Ragvir's Jannat -ff (scene 6 on pg 3)

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RAGVIR'S JANNAT FF

hello friends

i'm tannvi

i had written sum one scenes on ragvir in jannat cfc wanted 2 share this with all of u. hope u like them & will be posting more scenes on them.

this thread is dedicated 2 jannat only & belong 2 all jannatians & ragvir

INTRODUCTION

RANVIR

RAGINI

TOGETHER THEY BECOME RAGVIR

RAGVIR

Ranvir Ragini after Marriage Picture in Sapna Babul Ka Bidaai

will post my scenes from tommorrow

Edited by loving_bird - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

scene 1

its was in 2 parts

as i had already written it posting both the parts

sum of u had already read it...........

part1

its after ragvir marriage when girl cums 2 maayka for pagphere rasam & has 2 stay 1 day in the maayka

ragi was sitting with her whole family & idhar ranvir was missing her so much

even he can't go there.

he was thinking what 2 do 2 meet ragi .............than suddenly he got an idea

ranvir picked up his phone which was lieing on the bed & called ragi

at bauji house everyone was sitting chatting having evening breakfast .......

than ragi phone rang malti came ........she said zaroor yeh ranvirji ka phone hoga than ragi picked up the phone she said hello

ranvir says tumhare bina mann nahi lag raha she can't say anything as all were sitting beside her

ranvir say kab aa rahi ho .........ragi says kal ...........ranvir shouts KAL.......

mann me toh bahut gussa aa raha ranvir ko...........

lekin

phir jo plan kiya hota hai usse attempt karta hai

phir ranvir say chalo theek hai koi baat nahi me manage kar loga ....raat ki toh baat hai

ragi says kya manage karloge

ranvir in his style me ........batana toh nahi chahta tha lekin tum itna insist kar rahi ho toh me bata deta ho .........

woh kya hai na ragini mera sir me bahut dard ho raha hai.........

acting like that also sar par haad rakh leta hai & hass bhi raha hota hai

ragi pareshaan ho jati hai sunkar .....ki ranvir ke sir me dard ho raha hai

bechari .........

ranvir says ragini tum pareshaan mat ho me manage karloga......

ragi - kya manage karloge kya bahut jaida dard ho raha hai ranvir

ranvir -maine kaha na manage karloga

ab asli nautanki start ranvir ki

ragi- ranvir

itne me aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh ragini

bahut dard ho raha mera sir..........aahhhhhhh

aur sath me mazaa le raha hai.......masti me

ragi-chair se khadi ho jati hai ......

& starts shouting on the phone ranvir ranvir aap theek toh hai but ranvir just listening & making sounds jaise sach me dard ho raha ho........

after that ranvir cuts the phone

she got so much worried bechari bahut pareshaan ho jati hai

ranvir smiling ...........says kaam ho gaya

goes off 2 bed & lies

idhar ragini says 2 khaushi ........maa mujhe jana hoga lagta hai ranvir ki bahut jaida tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai unke sir me bahut dard ho raha hai

with this note she just leaves

even not wearing her slippers & just runs takes taxi

reaches her sasural

while getting out & reaching inside the house ....uske par(feet) me kaanch chubh jata hai aur khoon behta hai

she doesn't care uska ranvir jo bemaar tha

& she just runs towards the house

everyone is sitting in the hall ........& she ran towards her room

vasu sees on the floor all getting red

everyone gets worried kya ho gaya

ranvir no's that she reached home as he had seen her from the window

ranvir starts acting ahhhhhhh ahhhhhhhh bahut dard ho raha hai

when she sees ranvir in that halat she starts crying & goes near 2 ranvir takes her head & she sits near ranvir puts his head on her lap .........

ragi-ranvir bahut dard ho raha hai

ranvir-ahhhhhh ragini tum...... tum kyu aaye maine kaha tha na me manage kar longa phir bhi tum aa gayi ..

ragi- kya manage karloge hmmmmmmmmm manage karloga manage karloge dekh rahi ho kitna manage kar rahe ho

now in little soft tone says ranvir bahut dard ho raha hai na

& ragi crying very badly

ranvir tries 2 sit yeh dekhkar ragi bahut ro rahi hai ......

but ragi says aap khade mat ho u just lie me abhi hot oil massage karti ho phir theek ho jayge..........

ranvir still doesn't no that she got hurt herself

she goes outside........towards the kitchen & everyone is worried pata nahi kya ho gaya hai but kisi ki himat hii nahi hui poocha phir cm asks ragini kya ho gaya she says while crying ranvir ke sir me dard hai.........

she goes towards kitchen heats the oil & quietly takes that in her room where ranvir still acting.......

