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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey here comes the reply for part 49.
Gud update. ๐Ÿ‘
Raj is unable to recoginse Kripa, pehchaane bhi kaise jab us k saamne aane se Raj ko kuch feel hona hi nahi hai.
Pata nahi kyoun par kabhi-2 mujhe Chitra k character me sensibility nahi dikhti. Ye mai maanti hoon ki barson baad jab us ko kisi ka pyaar mila hai to achanak us pyaar ka fir se kho jaana dukh de raha hai Chitra ko, par sach yahi hai ki vo kabhi bhi koi bhi problem face nahi karna chahti hai.
Us ko lagta hai sab aaram se theek ho jaana chahiye aur us ko kuch bhi nahi karna pade. Har choti-2 baat me aur badi baat me bus us k pass option hota hai rone ka. Mujhe nahi lagta kabhi ki rone se kuch hota hai aur sach me mujhe rone waalon se bahut chid hai.(It's my personal view)
I know she must overcome from this state but she must try not to cry now. She must face Raj at least for once and then only Raj can understand his own feelings for that girl too. Kripa is trying her best to impress Raj n made him feel that she is his but i know she will never be successful in this.
This time too i think Arohi will support her and Chitra will be back in her normal life. Doc said right, she must control herself n try to face Raj with full rights and confidence.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Firstly congrats for completing 50 parts dear ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Reply for part 50

Gud one once again dear.
Raj n Chitra's scenes were cute. Kripa is really a b***h, i hate her the most. How can she go up to such cheap level yaar. She is trying to snatch the one and only love of her sister's life. How can Chitra forgive her so easily yaar for such a childhood she gave to her without her mom and dad.
If i would be at Chitra's place i can never forgive my parents for all the trouble and pain which i had to suffer all because of them. I don't understand what problem Vasu had with Chitra? Y she doing all this dirty game with that innocent girl? That Kripa was requesting to forgive her but i think Chitra should not do so.
One thing too i don't understand that is Arjun that much week that he is unable to save his brother from Vasu? Y is he coming in pressure for Kripa? Arohi left them and now this is time when Kripa can have a hold over Raj if Chitra would not be alert. Raj is still thinking about Chitra or i can say his heart made her do so.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Reply for part 51
Sab jaa rahe hain Chitra k pass se, yahan tak ki us ki us ki sab se acchi dost us ki sis Arohi bhi jaa rahi hai, pata nahi ab kaise sab manage karegi Chitra? I mean mujhe nahi lagta hai ki bahut acche se, bahut mushkilein hongi us k saamne. I hope Angad aise hi saath rahe us k aur Kripa ka saamne karne me help kare Chitra ki kyounki filhaal to sab hi us k anti ho gaye hain.
Mujhe ghin aati hai kabhi-2 Kripa k baare me soch kar ki vo itna kaise gir sakti hai? Apni behan k pati par dore daal rahi hai. Par Raj ka man bhi us ka poora saath de raha hai aur us ko ye ehsaas dila raha hai ki Chitra us ki apni hai Kripa nahi. Kuch jagah to lagta hai ki Arjun helpless hai dhamki k aage but vo bhi ladka hai, aise kaise Vasu se dar gaya?


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PART 58



darwaze pe kisine knock kiya..raj ne darwaza khola toh angad was standing infront of him..

Raj โ€“ thanks yaar..

Angad โ€“ kisliye??

Raj โ€“ mujhe tera kitchen saupne ke liye.. dekh puri tarah saaf kar dia hai..

Angad(shocked) โ€“ kyaaaaaaaaa?????? Hatt hatt yaha se.. pata nahi kya haal kiya hoga mere kitchen ka.. yeh jante hue bhi ki tujhe kuch banana nahi ata hai i gave u my kitchen to experiment!!

When he entered the kitchen he saw chitra had almost cleaned the mess..

Angad โ€“ wow yeh to pehle se bhi jyada saaf kar dia.. thanks chitra.. mujhe nahi pata tha tu itni jaldi itni responsible bann jayegi.. I must say raj ur love changed her completely..(he teased chitra..)

Chitra blushed hard.. and Raj was looking at her..

Angad โ€“ tum dono na typical lovers ki tarah behave kar rahe hoo abb.. yaar tum dono ki shadi hoo gayi hai abb to sharmana chodo..

Raj โ€“ tera lecture khatm ho gaya ho to hum ghar jaye??

Angad โ€“ pagal ho gaya hai?? Bahot jyada raat ho gayi hai.. aaj tum dono yahi ruk jao..

Raj โ€“ nahi.. jab tu itni raat ko ghar aa sakta ahi to kya hum itni raat ko ghar ja nahi sakte??

