Ragvir's Jannat -ff (scene 6 on pg 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet priya

awesome ff tanvi........just loved it 👏
update soon

thank priu for appreciating it😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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scene 4

this highly requested ff by panchi .........

tthis thought came in her mind & i elaborated that thought with little modifications

lolz

so here it goes

sheetal's daughter sonam had came india 2 see india ..........

she's a spoilt girl ( don't no what will be in the serial or hogi bhi yaa nahi)

she met ranvir in US

she liked ranvir

came 2 no that ravnir got married..........

& she basically came 2 india 2 seperate ragvir

ranvir no her plans........... landed rajvansh house as sweet girl

but ranvir no's that what type of girl is sonam

sonam regularly visits rajvansh house kis na ksi bahane se

sonam becum friend of ragi .........this was bcoz so that she can go close 2 ranvir & ragvir relationship me fights la sake

ranvir tried tried 2 convience ragi ..........she also understands ranvir but ragi says that no body can create misunderstandings b/w them................

one day sonam & ragi went for shopping together..........

in b/w shopping sonam selects a shirt for ranvir........he calls him & says i have selected a shirt for u & u have 2 weras

ranvir says no he won't wear that .......he no what she wants

ranvir says tum jo chahte ho woh kabhie bhi nahi ho sakta chahe tum jitni koshish karlo..........& cuts the phone

sonam tricked ragi .........she selected the shirt & shows 2 ragi

sonam says ragi this one is nice shirt it will suit ranvir u were luking for this type naa

ragi also likes the shirt ...........& got packed

they reached back home

in evening

ranvir was already in the room.....gussa me kyunki uska manha karne ke baad bhi ragi gone out with sonam .........

ragi came happily at home he sees ragi happy so he doesn't say anything2 her he just becum num

ragi sees ranvir....she goes near 2 ranvir

ragi- aap aaj inni jaldi kaise........chalo aacha hai

main abhi aapki liya garma garam chai bana kar lati ho

ragi lefts the room

in b/w ranvir phones ring it was sonam

she says tumhe shirt toh pasand aa gayi naa woh blue colur ki hai dekhna tumhe tumhari biwi aapne haado se pehnagi abhi........meri pasand ki hui shirt ...........

ranvir gets very irritated with this & cuts the phone

ragi itne me vapis aa jati hai chai lekar

ranvir preffered 2 keep quite as sadi also came with ragi..........

sadi stays for 5-10 mins in b/w ragi was showing the stuff he shopped all things were on bed but the shirt was still not shown he was luking at there shopping things & drinking the tea sitting on sofa..........

itne me aalekhji bhi aa jate hai dost ko lejane ke liye ...........

aalekh- dost tum kya kar rahi ho

sadi- aalekhji me jiji jo shopping karke aayi hai woh cheeze dekh rahi ho

aalekh- ohh

ragi also bought a sari for sadi which she gives 2 her..........

sadi sees an another paket which was still packed sadi - jiji isme kya hai

ragi just do the ishare towards ranvir & turns her eyes down

ragi shows the shirt 2 sadi lekin secretly so that ranvir couldn't see........

sadi understood

& says aalekhji chale

aalekh- haa chalo dost mujhe tum se kuch kaam hai

ranvir has seen the ishare of ragi he understood it is that shirt only

ranvir stands up & goes 2 ragi ......ragi was about 2 open the packet

ranvir snatches the packet from her & throws on the floor gussa me

ranvir starts shouting on ragi

ranvir- maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai mujhe tumhari sonam ke saath dosti aachi nahi lagti .......tum maante kyu nahi ho

ragi - ranvir lekin

ranvir- lekin vakin kuch nahi ..........aur yeh shirt tum mera liye laaye ho naa sonam ke pasand ki.........

ragi- haa shirt toh layi ho lekin

ranvir - lekin kya ragini ............he goes close 2 her touches both her shoulders & says ragini tum samajhti kyu nahi ho...........woh ladki sahi nahi hai ..........me tumhe samjh samjhe kar dak gaya hoo.............

ranvir moves his hands down & makes his head down for seconds

& than again in all gussa & shows one finger .........like sumone giving chatavni.............

ranvir- ragini tum aaj ke baad sonam se door rahogi samji ........aur yeh baat mujhe dobare bolne ki zaroot naa pade

ranvir lefts the room gussa me

ragi gets very hurts with this she never seen this much gussa on ranvir ..........