ragi goes near 2 ranvir & starts putting oil

peeche peeche sadi aa jati hai first-aid box lekar ........

sadi-jiji aap ranvirji ki sar me oil laga rahi hai ........lao me aapke paar(foot) ki first-aid kar deti ho..........

ragi-nahi sadhana tum abhi rehne do me baad me karlogi

ranvir hears that & immediately gets up & stop her hands which were doing massage

ranvir ragi ka haad rok kar kehta hai bhabhi ragini ko kya ho gaya hai........

ragini apna paar(foot) dekhna ranvir says

ragi says -ranvir mujhe kuch nahi hua hai aap chalege latiye (lie on bed) aapke sir me dard ho raha hai

sadi says -arre aise kaise jiji kuch nahi hua hai

pura ghar aapke khoon ke paar ke nishana se latpat pada hai

aur aap keh rahi ho kuch nahi hua hai

now ranvir gets tensed & sees on the floor all was red floor with ragi's feet prints

ranvir takes her feet & sees

got tears in his eyes ...........

than stands immediately takes 1st aid box from sadi's hand & starts doing 1st aid even starts crying all eyes got tears

with this sadi quietly leaves the room .................

part 2

after sadi left the room

the room was all over with silence & ranvir was doing 1st aid of ragi & but silently both were crying.......

after ranvir done with first aid he goes closer 2 ragi pulls her face up ......touches her face aur uske aaso phoochte hai & goes more closer lifts her face ........kiss her on the forehead

par ragi was still crying

silence breaks down ranvir asks ragi kya bahut dard ho raha hai

ragi silently pushes her head in no & doesn't say anything

ranvir gets more sad with this that ragi is not saying anything bcoz ragi had understood till now that ranvir did mazak with her.......

ranvir tries 2 get up from the bed as he tries 2 stand & turns 2 go out .....

peeche se ragi pulls ranvir's hand & tries 2 stop him

he turns again & sees ragi's face & puts his face down bcoz of guilty........in him

ragi says ranvir me janti ho aap mazak kar rahe tha

ranvir -tumhe kaise pata

ragi- woh toh me phone par hi samjhe gayi thi

had tears in ranvir's eyes

ranvir-phir bhi tum aise chali aaye

ragi- aap jo bula rahe tha aur jab aapka itna mann tha milne ka toh me kaise naa aati

ranvir- lekin ragini aise tum

she than tries 2 stand wants 2 go near ranvir as ranvir was standing & ragi was lieing on the bed holding ranvir's hand

as she stands on her feets but she can't stand ........

aur girne lagti hai

immediately ranvir cums near 2 her & she falls in his arms ..........

& staring session starts ......

after sumtime ragi tries 2 stand but she can't

phir ranvir help karta hai ragi ki

aur close jakar uski help karte hai bed par bethne ki........

phir as he was trying 2 help ragi

ragi goes more closer 2 ranvir & hugs him immediately...............

both start crying in the hug position

ragi says ranvir aaj toh yeh mazak kar liya hai plzzzzzz dobare se mat karne

ranvir -i'm very sorry ragini me aaj ke baad kabhie aise nahi karoge

pulls out from hug & ragi gave her hand infront of her 2 take the promise

ranvir immediately puts his hand on her's

ragini again hugs ranvir this time more tightly

now both r smiling

ranvir back in her naughty mood ............

aur phir aage kya hona hai pata hai naa

he goes closer 2 ragi & kiss her.................

my chotu sa ff

hope u like it who has not read it

Edited by loving_bird - 16 years ago

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scene 2

its very sad one

all rajvansh family,aalekh-sadhana all r there

there's sum problem cums in rajvansh house created avni ........

misunderstandings b/w sadi-ragi

ragi shouted on sadi ....bcoz of misunderstanding

still sadi doesn't said anything 2 ragi but vasu,ranvir everyone hear's it .........

but vasu gives all doosh 2 ragi u no she doesn't like her

vasu was getting angry on ragi everyone was standing ranvir was also quite & sadi was also quite no one was saying anything except vasu

she was saying tum aise sadi ke upar nahi chila sakti woh tumhari jeethani hai ........maafi mango

as all this drama was going on

kaushi & babuji cums at that moment

kaushi ko gussa aa jata hai ..........but she still stands quietly & babuji also

as vasu was shouting ragi face lifts at door ...........she stand stills just say bauji

everyone's eyes goes on the door 2 see them

all get more worried

sadi also gets worried in all this

kaushi takes step & cum close 2 ragi

she says ragini kya hua hai .......bata mujhe

ragi-nahi maa kuch nahi hua hai

bas choti se baat hai kuch nahi.........

