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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: taniya_22

Thanks for commentin...I can't wait till the next part either...LOL....btw wht do u think of sophie's character?



HEy yeah no probz 😊 me cant either wait for the next parttt 😃 really looking forward to it wonder who alicia's gonna go wid 🤔 hehe well i like sophie's character par like she doesnt play as like a really significant part 😛 par still itz really nice neways hopefully u'll update it soon looking forward too itt😃
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Part 26-

It is morning in NY now…the sun is shinning brightly…the sun rays go through the window on Alicia's face…she takes her arm and tries to cover her eyes…when she realizes she can't do it anymore so she decides to get up…she sits up on the couch wid a throbbing pain in her hand…she looks around and sees the empty bottle of wine and realizes she got drunk last night…she puts her feet down and gets up…when she hears a scream she jumps back on the couch and sees Rishi lying down on his back on the floor…

Rishi: oww…

Alicia: I'm so sorry…I didn't see ya….

Rishi gets up and says: its cool…did we both get drunk last night?

Alicia: I think so…is your head hurting?

Rishi: yes…

Alicia: I think don't you drink lime juice when you get a hangover?

Rishi: yes…

Alicia goes and makes lime water for both of them…she gives one to Rishi and drinks the other herself...

Alicia: So are you going to Times Square to see the ball drop tonight?

Rishi: don't know…do you wanna go?

Alicia: yes…I hv always wanted to go there…

Rishi: I can talk to the others and maybe they might agree…

Alicia: gr8

Coffee House-

Alicia is sitting down reading a magazine while Rishi is flirting wid a girl at the counter…when Rahul and Sonya enter…Rahul goes to Rishi…while Sonya sits next to Alicia…

Sonya: hey…I feel really bad for yesterday…is there something I can go?

Alicia: I already forgave you but you could do something…

Sonya: what?

Alicia: I have always wanted to go to Times Square on New Year's Eve will you convince everyone else to go too?

Sonya: yeah…Rahul and I were thinking of going too…

Rahul and Rishi come back…Rahul has coffee for him and Sonya…Rishi has a piece of paper which he is staring at…

Alicia: why are you staring at that piece of paper?

Rishi: because it has something written on it…

Alicia: what is written it?

Rishi: something important…

Alicia whinning: lemme see it…

Rishi: no

Alicia: show it to me or I'll snatch it…

Rishi: I won't

Alicia gets up and looks at it and gets confused…

Alicia: why is there #'s written all over it?

Rishi: cuz that is the phone # of that girl on the counter…btw I scored a date wid her…

Alicia: good for you and sits back down…when suddenly Sonya screams and holds her left hand and says: Do you guys know why it feels so heavy?

Everyone: no

Sonya showing her ring and says: because of this heavy rock on my delicate finger and she laughs…everyone tries to give a fake laugh…

Sonya: how long till it will become annoying?

Everyone thinking it has already become so annoying…Just then a pretty excited Anjali enters holding shopping bags…Sonya looks at her and is shocked…

Anjali: listen you won't believe it…I found a job as a personal shopper at this store…so my work is to shop…isn't this so cool….

Everyone: yes…

Anjali: there is more…u know how u both got engaged (Pointing towards Rahul and Sonya)…so I decided to move out and I found this apartment right across this street from yours…and I just met this guy at the mall and we're going out for lunch… (She looks at her watch) he should be here now…

Alicia goes back to reading her magazine and everyone else is just chitchatting…when we hear a guy's voice say: there you are Anjali…I missed you…(Alicia is shocked to hear that voice she has heard it before…she looks up and sees Jason standing there)

Anjali: everyone this is Jason…Jason this is everyone…lets go I'm hungry… ( they both leave and Jason doesn't get a chance to look @ Alicia)

Sonya: I don't believe it…

Alicia: I don't either

Rahul confused: what don't you guys believe?

Sonya: you know that guy that Anjali is dating is Jason…he's Alicia's ex-boyfriend…

Rahul: really?

Sonya: yes

Rishi: isn't there like a code b/w u girls that u can't date your friend's ex?

Sonya: well…something like that…I think Anjali doesn't know but when she finds out she wouldn't date him…

Alicia: anyway he is a big cheat and loser…I'll tell everything to her…

Sonya: btw I think we should all go to Times Square tonight…

Alicia all excited: yes….

They all decide to go...