Angad(cutting him) โ€“ haan main itni raat ko ghar aa sakta hoon magar tum apni biwi ke saath itni raat ko ghar jaoge.. dono baato main bahot farq hai bahar holi ki masti shuru hoo gaye hai beta.. and haan i know u need some privacy.. yeh chitra ke flat ki keys hai.. tum dono waha reh lo aaj.. waha ki saaf safai karwa rakhi hai infact roz karwata hoon kya pata kab teri biwi tujhse pareshan hokar bhag kar yaha aajaye.. aur abb behas karne ke bajaye tum dono jao and enjoy ur privacy.. goodnite..


Angad ne raj chitra ko kuch bolne layak choda hi nahi.. dono chale gaya waha se..

Raj opened the door..

Raj โ€“ tum yaha rehti thi na pehle??

Chitra โ€“ hmm.. woh din meri zindagi ke sabse ache din the shayad.. yaha kayi meethi yaadein basi hai raj..

She opened the door of her bedroom and made the bed..


Chitra jug main pani leke ayi to dekha raj soo gaya tha..

She sat near him..

Chitra โ€“ lagta hai neend aa gayi..

To this he suddenely opened his eyes.. chitra darr gayi..

Chitra โ€“ raj I guess u love to scare me like this.. mujhe neend aa rahi hai.. main soo rahi hoon.. goodnite..

Chitra slept beside him.. she was not facing him..

Raj โ€“ par mujhe neend nahi aa rahi..

Chitra โ€“ to neend ki goli khakar soo jao but I doubt yaha neend ki goli hogi.. poor you..

Raj โ€“ mazak uda rahi hoo.. thik hai.. agr main nahi sounga to tumhe bhi nahi sone dunga..

He started doing gudgudi to her.. she was laughing like mad.. and soon it turned out to be a pillow fight.. pure room main rui(cotton) ki barish hoo rahi thi.. and soon they started tom n jerry show.. sometimes tom was running behind jerry n sometimes jerry was running behind him.. soon jeery thakk gayi.. she sat on bed..

Raj โ€“ thak gayi??

She nodded her head cutely..

Raj โ€“ koi baat nahi hota hai.. mote log jaldi thak jate hai..

Chitra โ€“ kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??????? Main aapko moti lagg rahi hoon?? U need specs raj..

Raj โ€“ sach to sach hai.. (saying this he fell on bed n started pretending as if he is sleeping..)

Chitra was lying beside him.. she pulled his arm and made him face her..

Chitra โ€“ itna jhooth bolna kisse sikh liya??

Raj โ€“ kisise nahi.. let me sleep..

Chitra โ€“ rajjjjjjjjjjjj!!!!! Kyu itra rahe hoo?? Kya main sach main moti hoon??

She made a puppy like face..

Raj โ€“ arey arey.. I was just kidding..serious kyu hoo gayi??

Chitra โ€“ ur word matters na..

Raj โ€“ u r the best girl in this whole universe.. sach me..(he said with eyes full of love..)

Chitra โ€“ flirt kar rahe hoo??

Raj โ€“ hey bhagwan.. tum moti hi thik hoo.. goodnite..

Saying this raj soo gaya n chitra hit him many times bt he didnt react at all..

Chitra โ€“ arjun hi kyu even u deserve the "khadoos" tag.. utho na raj mujhe baat karni hai aapse.. plss plss plss plss plss plss plss plss plss plss (chitra ne plss bolna bandh nahi kiya to raj ne apne haath se uska muh bandh kar diya.. he was lying on top of her..)


raj - mujhe bhi tumse kuch baat karni hai actually kuch kehna hai tumse..


chitra blink bhi nahi kar rahi thi..


raj - mujhe tum itni achi lagti hoo ki mann karta hai tumne bina chabaye nigal jau..

raj ka itna khatarnak confession sunke chitra ke raj ke haath pe kaat liya.. raj ne uske muh pe se apna haath hata liya..


raj - aahh!! maine to sirf kaha tha tumne to practical kar dia..


chitra - mujhe pata nahi tha aapke irade aise hai.. mujhe durr hi rehna padega aapse..


raj(looking straight into her eyes) - acha reh paogi mujhse durr??


raj ko dekhte dekhte chitra ko neend aa gayi..


raj - meri female kumbhkaran i love u.. (he kissed her on her eyes..)


Subah angad knocked on der door.. uske haath main gulaal thi..

Raj ne darwaza khola..

Raj โ€“ angad dnt u dare apply this stuff on me..

Angad โ€“ haan haan dnt worry am nt ur wife..

RAj โ€“ wat?????

Angad โ€“ kal raat ko jab main tere ghar gaya tha tab daimaa se keh diya tha ki tum dono aaj yahi rukoge.. to daimaa ne kaha hai ki chitra aur teri shadi ke baad pehli holi h so sabse pehle tum dono ek dusre ko rang lagaoge..