& starts crying...........

after sumtime sadi calls ragi for dinner

but ranvir doesn't came for dinner & when he was called he said usse bhook nahi hai..........ragi was serving 2 everyone when this was said by sum servent

she felt upset all others have & left

ragi also doesn't eat..........

& goes 2 her room all things were placed there only.........she collects all shopped things & also pick up that packet & places on the sofa she was really very hurt..........wanted 2 cry but she can't

ranvir already slept.......or was acting as he was sleeping

ragi gets changed & she also tries 2 sleep but the roop he has seen of ranvir was not making her sleep ........

in was all midnight

ranvir gets turns towards ragi's side & tries 2 put her hand on her but he feels that ragi is not on the bed.........

he gets up immediately.............

its just half posting more soon

he luks for ragi in whole room . chks bathroom she was no where

he goes out from his room luks in the kitchen living area

gets really very tensed........where ragi should gone

cums back in his room ..........

sauys yeh ragini kaha chali gayi

main bhi kitna idiot,gaddha bewakoof ho...............jo itna chila diya ragi par

he picks up his phone tries 2 call on her cell but the phone was lying on bed side..........

rings in room only

ranvir picks ragi's phone says- yeh ragini bhi naa .........phone yehi hai par ragini kaha jaa sakti hai itni raat ko

he turns towards sofa sees that packet ......goes close aur yeh sab is shirt ki vajah se me kitna chilaye apni ragini par..........

ragini plz i'm sorry par tum ho kaha..........takes out the shirt.........it not that same shirt which sonam selected

the shirt color was steel grey silver

he was so shocked .........ranvir says yeh toh woh shirt nahi hai jo sonam keh rahi thi ..........he smiles for seconds

but stops

ranvir says par ragini tum ho kaha ..............& he felt like crying goes down on his knees ........takes that shirt in the hand ...........& hugs that shirt starts crying

ragini tum kaha ho.........plz mujhe maaf kar do plzzzzzzzz.......tum ho kaha

he release ekdum se...........bhabhi ko ho sakta hai pata ho

gets up & goes 2 sadi's room was about 2 knock stop for second says par me bhabhi se kahuga kya..........

jo bhi ho pehle mujhe ragi ka pata lagne hai..........

so he knocks at the door

sadi gets tensed sees at clock .........it was 2:15

sadi- itni raat ko but she opens the door ...........

sees ranvir says ranvirji aap itni raat ko kya baat hai bahut pareshaan lag rahe hai..........bateye

ranvir- bhabhi ragi kahi bhi nazar nahi aa rahi hai.....woh pata nahi kaha chali gayi hai pura ghar dekh liya

sadi- jiji hai bhagwan yeh aap kya keh rahe hai ranvirji aise kaise ...kaha jaa sakti hai.........aur aise kya baat kya hai ranvirji

ranvir-woh bhabhi baat woh bhabhi thodi si ladai ho gayi hai ........aur ranvir saare baat baata deta hai........

ranvir puts his head down.........

says bhabhi bataye naa kaha jaa sakti hai ragi plzzzzzzz

sadi thinks for seconds goes close 2 window & see sumone in the garden..........goes more closer 2 the window & sees sumone sitting on the jhola ...........than calls ranvir says ranvirji idhar aaye toh dekhye woh jhola par kaun hai...............he also goes closer 2 the window

sees more closely

& observes it ragi

he smiles for while..........& says sukar hai bhagwaan ka

than runs out of from room towards the garden ...............

ranvir goes in the garden goes close 2 the jhola where ragi was sitting putting her head down touching her knees...........

ranvir goes near 2 her & says ragini...........he has tears in his eyes

ragi puts her head up sees ranvir all her face was wet with tears ..........

ragi- ranvir app

ranvir gets more close & sits beside her ............

ranvir held ragi's face aur uke aaso poochte hai apne dono haado se...........