kaushi - nahi yeh choti se baat nahi hai tu bata mujhe.........

itne sadi sadi says woh mamiji

bas itna bola

kaushi goes near 2 sadi & apne angaare barsne shuru kar diye

sadhana maine kaha tha na jab rishta badalte hai toh apne aap..... pyaar me farak aa jata hai..........tum hi chahti thi naa yeh rishta ho......

ranvir reactions were like he was so much hurt with this line......

kaushi- sadhana maine toh kaha tha jaha tum hogi waha ragini kabhie khush nahi reh sakti dekh rahi ho tum dono behno ka pyaar

yeh rishta karwa kar me hi janti ho maine kitna pathar rakhe hai apne dil par ......

ragi sees ranvir's reaction as he was so much hurt with these words & his head was down ........ragi can't see ranvir like this

she goes closer 2 kaushi says

maa bas kijiye ....aapne bahut keh liya sadi ko

aapko pata bhi hai kiski galti hai jo aap sadhana ko itna suna rahi hai

sadi lifts her face up & sees ragi's face

kaushi again starts with her own drama

she says beta me janti ho jo me keh rahi ho woh sab sahi hai....... dekh rahi ho me jo ho raha hai

isse baat ka darr tha mujhe bas is liye me nahi chahte thi jaha sadi hai waha tum jao.........everyone was shock 2 no that

ragi-maa ab bas karo

kaushi-kyu bas karo me ragi me nahi chahti thi phir bhi sadi ne ........

ragi now shouted maa maine kaha na bas karo ........aap sadi ke upar bina soche samjhe aise ilzam lagati ja rahi hai

aap janti hai aapki beti ka ghar bas jaye iske liya sadi ne kitne dikate sahi hai aur.......... kya aap janti hai usne toh apne saari khushiya daav par laga de apni zindagi ke sare sapne thod diya apne haatho se tako uski jiji ka ghar bas jaye..............

sadi was shock & so the everyone is

maa kya aap janti hai aalekhji se shaadi sadi ne kyu ki ........taki meri shaadi ranvir se ho jaye............

this line came as a shock 2 ranvir as he doesn't no the truth

phir ekdum se sadi says nahi jiji nahi aap kuch bhi nahi bolegi .........

ragi-nahi sadhana mujhe aaj bolne do....... mujhe bolne hai tumne meri khatir meri khushiyo ki khatir apni zindagi daav par laga di aur mujhe khabar bhi nahi lagne di........... pagali sadahana tu nahi janti mujhe jab se yeh pata laga hai me ek raat chain se nahi soi ho........

sadi- lekin aapko yeh sab kaise pata hai.....

ragi- tu usse baat ko chod......haa maa kya aap janti hai sadi ne aalekhji se shaadi kyu ki meri khatir ki shaadi usne taki meri shaadi ranvir se ho.....................

now she goes 2 bauji & says bauji sadi toh yeh shaadi kabhie karna hi nahi chahti thi.....woh to mummyji ne majbor kiya tha sadi ko........is shaadi ke liye........sadi ne toh saaf inkaar kar diya tha usne kaha ki jabtak uski jiji ke shaadi nahi ho jati tab tak woh shaadi nahi karegi lekin...........mummyji ke sharat ke kaarn usse yeh shaadi karni padi......sadi ne kaha tha mummyji ko ki agar meru shaadi ranvir se hogi toh woh yeh shaadi aalekhji se karegi ........

yeh sunkar sab shock ho jate hai even ranvir

woh toh kuch reaction hi nahi de raha tha .........he just got shocked listening all this.......he sees vasu's expressions vasu sees ranvir & lifts her face down

meanwhile,aalekh goes 2 sadi he was not in shock as he already knew this thing.........he consoles sadi

everything just keeps quite for sumtime

in this ranvir quitely goes in his room as he was so shocked..........

ragi sees this & gets more dukhi as ranvir got such a shock she doesn't want 2 give that but she gave it...............

now,she goes 2 kaushi

ragi says maa yeh humare ghar ki baat hai aur me nahi chahati mere maayke wala kuch bhi kaha isme.......

she just says this runs 2 her room

ranvir ke peeche peeche.........

ranvir was so shocked he was sitting on the bed done his head down

ragi goes 2 ranvir sits besides him & takes his face in hand lifts 2 her side

so both can luk each other

ranvir starts 2 cry ........