Raj โ€“ hmm.. okk.. abb tu ja..

Angad โ€“ dekh li teri dosti.. biwi paas h isliye dost ko bhaga raha hai..

Raj โ€“ haan aisa hi samajh le.. now get lost..

Angad made a face while raj pushed him out n locked the door frm inside..

Chitra came out yawning and got scared seeing gulaal in raj's hands..

Chitra โ€“ rajj stay away frm meeeee!!!!!!

Raj masti ke mood me aa gaya ..

He kept going towards her n she kept stepping backwards.. he pinned her on wall..

Der face were inches apart.. raj ne haath main gulaal liya.. uska haath chitra ke chehre ki taraf badhne laga aur saath hi chitra ke dil ki dhadkan bhi.. chitra ne aankhe bandh kar li..

Raj filled her maang with gulaal.. he slowly moved his lips towards her ear slightly touching her cheek n whispered "Happy Holi"

She blushed.. she tried to free herself bt he caught her tightly by her waist.. his touch was making her weak on her knees.. she was nt looking into his eyes as doing so will make her forget the world.. raj loosened his grip and allowed her to go..

Chitra jate jate applied some gulaal on raj's cheeks..

Chitra โ€“ happy holi to u too..

Raj aur angad ke frnds ko kahi se pata chal gaya ki raj-angad angad ke yaha hai.. soo woh log aa gaye.. unlogo ne pehle angad ko bhoot banaya aur abb raj ki bari thi.. raj was completely unaware so he opened the door and suddenly got pulled out by his frnds.. chitra ko kuch pata hi nahi hai wats happening outside..

After an hour khana was ready n chitra was waiting for raj to comeback.. she thought he must hv gone to angad's place..

Raj knocked on the door.. chitra opened the door and shouted soo loudly that raj had to shut her mouth..

Chitra got soo scared that she started crying..

Raj โ€“ shhh main hoon raj.. y r u crying?? Okk okk am going.. plss stop crying.. plss..

Raj bathroom main chala gaya nahane.. chitra thoda normal hui..

Raj ne andar se awaaz lagayi use towel chahiye tha..

Chitra ne durr se hi towel pheka..

Raj nahake aya.. chitra was making faces seeing him..

Raj โ€“ mujhe dekhkar aise chillayi jaise bhoot dekha hoo..

Chitra โ€“ to aapko kya laga aap bhoot se kam lagg rahe the??

Raj โ€“ naraz kyu hoo rahi hoo?? Mere frnds pata nahi kaha se aa gaye achanak aur mujhe bahar khich liya.. ismein meri kya galati thi??

Chitra โ€“ haan meri kya galati thi??(she imitated him..) agr aap chahte to unhe mana bhi kar sakte the na.. par aapko bhi to maza aa raha hoga.. abb faltu ke bahane kyu bana rahe hoo??

Raj โ€“ stop it now.. choti si baat pe itna bawal kyu macha rahi hoo?? Mujhe nahi pata tha biwi aisi hoti hai..

Chitra โ€“ haan to abb pata chal gaya na?? mujhe maza nahi aa raha aapse naraz hoke na hi aapko aisi halat me dekhke mera kuch bhigda.. its just aapka abhi abhi accident hua tha.. stitches aye h.. aur itne chemical wale colors se holi khel ke aye hoo kuch hoo gaya toh?? Bt y shld I care?? mujhe kya padi hai choti si baat pe BAWAL machane ki?? I always believed "love is nothing but misunderstanding between two idiots" still fell in love with u.. stupid me..

Raj โ€“ hoo gayi tumhari philosophy?? Ya aur baki hai??

Chitra โ€“ haan baki h.. "don't judge the book by its cover".. log bahar se jitne handsome aur dashing lagte hai na andar se utne hi jyada bhayanak hoo sakte hai.. khana bana diya hai jab mann kare kha lena.. meri bhookh to marr gayi h.. (she was having tears in her eyes..)

Chitra ka cell baja.. ghar se phone tha daimaa ne kiya tha..

Daimaa(tauntingly) โ€“ tum dono shaam tak to ghar wapas aa jaoge na??

Chitra โ€“ mujhe nahi pata.. aap raj se puch lijiye..

Daimaa โ€“ pata nahi ka kya matlab hai?? Ek to waise hi tum dono raat ko waha chale gaye uppar se kab lotoge yeh bhi nahi pata?? Janti ho na tumhara parivaar tumhare liye hi yaha ruka tha.. itni gerzimmedari achi nahi hai.. .. tum kab apni zimmedariyaan uthana sikhogi??

