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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nimmo is dancing way but as its Kunaks challenge and she wants to prove a point to him she keeps dancing, tears welling up in her eyes..guests are talking to themselves and are smirking. .

Rishabh - bhaiya , aap ko nahin lagta ki maazak kuch zyada ho gaya hai...

Kunal - haan rishabh. shyad maine apnee saaree haadein paar kar lee hain.

Rishabh - bhaiya woh dekhiye. mujhe lagta hai ki aapko dance floor ke beech main jaana chahiye.

Kunal is thinking... and sees nimmo dancing and as the songs keep changing, he more and more begins to feel bad. Suddenly he sees a rather drunk guy going on the dance floor and begin dancing with nimmo and trying to feel her up.

Nimmo is feeling rather unconfortable. and tries to move away from there. just then another drunk guy comes and starts showering money on nimmo.

Kunal is furious and takes off his stroll and takes kB shawl along with him..

He goes in the middle and nimmo comes and goes and falls against his chest. Kunal looks at nimmo in her eyes and then slowly wraps the stole and shawl around her. He wipes her tears and then gestures at rishabh who switches off the mains of the light.

Kunal takes nimmo upstairs along with naina. he cant look at her in his eyes and just leads them there while he handles the paparaazzi. After all he doesnt want nimmo becoming the joke of town...

In the guest room (which has become kunals bedroom now for the night, KK, rishabh and Kunal are talking where kunal is banging his hand on the wall. Maine is mazaak ko kuch zyada keench liya hai. i can never forgive my self. Nimmo ka itna bada maazaak woh bhi sabke saamne... How could i ever think of it... nimmo woh nimmo jisse main pyar karta tha uske saath maine....yeh sab ..cheeee goes on banging his hand till the point it does not stop bleeding..

KB has heard all this and comes in and says Kunal, beta, main samjhte thi ki tum nimmo se pyar karte the. wah wah..woh kunal jo nimmo ke aankhon main aansoon nahin dekh sakta hai, aa usse kunal ne nimmo ko rula diya... kunal mujhe nahin pata ki mujhe aaj bhi tumhe daantne na haq hai bhi ya nahin, but please nimmo se door se raho. she folds her hand in front of him and says yeh meri request hai. please. thank you.. she walks out and takes nimmo out.

Kunal is dumbfounded and says KB please....

Rishabh - bhai bhai..

KK - Sir mujhe lagta hai, aapko nimmo se maapfi maangnee chahiye. Waise bhi log unhe characterless kehte hai. Aaj ke is ghatne ke baad na jaane nimmo madam par kya bettegee...itna ego sir accha nahin hai.

Kunal - kis muh se main uske paas jaayonga..no i cant face her...gin aati hai mujhe apne aap par... Samar happens to hear all this from the distance...and a smile comes on his face.. Kunal ko gin aana..nimmo ka humiliate hona..wow..isse zyada maaze ki baat kya hona chahiye... mujhe dada ji batana chashiye..dadaji ko pata chalega, to kunal ko ek aur thappar aur meri maan ko dhandhak..mujhe dadaji ko batana hoga... saying this he keeps muttering these words...

suddenly he heas a voice - dadaji ko kya batana hoga...its natasha looking at him with a questionning look...

Samar realises it was all his imagination.. He looks around and asks natasha where is nimmo...

Natasha - upar gayee hai dress change karne - naina aur swati ke saath... You know samar I dont understand these mathurias girls at all.

Samar - aur Kunal - woh kahan hai...

Natasha - hoga idhar hi kahin- uyeh lo woh raha - nimmo ke parents ke per choo raha hai..what an idealistic son..

Samar - Lucky you....

Upstairs:

Swati - wow naina, I could never imagine you with sindoor and stuff...

Naina - haina and you know these bangles..they are platinum....and Abhay gt them for diwali...

Swati and Nimmo exchange looks as if they dont like it..

Nimmo - Swatio main kya pehnoo...

Naina - yeh yellow wala suit. ma kush ho jayeengee. layee to thi woh mere liye par main to pehen nahin sktee...tum hi pehen lo...

Swati glares at naina and naina conveniently ignores that glare ..

Nimmo is ready and goes down..her hair is braided in a french plait and with a pirandi and she is wearing small jhumkas. a silver bindi is on her forehead and she is weating foour of her gold bangles.... In short she is looking like a punjabi mundi.

As Nimmo is coming down every is gaping at her as she is looking every inch of a punjabi girl with everyone gusshing at awing and oooohing looking at her...

Natasha who has not been talking to Kunal all tis while gets jealous and goes and stands right next to Kunal, putting her hand with kunal in his arms...

Kunal is looking at nimmo and remembering their first diwali and nimmo who is walking down the stairs and happens to look at kunal is remembering her first diwali....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nimmo is walking diwn the stairs, her eyes meeting Kunal and Kunals eyes meeting Nimmo.

Nats sees it and is She comes closer to kunal and puts her arm around kunal flashing her white teeth...

Nimmo sees it and is hurt. Swati is lost in her own thoughts. She looks around as she is coming down and thinks she sees ashutosh. Seeing Ashutosh depresses her further.

Naina is standing next to Nimmo and is not liking the fact one bit that its nimmo who is the cynosure of all eyes.

Kunal and Nimmo both have a flashback to last year:

Nimmos flashback:

Kunal was hurdled inside as nimmo was happily bursting the anars and chakras and bomb.

Nimmo comes inside and says kunal - aisee ek baby ki tarah, chaddar aur kar, haath kaano main, kyun baitho ho.

Kunal - mujhe [patako se dar lag raha hai

Nimmo - Patanko se dar. kyun. Oscar to nahin darta.

Kunal - tumne mujhe baccha bola, oscar se compare kiya.

Nimmo - haan kiya... to...

Kunal - you... throws a pillow..

Nimmo - Kunal... nimmo goes towards kunal and sits with him on the bed. kya baat hai.

Kunal - with tears in his eyes. Kuch nahin. par yeh patake ki awwaz mujhe us raat ki yaad dilvtein hain.