in that he goes close 2 ragi & puts his head on ragi's laps

starts crying ragi puts her hand on ranvir's hair & curse him

on other side in living room everyone was so shocked 2 no the truth

bauji-kaushi can't say single word

kaushi just stares sadi lekin in bebas types crising herself what she had said 2 sadi

bauji-kaushi left the place quietly ........just joining there hands 2 all & leave

other side, ranvir was just crying .........ragi doesn't say a word 2 ranvir

usse khud kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kaha

in meanwhile, sadi came in the room 2 meet ranvir

she was crying .........

sadi goes 2 ranvir she says ranvirji ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dijye lekin us samaye mujhe jo theek laga woh maine kiya tha.......

ranvir now stands up

he says nahi bhabhi me kisi ko koi doosh nahi de raha ho

lekin us shahart me me ek mohra bana mujhe is baat ka dukh hai.........

aap chahati thi me ragi se shaadi karo aur mom chahati thi aalekh bhaiya ki shaadi ho

woh iske liya kuch bhi karne ko tayyar thi

is liya unho ne mujhe hi daav par laga diya.........

bhabhi me bohot khush ho ragi meri patni bani meri jeevan saathi lekin aise kisi sharat par

yeh toh maine kabhie nahi socha tha.......

aur iske liya aapne apni zindagi daav par laga di

ragi was standing behing ranvir she was just crying.........

when ranvir says this ragi cums in front ........

haa sadhana tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha jab mujhe is baat ka pata chalega mujh pe kya betegi

me tumhari behen ho sadi aur tumne meri khushiyo ki khatir apni khushiya kurban kar di........

sadi kya me khush re paogi yeh jankar ki meri khushiya meri behen ke toote sapno par bani hai........

nahi sadi me kabhie khush rahi reh paogi

sadi-jiji aap aise mat kahiye aalekh ji bahut aacha insaan hai

me unse bahut pyaar karti ho aur me bahut khush ho unke saath....

ragi- mujhe pata hai sadi aalekhji bahut aache insaan hai tum bahut pyaar karti ho unse lekin phir bhi

sadi .........

sadi- nahi jiji me janti ho aap kya kehna chahati hai

lekin yakin manaye me aalekhji ke saath bahut khush ho

sadi now says 2 ranvir- bas ranvirji ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dijye.......kyoki woh me hi thi jo shuruvat se chahati thi ki jiji ki shaadi aapke saath ho

she was standing with both her hands joined

ranvir- nahi bhabhi apne toh muhje meri ragi se milvaya hai.....woh jo mujhe se mera baare me sochti hai

me ragi se bahut pyaar karta ho bhabhi is liye aap is baat se maafi mat maagiye

sadi cries very badly

ab peeche peeche ragvir ke room me aalekh bhi aa jata hai

he goes near 2 sadi & he says dost bas chup ho jao aur uske aaso poochta hai.....

this makes ragi smile

aalekh was doing very cutely

aalekh says -dost tum chalo yaha se apne kamre me

he puts both his hands on sadi's both shoulders turns her & takes her in there room...........

now ranvir turns & sees ragi crying goes near 2 her lifts her face up ........

aur uske aaso poochte hai

& he hugs her...........................

Edited by loving_bird - 16 years ago

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scene 3

this the part when there's rasam when new bride cums in the house & she has 2 make sumthing mitha for the 1st time when she goes 2 kitchen

on next day after ragvir's marriage sadi cums 2 call ragi in her room

where ranvir was getting ready & ragi was sitting on bed & watching ranvir for the 1st time how he gets ready

hayye shoooooo cute naa

uske pass aur kuch kaam hi nahi tha toh kya karti

ranvir no's this & smiling

now ranvir has gone near 2 mirror .......he starts starring ragi from mirror..........where ragi was already seeing ranvir he starts smiling.........ragi starts sharmooing

he turns & sees rag.......close close 2 her & puts both her hands on her shoulder

ranvir - kyu madam kya baat hai kaho toh tumhare pass beth jata ho........

ragi starts blushing

ranvir- waise ek baat bata do kal se tum mera kapada nikalogi aur tum hi select karke batana

ragi- hmmmmm in sharaming

ranvir now goes closer 2 ragi was just going 2 kiss her sadi cums

aur

sadi knocks the door

ranvir -ohhh no without seeing at the door he alrady knews its bhabhi

ranvir says 2 ragi zaroor yeh bhabhi hogi......kabab me haddi

sadi-haa deverji me kebab me haddi hi ho

mera matlab hai bhabhi hi ho

ranvir puts her hands down from ragi shoulders

ranvir- haa boliye bhabhi kya batane aaye hai

sadi- me batane nahi le jane aaye ho jiji ko

ranvir- kya aur ekdum se ragi ka haad pakad leta hai......& says par kyu

sadi cums close & takes ragi hand out from ranvir........says woh iss liya aaj jiji ki pehle rasoi hai toh unhe le jana hai cm ne bolaye hai.............