Chitra โ€“ kabhi nahi.. daimaa main aapki bahot izzat karti hoon kyunki aap raj ke liye maa jaisi hai.. aapko kabhi mera kuch bhi karna pasand nahi ata.. itne din hoo gaye mujhe uss ghar me rehte hue magar kya aapne ek baar bhi meri tarif ki jhoothi hi sahi taki aur jyada mehnat karne ka mann kare mera?? Nahi na.. agr main galat hoon to aapne kab pyaar se mujhe samjhaya?? Kabhi nahi.. kya main insaan nahi hoon?? Aap hamesha mujhe taunt karti rehti hoo.. hamesha bahu bahu karke bolti hoo kabhi bhi beti bola aapne mujhe?? Agr aapke liye main sirf uss ghar ki bahu hoon to abb main bhi aap main kabhi maa nahi dhundungi.. aur ek baat.. maine nahi kaha tha raj se yaha ane k liye woh khud mujhe yaha leke aye.. aap raj se hi baat kr lijiye..

She gave her phone to raj..

Raj โ€“ haan daimaa woh actually

Daimaa โ€“ beta agr tune kisi sanskari, aur achchi parvarish wali ladki se shadi ki hoti to aaj meri itni beizzati na hoti.. ab shikayat bhi kaise karu teri maa jo nahi hoon.. par beta itne saalo se iss ghar ki aur tum dono bachcho ki zimmedari sambhalte sambhalte mujhe laga main bhi iss ghar ka hissa hoon.. agr teri patni ko mera kuch bhi samjhana achcha nahi lagta to thik hai main abb kabhi usse kuch nahi kahungi.. ho sake to ghar jaldi aa jana.. sablog mumbai laut rahe hai shaam ko..

Daimaa ne phone rakh diya.. phone rakhne ke baat chitra ne jo kaha woh uss bare main sochne lagi..

Raj (angrily) โ€“ kya zarurat thi daimaa se iss tarah baat karne ki?? Mujhse naraz thi to 2 batein aur suna deti.. daimaa ka dil kyu dukhaya??

Chitra โ€“ u r shouting on me raj!!

Raj โ€“ yes i am!! tumhe pata hai daimaa ko kitni takleef hui tumhari baato se??

Chitra โ€“ u dnt know anything.. aapko bita hua kuch bhi yaad nahi hai so its better if u stay out of this..

Raj โ€“ okk fine par iska yeh matlab to nahi ki main yeh samajh nahi sakta ki u misbehaved with her..

Chitra โ€“ stop it raj plss.. main daimaa se maafi maang lungi.. bt plss stop all this now.. plss..

Chitra ne ghar pe phone kiya.. daimaa ne pick kiya..

Chitra โ€“ am sorry daimaa.. mujhe aapse aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi..

Daimaa โ€“nahii.. maine bhi jab thande dimaag se socha to laga tumne kuch galat to nahi kaha.. beta abse main puri koshish karungi tumhe samjhne ki.. tumlogo ki shaadi ke baad se halat itne kharab rahe ki main kabhi tumhe apna maan nahi payi.. par abb aisa nahi hoga.. aajse arjun aur raj ki tarah hi tum bhi iss ghar main meri beti ki tarah rahogi.. yeh vada hai mera tumse..

Tears were flowing down her cheeks.. she was extremely happy to see this side of daimaa.. bt at the same time she was in pain.. raj's behaviour hurted her the most..

Shaam ko dono ghar wapas gaye aur police jeep dekhi.. dono andar gaye..

Raj โ€“ police kyu ayi hai?? Kya hua??

Kripa(to chitra) โ€“ maine galati ki thi aur uski saza mujhe milni chahiye.. meri wajah se tumhari life kabhi stable nahi ho payi.. u always suffered bcoz of me n vasu aunty.. vasu aunty jail main h aur abb main bhi ja rahi hoon kyunki mujhe bhi wahi hona chahiye.. main chahti to usi din police station jakar apna zurm kabul kr sakti thi magar sabke saath aur khaskar tumhare saath kuch din bitane ki ichcha ne mujhe kamzor bana diya.. yeh 2 din meri zindagi ke sabse ache din the kyunki mere mann main kisi k liye koi nafrat nahi thi.. tha to bass pyaar(kripa ne angad ki taraf dekha..) .. tum yeh mat sochna ki nobody loves u.. yaha sabb tumhe bahot pyaar karte hai bass jatate nahi hai shayad.. mumma bhi tumhe bahot pyaar karegi kyunki abb main nahi rahungi unhe tumse chinne k liye..(both sisters had tears in der eyes..) par yeh sabb jyada din nahi chalega.. main jaldi hi laut kar aungi.. aur tb hum bahot jhagda karenge mumma k liye.. aur mujhe khushi hogi agr tab tum mujhe hara dogi.. (kripa hugged chitra..)