Nimmo - Kis raat ki.

Just then there is a sound of a pataka and Kunal ois so scared that he hugs nimmo and covers his head in her lap. tum muj chod kar to nahin jayogee... jaise papa gaye the... aisee hi raat thi... khub sare patake baj rahe the. Diwali Khatam huee aur pata chala papa hi khatam ho gaye... khatam...

Nimmo is scared. She hadnt seen Kunal like that ever. Such fear in his eyes. She gentles rubs her hand over his hair and says nahin chod kar jayoongee. Promise aur diwali tumhare saath hi bitayoongee. yeh bhi promise.

Kunals flashback:

Kunal and Nimmo both are playing cards with the rest of the family. The stakes are 50, 100 and go up to 7,000 show.

at the end, its just kunal and nimmo facing each other..

Ritika - yeh kya, no body will win here, no body will loose here. Paise to vaise bhi 50 - 50 ho jayenge.

Nitika - haan and that saying also does not count here, lucky in love, unlucky in cards....

Dada - ek rasta ho sakta hai, if they both go 50-50..par dekhte hain, if they do...

Dadi - mera pota hai, itnee asaani se nahin haar manega

kunal - nimmo, 9,0000 and show.

nimmo - soch lo kunal, haar jayoge

kunal - I have not learnt how to loose and vaisebhi meri luch to mere samne hai...I mean saath hai.

nimmo - accha luck to mera bhi accha hai... looking up to god, ab aap kuch mat gadbad kar lena... i have been playing on blind all this while

kunal - ready , show

Nimmo - sees her cards and smiles this is my lowest kunal - an A

Kunal - aree mera to J hai

Nimmo - areee another A

Kunal - Mera to Q hai

Nimmo - Kunal tum chalo....

Kunal - show main bola hai

nimmo - please kunal..

Kunal - accha yeh lo K

Nimmo - kunal, do you want to share the money?>

kunal - no ways , mera hai kya...

nimmo - are you sure.

Kunal - most definately

nimmo - ok kunal here you go - another A

Everyone is surprised

dada - now as a booty, kunal has to kiss nimmo

both kunal and nimmo are shocked... kya

dada - haan - chalo, kiss karo....

kunal - makes a cute face .. kisss... he kisses her on the forehead...

dada - punjab ka putaar hai....theek se kiss kar nahin ti ek thappa doonga..

kunal immediately kisses her on the lips!

nimmo comes down the starirs and she looks at kunal , wishes both of them kunal and nats a happ diwali and goes away... to meet the rest..

Dadi - aa gayee beti - itnee der laga di. Kahan thi.

Nimmo 0 Kuch nahin dadi,. kuch log the jinhe mera aana accha nahin tha. par aap sab ka pyar dekh kar main rok nahin payee.

Kunal to nats - zara bahar garden main chalogee. mujhe tumse baat karnee hai..Nats - haan kunal ek minute.

kunal - ek minute nahin abhi.. he takes nats hand and drags her out.

Dada - wah kya pyar hai in dono main.

nimmo eyes becomes moist something which is noticed by dadi.

Just when kunal and nats are going out, samar comes and says bhai, yeh kya hai, chalo dance karte hain. cmon bhai aaj to diwali ki raat hai.come lets dance. Samar winks at nats and nats heaves a sigh of relief.

There Naina is all upset as her plans have failed.

Swati sees Aniket and hides herself. She doesnot want Aniket seeing her. She sees Ashutosh and Ashutosh sees her and both Ashutosh and Swati get uncomfortable seeing each other.

Kunal is all burning with rage and makes a promise in his mind that Nimmo will get her khoyee huee izzat back, that she lost in this house. He goes looking around for KK and Rishabh.
Soon there is a game to be played on how well do the couples know each other. Now since Nimmo does not have a partner, she is standing on the side.

The couples are Nats and Kunal, Dada and Dadi, Raj & Varsha, Ashutosh & wife, etc.

The games are played, Dada and dadi score a perfect 10, Raj & Varasha too, Pam and Aniket have a score of 6/10, now is the turn of kunal and Nats.

Samar to Nats :

so Natasa here is your set of 5 ques:

a) What is kunals favourite colour: Natasha - Blue. Samar looking at Nimmo, Nimmo tum to kunal ki ex wife rahee ho, tum batao, kunal ka favourite colour kya hai.

Nimmo - main - woh.. after much pesteration she gives in and says black.

Samar - ok this is interesting. diff answers

Samar to Kunal, Kunal tumhare favourite colour - Kunal answers black. every one claps.

Kunal thinking in his mine - nimmo aaj tak mera fav colour nahin bholee..
Nimmo - thinking 0 how can i forget kunal. tumharee har ek pasand mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai.

Nats - black, since when was kunal favourite colour black. Canada main to woh hamesha blue pehnta tha.

Samar turns to Kunal and says, Natasha ko sabse zyada kya pasand hai - pasta ya pizza

Kunal - pasta

b) Second Question: What types of egg does Kunal like?

Nats - kunal does not like eating eggs

Nimmo - cheese omlette.

Kunal remembers the time he had made a burnt cheese omlette and then nimmo helped him fix it to scrambled eggs.

Samar to Kunal - Natasha is duniya main sabse zyada kisse pyar kartee hain

kunal - apne dad se

samar - aur nimmo -

Kunal - apne parivar se

c) Third Question: Kunal ka sabse accha dost kaun hai?

Nats - Vik
Nimmo - thinking in her mind - ek zamane main to main thi par ab...

finally nimmo says Oscar

Samar to Kunal - Natasha is puree duniye main sabse zyada kisko respect kartee hai?

Kunal - dada aur dadi ko.

