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swathzie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

i read the whole story in one go...oh my god it was such a wonderful story..i alwayz ove r stories and dey r alway zclose to my heart bcoz dey depict realty..

i feel at commubication gap in a elation esplly husband wiferelation can lead to many probs..it is very imp. to express urself..i lliked d way dey supported eacch oder's career..i like to see the independent woman in ur stories rather than plain and meek lady who is alwayz tortured by vamps..

ps:will comment more later..

niti

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@spln

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

wow the second time i open the thread you already finished the fic...hahaha i totally need some lessons for tackling IN TIME UPDATES myself!...great story bhoomi, i love the idea of you taking situations so real and tac kling them the same way....from start to the end...yes...in the lowest of our moments think of the happy past brightens, unpredicatbly...after all, that too is a life we lived!....memories are classic extremes...they make us smile and cry without expextation!....cheers to the idea and the writing...

ps: im not sure i mentioned but i love the lead couple u used...they fit so well!

cheers,

nj

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

👏Awesome Bhoomi I just finish reading all in one time 👏 I love Devesh and Partima 😃

I really love This story You Made it again & i love the way you show all situation how they handle and live together .

Awesome , Mind Blowing Superb FF Bhoomi Thank you for such a great Story.👏👏👏
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Edited by monikaseth - 16 years ago

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: nisisanjh
Awwwwwwwwwwww....it was toooooooooo sweet n softly romantic ... whn they started the convo na... i was like..oh God... emotinal baatein horahi hai , baapre..den it changed in to sweetness..romance..n den Debesh's naughty dlg abt baby..we shoukd start our work ...hehehehe... n Bhoomi..lovellllllllllly lines haan..all of dem..

Big Hugs for u n remember my warning next time...

Hi Sara,

Am so glad dear that u liked my work. Ya it was romantic but subtle I mean not getting in too depth of falling but just upar uparsey hi pyaar mey they likha.. i could go into detail but the story had to be with that day what they could think feel... ehheh

Oh! U felt tu tu main main naa hojaye na.. i guess these two love each otehr and soemwhere didnt want to make each other more upset then their already were they wanted to brign postivity and thats how the conversation had ot be short precise and loving... Devesh is naughty and far more romantic i guess thats his persona...

hey u liked the lines.. it makes me so happy.... 😃

Ur hugs means so much to me dear.. and warning.. hmmm dont u give me warnings i am a bit too scared of them I may get kittery with even a AEEE Bhoomi line u see😉.. to kuch bhi ho bada dil rakhkey maaff karna😆..luv u dearjhappi for u .. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
it was an awesome story bhoomi cant tell how thank ful i am 4 this fic i loved just want to ask u to write more i just love reading ur fics do write a new fic dear.

as far as the end was concered i loved it this fic brought a lot feelins into reality this could happen in any rel lack of communication can cause prblm even bet a parent and a child or just frnds. an awesome fic .the message was awesome in seein only the +ve in a rel rather than the -ve.

Hi Meri jyothi.. if i am glad ot get all the comments for this story soemwher its all becaoz of u .. and that makes me feel great that I could as u asked for... hey so dotn be thankful.. i always feel whatver i can is not from my side but what God felt the other persos wish is how importnat.. so if ur wish was important for God he asked me to think over and work and guided me...😉 so its all urs dear... Awww will try and write soem mroe. but wil give Rajeev and Shweta a miss for some time.. they already had observed a lot of my thinkign brain for a while.. i want to change the faces of my charcters u see😆...

U loved the ending.. I feel endign is a major task its the essence to al what the story meant. so hope it stood to the story u liked.. yup thoda bohat clsoe to reality i have to . or else cant put the real situation whcih r more easily adaptable... to the reaers as well as me to imagine them.. yup even in friends the same realionship , distance, lack of sharign can soemwhere hurt and create a gap whcih is bad enough... yup many times even if u dont have that friend clsoe now..btu thikgin abotu what good time u had makes u feel like gettign back to that friend again..

Glad i could fulfill ur wish dear, and loved attempting the story for u.. lu vu for encouragign me always.. tc dear.

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: nitzi
hi bhoomi..niti here..i changed my old id..dury active .but iwll definitely read ur story 2nite...i dunno how i missed it..loveu

niti

Hi niti,

Oh so u changed ur id.. good... So glad to know u felt liek reading my fic dear..Even i missed u .. love u too..