kripa(to raj) - am sorry raj maine jo ghatia harkat hospital main ki.. yakeen mano mera dil kabhi iss baat ki gawahi nahi deta tha ki main


raj(cutting her) - chodo na kripa.. jo ho gaya soo hoo gaya.. tumhe apni galatiyo ka ehsaas hoo gaya isse badhkar aur kya hoo sakta hai.. hum sabb besabri se tumhare lautne ka intezaar karenge..


kripa angad ke paas gayi..


kripa - thanks angad.. tumhari wajah se mere andar ki insaaniyat phir se zinda hoo gayi.. agr tumne na samjhaya hota to mujhe sahi aur galat ka farq hi na pata chalta.. tumhare saath ki wajah se hi main aaj yeh faisla le payi hoon.. thanks for everything angad..


angad kuch bhi bolne ki halat main nahi tha.. woh bahot mushkil se apne aansu rok raha tha.. woh janta hai agr woh kamzor padh gaya to kripa khud ko kaise sambhalegi..


angad - i'll wait for u kripa..

Police kripa ko lekar chali gayi.. angad khush tha kyunki kripa badal gayi hai.. abb woh pehle wali kripa nahi rahi aur use kripa ke lautne ka besabri se intezaar hai..

kripa jail main h sab log bahot upset h aur mumbai jana postpone kar liya h..

jabse kripa gayi h chitra ne muh se ek shabd bhi nahi nikala..

chitra apne kamre main chali gayi.. waha Chitra aur arohi ki kuch photo frames rakhi thi.. chitra ne ek photo frame apne haath me le li.. raj jab aya to usne chitra ko photoframe haath me pakde dekha..

Raj โ€“ bahot gehra rishta hai na tumhara aur arohi ka??

Chitra โ€“ hmm.. bachpan se hum saath rahe.. bahot kuch badla par hamara rishta hamesha aur jyada strong hota chala gaya.. and the credit simply goes to arohi.. har koshish usi ne ki.. kripa meri sagi behan hai magar maine hamesha arohi ko hi apni behan mana.. aaj kripa ne jo kiya uske baad mujhe samajh nahi aa raha main kya karu?? Kaise react karu.. main khush nahi hoon raj.. main kitna bhi inkaar karungi par sach to yahi hai woh behan hai meri.. khair chodiye na.. aapko pata hai aaj uski aankho main ajeeb si chamak dekhi maine jab woh angad se baat kar rahi thi.. 1-2 baar maine inn dono ko saath dekha tha.. aur angad se milne ke baad kripa ki aankho main maine pehli jaisi nafrat nahi dekhi kabhi.. no doubt angad ne hi kripa ko badla h..

Raj โ€“ tumhe nahi lagta something is brewing between them??

Chitra โ€“hmm shayad.. I'll be very happy if they end up being together for the whole life..

Raj โ€“ angad ke pyaar ne hi kripa ko uski galatiyon ka ehsaas dilaya.. pyaar insaan ko wakai badal deta hai.. kaash arjun ki zindagi main bhi koi aye jo use badal de..

Chitra โ€“ use kaha kadr hai kisi aur ke jazbaato ki.. use sirf nafrat baatna ata hai.. usne bahot dil dukhaya hai aro (she realized wat she was saying and stopped midway..)

Raj โ€“ aro?? arohi?? Arjun arohi ek dusre ko chahte hai??

Chitra โ€“ nahi.. arjun nahi sirf arohi.. bahot pyaar karti hai aaj bhi wo arjun se.. uski aankho main tute dil ka dard dekha hai maine aur dukh iss baat ka hai ki main uske liye kuch kar bhi nahi sakti..

Raj โ€“ hum chahe to inn dono ko ek kar sakte hai.. main arjun se baat karunga.. use ehsaas dilaunga ki arohi usse sachcha pyaar karti hai..

Chitra โ€“ nahi!! Main nahi chahti aisa kuch ho.. arohi ko uska pyaar mil jayega to sabse jyada khushi mujhe hi hogi magar main use zindagi bhar tadpne ke liye nahi chod sakti.. arjun use kabhi khush nahi rakh sakta kyunki use aisa karna ata hi nahi hai..

Raj โ€“ wat nonsense.. jab arohi arjun se pyaar karti hai to tumhe kya problem hai.. aur arjun nadaan hai.. ek baar zimmedari ayegi to woh rishto ki ehmiyat samajhne lagega..

Chitra โ€“ main arjun ki rag rag se wakif hoon.. uske liye sirf aap aur aapki khushi mayne rakhti hai.. usne aajtak kabhi mera maan nahi rakha woh arohi ko kya respect dega.. jab use aapke pyaar (she was refering to herself) ki kadr nahi hai to woh arohi ki kya izzat karega?? Arohi uske saath kabhi khush nahi reh sakti.. aap kya chahte hai ki aapka bhai zindagi main pyaar ane se badalta hai ya nahi yeh dekhne ke liye experiment karne ke liye main arohi ko bali ka bakra bann jane du??