Samar - Aur nimmo - is puree parivar ko.

d) Fourth Question: Kunal apne man main sabse zyada kisko miss karte hain

Nats - thinks in her mind - nimmo ko but then later says his carefree days
nimmo - apne dad ko

Samar to Kunal - khule baal ya band bal, natasha ko kya pasand hai

kunal - curly hair

e) Bachpan main kunal ka favourite gana kaun sa tha

Nats - stairways to heaven
Nimmo - stairways to heaven

Samar to Kunal - Natasha ka favourite restaraunt - Kunal - China Garden

f) Samar to Natasha - Pehli baar tum kunal se kahan mile the

Natasha - college ke canteen main

Samar - Kunal, kya yeh sach hain.

Kunal - haan.

Samar - ok kunal, Pehli baar tum nimmo se kahan mile the

kunal - Sidhi Vinayak mandir

Samar - Nimmo kya yeh sach hai.

nimmo - haan.

both kunal and nimmo remember their first meeting when she falls down the stairs.


Samar - hmn interesting: scores Later...


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Natasha is getting extremely uncomftratable and her insecurity is getting the better of her when she sees nimmo around her. She wishes that she could nimmo to get out and never set foot in the sehgal house again.

Natasha is thinking to her self - why am I feeling so jealous. I love kunal anmd Kunal loves me. I should trust him. Then she sees kunal and nimmo talking to each other and she wonders par kyun mujhe is ghar ki har cheez nimmo ki yaad dilati hai. kyun jab bhi kunal ke aankhon main dekhtee hoon, mujhe woh pyar, woh chamak ab nahin dikhate. kyun aaj bhi is ghar ke har ek log nimmo ko itnee ahmiyat dete hain. kyun kyun kyun... she is about to break a glass a glass in her hand when shradha comes in and says kya hua beta. tum itna ro kyun rahee ho.

nats wipes her tears and says kuch nahin mummy ji par aapko nahin lagta ki nimmo aaj bhi kunal se pyar karte hai. shayad pehle bhi kartee thi.
shradha - nahin beta. yeh tumhara veham hai. kunal aur nimmo sirf acche dost hain aur kuch nahin.
nats - par mummyji aisa kyun lagta hai ki kunal ka dil ab nimmo ke liye dhadkta hai, shayad pehle bhi dhadkta tha...
shradha - beta, you have to be more understanding towards kunal. tum yeh kyun bhool rahee ho ki nimmo ne kunal ka saath tab diya, jab kunal ko kisse ki sabse zyada zaroorat thi. jab sabne iuska hasola thodna chaha, tab nimmo ne usse hosla diya.
nimmo - lekin mummy ji...
shradha - haan beta ek aur baat. shyad tum isliye bhi insecure feel kar rahee ho kyunki tum dartee ho.
nats - dartee hoon - kisliye..
shradha - yiu are the best person to answer this question ..
after sharadha leaves, nats is left thinking, kya ,main isliye dar rahee kyun ab jagah bad gayee hai aur jis jagah main ab nimmo hai, wahan kabhi main hua kartee thi. kya main is liye dar rahee hoon ki kunal ne nimmo ko chod kar mujhse shaadi kar lee aur ab woh mujhe bhi chod sakta hai ya main isliye dar rahee hoon ki mujhse kyun aisa lgta hai ki kunal ne mujhse kabhi pyar nahin kiya aur hamesha se nimmo se hi pyar kiya hai...

Nats turns around and sees dada ...she wipes her tears and goes from them. Dada is left thinking and says, ok , i need to do something. He goes from there and calls his travel agent and says two tickets to dubai please in the name of kunal and natasha please.

There nimmo gets a call frm her company saying she has to go to dubai to cover an event plus there is a conference.
Mean while, Nimmo puts down her call and is turning to leave when Samar stops her.

Kunal sees Samar and Nimmo together and he does not quite like the idea of Samar being with Nimmo. Deep down, the conversation is still weighing in his mind, the conversation that he heard that samar and nats were in the plan together to kill nimmo. he tried to deny the feeling that people close to him could actually do such a thing but then he just couldnt get out of his system.

Kunal excuses himself and goes to the swing in the garden. That was his place where he had spent many lonely nights when nimmo was not there in his life. He looks up the stars and smiles and thinks to himself - aaj nimmo mere itne paas bhi nahin hokar mujhse kitnee door hai aur ek zamana tha ki jab woh mre pas thi aur uskee kadar hi nahin thi mujhe. Kisse dauraahaye pe aa gayee hai zindagi. Mada karna chahta hoon, bachana chahta hoon, kaise bachayoon. ek taraf hai nimmo, aur doosree taraf hai mera parivar. Kiska saath doon.

There Shradha is talking to dada and saying dadaji, aapne kya phaisla kiya. main kunal ko ek aur baar toote hue nahin dekh saktee. bau ji main dartee hoon. pehle to nimmo thi usse sambhalne ke liye. Aaj shayad koi bhi na ho.

Mean while, in the party, some friends of Keshavs have started misbehaving with a girl. With the media being present, this has been captured live on tv. Nimmo who has seen this goes to protect the girl and slaps one of the guys. The guy does not like it and starts throwing some booze on nimmo and humilating her. Kunal enters just then and is furious seeing the guy like that. Kunal is anyways drunk and starts fighting with the guy, both nats and nimmo make attempts to separate the guy where nats in fits of anger tells nimmo to leave as she has already caused alot of havoc in their lives. Nimmo tells Kunal to stop it just as Kunal is raising one hand to hit the guy. Kunal stop mid air and drops his hand. The guy wants to know what relationship does kunal have with nimmo and kunal in his drunken state shouts and screams..I STILL LOVE HER. I ALWAYS WILL. Nats is shocked and Nimmo is disgusted so she leaves from there. Nimmo is disgusted and is on her way out when samar calls out to her. There is still one game left and samar insists so much that nimmo has to give in reluctantly.

The next game to be played is between couples. Its is a panja round. Dada and dadi are called in and dada lets dadi wins by holding the hand very lightly. Soon it is the time for kunal and nats... they are seated and all eyes are on them. Nimmo is looking on at Kunal, lost in her on thought, a smile comes on her lips as she sees kunal and kunal looks at her. His thoughts go back to the time when he is married to nimmo and KB had laid a bet that it will be nimmo who will win. Kuna and nimmo are seated and nimmo winks at kunal. Kunal is shocked and nimmo wins.