ranvir- ragini i'm sorry me kitna pagal, bawakoof ,stupid ho jo tumpar bina dekhe bina socha jaane tum par baars pada

i'm sorry ragini

tears were flowing from both of there eyes

now ragi al;so helds ranvir face aur uske aaso poochte hai

ragi - nahi ranvir me hi aapki baat nahi maane i'm really very sorry ranvir

now both were helding the facing .............

ranvir- mujhe hi tumhe pehle saare baat bata deni thi taki ........

ragi- nahi ranvir woh shirt agar aapko .......

ranvir - nahi ragini woh shirt mere ko bahut pasand hai

ragi- nnahi woh

ranvir pehle tum meri baat suno woh sonam.................

tells everything related 2 shirt that he got a call from sonam ...........

ragi got little shocked but smiled little

ranvir gets up from jhola & stands

ragi smiles

& says ranvir me janti ho sonam humare beech me ladai dalwana chahti hai ..........

ranvir takes turn & sees ragi's face ..........

ragi - ranvir woh shirt jo sonam ne pasand ki thi woh maine kharadi toh thi lekin uske saamne sirf

.........maine us shirt lauta kar dosri shirt baad exchange karle........

jab woh car nikalne gayi tab...........

me janti ho ranvir woh mera through woh shirt aap tak poouchna chahti thi......

lekin aap mera husband hai aur mera ko jo pasand aayega woh aap pehne ga naa ki kisi doose ko jo pasand aaye.............

ranvir smiles on this

& goes closer 2 her ...........hugs her tightly & in side hug they go into there room..........

ranvir smiles & close the door of the room

takes the shirt in the hand & goes closer 2 mirror saya ragini mujhe yeh shirt kal pehne hai..........

theek hai

ragi smiles

ranvir now goes closer 2 ragi & hugs her ...........

says i love u ragini

ragi- i 2 love u ranvir

aur humare beech koi bhi nahi aa sakta

gets out from hugs

kiss her ....................& both gets cozy & sleep

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part tanvi👏👏👏.......beautifully written.......loved every scene of it.....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet priya

awesome part tanvi👏👏👏.......beautifully written.......loved every scene of it.....😳

thanks priu
for appreciating it😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
congrats on opening ur own ff topic 🤗

love the pics u used one of my fav ragvir pic

will read the scenes soon im sure they'll rock

love 4m

priya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaranShilpa

congrats on opening ur own ff topic 🤗

love the pics u used one of my fav ragvir pic

will read the scenes soon im sure they'll rock

love 4m

priya

priya loved ur comments🤗🤗🤗
thanks u dear🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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scene 5

