (haan naina tum.... Mr Chipku tumhare bina kuch nahi kar sakta)πŸ˜•πŸ€’
ranbeer:ha tum..

naina un dono k saath jati hai.



ranbeer:naina aao betho.. ( woh beith jaayegi... tere bolne ki zarurat nahi hai)😑
raj:so aapne kya baat karani hai ?
(jo bhi hai.. achi baat hai.. su tho le..)πŸ˜›
ranbeer:aap dono ko sabse jayada dyaan se apna mission karana hoga..
(woh tho karenge hi... after all they r the best)πŸ‘πŸ‘
raj:well main puri koshish karuga.k sab thik se ho.aur kuch...??
( haan bahut imp baat hai,.. sun)
ranbeer:maine aap dono ko yeh batana hai k kal shaam ko aap dono ko ek saath jana hai..
(sana sis.. mujhe iski tareef karna pasand nahi.. but yeh itna acha kaam kar raha hai tho thodi tareef kar deti hoon..)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
raj:ek saath kyun??
( bcas u both r made for each other)πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
ranbeer:aap dono ko waha dance teacher ban k jana hai..
(jiyo ranbeer... yeh dono tho isme best hain)πŸ˜‰
naina:dance teacher.
ranbeer:ha ,aur ek sabse zaruri baat..
(itna time mat laga.. jaldi bol)πŸ˜³πŸ˜•
naina:kya??
ranbeer:aap dono waha as a couple jayege.
(wah!! wah wah!!! tune jo kiya hai.. uske liye baaki sab galti maaf...)πŸ‘πŸ‘

raj aur naina dono kuch samajhte nahin hai.. (arre itni si baat bhi nahi samajhte)

ranbeer
πŸ‘:i mean husband aur wife banakarπŸ‘ (wohooo!!!!! yess!! yipeeee i m very very happy...!!!! hmmmm ah welll ahem thank u Ranbeer.. i mean Mr Chipku..)πŸ‘
πŸ‘
and a special thanks to my chweeeeet lovely dear sis.... sana siss u r the best...!!!!!!! ummmaaah
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


arre yeh log itna bhav q kha rahe hain... dil se tho yeh yehi chahte the... plss for a change iss ranbeer ki baat maan lo..πŸ˜•
Finally maan gaye...πŸ˜›

thank u sooooo much for this lovely ud sis..πŸ€—πŸ€—
waiting for the next one.. eagerly........
lots of love
ritu😊

Edited by RSZR - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fab ud...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
This Ranbeer is just too much...i m actually getting irritated with his flirting with Naina...😑😑😑
Pls RN ki problem door karo....!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow kya mast aur zabardast jhatka diya hai
raj naina husband wife yeh to aur bhi maaza aayega.
bas us din ka intezaar rahega jab Raj naina ko aapne dil ki baat batayega.
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awesome!!πŸ‘ wa8n 4 nxt upda8

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