Raj โ€“ u n ur never ending philosophies.. kabhi bhi normal insaan ki tarah soch nahi sakti kya?? Tumne dekha na even kripa changed bcoz of angad's love.. arjun to phir bhi kripa se behtar hai.. (suddenly raj grabbed her by her arm n made her face him..) tum isliye to na nahi keh rahi ho na bcoz tumhare aur arjun ke bich problems chal rahi hai??

Chitra ko yakeen nahi ho raha Raj kabhi usse aisa keh sakta hai..

Chitra โ€“ haan.. main aisi hi hoon.. selfish.. thats the best word to describe me.. do watever u want to.. i wont interfere.. bass ho sake to kisise bhi kuch bhi kehne se pehle ek baar arohi se puch lena.. aur haan maine abhi tak arohi ka brainwash nahi kiya hai isliye woh jo bhi kahegi usmein uski marzi hogi..

Arjun overheard everything..

Raj ne arjun ko dekha aur use andar bulaya..

Arjun โ€“ maine sabb suna raj.. tum dono meri vajah se kyu behas kar rahe hoo.. maine apni harkato ki wajah se arohi ko bahot takleef dii hai.. woh mujhse saccha pyaar karti hai aur maine use shayad hamesha ke liye kho diya hai.. bhabhi sahi keh rahi hai main arohi ke layak nahi hoon..

Chitra ko samajh nahi aa raha arjun achanak kaise badal gaya ..

Raj ko arjun ke liye bahot bura lagg raha hai..

Raj โ€“ tu aisa kyu soch raha hai?? Abhi bhi sabkuch khatm nahi hua hai.. main arohi se baat karunga..

Arjun โ€“ nahi raj wo

Raj โ€“ apne bhai pe bharosa hai na??

Arjun nodded..

Raj arohi ke room main gaya ..

Arohi โ€“ jiju aap?? Kuch kaam tha kya mujhse??

Raj โ€“ hmm.. tumse kuch puchna chahta hoon..

Arohi โ€“ kahiye na..

Raj โ€“ arjun ko chahti hoo??

Arohi โ€“ jij mujhe iss bare main koi baat nahi karni..

Raj โ€“ haan ya na??

Arohi โ€“ na.. nahi karti main arjun se pyaar..

Raj โ€“ to phir kyu tumhari aankhe num hai?? Bolo karti hoo na usse pyaar??

Arohi โ€“ haan karti hoon.. yeh meri zindagi ki sabse badi galati hai jise main chah kar bhi sudhar nahi sakti..

Raj โ€“ shaadi karogi arjun se??

Arohi kuch bhi samajh nahi pa rahi.. use samajh nahi aa raha yu achanak usse aisa sawal kyu pucha ja raha hai??

Arjun aur chitra b wahi the.. Raj ne arjun ko bulaya..

Raj โ€“ arjun abb arohi ko manane ki zimmedari teri.. mera kaam yaha pura hota hai..

Chitra ko samajh nahi aa raha woh raj pe gussa kare ya phir jo ho raha hai woh kitna galat hai yeh decide kare..

Arjun (to arohi) โ€“ maine tumhara bahot dil dukhaya mujhe maaf kar do arohi.. chaho to thappad mar do magar shaadi ke liye mana mat karna..

Raj chitra ko waha se le gaya apne saath..

Arjun โ€“ kuch to bolo arohi..

Arohi โ€“ main nahi janti tumhari baato main kitni sacchai hai.. mera sach bass itna hai ki main tumse shaadi nahi karna chahti.. isse jyada mujhe kuch nahi kehna aur na hi main kuch aur sunna chahti hoon.. abb tum ja sakte ho..

Arjun waha se sidhe raj-chitra ke room main gaya ..

Arjun โ€“ raj thank u soo much yaar.. ajj teri wajah se hi yeh possible hua hai.. arohi ne shadi ke liye haan keh di hai.. am sooo happy raj.. am sooo happyyyyy..

Chitra was too shocked to react..

Raj โ€“ thik hai to main kal hi arohi ke papa se tum dono ke rishte ki baat karunga.. tu ja jake soo ja..

Arjun chala gaya..

Chitra bhi jane lagi.. raj ne use rok liya..

Raj โ€“ arohi ke paas ja rahi hoo??

Chitra โ€“ haan..

Raj โ€“ kyu??

Chitra โ€“ behan hai meri.. abb kya main usse baat bhi nahi kar sakti raj??