guys here sum scene related 2 honeymoon
here it goes
ranvir,ragini,sadi & aalekh all were in hotel terrace enjoying evening tea & kerala's nature ........
ragini- sadi kitna aacha mausam ho raha hai na
in one hand she had cup of tea & other hand was in ranvir's hand as ranvir's hand on on table she had putted her hand on his .......
sadi - haa jiji kitna aacha mausam hai
ranvir was just seeing ragi & ragi,sadi,aalekh were enjoying the view
ragi- ranvir mausam kitna suhna ho raha hai
ranvir was just busy staring ragi only & said haa
ragi- dekhiya toh sahi kitna khoobsurat nazara hai
ranvir- dekh hi toh raha ho
ragi starts smiling aur sharm ke maara laal ho jati hai & puts her head down little like in sharmoing way
sadi sees this ........she also starts smiling but doesn't say anything
than aalekh sees sadi smiling & asks why she's smiling sadi aapne haad se ishare karti hai aalekh gets confused the expressions the way he makes when he gets confused
aalekh zoor se chila deta hai dost tum kyu ranvir ki taraf ishare kar rahi ho aur tum mujhe batati kyu nahi ki tum kyu muskura rahi ho...........
ranvir gets disturb by this aur fir sharm jata hai sadi starts laughing ....
aur ragi aur sharamane lagti hai & ranvir also puts his had down in sharmoing................
sadi - jiji shopping karne chale
ragi- hmmmmmm haa chalo
ranvir gets sad & says shopping bhabhi kal chalege naa dekho abhi toh raat hone wali hai
sadi - deverji raat abhi toh shaam ke 5 hi baje hai aur hum 2 ghaante me vapis aa jayge
aalekh- dost me nahi jaa raha shopping par mera mann nahi hai .........me painting kargo yaha par
sadi aacha
ranvir - dekha bhabhi bhaiya ka bhi mann nahi hai .......hum kal chalege subha.............
ragi arre ranvir chalte hai naa thodi daar ki toh baat hai............
sadi haa
aalekh dost nahi mera mann nahi hai ......................
aacha ek kaam karte hai tum aur ranvir ki dost tum dono shopping par chale jao aur dekho ranvir ka bhi mann nahi hai shopping par jane ke vo mera saath yehi rahega
ranvir gets worried yeh kya ho gaya mujhe toh ragi ke saath time spend karn tha
ragi- haa yeh sahi hai
ranvir stands up from chair
ranvir - arre kya sahi hai nayi jagah tum log aise kaise akele chale jaoge ............nahi kikul nahi jana
sadi - hum toh jaa rahe hai
ragi - haa nayi jagah hai toh kya driver aur gaadi lekar jayge .........aur ranvir plzzzzzzzzzz naa jaldi aa jayge.
ragi makes innocent sa face in which ranvir can't say no 2 her
ranvir- aacha jao in udaas face ........lekin jaldi aa jana
ranvir is standing not facing ...............like he's naraz
ragi stands up goes near 2 ranvir touchhes his face (like in morning wala scene when she's going for pag phere)
ragi - ranvir promise hum jaldi aa jayge
plzzzzzz
ranvir - smiles & touches her hand which was on his face theek hai ........
sadi - chale
ragi - haa
& they go for shopping
sadi & ragi said they will be back in the hotel by 7 pm but it was now 7:30 pm
aalekh & ranvir were in saalekh room as aalekh was painting & ranvir was waiting for them ..........
ranvir gets worried ............& he was gets naraz very very angry ............all his romantic mood was getting off...............
aur baar baar dono ka phone try kar raha tha lekin mil nahi raha
ranvir was sitting on sofa & luking at watch again & again
& stands up when he luks at watch...aur walk karne lagat hai room me gussa me...........
ranvir- ab toh had hoti hai 8:30 ho gaye hai....pata nahi kaha reh gayi hai ..........
ek toh unjan jagah hai aur 7 baje ka keh kar gayi thi .........upar se mera sare plan par paane fer diya hum shopping par aaye hai ya apna honeymoon maane .............
crosses his arms
aalekh- ranvir mujhe naa neend aa rahi hai me so raha ho jab woh log aaye 2 utha dene mujhe
ranvir - theek hai bhaiya
aalekh sleeps on bed
ranvir meanwhile calls hotel reception 2 enquire about sadi- ragi
but they havn't cum
it was now 8:50pm
ranvir was very angry
ranvir- aane do ragi ko ..........
he was so much angry
now both were opened the door
both were giggling will entrying the room
when they stepped at door
ranvir - aagaye tum .........time dekh hai
ragi - sorry ranvir woh sabke liye kuch naa kuch lene me time lag gaye
sadi - aalekh ji so gaye hai....
ranvir- haa bhabhi
ranvir was very angry aur ab me bhi soone jaa raha ho
gudnight (in angry tone)
aur haa ragini me aaj bhaiya ke paas so raha ho.........bhabhi tumhare paas so jayge
he goes near 2 bed & sleeps near aalekh
ragi gets udaas & sadi also gets worried .........as ranvir was in very angry & udaas mood..............
she just leaves the shopping things in saalekh room & sadi ragi went ragvir room
as they entered the room ...........the bed was all decorated with flowers