Originally posted by: nitzi
i read the whole story in one go...oh my god it was such a wonderful story..i alwayz ove r stories and dey r alway zclose to my heart bcoz dey depict realty..
i feel at commubication gap in a elation esplly husband wiferelation can lead to many probs..it is very imp. to express urself..i lliked d way dey supported eacch oder's career..i like to see the independent woman in ur stories rather than plain and meek lady who is alwayz tortured by vamps..

ps:will comment more later..

niti

HI niti, read the story in one go seems like.. heeh was it that short. aur dekho i felt it was longer than i wanted it to be... Oh wow!! feel so happy that u liked the story... hehee my stories r clsoe to ur heart.. awww luv u dear for makign me feel so special... yup i try to make them look a bit clsoe to reality but always have hope in the end. a smile across too...

ya commuciation gap time constraints and indiviual space so many things make in todays time a lot of stress ful to maintain the same expectations of the other.. Oh u observed that in my fic makes me glad. i do try that every true imagine and type of indivduals coem across.. with that my lead may be wrong but when they r they have to say.... independent woman yup, many recent based stroeis have woman who work adn why cant they be as loving as carign and as adarsh type as non workign.. alogn with that i respect homemaking woman too they r far far more stressful than workign woman i feel.. as they do all and face inferiroty too for some strange reason.. especially children dont realise what they mother has sacrificied to be all time avaible to guide theri chidlren help them...

Chalo hope u enjoy all my short stories.. will try to write one more.. but it will take time.. i will chill til some concept ceomes in mind. luv u tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: spln
wow the second time i open the thread you already finished the fic...hahaha i totally need some lessons for tackling IN TIME UPDATES myself!...great story bhoomi, i love the idea of you taking situations so real and tac kling them the same way....from start to the end...yes...in the lowest of our moments think of the happy past brightens, unpredicatbly...after all, that too is a life we lived!....memories are classic extremes...they make us smile and cry without expextation!....cheers to the idea and the writing...

ps: im not sure i mentioned but i love the lead couple u used...they fit so well!

cheers,

nj

Hi Naseem,

Hehehh I guess u are a very fast in reading.. heheh as I felt my story was long enough and actualy wanted to make me more shorter and post it in one go, but the pages wotn open for god knows why...

Abotu timely updates heheh Actually i am a bit differnt in terms of story writing.. i usually liek 75% of my story when 75% story is ready i start posting.. if it isnt I usually dont.. many times the whole story is ready and I start posting.. so my update have to be fast obviously... 😉

Situation real... aaa I guess i get ideas which r simple and real in nature and people cna realte and then go abotu the jinx of it and if it excites me i write it... many a times real life does help me in gettign concept even while chattign writing to frinds liek u...😃

About positivity .. I think its much more importan in life than we think.. many a times peopel around can make u feel really small or u urself can attempt that.. its so very importan tot look at the good things to get on with future or else.. it can only put more negativity in u and a depress feel which causes a lot of frustration in life i think and thats what relations suffers at times i felt and while the concept came in abotu these two individuals Suhaney Pal seemed like a good idea to start with...

hey am so happy that u commented and u read my story , ur inputs really means a lot... and abotu usign the couple in this story they suited the charcter... that a great feelgin to know.. i mean this was a request by jyothi and if I did justice ot the actors makes me gald... luv u dear.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: monikaseth
👏Awesome Bhoomi I just finish reading all in one time 👏 I love Devesh and Partima 😃

I really love This story You Made it again & i love the way you show all situation how they handle and live together .

Awesome , Mind Blowing Superb FF Bhoomi Thank you for such a great Story.👏👏👏
👏

Hi Monika... awwww Sweety u r so sweet.. all those applause made me blush adn smile a lot...😳😆😃... I am soooo happy that u enjoyed reading this fic dear.. and all in a go.... I really love to get comment from u ,, its feels as a bright one for me. always.. luv u dear for all that u brign to my work.. encoraugment from u has alwyas lifted my spirit... U loved Devesh and Pratima...

I am glad u enjoyed this one dear.. and dont thank me.. I coudl with all the suport u all give me warna likhney ka mannn bhi nahi karta .... luv u lots dear.. tc..

Bhoomi

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Hey.........!

Lovely story comes to an end...!

Will wait for another one from your stable !!😉

Edited by togepe30 - 16 years ago

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey.........!

Lovely story comes to an end...!

Will wait for another one from your stable !!😉

Hi Vandu dear,

Glad dear u liked reading the fic.. oh u waitign to read another one.. ahhhhe dont know when another idea will struck.. until now nothign as such... but glad to know u all love reading them... 😃 tc

luv u

Bhoomi

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