Raj โ€“ main nahi chahta tum arjun arohi ke bich aao.. arjun bahot khush hai aur main nahi chahta uski khushi ko kisi ki nazar lage..

Chitra โ€“ maine aisa bhi kya kar dia raj jo aap mujhe kabse har baat ke liye zimmedar thehra rahe hoo?? Ek baar nuetral hokar sochiyega kaun selfish hai aap ya main?? Aapko sirf arjun ki khushi se matlab hai arohi ki chinta nahi h aapko..

Raj โ€“ phir wahi baat.. arjun insaan hai koi rakshas nahi jo tumhari behan ko kha jayega.. main kuch nahi janta bass itna kahunga agr tumhe meri zara bhi parwaah hai to tum iss mamle main interfere nahi karogi..

Arohi ne arjun ko saaf inkaar to kar dia magar apne hi dil ko abb sambhal nahi pa rahi thi..

Arohi - jis zakhm ko main itne dino se mitane ki koshish kar rahi thi woh zakhm phir hara hoo gaya .. maine aaj tumhe hamesha ke liye kho diya hai arjun ya phir shayad hum ek duje ke liye bane hi nahi the.. main na chahte hue bhi tumse bahot bahot pyaar karti hoon magar chah kar bhi ratti bhar bharosa nahi kar sakti tumpe.. shayad yahi meri kismat hai..






hii mere pyaare pyaare readers kaise hoo aap sabb?? puchne ka fayda bhi kya kabhi batate hi nahi kaise hoo main to puch puch kar thak jati hoon har UD ke baad..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† woh kya hai na main aajkal buttering lessons le rahi hoon toh socha thoda apply kar lu yaha bhi.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† abb sorry bolungi to kahogi "wats new??" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† waise itna toh bol sakti hoon na ki kal ya parso main ek aur part post kar dungi.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

now thanks a ton for the precious comments and thanks to all those who hit the like button.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ main to comments padhne ke liye hi part post karti hoon.. ๐Ÿคฃ sacchi main..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

chalo bye bye.. sayonara.. goodnite and tc.. love u all.. muaaaaaahhhh..๐Ÿ˜ƒ


waise am Nandini naam to suna hi hoga na.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

bye bye.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by ~~~~ - 15 years ago
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hey nandu....................good that u posted the part.................waise am fine.............tum kaisi ho???????????????? itni formalities zaroori hai kya?????????????he he he................nice part......................everythings turning well...................kripa has changed and arjun is changing too.....isnt he??????????? well arohi ne inkar kar diya par is arjun ne haan kaha raj se...................and this raj whats wrong with him?????????????yaar bring back his yaadash....................this raj's behaviour doesnt suit chitra's raj completely.....................post the next part..................cont soon dear..................
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Hi Nandini