ragi- sadi understood why ranvir was in such off mood
ragi gets hurt thatranvir had so much plans which she spoilted with this stupid shopping
sadi also sees ...........jiji i'm sorry meri vajah se ranvirji ka
ragi - got tears in eyes she says nahi sadhana meri galti hai hai ..........jab woh manah kar rahe tha toh mujhe bhi manah karne chahiye tha
sadi - ab .......ab kya kare
ragi goes near 2 bed sit on the bed & touches flowers were her hands.........
ragi - woh kitna keh rahe tha mat jao aur me hi nahi samjhe
sadi- goes closer 2 her puts her hand on ragi shoulders .....jiji ranvirji ka mann kitna dukhi hoga naa..........
ragi -hmmmmm
ragi stands up goes near the phone ..calls in reception
orders sumthing
keeps the phone down.........goes near 2 sadi
ragi - sadi mera ek kaam karogi
sadi haa jiji boleye......ragi tells her what she has 2 do .........
sadi smiles .......
sadi - oh hoo
itne me waiter bhi aa jata hai saman leker what ragi ordered
sadi goes out of room
sadi goes 2 there room
meanwhile,ragi wears the lehnga again which she weared on 1st night ...........& lites the candles in all over room which she ordered .........
sadi -knockes the door zor zor ka
ranvir - ragini tum jao me aaj yehi soga
sadi - ranvirji darwa toh khol ye
ranvir- bhabhi aap hai
he quickly gets up from bed & opens the door.......
ranvir - bhabhi aap
sadi - ranvirji jaldi chaleye
ranvir- haa bhabhi lekin baat kyahai aap itni pareshaan kyu lag rahi hai
sadi - aap chale toh sahi ........sadi takes ranvir's hands & starts walking towards ragvir room..........
ranvir - stops on the door bhabhi me nahi jaoga aur aap mujhe yaha aise lekar aayi .............
ranvir starts going back 2 ssalekh room
sadi -deverji meri baat toh suniye........
ranvir stops & stands in middle of hotel passage
ranvir- boleye
sadi- ranvirji me toh sirf is liye yaha laye thi kyuki jiji ki tabiyat karab ho gayi hai aur unke sir me dard ho raha hai bahut
ranvir- kya aur aap mujhe yeh baat ab bata rahi hai .........
he runs towards his room
sadi also walks behind him...with smiling face
ranvir as opened the door all lights were off only candles lighting for liting very romantic atmosphere
sadi from back closes the door from outside & locks it
ranvir turns & tries 2 open the door
but all efforts gets waste................
now he starts stepping in the room
ragi was sitting in front of mirror wearing bangles
ranvir goes near 2 her & says yeh sab kya hai.........
ragi stands up jo aapko nazar aa raha hai...........with smile
gives little dhaka from her shoulder 2 ranvir...............
& goes near center table sits on floor halfy on knees ...........& starts liting candles on table..............& seeing towards ranvir
ranvir- yeh sab kya hai
itne me hott candle wax falls on ragi's hands..........ouchhhhhhhhh & shake her hand ...........
(if sumone gets hurt on hand like we do sumthing when we get hurt)
ranvir run towards ragi takes her hand ...........where she got hurt
kiss that hand ....................
ranvir was kissing her hand & seeng ragi ............ragi starts sharmoing little
& says i'm sorry ranvir meri vajah se ..........
ranvir goes closer 2 her & stop her from saying anything by putting her finger on ragi's lips............
& goes closer 2 her
ranvir- ragini kuch mat kehna ...............
ranvir goes more closer & kisses her both cheeks
by putting his both hands on ragi's chin
ragi was blushing so much....................
now ranvir lifts her in his arms..................
ragi was sharmoing so much she puts her arms on ranvir's shoulders
both were luking at each other .................
ranvir goes near the bed & make ragi sit nicely on bed ...........
ragi was sharmoing so much..................
& he also sets near 2 her
takes ragi both her hands & kisses them one by one
seeing towards ragi....................
ragi immediately goes into ranvir's arms as she was so much sharmong & blushing.............ranvir kisses her forhead
& night spends b/w 2 lovers in there arms..................❤️❤️❤️
having love😍
hope u like it & comments it plzzzzzz
request 2 all who read😊
chahe achha ho ya bura ho
both r wecomed but plz comment
Edited by loving_bird - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Tanvi ,
Its brilliant, amazing. awesome ... MINDBLOWING!! lolzz..👏
totaly loved it.. please continue ur FF 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
ur welcome tanvi
will read all the scenes in detail soon but love wat ive already read
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really sweeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttt scene tanvi!!
loved it!! 😳

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