Sonya's apt.:

Anjali: I don't care if he cheated on you that doesn't mean he'll cheat on me…

Alicia: I was just telling you to help you out…you're my friend…it's my duty to tell you and help you...i don't want you to go through the pain I had too…

Anjali: I don't need your advice…I'm old enough to decide what is wrong or not?

Alicia fine…and goes to her apt.

NY Eve @ Times Square:

Like usual there are thousands of people standing out there waiting for the ball to drop…there are kids to old people just standing there waiting…it is snowing really lightly…Rahul and Sonya are holding each other's hand…while Sanjana and Jay are standing looking at each other's eyes…Anjali like usual is complaining abt something and by now even Jason is tired of listening to her…Alicia is standing next to Rishi and is acting like a silly little kid excited to see the ball drop…there are 10 seconds left…everyone starts to count the countdown…"10…9…8…7…6…5…4…3…2…1…"… "HAPPY NEW YEAR"…all the couples start kissing each other…Rishi looks at Alicia and Alicia looks up at him…He comes toward her and kisses her lightly on her lips…which she returns…now both of them are kissing each other…then they finally part away…they both think that was a good kiss…then it hits Alicia that she just kissed Rishi she thinks ewww…meanwhile Rishi thinks the same thing I just kissed Alicia ewww…they both say at the same time…that never happened….

Alicia: that was disgusting….

Rishi: I know

Alicia: I feel so grossed out…

Rishi: no I feel more grossed out…

Alicia: no I do

Rishi: I definitely do

Then they both continue fighting…while everyone else is wishing each other a Happy New Year….


Have fun reading it....Plz read and COMMENT....

Edited by taniya_22 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
it was a lovely part...plss cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54

Part 27-

Sonya's Place a little while later-

Sonya: So guys what is your New Year resolution?

Anjali: I dun know…but I bought this amazing scarf…it was only for $30…

Jay: why don't you try to have a budget?

Anjali: me on a budget never…I can never do that…

Jay: you should

Anjali: I'll try…

Alicia: hey Jay… do you have a pen?

Jay: yeah…it's somewhere in my pocket… (He digs in his jeans pockets…he gets all sort of stuff out…finally after a while)…sorry I don't

Rishi: I think Jay you should try to be more organized

Jay: I'm organized

Alicia: really…then how come whenever I call you…it takes you almost 5 minutes to answer…

Jay: fine…

Sonya: did u guys know that guy living above us…he's getting divorced again….

Rahul: really…it's for the third time…

Alicia: I think you should stop gossiping Sonya…

Sonya: I don't gossip

Rahul: come to think of it…you do

Sonya: I just pass of some information I find…it's like the news...

Alicia: it's ok…lots of people gossip…its normal…

Sonya: fine…I'll stop gossiping…

Rishi reaching for his second bottle of beer…before he could Alicia reached for it and stopped him from taking it…

Rishi: come on lemme take it…it's only my second

Alicia: no…you are turning into an alcoholic

Rishi: only one more

Everyone: no

Alicia: your resolution should be to drink less alcohol or just quit drinking…

Rishi: I can't do that…

Alicia: you should try at least before you turn into an alcoholic…

Rishi: i will but then you should try not getting fired…

Alicia: fine…

Sonya: I think all of us have a resolution…

Rahul: I don't…

Sonya: what do you want yours to be?

Rahul: well I have never volunteered before…so I'm thinking of volunteering….

Jay: that is nice

Anjali: I have a gr8 idea…why don't we all try to keep our resolution for at least a week and whoever breaks it first will have to pay $50 to us …meaning $10 to each one of us...

Alicia: that's a nice idea…

Rishi: i like it…

Rahul: cool…I'm in…

Sonya: me too

Jay: me three…

Anjali: so it's starts from tomorrow…

Alicia: I can't wait…

Alicia & Rishi's Place:

Alicia was going in her room when Rishi grabs her hand…she turns around…

Alicia: what are you doing?

Rishi: holding your hand

Alicia: well…leave it…

Rishi leaves it…

Rishi: I need to talk to you abt what happened earlier

Alicia: what happened?

Rishi: well…I just want you to know whatever happened…should remain b/w the two of us

Alicia: what did you think…I'll scream it all around NY…

Rishi: well…you got a chance to kiss me…duh…you would wanna everyone to know

Alicia: gr8 joke…I am not crazy that I would wanna embarrass myself…

Rishi: what do you mean?