How r u???
Update was really gud...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Raj is trying to get romantic with Chitra but she slept..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† female Kumbhakaran naam accha hai..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Holi scene was cute but woh jalddi hi fight scen mein badal gaya..Dai Ma ko tabhi phone karna tha๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Chitra ne sahi hi kaha..Har baat ki sirf woh kyun samjhe..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜•
Yeh Raj n Chitra ko ho kya gaya hai..Raj ke andar uss junglee aadmi (Arjun) ki aatma ghus gayi hai...Woh Chitra se kasie baat kar raha tha..
Har baat mein usko blame kar raha tha..I want my old Raj back..Yeh to koi Arjun ka photocopy hai..
Kripa jail chali gayi..Angad ko bahut bura lag raha tha...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Arohi ne shadi ke liya mana kar diya par Arjun ne jhoot kyun bola..Raj ne bhi Chitra ko interfere karne se mana kar diya...
Iss Arjun aur Dai Maa ko pls Raj ki zindagi se nikalo..They r creating too much problem between Chitra n Raj..๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome amazing excellent part nandu ab time mila kya update post karne kye liye am fine wat abt you please jaldise update kardo cont soonnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update nandu !!
thoda jaldi jaldi update kiya karo na yaar !
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Posted: 15 years ago
Beautiful part dear....๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
nandini dear here i'am with my comments on your fanfic...first of all
i'am happy to see the update....i was eagerly waiting for the next part... hmm...i liked the starting of the part where raj & chitra were together.. unke beech ka sweet talks, theis chotti, chotti ladayi, that rootna, manana, all of this was so very very very nice...i actually like raj & chitra's pair....they are so sweet..so adorable together...i liked the tit bits of the romance, which is shown between raj & chitra...but dear to tell you frankly mujhe yeh bina yaadhast ka raj utna achcha nahii lagtha... because raj seems to be a different person all together... because raj has lost his memory, woh yeh baat nahii jaantha hai kii chitra uske liye kya maayine rakhthi hai...& that is the reason why he keeps taunting & scolding her...i miss the old raj, who was a sweetheart... joh harr cheez ka do pehlu dekhtha tha..joh chitra ko achche se jaantha tha...as raj has lost his memory, chitra stands last in his list of priorities....pehli baat tho mujhe, daima samaj mein nahii aathi, why is she always rude to chitra...chitra itna achcha bannthi hai, lekin phir bhi... mujhe na woh arjun aur daima pe bada ghussa aatha hai...aur is part mein tho mereko raj pe bhi ghussa aaya....woh kyun daant raha hai chitra ko..chitra ne joh kuch bhi daima se kaha, woh sahii hii tho hai...if daima cannot accept chitra as a daughter then waise hii chod dena hii behtar hai...aur yeh raj...uffffff.... usne chitra ko daanta...lekin dekha jaaye tho raj kii tho ismein koi ghalthi hii nahii hai he has lost his memory aur woh nahii jaantha kii daima dislikes chitra nor does he know what arjun has done to chitra & arohi....hmm...lekin i don't like this rude raj, joh hamesha chitra ko hii baatein sunatha hai..chitra ko hii ghalat theratha hai....i hope uski memory jaldi se wapas aajaye..but i'am also scared kii kahiin yeh saari misunderstandings haath se na nikal jaye, by the time raj gets his memory back...waise i liked kripa's scene, it showed kii woh kitni sharminda hai apne kiye par.....angad says he would wait for kripa that was very cool....achcha hai kripa has realized her mistake & angad is accepting her with all her flaws..nice....kripa will get happiness & love which she was unable to get blinded with her jealousy....you showed the emotions of chitra very well after that....jaise chitra seeing her family's picture after they leave.. raj walking in talking to her..all this was very well portrayed... i liked it very much..but i did not like what followed next, where chitra ne ghalthi se arohi ka naam le liya in regard with arjun.... & now raj knows arohi likes arjun... aur iske baad joh baat chitra ne kahii bilkul sahii hai, arjun does not deserve arohi...arjun ne kitna hurt kiya arohi aur chitra ko.....i feel arjun should really repent for what he has done... lekin yeh raj tho kuch jaantha hii nahii hai aur ulta woh chitra ko hii baatein sunaa raha hai...woh chitra ko ghalat thera raha hai.. tho arjun finally says it is his fault & chitra is right..you know what deat like chitra now even i doubt arjun, i feel woh joh bhi kartha hai is a farce, is a jhoota dhikawa...so just like chitra even i'am unable to make out whether arjun is sach mein guilty or is it his new act.... hmm..tho raj asks arohi directly....& the he leaves arjun & arohi to talk it out... hmm...tho arohi says no to arjun, well arjun ne joh kiya uske liye usse thodi bohat tho saza milni hii chahiye...so thus arjun deserves what he is getting....lekin yeh kya arjun ne raj aur chitra se kaha kii arohi has said yes to him..ab kya yeh arjun kii koi nayi chaal hai... ya phir he does not want to upset raj issi wajah se arjun ne raj se jhoot kaha... aur ab iske baad joh baat raj ne chitra se kahii mujhe woh bilkul achchi nahii lagi.. raj is telling chitra not to interfere between arjun & arohi, while raj on the other hand just did the same...he was being selfish because raj ke liye arjun bohat zyada mayine rakhtha hai...raj after losing his memory, seems like a stranger to me.....such a changed person....aur arjun ke liye raj anjaane mein hii sahii arohi aur chitra ko chot pohancha raha hai....he is blaming chitra for everything... i'am very sad after reading that bit.... i feel so sorry for arohi..& equally bad for chitra...raj ke ghar mein ek raj hii tha who understood chitra, like the back of his hand..lekin ab raj hii usse samaj nahii raha hai tho kissi aur se kya umeed...i feel it is going back to square one, whwere, chitra & arohi had only one another's support...anyway nandini the story is progressing very well...i'am liking all the twists & turns you have given to the fanfic....keep the good work going...the story is getting very gripping & very interesting.....๐Ÿ‘
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘waise nandini dear may be in the coming parts something very drastic is going to happen & may be chitra, arohi will leave raj's home & go away....i don't know why lekin mujhe aisa lagtha hai kii there is going to be a big showdown between raj & chitra, where may be raj will hold chitra responsible for every wrong thing that is happening... & may be the matter will get so worse that chitra & arohi will plan to leave back to Switzerland...& chitra & arohi might go back & stay at their flat...& i also feel that un dono ke jaane ke baad, raj kii memory wapas aayegi....raj & arjun will repent what they have done & woh dono zameen asmaan ek kar denge to win & woo back their respective lady love.... this is my guess so dear is my guess right...do tell me i really want to know..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰dear please do post the next part soon..i'am waiting to read the next part eagerly..๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 15 years ago

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