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Posted: 16 years ago

HEYY GUYS.....ALL PARTY DONE

I AM BACK WITH MY DIWALI UPDATES.....YUP I AM UPDATING ALL MY FICS TODAY STARTING WITH THIS ONE....MY FIRST FIC ON IF
THIS IS A SHORTER THAN USUAL PART BUT STILL IT MEANS A LOT TO ME

PART 3

Armaan:haan ek aur surprise….he holds her palm in his and takes her up the stairs and then taking a right turn they enter a room where he makes her stand in front of the mirror… and says : ridhima maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mujhe tum milogi

Ridhima:armaan sach bolun to maine bhi kabhi nahi socha tha ki meri hakeekat itni khubsurat hogi.....

Armaan standing at her back bends forward to plant a kiss on her forehead as she closes her eyes and when she opens them she is shocked to see herself in the mirror. She sees that he has made her wear a beautiful necklace and also draped a beautiful saree on her shoulder.

Armaan: ridhima tumhe mere gifts ache lage?

Ridhima: armaan ye to vahi...

Armaan: haan ridhima ye vahi saree hain jo tumhe vahaan pasand aayi thi

Ridhima:lekin armaan ye to bahut..

Armaan: tum change karlo main bahaar tumhaara wait kar raha hun.

Ridhima:par armaan

Armaan:ridhima.....and he leaves to get dressed himself and then he waits for her.

Ridhima comes out wearing that saree

Armaan:ridhima sach bolun to dar lag raha hai, kahin tumhe meri hi nazar na lag jaaye

Ridhima:armaan mujhe tumhaari nazar lag hi nahi sakti kyunki hum dono to ek hi hai na

Armaan: vaise basket ek cheez batao….tum aaj kal itni changed kaise ho…as in you like partying and stuff

Ridhima: armaan main changed nahi hun…its just that main ab tak kisi se itna open nahi thi… main bahut hi reserved rehti thi and so no one knows me much

Armaan: matlab ki meri basket sabse jyaada open mere se hi hai

Ridhima nods : can say

Armaan feels very good to know that ridhima considers him like a true soulmate and is ready to share everything with him.

Armaan:ridhima kabhi kabhi main sochta hun ki maine tumhaari vajah se pyaar ko samajh liya hai lekin agle hi pal mujhe aisa lagta hai ki maine pyaar ko samjha hi nahi, iski gehraai ko pehchaana hi nahi

Ridhima: armaan samjha pyaar ko nahi jaata samjha usko jaata hai jisko aap pyaar karte ho, pyaar ko samajhte samjhte aap uski gehraai mein kho jaate ho lekin apne pyaar ko samjhte samajhte aap unke ho jaate ho

Just then anjali summons them all to get the cake cut by armaan and ridhima marking the inaugral of their wedding month. It was just a party for the intern gang along with some other friends and relatives with no one from the senior lot present. They all took to the dance floor where all so much in love couples dances to the tune of romance. Eyes lost in eyes, heartbeats increasing by the second, some uknown talks taking place through silence, their eyes speaking volumes, lost In each other's breath , not caring about the world…they danced long after till they were all very exhausted and they settled down and had dinner. In all this even though all the couples were back to their seats yet the most beautiful of them all were still lost in the beats . they danced in each others arms, ridhima completely embraced by armaan as if he is protecting her from the world. … lost in each other they danced

Kahin to.. kahin to

Hogi wo,

Duniya jahan tu mere saath hai..

Jahan mein, jahan tu,

Aur jahan, bass tere mere jazbaat hai,

Hogi jahan subah teri,

Palko ki, kirano mein,

Lori jahan chand ki,

Sune teri baahoin mein..

(Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,

Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,

Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,

Itni khafa nahi..) - 2

Saasein kho gayi hai kiski aahon mein,

Mein kho gayi hu jaane kiski baahon mein,

Manzilon se raahein doodhti chali,

Kho gayi hai manzil kahin rahon mein..

Kahin to, kahin to,

Hai nasha..

Teri meri har mulaqaat mein,

Hoton se, hoton ko,

Chumti, o rehte hai hum har baat pe,

Kehti hai fiza jahan,

Teri zamin aasmaan..

Jahan hai tu, meri hassi,

Meri khushi, meri jaan…

(Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,

Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,

Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,

Itni khafa nahi..) - 3

Finally as the song finished ridhima was about to go to the rest of the intern gang but armaan held her hand.

