AR:'IF YOU'RE NOT THE ONE''(VERY imp. note:pg 56)

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ashu

@ashluvdmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#261

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yippe...!!um first..lucky me...!!

ok srsly dis wsnt crappy at all....!!fab part...!!l

confusion..confusion...!!adi harbouring feeling towards ridz...ridz towards armi...!!gawd...triangle..itself...!!

jes luking 4wd 2 ur nxt part...cnt wait 4 de date...!!

luvya gal...

crazy ashu

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#262

Hey Barkha,
I am really sorry for the late comment, I was inactive due to exams.
I read last two parts and they are really awesome.
I hope Armaan will realize soon that he has started having feelings for ridzi and I also hops she won't be hurt.
I don't know why but I am feeling something great is gonna happen which will for sure make Armaan realize his feelings.
Oh and yeah It wasn't crappy at all, I really loved it.
Continue soon.

Kashish

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#263

hey barkha...

7th part was awesome...

loved it...

well...the description of armaan's thoughts towards riddhima was good...

the message-convo between armaan n ridzi was cute...

riddhima is such sweet character...

and looks like adi-ridz-armaan triangle...

anyways awesome part...

continue soon...

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Forever_Komal

@Forever_Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#264

Hi Batkhs di!

it wasnt a crappy part at all! i guess armaan coundlt read the first sign of atraction now could he? bit riddhima!! she was acting like a little gurl! HE REPLIED!!!!!! it was great, simply great and i luved her innocene of rereading and rewritng each of her messsages! i will be waiting for tomorrow eagarly!!

lots of luv,

komal

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 16 years ago

#265

it was great.plz continue soon.

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Simone

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Posted: 16 years ago

#266

wohoo u updated again 😃

armaan helping adi get closer to ridhima, but he doesnt know he's going to get closer to her 😉 ahaha

i like how this is going. continue soon! 😃

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Afreen

@afreen_syed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#267

hey...nice updt..cant wa8 4 de next 1

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#268

wow secong update. great. well is is not crappy, but it did look like u didnt give much time for the part. i may be wrong. i know there are many characters and its difficult to balance bw all of them.

liked adi-armaan convo. i wish adi had asked ridz himself. ridhima is already getting wrong notions, i just hope she wont be hurt.

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#269

well, i forgot to ask u something. i have a doubt.

the characters in ur FF seem to ve very practical and observent. so if the whole group knows about ridhima's liking towards armaan, adi also must have known. in that case it seemed wierd to me that adi asked armaan to inform ridz about the plan

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#270

Aww this part was cute! I seriously can't wait for the next one, their little get together, and even during the game lol :) Hopefully we'll have a new update tomorrow..again?? Hehe thanks for updating so quickly!