AR:'IF YOU'RE NOT THE ONE''(VERY imp. note:pg 56) - Page 8

*yah first part!!!*

awwww i luved the updte

Aww Barkha awesome update ! I love the friendship between Muski & Ridz

also love how ure showing us Armaans thoughts about Ridz 😳

It was written amazing as always....I could truly understand each characters thoughts!

haha! wow..gr8 job! i liked how you presented everyone's different views bout riddhima! definitely good work!

Hi Barkha!!!

wow honey..amazing part..luvd it..lykd d way u wrt abt riddhima, how armaan n anji think abt her..bt seriously dint lyk anji..adi is cool..atul as always is a sweetheart..abt rahul dnt knw wht 2 say..dint lyk how he insultd his grlfren..rite no1 ll respect her if he nly dsnt..riddhima is rite in a way..bt hope she dsnt involve herslf in der mattr more dn required..
overall luvd it..continue soon..cant wait 2 read more..
thanx fr PM hun..
luv ya.. 😃

you know...don't take this the wrong way...but I wish I hadn't come across this fanfic till...like ages later...because by then you would have updated so many more parts, and I could go to the next part in a matter of minutes and have all of my feelings of unrestlessness in waiting for the next part eased down....lol...but amazing part as usual...I am seriously in love with your story...such a different conept..yet an amazing one...you certainly are doing an amazing job...already, I can't wait for the next part! :P

Thanks for the PM! :D

barkha firstly it feels so good to be reading your stuff again! your right, this is very different from the previous one, and thats good! i appreciate the fact that your trying something new, and so far i really like it!
im irritated by all the characters already lol
is this what friends are like?! gosh they say they are good friends, but then think such negative things about each other! haha not exactly what i call strong bonds of friendship here!
but its refreshing to see these shades in the characters, its not the typical sugar coated stuff, so im really enjoying it!
im not a fan of angie at all, especially after her opinion of muski! she seems like a stuck up priss! and rahuls treatment towards muski was not cool! some boyfriend he is! but muski is quite over the top lol
adi seems fine. i like atul too. armaan is a bit of a brat too. and ridz alright
well after the 1st part, this is my initial judgment of the characters...looking forward to the character developments and story progression!
really enjoyed the first part barkha, its very interesting! continue soon please :)

Originally posted by: KaranShilpa:)

Hi Barkha di

I really really really wonder how u come up with SO MUCH...?? I mean how can u go on n on n on about a person's thoughts about others, about things...the way yu describe them, is just magical!! Each n every word of yours sinks in so deep...n yu make sure that all yur readers are fed with the character of every person in yur fic...n thats what I like about your writings..

Its amazing actually, the way Armaan thinks about Riddhima..he doesnt hate her in any way, nor does he have a fond liking for her...its just simple..like sometimes he loves a particular thing about Riddhima..n we readers feel as if somethingz cooking up, n the next line shows how wrong we are!! Like yu put it in such a subtle manner, a smooth way...thats one of the most awsome things about this story.

n yea, yu r rigth when u say that this onez quite quite different from A lot Like Love...which is good...nice to try out different things..n this onez sure gonna rock..why, its already rocking! Please update soon...thanks for the PM

Love

Spriha

hey barkha,
fab part ....spriha wrote the perfect thing which is going in my mind....thanks 4 the pm hun...