AR:'IF YOU'RE NOT THE ONE''(VERY imp. note:pg 56)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Awesome!!
Loved the way how u r portraying character;s emotion.....
There wasn't a single dull moment...loved every bit of it :)

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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That was a simple but very nice part... liked the comfort zone which AR are sharing now... their small talk and also the understanding between each other is awesome... looking forward for their next level of understanding soon.. continue soon with the next part....

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sabi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#333

wow tats g8.... the way u described ridhima's charachter was awesum..... & armaan thnkng in a positive way is brilliant

& plz continue soon

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Sunaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey barkha...

awesome part....it was really very very very nice...i enjoyed reading it...

the way she behaved sooooo friendly with the people in the restaurant and armaan was thinking abt how different she was...was fab...

and i really liked the way how armaan and riddima talked to each other and totally accepted eachother as friends was really good...

and then the convo in his car when riddhima explained her reason for behaving that way with the waiters and telling that she was not everyone was really good...

and riddhima and armaan's thoughts abt eachother were really fantastic...especially riddhima's thoughts and her comparison abt life till the day before and from then on...the reflection was fabulous...

well...superb part...loved the last especially...

waiting for the next part...

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Hima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#335

thx for the part 9, it was wonderfully, love to see h armaan and ridz are process in their friendship,

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Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#336

Awesome part..

the comfort level shared by them is really nice

her being nice to all the waiters is so sweet, & we all should also try & behave nice to them, afterall they are also like us only...but alas, very few people understand this

you have taken their relationship to a new level now.....where they acknowledge each other

really nice part!!

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Robin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#337

so glad to hear your results came out well! congrats barkha!
loved the part! what a huge progression in their relationship! its so true, soe much has changed in just one day! from being casual acquaintances, to true friends! im so happy about this! they are just shared an emotional moment together, and that has brought them closer together, they are bonded in a way now :D
very sweet and realistic
ridz is a sweetheart, love her out look on life and the way she treats others! and obviously armaan is impressed by her too!
awesome part barkha, continue soon!

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shriya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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it was a sweet part though short..m glad ridhima has overcome the attractn..nw i guess its armaan's turn..i liked thr interaction..hope to c the friendship growing...

congratulations for ur result!,..glad to hear u did well!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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nice part barkha! nice change in ridhima's feelings towards armaan from a 'crush' to 'friendship' and she actually understands him now! continue soon!