AR:'IF YOU'RE NOT THE ONE''(VERY imp. note:pg 56)

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

amazing update barkha!👏

it was really interesting to see what they all thought about ridz and muskaan

and rahul-muskaan relationship

plz cont. soon😳!

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

dat was a gr88 prt... brilliantly put dwn.. luvd it loadsss..............
waitngg 4 d nxt1...
thnxx 4 d pm....

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Barkha some times its very tough to wind up every feel in a few words.

From where should i start? Armaan is very realistic chracter in ur ff.A sports person.

Rahul's behaviour is absurd.How he did this infront of his own friends.

"Do as you would like to be done by"

IF he'nt respect her, how he can expect from others that.

Atul is always a darling character.Ridz has a clear vision on each point of life.

This vision helps a person to overcome from all miseries of life,

and her possessivness towards muskaan shows her dedication,

it denotes how much she cares to whom she loves.Anjie till now is an

out spoken person. Nice part.

"A coward is incapable of exhibiting love;

it is the prerogative of the brave."

thanxs 4r pm

cont.soon

take care

ritu

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Simone

@-simi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Hey Barkha!!! 😃

Wasnt expecting the part so soon but the earlier the better right? 😆

I absolutely love the realistic traits you have put in all the characters! (I still havnt gotten over how amazingly you ended your last FF 😃

Not everyone is perfectly good or bad, and its quite realistic that being in a big group of friends, you might not end up liking everyone equally, and you have shown that in a very undersatandable manner! Its also true that 'love' or 'attraction' doesnt need to happen right when you meet, but undersating each other over time can really bring out those emotions, and thats what i suspect Armaan and Ridhima will be going through!

So now Adi seems to be interested in Ridhima, but Ridhima is into Armaan.... Armaan really likes Anjie, but we dont know which way yet!

Everyone is understandable except Muskaan and Ridhima, they seem to have different faces, but its good to see them being so close!

Rahul's feelings towards Muskaan i think are completely justified, but he should stop taking her for granted, and if they really have problems, they should sit and talk alone rather than bringing everyone else into play.

Wow ok im just going to go on and on, and its only your first part 😆

Continue soon hunny 😃

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

wow i got a PM😲😲. i was waiting for a PM all the time i used to comment for ur FF "a lot like love" but i never got it. i didnt even get replies for my looooong comments. i was just kidding😆😆 i understand you have toooo many readers. 😉😉

its great to read your FF after long time. your previous FF is indeed very emotional one and i ended up crying a couple of times. some parts were really touching and i still cant forget some lines of ur ff. i am happy that you u are keeping this FF a lite one. atleast i dont have to cry😆😆. but one thing i love about ur FFs is they are very realistic.

ok enough of bak bak now comming to ur FF...

i just read the FF and the only word which came to my mouth after reading is wow.

the way you have created each character is just great. soo many characters with different point of views, everyone right in their own way, this FF is going to go a long way. i will not be surprizes if you make a half century(50 parts)with this ff.😆

the title itself is soo meaningfull and i feel the story is all about that itself.

OMG i wrote soo much😲 i just blabber soo much na😆😆😆.

the wonderful thing about the characters is that each character is right in its own way. their point of views are completely different and we can pick up a character and relate it to us.

armaan want ridhima to be with atul😆😆😆, in initial DMG episodes i felt atul-ridz friendshim to be adorable. just very cute. i dont know where its lost now. anyways let me not get into it. i hope to see atul-ridhima friendship in your FF. armaan liking anjali! thats nice too

i didnt understand why ridz lied about the paper. i guess she said it as she knew her friends didnt write well. rahul's character!! well i need to read few more episodes to understand him. till now i felt atul to atu-ridz to be cute ones. armaan's thoughts scare me😆😆😆

waiting for the next update!!!😳😳

i gave such a long comment, kam se kum is baar to reply kro yaar😳

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suzanne

@suzzane14

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

oh my god thats just the best......i was like yipeee a new part...thnx so much and obviously as i keep saying woah u did it...!!!!keep writin cnt wait to read more...wanna see some more emotions...loved the way u described muskaan's feelings and rahuls i-dnt-care reaction...!!!

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Kareena

@Sharmiee

Navigator

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

awwww what a cute part!

ahah riddhima anad muskaan are reallyy cutee:D

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Kaj!

@Kaj!

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

barkha, this was a fantastic start. i liked the way u gave us a gd insight of the characters' personalities and relationship among each other. this is very different and fresh compared to ur last fan fic and im definately looking forward to future parts.

it will be interesting to see how ridhima n armaan form a relationship, as of now they just seem cordial towards each other.

well done with this fan fic. keep it up

Kaju