Kunal continues gazing at nimmo eyes and he thinks he sees sadness. nimmos expression were saying something but her eyes were her away. Kunal lets go of the hand which surprises nats and is about to get up when he sees nimmo has disaapeared. the time is up and no one is declared the winer between kunal and nats.

The winners are to be announced and for the guessing game it is announced that kunal and nimmo are the winners.

Nimmo smiles and puts nats hand on kunal and says you both go and take the prize. Nats looks at nimmo and says aaj shayad main jaan gayee hoon ki tum itnee acchii kyun hai. Nimmo - forget about that natasha. go pick your prize. nats - but jeeete to tum ho.
/Nimmo - pyar main koi haar jeet nahin hota hai natasha. kunal tumhara hai, tumhara hi rahega
Nats - Pata hai nimmo, main kunal ki patni to ban gayee par uske dost kabhi na ban sakee
nimmo - dost bhi ban jayogee...dont worry..main hoon na
nats - thanks nimmo.

Kunal and nats go together and nimmo leaves from there with tears in her eyes.

Nats is syill upset and upstairs in their room, a big fight ensues.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Meanwhile downstairs, Nimmo is about to leave with Swati and her parens when Swati faints. Everyone is shocked.

Nimmo - Swati, Swati..kya hua Swati...paani..

Rishabh - where are the servants - koi paani to layo.

Nimmo goes and takes water from the jug and sprinkles it on Swati but no response.

Samar calls up the doctor and the doctor comes home and she does a complete check up and tells anand an aapko iska puree tarah se dhyan rakhna hoga. Mubarak ho, aap nana banne wale hain. The whole family is shocked.

Pam is saying baccha...bin bahee maaa...

There dada has said that swati is ghar ki ladki bhi hain aur yeh baat is ghar se bahar nahin jaanee chahihe... Just then pam gets a call, ad she starts gossipping to her friend and tellds her about this new found development in the house.

Kunal who has just walked out of the room in a huff is shocked. He thinks to himself - Swati and Pregnant? Kaise.

Kunal walks down and tries to talk to Swati and Nimmo but nimmo wouldnt hear anything he has to say. She is so disgusted that she does not want to hear anything that Kunal has to say.

Kunal - Nimmo - ek minute. kya ab maine tumse baat karna ka haq bhi kho diya hai.
Nimmo - Haq - kaunsee haq ki baat kar rahe ho tm kunal. Kis Haq ki baat kar rahe ho. Biwiw ka haq to mera tha hi nahin, right. dost ka haq bhi ab shayad nahin raha. yaad hai kunal maine tumse kaha tha, ki jab tak tum maine man se yeh feeling nahjin hata dete ki tum mujhse pyar karte ho, tab tak hum ek doosre se baat nahin karenge. This is my stand even today kunal. Natasha ko ek mauka to do. jab dekho ladai...shaadi main bahut samjhote hate hain kunal. bahut. yaad hain humne kitne samjhote kiye the. aur haan pam chachi, main ja rahee hoon. phir se..aap sab logon se door. phir nahin aayoongee wapas par ek binte hain aapse, doosron ki zindagi main zeher gholna band kijiye. bhagwan se prsthrna kartee hoon ki aapki zindagi main kabhi koi toofan na aaya...

Swati is giving Aniket a disgusted look and Aniket looks on looking like a sheepish lamb...Ashutosh is feeling rather guilty and has guilt pangs on his forehead and is sweating furiously....

Anand is angry but he manages to comtrol his temper. At home everyone is angry with swati and want to know when, how, where and what. Swati is crying furiously and it is known that she is five months pregnant and an adption is impossible.

Nimmo then gets an idea. She decides to take swati along with her to dubai. She says she will talk to her boss and ask for a extended stay. Nimmo realises that its better that swati stays away from the mahaul. Anand agrees.

As Months go by, it gets impossible for anand to stay in the chawl. The mathurias then shift out of the chawl and go to some unknown place which only KK and rishabh know of and they have to sworn to secrecy of not letting any one know.

5 years later and the story continues. Will Kunal and Nimmo ever meet? 5 years later:

At a mall in Dubai...

some one is calling - Sahil Sahil wait up.

Nimmo stops dead in her track and her eyes become moist. She feels little hands around her tender waist. Nimmo looks down and her heart melts as she sees this cute little bundle of boy. Nimmo looks down and says kya hua. Sahil gives her a hug and says shhh mujhe chupa do please. uncle aa rahe hain aur mujhe unhe darana hain.

Nimmo - darana hai - kyun..

Sahil scratches his head and says i dont know. I am confused.

Nimmo laughs and says ok. never mind par tumhare mummy aur papa pareshaan honge... tumhae uncle ka number kya hai ..unhe phone lagati hoon..

Sahil - nahin... let this hide n seek game continue please.

nimmo - noo.

sahil - please..

nimmo - nahin beta. you are a good beta na. mummy pareshaan ho jayengi

sahil - becomes sad and says meri mummy nahin hain..

nimmo - kyun kya hua. aise nahin bolte

sahil - pata nahin. kabhi dekha nahin unhe. .. mri naani hi meri mummy hai and paoa mere papa. please main aake peeche chup jayon..uncle se bet lagee hai..

nimmo - jayo mere peeche chup jayo.

Sahil says ok... thank you.

Sahil goes and hides behind nimmo.

Rishbh comes running, crisses nimmo and then comes back. Nimmo tum-

Nimmo - rishabh - tum

Rishabh - tum yahan kaise

Nimmo - dubai main ..ummm looking here and there and saying i have shifted here now with swati.

Rishabh - swati oh right...how is she.,,

Nimmo - she sees fine... rishabh - ek baat poochoon.

Rishabh - yea sure....

Nimmo - ab bhi swati se pyar karte ho?

Rishabh - his eyes become moist. and he asks nimmo..meri chodo - kya tum kunal ko kabhi bhool payee ho...