Alicia sarcastically: you are too smart to get it…

Rishi: huh

Alicia: go to sleep…I'm going to…there is no point in putting so much pressure on your brain…

To know how there resolutions turn out...Read the next part...

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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
Hey,,

I loved this part alot!!1 You have so great Ideasss!!!!!!!!!!!! I am really looking forward for next part. I am really into this story and thanks god its not a ghissa pittaaa Saas- bahu Drama...LOL......😆😆

Plzz Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...


Keeep up the Good work!!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
Heyyyy Taniyaaa both ur last two parts were awesomee 👏 par hehe Anjali and Jason togather was a totally suprise 😲 wonder if itz gonna last or whtz gonna happen doesnt seem Alicia is tooo concerned abt ittt 😛 and all of their New Years resolutions went soo totally perfectly wid emm which iss pretty awesomee wonder who will be able to keep their resolutions the longest 🤔 guesss will hv too waitt tilll ur next parttt 😃 n hopefully u'll updatee itt sooonnn 😉 aweesommmeee worrrrkkk sooo farr 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 28-

It was the last day of the resolution…so far everyone had kept their resolution…

Salon-

This is where Alicia was working lately…she had been just cleaning the plane or be at the cashier…today her boss had told her to mix the dye stuff and die this lady's hair…

Alicia was very excited and accidentally she put the blue dye instead of the brown one…she started mixing it…it looked weird but she just ignored it…she started applying it on the ladies hair…after a while she was watching this movie so she got caught up in it…when she realized she has to wash her hair…she washed it and it turned out blue...in that shock the gum she was chewing came out of her mouth and got on the woman hair…

W: how does my hair look?

Alicia: umm…

W: lemme see it?

Alicia was trying to stop her but she looked at it and the women screamed so loudly that everyone in the store stopped doing what they were doing and turned their attention to them…Alicia was trying not to laugh at how the woman looked but anyway she got fired…

While Anjali was at the mall…she only had $20 from her budget left she knew if she spend it then she would have to pay all of them…she was walking when she saw this sale going on at Forever 21…she went in and saw this cute top…she bought it and couldn't help herself so she bought other things…and left the place….

Sonya was standing outside and saw Anjali with all the bags she knew she probably failed to fulfill the resolution…she was walking when she ran into her friend Jane…she started talking….

Sonya: did you hear abt Kelly?

Jane: no

Sonya: I heard that she is dating a guy…

Jane: isn't she married

Sonya: yeah…

Jane: listen I have to go

Sonya: bye

Anjali was standing a few feet from her and had heard everything…

Rahul was heading to the soup place to serve again tonight…he was really tired…he didn't want to go…so he decided to skip it…


Meanwhile Rishi was at a bar trying not to drink then he finally gave up and started to drink and kept on drinking till he was happy…

Jay's Place:

It was neatly organized…he had done that because of the resolution but he didn't like it…he was tired of having everything in order…in all the frustration he messed everything up and sat on his couch relaxed looking at the mess…

Next Day @ Sonya's Place-

Everyone was their and sitting on the couch…

Sonya: so did everyone keep their resolution?

Everyone: yes

Sonya: Good

Sonya again: are you sure there was no one who messed up?

Everyone: yes

Sonya: fine

Alicia: I can't take it anymore…I got fired yesterday…

Sonya: ok…

Alicia: I'll pay you guys

Just then Rishi interrupts: I drank yesterday too…so I'll pay too…

Rahul: I have something to say I skipped the volunteer thing yesterday I should have to pay…

Jay: I was frustrated so I messed up my place so it would be organized…

Anjali: I have to confess that I went over budget…

Rahul: does that mean we all goofed up except Sonya?

Sonya: yeah….

Anjali: no…she did too…I listened to her gossiping to Jane yesterday abt Kelly and how she's married and is dating this other guy…

Rahul: Kelly is dating another guy…

Anjali: that is not the point…

Sonya: fine I gossiped yesterday but that was just really juicy news I had to tell someone…

Alicia: does that mean no one has to pay to anyone…

Rishi: I guess so

Jay: I think resolutions are just things you say you do but you never do that…

Anjali: I agree with you…

Alicia: don't know abt others but it's true for all of us

Hope you liked it...Plz read and COMMENT...😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
Hey taniya thanx for updatin it 😆 it was a nice part hehe cant believe everyone didnt keep there new year's resolution 😛 hehe par i think its sorta true itz like we all say it par usually it never ends up really happenin 😳 cant wait u to continue more 😉 hope ya do it soon whenever ur not buzy n nice job itz going awesome so far 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 29