ranvir- ohhhh theek hai

sadi takes ragi with her & ranvir just sees her from behind

& ragi also see him

now in kitchen

ragi & sadi cums

cm is already in the kitchen

ragi cums & touches cm's feets

cm- ragini aaj tumhare is ghar me pehle din hai aur yeh rasam hoti hai ki ghar ki naye bahu aaj kuch mitha banati hai

tum kya banane chahti ho

ragi thinks & says cm kya me kheer bana lo

cm smiles & says mujhe pata tha tum yahi kahogi

ragi starts sharmaing

cm goes close 2 ragi takes her face in her hands & says ranvir ko kheer bahut pasand hai naa is liye..........

cm- shankar ragini ko kheer ka saman nikal dijye aur kuch chaihye ho ragini toh maag lena

now kheer is ready

all r sitting on dinning table except ranvir

now ranvir cums

he 1st sees ragi ....passes smile 2 her & than goes 2 sit on the chair

all had there breakfast now ragi serves kheer 2 everyone

its now ranvir's turn

ragi serves kheer 2 ranvir ..........

he eats really very slow bcoz he wants 2 eat the kheer with ragi.......

everyone do the tareef of kheer & gave there blessings with the shagun........that is given when new bahu makes sumthing gets up from the dinning table......

except sadi..........

ragi still waiting for ranvir 2 say sumthing 2 do the tareef

ranvir still eating slowly

ragi starts collecting the dishes

ranvir stops her ........& do ishaara 2 sit with her

as ragi sits ranvir takes the kheer spoon & feeds 2 ragi

as ragi takes the spoon she remember that day when ragi cums with the kheer 2 give 2 sadi ...........

& ranvir starts eating tthe kheer ........even feds her also taking another spoon

she luks at ranvir & a tear drop from her eyes which she quickly rubs it but ranvir seen that......but he says nothing.........

as ragi eaten that ranvir takes another kheer spoon grom same spoon & eats..............he now says ab yeh kheer zaida mithi ho gayi hai...........hmmmmmm yummy

ragi- smiles but was still in sad mood which sadi observed it..........

as he finished it ragi stands up goes 2 kitchen & starts crying

sadi cums from behind

sadi- jiji kya hua aap udaas kyu hai........sabne kheer ki tarif ki hai aur aap

ranvir cums from behind

ranvir says- mujhe pata hai ragini udaas kyu ho gayi

he goes closer 2 ragi

she was doing back & turns her head towards ranvir but not full body

ranvir turns her.........says mujhe pata hai bhabhi ragini udaas kyu hai

bhabhi isse woh din yaad aa gaya jab yeh pehle baar kheer lekar aayi thi ghar paar aur me ........ranvir goes more closer 2 ragi takes her face into his hands & starts starring straight forward in her eyes.........

ragi gets tears

sadi leaves the kitchen

ranvir- mujhe pata hai ragini tumhe usse din ke yaad aaye thi hai naa

ragi- hmmmm me soch rahi thi us din me aur aaj ke din me kitna antar hai

ranvir- haa bahut

tumne yahi socha tha naa ki uss din maine kaise ek aur spoon nikal kar aur aaj ...........aur us samay me woh.......

ragi- hmmmmmm takes her eyes down

ranvir hugs her & says par tum yeh nahi bhooli ki mujhe kheer bahut pasand hai............aur woh tumhare haad ki

ranvir gets out from hug & takes her both hands & kissthem

ragi starts sharmoing & starts smiling

ranvir in his style like his eyes moves eyebrows goes up...........

ragini quickly hugs ranvir............

& both starts smiling in the hug

but ranvir gets tears in her eyes as he remembers sonia...........

ragi cums 2 no as 1 drop rolls 2 her neck.........

gets out from hugs

ragi- ranvir kya hua ........quiets for seconds & says

ranvir beete bata yaad dila kar maine aapko dukhi kar diya naa i'm sorry ranvir

ragi rubs her tears with her hands.........

ranvir hugs ragini tightly

after sumtime

gets out from hugs takes her both hands in his hands..........

ranvir- nahi tumhe maafi mangane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai tum toh mera pyaar ho aur main sirf tumse aur tumhi se sacha pyaar karta ho aur jo pehle tha woh toh pata nahi ............lekin tumne mujhe pyaar ke sachi maayane sikhye hai.............

back 2 himself puts both his hands in ragi's shoulders locks from back

goes closer 2 her & more closer .........goes near 2 her ears & says

i love u❤️

slowly which makes ragi shy............

Edited by loving_bird - 16 years ago