Nimmo - errr lets talk about something else... How is nats.

Rishabh - nimmo sorry but have you seen this kid around. He is a brat and i dont know where he has disaapeared.

Nimmo - Kid... no...

Rishabh - damn... this kid is going to kill me one day with his naughtiness.

nimmo - kid ..tumne shaadi kar li kya

rishabh - nahin.. kunal ka beta hai..i mean kunal aur natasha ka.. agar woh mjhe nahin mila to kunal mujhe kaccha kha jayega...I got to run nimmo .. I am in a rush. this is my number ..call me... need to talk..

nimmo - righto..

rishabh goes and nimmo tells sahil, ab tum aa akte ho aage.

Sahil comes n says budhu uncle...itnee aage chale gaye hai par mujhe dekha hi nahin

nimmo - chup shaitan..chalo ...ab uncle ko phone lagate hain.

sahil - aap mere uncle ko kaise jante ho

nimmo - woh unse main abhi mili thi na..accha jab tak uncle nahin aate hai, kya khao ge, ice cream ya chocolate

sahil scratches his head and nimmo is left thinking that ek dum kunal par gaya hai. pata nahin mera beta kaisa hoga. kiske paas hoga..


Meanwhile on the other side of the mall:

Some one is calling out - nimmo , nimmo... Kunal stops dead on his tracl and looks around and sees a three year old running towards her parents. Kunal looks on smile and goes and walks towards the kid. kisses her on the forhead and says accha naam hai. and walks away from there..Suddenly at a shop, he hears some one calling out .. calling krishna... krishna...

Kunal stops and looks back and is shocked to see Swati holding a five year old kid in her arms. he immediately realises that the kid is swatis. Swati turns her face as some one greets her and wants her autograph. There the kid is making faces at Kunal. Kunal is at first exassperated and then a smile comes on his face. He walks towards swati and says swati. Swati looks back and is shocked to see Kunal. Kunal tum yahan..
Kunal - Swati tum....

Kunal and Swati both look at each other..

Swati - kaise ho

JKunal - theek hoon... tum

Swati acchi hoon ..

Kunal - yeh bacchi tumharee hain...

Swati - haan...krishna.... idhar aayo.... yeh kunal uncle hain..inhe hello karo..

Krishna - Kunal uncle..naam suna suna sa lag raha hai...

Swati - chup chairtaan

Krishna - haan - maine inhe kahin dekha hain...

Kunal - accha kahan...

Krishna - thinking n saying sochne do sochne do...

Kunal thinks to him sekf and says this girl is just like swati...

Krishna - yaad aaya..photo main dekha hai.Nimmo maasi aksar ek photo dekhtee hain... mama - yeh wohee kunal uncle hain kya...

swati - looking at kunal who has gone silent suddenly.............
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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One Shot : Version 3
Ok making yet another attempt in writing a fan fic...i am going to start from where the episode ended yesterday ...

Nimmo has given a piece of her mind to Natasha. And no sooner has she done that, she regrets it. She realises that she loves kunal but realisation also dawns upon her that kunal is not in love with her.

She is in a state of fix and doesnt know what she should do. Whether to run after natasha and stop her or whether she should go to kunal who is badly drunk and is bleeding profusely. Nimmo eyes catches some photographers hovering around and she immediately goes to where kunal is...

hataye hataye as she is mking her way to the crowd. her thoughts are now on a bleeding kunal and to get him away from the prying media eye.
Nimmo reaches kunal. She puts his arms ariund her neck and helps him get up. Kunal is too drubk to realise anything. Vikrant is helping nimmo take kunal.

nimmo - i need a doctor...wherec is the doctor
Vikrant - nimmo we need to ceck in
nimmo - no vikrant , we need a doctor first. kunal ko first aid to zarpoorat hai. dekho na kaise bleed kar raha hai
Vikrant - nimmo, i know you are hassled but relax...accha ek kaam kae hai..first lets check in and then i will go looking for a doctor.
nimmo - nodding her head ok...

Vikrant and Nimmo put kunal at the back and nimmo goes and sits with kunal. Vikrant is driving the car.
Nimmo puts kunals head on her lap, and she tears a piece of her pallu as she needs a cloth to wipe the blood from kunaks forehead. She asks Vikrant for water and he hands her a bottle of water,

nimmo, wets the cloth with water and starts to reemove the blood from kunals forehead.

Vikrant sees all this from the rear view mirror and his thought go back to a point on time when he had got hurt playing football and naina was watching and he was bleeding profusely, yet naina diod nothing about it.
Vikrant shakes is head and says kunal doesnt even know how lucky he is ...nimmo really loves him alot.

On the eay, kunal feels like throwing up, so vikrant keeos stopping the car so that kunal can throw up outside the window... nimmo on the other hand is worried sick...