Ridhima: armaan chodo na, sab kabse wait kar rahe hain

Armaan:to…..main bhi to kabse wait kar raha hun

Ridhima:armaan di jaa rahin hain aur papa wait kar rahe honge, unhe pata nahi ki hum kahaan

Armaan:unhe pata hai…aur maine unse puch bhi liya tha, anjy jaa rahi hai aur main tumhe raat mein chod dunga

Ridhima:par….

Armaan: ridhima chalo , (and he turns towards the terrace.)

Ridhima:armaan udhar kahaan, sab humaara neeche wait kar rahe hain

Armaan: tumhe pata hai, tum sawaal bahut karti ho, chalo bataata hun

Sometimes it is better to let wait the stream of emotions than to unpack surprises in words causing less excitement and less expressions as love need not be expressed in words.

They both go to the terrace and ridhima looks around and is awestruck. Armaan had got laser lighting done in a way that on the entire sky visible from that place one could see red hearts and armaan loves ridhima written various times moving all around like twinkling stars. Also on the garden grass where they had been previously sitting were colourful elecric candles which lit in various colours forming a rough sketch of the faces of two lovers beneath which earthen lams were lightened and decorated to write the words " TOGETHER TILL ETERNITY" the terrace was beautifully decorated with candles with a table for two in between and soft music was played as a background. The aroma of the candles seemed more like essence of love filling the atmosphere with an unknown feeling of love and belonging Ridhima had tears in her eyes to see that how much he loved her.

Surprises are a series of unexpected presents received by a person most close to your heart just for a brightening smile on one's face lighting up the surrounding with that smiling face

Armaan slowly kissed her cheek and whispered in her ear : welcome to the world of love …….but then he noticed tears in her eyes

Armaan:basket ro kyun rahi ho, surprise acha nahi alga?

Ridhima:armaan I truly loved it, lekin ye sab kyun…aur ye aansun to ye dekh ke aa gaye ki koi mujhse itna pyaar karta hai, darr lagta hai ki kahin main is pyaar ko kho na dun, lekin in aansun me chupi hain muskurahat, jab khushi bayaan nahi ho paati to aansu ka raasta le leti hai

Many can give you flowing tears or huge smile but just one special person can give you laughing tears and teary smiles, hold that person close to your heart and you will win the world.

Armaan:taaki puri mumbai ko pata lag jaaye ki armaan aur ridhima ek dusre se kitna pyaar karta hai

ridhima: armaan kyun itna pyaar karte ho mujhse? Kyun?

Armaan: shayad isliye kyunki pyaar ki koi vajah nahi hoti ya shayad isliye kyunki tum bhi mujhse beintehaan mohabbat karti ho, ya phir sirf isliye ki is dil ne tumhe pasand kar liya hai

There is never a reason for love but always there is some expression in love which attracts so intensely that no repulsion can separate the two beating hearts.

Ridhima hugged him

Ridhima:armaan ye pyaar kabhi kam to nahi hoga na?

Armaan: kabhi nahi…itna aitbaar karo mujhpe

Ridhima:kabhi kabhi darr lagta hai ki meri saari khushiyan mujhse koi cheen na le

Armaan: ridhima ki har khushi anmol hai, use churaane ke liye kisi ko bhi pehle armaan se guzarna hoga

Ridhima: aur armaan ki khushi?

Armaan:armaan ki khushi, uski chaahat, uski mohabbat, uski zindagi, uski ishk ki had aur uske pyaar ka intehaan sab ridhima hai, armaan hi ridhima se hai

Ridhima: aur ridhima ka jeene ka maksad, uska vajood, uski ruh, uska dil, uski jaan sab armaan se hain. Armaan ke bina ridhima kuch nahi. Ridhima ki saansein, uski dhadkan sab par sirf armaan ka hak hai.

Armaan:ridhima ye hak dekar, mujhpe aitbaar karke tumne mujhe jo diya hai uski khushi shayad main shabdon mein bayaan nahi kar sakta

Not always in life one needs words to express trust but expressing is something which has to be there to prevent mistrust.