Alicia is sitting on the couch with Rishi watching TV
Alicia: I can't believe the way they promote this day...I mean to say everywhere you go there is something abt it these days...it is so annoying...
Rishi: what are you talking abt girl?
Alicia: Valentines Day dumbo...
Rishi: I thought you loved Valentine Day...
Alicia: I did but
Rishi: but what?
Alicia: I don't have a date...
Rishi: aww...too bad...I would go wid you but I'm already booked...
Alicia: whatever...anyways what is for dinner?
Rishi: dun knw and dun care cuz I got a date wid Mona...
Alicia wid a puzzled look: Mona...I thought you were dating Linda...
Rishi: I'm still dating her
Alicia: so you are dating two girls at the same time...you two timer
Rishi: actually I'm a three timer cuz I'm dating Kate too...
Alicia now standing up wid anger: I don't believe you...this is so mean...you know one day you're gonna get caught and you will have no one...
Rishi: I'll still have you...
Alicia: shut up
Just then there is a knocking on the door...
Rishi: will you get it...it's probably Mona and I dun want her to see me in my pajamas
Alicia: fine but remember what you're doing is not right
Rishi goes to his room to change while Alicia opens the door...
Alicia: Hey Mona
Mona: hi...where is Rishi?
Alicia: he's gonna be here soon...why don't you sit down...
Mona: sure
She sits on the couch
Mona: will you get me a glass of water
Alicia: sure
She goes in the Kitchen and gets the water in a glass...She brings it to Mona...
Mona: can you give me mineral water
Alicia: sure
She gets another glass and fills it wid water...
Alicia brings her water again...
Mona: cud u put two ice cubes in there too
Alicia: why not?
Mona: thanks
Alicia is pist off and thinking what a spoiled girl...hate her...how can Rishi handle her...She puts in two ice cubes in it...
By this time Rishi comes out too...
Rishi: hey baby
Mona gets up and gives him a hug
Mona: hey...do you know how much I missed you
Rishi: not more than me...
Mona: lets go
Rishi: we're leaving Alicia...
Alicia: but your water Mona
Mona: I'm not even that thirsty
They leave...
Alicia thinking I don't like her...

After a while-

Rahul enters A & R's place...
Rahul: Alicia where are you?
Alicia: in my room...I'm comin
Rahul: I need your help
Alicia: not again
Rahul: last time I'm asking you something
Alicia: ok...what is it this time?
Rahul: I need a gift for Sonya for Valentines...it's tomorrow...I don't have anything...
Alicia: why don't you give her some jewelry...
Rahul: no this time we said we're gonna make something
Alicia: now your in trouble...
Rahul: your telling me...
Alicia: lemme think...
She starts thinking in a while she screams " I got it" and smiles...

Night Time-
Alicia is watching TV when Rishi enters looking tired...
Alicia: how was your date?
He slumps down on th couch...
Rishi: very tiring for my ears
Alicia: why?
Rishi: She talks too much...
Alicia laughing...
Rishi: I'm sleeping so plz put the volume on low...
Alicia: so early it's just 10pm
Rishi: well I have a lot to do tomorrow...
Alicia: really?
Rishi: I have 3 dates tomorrow...one for breakfast one for lunch and one for dinner...
Alicia shocked wid her mouth open
Rishi: there is nothing to be shocked abt...I already told you I'm dating three beautiful and young women...
Alicia: whatever loser but I'm telling you I have a bad feeling abt all this...

Next Day-
It is Valentines Day...the perfect day to tell your loved ones how much you love them...the day to express your love for your love...the day to finally know who has been your admirer but all this is good for people who have someone special...