Vikrant stops the car outside sand rock hotel in lonavala. he gets nimmo and kunal to check in to the hospital. Kunal is saying nimmos name and nimmo keeps telling him that she is there and keeps re assuring. In his druken state kunal is saying..nimmo tumhe malum hai ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon...itna saara..you are the best nimmo... tum mera kitna khayal rakhtee ho. tum mujhe chor kar to nahin jayogee.
nimmo - nahin jayoongee
kunal - conmtract khatam hone ke baad bhi nahinm
nimmo doesnt know where to look now, contract kya contract kunal... tum kaisee ajeeb batein kar rahe ho,..kunal sambhalo apne aapko..
kunal - tum ho na mujhe sambhalne ke liye, jab tak tum ho mujhe kuch nahin ho sakta
Aree vik... vik mujhe tumse ek baat kehnee hai..you are the best vik.. simply the best..kunal hugs vik...
Knal - vik maine na tumse ek baat chupayee thi
nimmo - koi baat nahin hai vik..kunal bas aisee ki bole jaa raha hai
shhhhh says kunal, putting his fingers on nimmos lips..bole do
nimmo, tum mujhe nahin chod kar jaypogee, vaada karo
nimmo puts her hand on kunalk and says vaada
kunal - haan...wait..i dont beliueve it..paia ne bhi yehi kaha tha, lekin woh to ause gaye ki laute ho nahin...
nimmo - kunal...dekho main yahan hoon...nahin jayonngee tumhe kahin chodkar vaada raha
kunal - jhooot, jab contract khatam hoga, to yrh shaadi khatam hogee, jab yeh shaadi khatam hogeem to tum mujhe chod kar jayogee, tum mujhe chod kar jayogeee, meri property mere paas rahee gee aur natasha bhi, natasha mere paas par tum nahin..kyunki tum to apne ghar main hogee jo tumne chudvaye contract sign kar ke..kunal is clapping his habds gleefully and nimmo is shocked.,.. she cant believe that kunal has let the cat out of the bag in front of vikrant who just stood there speechless.... nimmo quikly shooed vikrant away while she took kunal to tuck him in bed!
There is a knock on the door and its vikrant. Vikrant tells nimmo that he needs to talk to her..Kunal is there on the bed and says aree vikrant aayo. come on in. kunal is still drvunk as hell and is murmering natashas name... Vikrant looks at nimmo and then at kunal. he sees how hurt nimmo is and unable to see nimmo like that, he walks over to where kunal is lying diwn and takes a jug of ice cold water and pours it over kunal... Kunal wakes up with a lurch nimmo is upset and screans at vikrant and tells him to leave...

Nimmo is bugged so , he takes kunal to the bathroom lest he catches a cold. There is a fire place nearby so nimmo then lits a fire... her hair is open and nimmo is still in her whote saree. nimmo thenmakes kunal take off his shirt and she puts it to dry near the fire place. Then nimmo goes and makes a cup of tea for me and forces it dwn kunal throat because he insists on having champagne and not tea

Vikrant again knocks on the door and this time nimmo is really irritated. Vikrant needs to get the contract ting out of his head ao he asks nimmo if the contract thing was indeed true..kunal on the other hand is saying natash anatasha... natasha... nimmo by now is irritated so she excuses herself and walks out.

Vikrant - nimmo and he shakes his head..
he goes and sits next to the fire place nxt to kunal...
an hour pass and not a word is uttered between the two of them..finally vikrant breaks the silence

Vikrant - kunal, bade kushnaseeb hote hai woh jinhe ek jeevan saathi milte, ek hum kadam milta hai , ek aisa saathi milta hai jo unhe pyar karte hain...

Kunal doesnt a say a word..

Vikrant - kunal i am your best friend am i not

kunal - no... nimmo is my best friend..

Vikrant - aah i see

Kunal - vik mujhe mere haal par chod do...

Vikrant - kunal is cheez ke peeche tum bhaag rahe ho, w to tumharee kabhi thi nahin.

kunal - matlab

Vikrant - mera ishara natasha ke taraf hai...

kunal - natasha - ahhh isnt she beeeaaaaauuutiful

vikrant - and nimmo

kunal - nimmo uske barein main mein kya boloon... i canmt live with nimmo..

Vikrant - and natashs

kunal - i can live with her ...

Vikrant - how can you be so sure kunal. life is so unpredictale..d hafte pehle kya tum yeh keh saktee the ki naina aur main kabhi alag honge ...nahin na

kunal is quiet. finally he says ek ajeeb se kashish hain nimmo main. vik i love nimmo i mean nataha

vikrant - no kunal , you are running away from yourself. tum darte ho pyar karne se..tum darte ho nimmo we pyar karne ke liye .. tum apne ehsaaas ko pehchaan nahin paa rahe ho.... 24 hours tumhe sir nimmo ka khayal hota hai, tum nimmo ko rote hue nahin dekh sakte

kunal - tumhe badee fikar hai nimmo ki... agar aissee hi baat hain tun kyun nahin kar lete shaadi nimmo se... kya tum nahin chahne lage ho usse

vik - you have gone bonkers kunal....tumhare dimak kharab ho gaya hai.... kash mujhe nimmo mil jaaati... to aaj main bahut kush hota...

kunal - nimmo meri patni hai..

vikrant - patbi hai...to bolo usse ki tum usse chahte ho...usse yeh ehsaaas dilvayo dammit... kis natasha ke peeche bhaag rahe ho tum..uske peeche..jisse ewk mnute bhi nahin waste kiya, wahan se jaane ke liye, us natasha ki tumhe fikar hai jo nimmo ki jagah lena chahtee hai, us natasha ki tumhe fikar hai, jisko yeh bhi parvah nahin thi ki woh yeh dekhe ki tumhareee halat kaisee thi... in aankhon ko khole kunal, aapne feeling ko pehvchaano.. kahin bahut der nahin ho jaye...

vikrant gets up and leaves. he turns back and says kaash naina nimmo jaisse hoti..jo pyar maine nimmo ke aankhon main tumhare liye dekha hai, kash maine wohi pyar nsina ki aankhon main dekhs hota apne liye...
kaaaaash....saying this he walks away.....

Its been two hours and smce nimmo left the room and kunal is now getting worried as to where nimmo is. nimmo on the other hand is walking alone at night on the streets of lonavala...kunal gets up and starts to walk looking for nimmo...

The road is slippery and there is a curve in the road....on top of that...thee is a ptrol leakage and nimmo slips and is about to fall from a cliff ...her hand is at the edge of the cliff and she is hanging in the air...when she sees some one offering her a hand
The rocks are also very wet thanks to the rain..nimmo looks down and cant see a thing..she looks up and sees a hand... then she hears a voice ..nimmo haath do apna... gusssa chodo aur haath do...nimmo looks up again and sees its kunal...