Ridhima: dil ki baatein bayaan nahi ki jaati, vo to apne aap samajh mein aa jaati hain, kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hoti, khamoshiyan bolti hain aur tanhaiyaan akeli nahi hoti

Armaan: shaayad isi bharose ka intezaar tha mujhe, aaj main keh sakta hun ki ab mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye, zindagi se ki har tamanna puri hui hai, har sapna sach ban gaya hai, har aansun muskaan ban gaya hai, har dua kabool ho gayi hai, shaayad khuda mujhe ise behtar tohfa de hi nahi sakte the

Ridhima: armaan ishq hi khuda hota hai, muhabbat ka to dusra naam hi rab hai, jab insaan ko apni muhabbat mil jaaye tab use rab ki bhi zarurat nahi hoti, kuch sahi, kuch galat nahi hota

Armaan: ridhima agar tum meri zindagi mein na hoti to main kitna suna reh jaata

Ridhima: armaan hum dono ka milna likha tha, kabhi bhi aisa mat kehne ki hum dono ek dusre se juda hote to kya hota kyunki armaan ridhima sirf naam alag hain, unka dil, ruh zehen sab ek.

To make your love one feeled that someone is there for them is indirectly telling yourself that they are always there for you

Armaan: ridhima tum meri jeene ka ek tanha maksad ho, tumhaari muskaan ke alaawa zindagi se koi khwaaish na hogi, tumhaare deedaar ke alaawa dil ki koi farmaaish na hogi, tumhaare pyaar se zyaada armaan ka koi armaan na hoga aur tumhaare saath zindagi bitaane ke alaawarab se koi tamanna na hogi. Tumhaare aanchal ke alaawa mera koi ashiyaan na hoga. Tumhari zulfon ke alaawa mera koi aasmaan na hoga. Tumhaari muskaan ke alaawa meri koi barsaat na hogi, tumhaare kaajal mein dhale bina meri raat na hogi. Tumse juda hoke is dil mein dhadkan na hogi, tum mil jaaogi to koi tadpan na hogi. Tumse alag hone ka main soch bhi nahi sakta. Armaan apne naam se ridhima ka naam jodne ki itni betaabi se tamanna kar raha hai ki rab khud sone ke aksharon mein devlok mein humaare naamon ka milan karenge……(ridhima did not let him continue)

Ridhima: aur bas usi din pyaar hi sarhadein paar ho jaayeingi, saari khatayein maaf ho jaayengi….muhabbat ko apna mukaam mil jaayega, ishq ko apni manzil mil jaayegi, chaahat ko ek naya raasta mil jaayega, pyaar ko apna saahil mil jaayega, dillon ko apna lakshya mil jaayega…. Zindagi ko ek nayi shuruaat mil jaayegi, kehte kehte koi baat mil jaayegi…..har muskuraahat ko ek naya naam mil jaayega… har pal saansein tham jaayengi, aakhon mein aakhein , baahon mein baahein aur do zindagiyaan ek dusre mein kho jaayengi…ridhima har had paar karke humesha ke liye armaan ki ho jaayegi….unke beech koi duriyan nahi hongi….. saanson ko saanso mein panaah mil jaayegi aur do dil ishq ki aag mein jal jaayenge

Love is a game you win only when yu lose your heart, gift your soul and forget yourself. It is the only game which you win by losing.

As she said this she slowly raised herself on her toes and planted a sweet peck on his lips as he took her back into a passionate kiss full of love and commitment promising togetherness to each other for the rest of their life. They promised their lives to each other, there love increasing each second and their deending on each other knew no bounds. They promised to be tehre for other when nobody is by therer side and to always be a part of their loneliness and the reason for their happiness

Sometimes words are just not enough to explain how important one becomes for survival. At those times it I sbetter to enjoy silence and let hearts speak connecting two souls through this wondrous feeling known as love

I HOPE U LIKE IT

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KAVYA

Edited by dmg_fanatic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
tt was too good yaar ... am so in luv with this fic too

anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice one
thabks for PM.

love
Riddss
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Posted: 16 years ago
kavya, i love this ff. beautifully written loved the update... update this one soon :)
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
hay
kavya
it's just ossom
u r too gud in this

do continue
and thanks for pm

keep updating me
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Posted: 16 years ago
😊 HAPPY DIWALI 😊


hey kavya

as always the whole part is written so beautifully......love the way armaan n riddhima express themselves to each other towards th end......so romantic .....awesome ......please continue soon


DEVIKA
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: stargaze94

tt was too good yaar ... am so in luv with this fic too

anu

thanx anu
u made my day....happy diwali
love
kavya
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy
happy diwali and a prosperous new year 2 u.
coming 2 the part.
it was fantastic.
amazing.
continue soon.
thnx for the pm.
luv
Komal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy kavya,
it was fantastic
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey kavya amazin part....luvd d surprise....do continue soon ............ happy and safe diwali 2 u!!!
Edited by angelina_2005 - 16 years ago

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