Alicia is sitting on the couch like a grouch...
Alicia: what a stupid romantic comedy...isn't there anything better for people to do than fall in love...
Just then there is a knock on the door...
Alicia not wanting to get up bu the knocking doesn't stop...She gets up and opens it and sees Linda standing there...
Linda: hey girl
Alicia: hey
Linda enters inside and sit down
Linda: how have you been?
Alicia: fine...you?
Linda: I have been great...is Rishi at home?
Alicia: he's probably in his room...I'll get him...
Linda: ok
Alicia enters Rishi's room and finds his sleeping...
Alicia: wake up rishi
Rishi: lemme sleep
Alicia: get up...someone's here too meet you...
Rishi: I don't care...I wanna sleep
Alicia: fine...I'll tell Linda you're sleepin
Rishi: Linda what is she doing here?
Alicia: I dun know
Rishi: she's not supposed to be here...we have a dinner date...not a breakfast...Kate must be here any minute...
Just then Linda enters his room and there is another knock on the door...
Linda: hey
Rishi: how cum you're here?
Linda: well I had an important meeting tonight unexpectedly so I decided to meet you right now...
Rishi: that is absolutely wonderful
Alicia goes to open it and sees Kate standing there...
Alicia almost in a screaming voice: Kate you here?
Rishi hears it and gets the point...Rishi tells Linda to stay in his room and not leave and that he'll be back soon...
He goes to meet Kate...
Rishi: Kate...hello darling...
Kate: hey
Rishi: Happy Valentines Day
Kate: you too...
Then there is a knock on the door...Rishi looks through out the eye hole seeing Mona standing there...Rishi thinking s*** man what am I gonna do now
Rishi whispers to Alicia to take Kate to her room...
Alicia: Kate will you come wid me for a sec plz
Kate: sure
She goes wid her
Rishi opens the door and puts on a fake smile...
Rishi: Hey
Mona: Hey
Rishi: what are you dong here so early? Didn't we have a lunch date...
Mona enters
Mona: well...I was thinking Valentines comes only once a year so I wanna spend my whole day wid you...
Rishi: how sweet of you
Mona hugs him...just them both Kate and Linda come out yelling "Rishi"
They see him wid Rishi...
Linda: rishi who are they?
Rishi:----
Kate: yeah tell me who are they?
Rishi:----
Mona: are you telling us or not?
Rishi: well...I have been three timing you guys
Linda: I don't believe you...
Kate: you liar
Mona: you're such a jerk
They all get the cushions off the couch and start hitting him...there was a lot of yelling and hitting going on...
Alicia bring all of them including herself a glass of water to calm them down...
When Linda takes her glass and throws it at Rishi's face...
Linda: that is for lying to me..then she leaves.
Kate does that too...
Kate: this was for being such a loser...
Mona throws it at his face too...
Mona: for cheating me...
They all leave in anger...
Alicia takes her glass and throws it at him...
Alicia: that is b/c everyone else was doing that...
Rishi: I'm gonna get you for that...
He starts to run toward her but screams in pain instead...

S & R's place:
Sonya is sleeping on the bed when Rahul enters wid breakfast on a tray...he puts it on the side table and gently wakes Sonya up...
Sonya: what happened?
Rahul: good morning honey...
Sonya: good morning too you to...what time is it?
Rahul: it's almost 11
Sonya: what I overslept...I'm late for work
She was abt to get up when Rahul stops her...
Rahul: sit...I called your work and told them you're not going today
Sonya: what?
Rahul: and I also called mine...I have decided we both will spend the whole day together...just you and me...I'll cook for you...
Sonya: that is so sweet
She gives her the breakfast...
Rahul: Happy Valentines Day Honey...
Sonya: you too.
She gives him a quick kiss on his cheek...

A & R's place:

Rishi is lying down on the couch while Alicia is putting an ice pack on his bruises...
Alicia: so what are you not gonna do?
Rishi: I won't date more than one girl at the same time ever again...
Alicia: that is like a good boy
Alicia: I'll get you something to eat...
Rishi: thanks
He starts watching TV...while Alicia is in the kitchen...she hears a knock on the door...
She opens it and is shocked to see Sameer standing there...
Alicia: what are you doing here?
Sameer: can I come in
Alicia sees Rishi sleeping
Alicia: lets go outside
They both are walking on the streets...
Alicia: so how come you're here?
Sameer: well I wanted to tell you something...
Alicia: what?
Sameer: there was nothing b/w me and Sophie
Alicia: so why are you telling me
Sameer stops walking and so does Alicia
Sameer: I dun knw if you do or not but I love you I have loved you since the first time I saw you...I love everything abt you...There is nothing in my life widout you...
Alicia is left speechless...
Sameer: cum on say something I just expressed my love for you
Alicia: I dun knw what to say except that I love you too...
Then they both hug...


I hope you all like it...I think it is a really long part...Plz read and COMMENT...😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
awwww...that was so sweet! Sameer and Alicia are finally together...

and it was really funny when Alicia threw the glass of water in Rishi's face just because the other 3 did...lol

great part! keep it up...

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