Kunal yahan pe she wonders... nimmo is clutching to the cluff edge saying haath doongee to neeche gir jayoongee...
Kunal - shut up... gimme your hand...
Nimmo - dimak kharab hai..tumhe hoga marna ko shok mujhe nahin hai
kunal - saath phere liye hai madam... ab to marna bhi lagta hai ek saath hi likha hai...no other option you see... kunal takes off his coat and flungs it to nimmo...trus me and hold on to this coat while i get up up...
Nimmo - i think you have gne mad,,
kunal knows its poitnless..so he looks around and starts to rock climb down and go near his wife on the cliff where she sees..she is after all about 1 ft below the road..
kunal reaches near his wife on a slippery rock with great difft..holding on to one rock and with his wife out he asks for his wife hand... and says barosa hai na mujhe ..den.... nimmo still doesnt gove him the hand but says barosa to hai par haath nahoin doongee..exxasperated kunal goes towards nimmo and is holding on to the rock while he is behind her...

one hand is above nimmos hand and his feet are abive nimmos feet..so he teels nimmo to put her feet on his feet and her hand on his hand oine by one and thats how they climb up....they are finally able to reach the top of the cliff... from there kunal gets off his wife..tells wife to get on to the road first and trhen he climbs up...

Once on the road..he says tumhara diumak to theek hai... tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota... kabhi tumne socha hai ki tumhe kuch ho jayega to mujhme kya beteegeee..ghosh you are impossible.... nimmo doesnt say a word and just walks away from there...

Kunal realizes hes has said a wee but too much so he is thinking..nimmo jaa rahee hai mujhe itna bura kyun lag raha hai...kyun man kar rahai usse rokne ko.. suddenly he shouts nimmo... nimmo stops..kunal runs upto her... puts his coat ontop of her and putting his arm around her they walk to the hotel
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Version 2 :
The Characters :

The Sehgals:
The Sehgals are a middle class family. Shradha father - Late Rahul Mehta was a learned scholar and the vice chancellor of Lucknow University. Shrdha was just 15 when he died and after his death, shradha along wih her sister varsha came to Mumbai. Varsha married Arjun - marketing head with Reliance whereas Shradha met Abhay Sehgal, financial head of coco cola.

Shradha & Abhay have a son and daughter - Kunal & Radhika

Kunal - The younger child of Shradha & Abhay. Kunal is a restauraneur much againt his dads wishes. He wanted to get into acting but abhay would not hear any of it. Kunal and Abhay do not get along.

Radhiks - eldest child of Shradha & Abhay. Is a homemaker. Married to Vineet Mittal who is the region head of Pepsico. They have a child - Yash.

Kunal adores Yash to the hilt.

Kunal has two friends - who are his friends from college - Rahul who is wanting to get into Defence Services & Rohit who is in the Hotel Business.

Kunal who is a restaurant manager is best buddies with his chef - Suresh and his manager - Aman. Alok his general manager admires him.

Shradha is very protective about Kunal and does not like ny of the girls Kunal flls in love with. She does not even like kunals best friend amaira.

These days she is looking around for an ideal match for kunal.....

Varsha & Arjun have a son - Sameer who is in college and is into theatre abd is a budding poet. Varsha considers Kunal like her own child.

Arjun and Abhay are sons are Amarjeet and Paramjeet Sehgal. Amarjeet Sehgal has his own business which he runs whereas Paramjeet Sehgal is a socialite.

KK - kunal's man friday whom kunal keeps turning to for help and advice...


Character Sketch of mathuria family.

Essentially a middle class family two....

Anand Mathuria: retired airforce pilot, now runs a training school for budding pilots who want to get into commercial flying. Has 20 acres of land on the outskirts of Mumbai and given the charge of his farm to his wife neeta mathuria

Neeta Mathuria: wife of anand mathuria. Is a dignified women, incharge of the farm owned by her husband, runs a centre near the village in the farm land for the village children, and the women of the village, is a social worker and runs a dairy in the farm where she supplies milk to people in her locality - Andheri.

Namrata Mathuria: Is a confident young HR executive working for the same restaurant as Kunal.

Raman Mathuria: Namrata's younger brother who is a budding musician...

Nayan Malhotra: Rahuls best friend who is the son of a musician, is a musician himself, considers namrata as his elder sister

Raj, Aman, Amar, Anurag, Shikhar, Amol & Karan - Raman's gang from school with whom he is very close

Rashi, Monika- Namrata's school friends

Nayantara - Namrata best friend

Rohini, Mansi, Manvi - Namrata's college friend

Kantaben - mathurias family maid - almost like masi to nimmo or namrata

Other than the above there is

Namrata has loads of cousins who will introduced as the story progresses....

The story :

Well can two very alike individuals fall in love?
Monday, 1st September, 2007

7 :00 ........ trrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnggggggggg, a alarm clock goes....

a hand comes from somewhere under the blanket.....and puts the alarm clock offf....

8:00 .........nimmo...chai....

nimmo - hmnn, gruntles and goes back to sleep

8:30 ..... Nimmmmmmo comes a scream... office nahin jaana kya... e bed sheet is thrown out...

the hair is in nimmo face, she shakes her head, looks at the watch and jumps out of bed...8:30..... phir se late..

In less than 20 minutes, nimmo is pout of the shower, there is a usual scranble o get the clothes as she has her yowel wrapped, she decides to wear formal western , puts on her sandal, is about to go out o her room, realizes she hasnt done her pooja, hurriedly goes towards her mandir, says sorry god, lights a dia and goes off... on her way out, trips about 5 times... sits in her car as she waves good bye to everyone and kanta ben is after her wanting her to eat mangoes, apples and bananas...............

Everyonme sighs and says - Kya hoga is Nimmo ka??????
nimmo is on her way to work while simultaneously praying to god to save her today from being fired. nimmo being her clumsy selfends up stalling the car 5 times, breaks the signal rules 8 times, nearly crashes into someone or another vehicle 10 times n ends up going on the wrong side of the road...well luckily once. fortunaltely for her no cops were around nahin to use shaadi se pehle sasuraal mein jaana hota (i hope u get wat i mean )

Meanwhile in the office, we see a very restless boss who is pacing his office room. Kabhi left to kabhi right. KK ko use dekh kar hi chakar aane lagte hai. well its pretty obvious ke boss aur koi nahin aur nahin, kunal hai. kunal is angry n starts muttering to kk

K- KK! Kya waqt ho raha hai?

kk- ji saare nau sir

K- Office kab shuru hota hai?

KK- well nau baje sir lekin staff ko saare aat baje aane ko kaha jaata hai.

K- main yahaan ka boss hokar bhi yahaan har din sharp 9 am aata hoon. to is ladki ki majaal! har din dair se aati hai. Isko kaam par kisne rakha hai?

KK- Jee sir maine

K- Maaloom tha, aise namoone ko tumhi chun sakte ho. Is HR ka naam kya hai...

KK- namrata mathuria

K- haan haan jo bhi ho, aaj to main use mil kar hi rahunga.

just then we see the door opening wide with nimmo coming in breathing really fast

N- sorry kk aaj to main marne hi wali thi...

KK ishaaron se use kehta hai "ssshh...Boss" while pointing towards kunal.

Nimmo mutters "mar gaye!".

kunal speaks to her with sarcasm - to HR sahiba aa gayi aap? Itni jaldi kya thi aane ko. kal aa jaate.

nimmo lowers her gaze n thinks "oh no! to yeh boss hai! hmm lekin har roz is waqt yeh koi meeting mein rehte hai, aaj yeh yahaan kaise. Oh no, hey bhagwaan bacha lena. Meri chutti mat karwaana nahin to zindagi bhar kisi ke ghar dulhan banke mujhe rotiyan banaani hogi. aur aap to jaante hai meri rotiyan gol nahin hote"

Kunal interrupts her thoughts- Kya hua, neend aa rahi hai kya? arre pehle keh dete, tumhare liye takiya aur palang le aata.

N- sir im really sorry. Sach mein main jaan mooch kar late nahin aayi. Plz mujhe maaf kijiye. main aapko shikaayat ka mauka nahin doongi...plz

kunal struck by her innocence n her answer looked at her for a few seconds n then snapped out of his thoughts.

K-ahem ahem theek hai theek hai...lekin aainda dhyaan rahe...samjhi!

N-Yes sir

saying that she goes out the room with a smile

KK speaks to Kunal

KK- sir aap keh rahe the ke...

k- haan jaanta hoon. lekin ek mauka use de diya jaaye. aakhir dekhu uska kaam karne ka dhang kaisa hai...

just then they hear a big bang!!! they go out the door to see wat happened when they see nimmo on the floor with a pile of files everywhere. kunal hits his hand on his forehead n goes back into his cabin while kk looks at nimmo shaking his head as if saying "nimmo tumhara kuch nahin ho sakta"


meanwhile in the sehgal house, pictures of glam girls r splurted over the table. dada n dadi r debating over which girl to choose for kunal. when dadaji suggests that they try asking for his best friends grand daughters hand for kunal. this girl happens to be our very own nimmo. although her dada is no more, kunals dada cherishes his memories forever. dadaji has never seen nimmo but has met anand several times while he was growing up n few odd occassions. dadi is skeptical to agree but seeing how emotional her hubby is, she agrees as she wants the best for her grand son n her hubby too.

filhaal to ghar mein aur office mein yeh haal hai. aage aage dekho hota hai kya....
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kunal is in his cabin working, or should we say, trying to work. for some odd reason he can not get nimmo's words out of his mind

"Sach mein main jaan mooch kar late nahin aayi. Plz mujhe maaf kijiye. main aapko shikaayat ka mauka nahin doongi...plz"

K- itni innocence?! aaj se pehle kabhi kisi employee ne mujhse aisi baat nahin ki. Bachi ki tarah maafi maang rahi thi...kitni cute lag rahi thi...haaye
Then he realises wat he is saying
K-yeh main kya bak raha hoon?! shes my employee. phir bhi...

he was curious to know more about our nimmo. something about her drew him towards her. he went towards her cabin n was peeping through the glass door (hiding ofcourse) to have a glimpse of her. he was observing her every move. the way she played with her hair while reading the documents. the way she chewed her pen...the way she ended up dropping things every now n then. seeing this a smile formed on kunals face. he decided to walk in when all of a sudden we see nimmo on the floor picking up documents that had fallen. he walks in n sees the sight not expected to be seen to him. he cud see her cleavage due to her bending down

K- HOLY CRAP!

nimmo looks up n says kya hua sir

k- err kuch nahin lemme help u
he gets down on the floor to help her pick up the paper but to his damage, he cud see more of the sight infront of him. His face became all red due to his shyness (kunal n shy? yh right n pigs can fly but this time he actually was shy). nimmo sensed his discomfort but not knowing wat it was about starting to speak to him
N-r u ok sir? aap itne laal kyu ho gaye?

K- err kuch nahin, just err a bit hot maybe

N-0h ok.

K-waise tumhara naam kya hai?

N- Nimmo

K-Nimmo?

N- well its namrata mathuria but pyaar se nimmo, n its easier to remember na

Kunal was feeling a bit too hot so he decided just to leave everything n run back to his cabin leaving nimmo to think "arre ise kya hua"

Kunal sits in his comfy seat n drinks his glass of water placed on his table in one gulp n breathes out. he smiles n says to himself "nimmo? hmm interesting" Kunal is still at the Corporate Office of his company.. he gets a call from Eeena, Meena, Deeeka, Shiela and he attends to all being the gentleman that he is... haan darling...sure darling...nahin sweetheart...to aaj milte hain...kahan ajji wahin jahan koi aata jaata hi nahin....

Then Kunal realizes that he is getting a call waiting..accha sun...aman sir ka phone aa raha hai...nahin yaar...aaya tha finance department main kuch papers sign karvane ...aur nazar main aagayee ms HR... thodee pagli se hai.... yaar aman sir ka phone aa raha hai..let me take this call..haan haan darling main tere ko phone karta hoon... promise sweeto...

Kunal takes the other call...haan ji sir...nahin aman sir main aa raha hoon...

Aman - agar tumhare flrting khatam ho gaye hoo to tum restaurant aane ka vaapas kashr karoge...

Kunal - yesh sir... main aa raha hoon .... five minutes sir...

Aman - 5 min - according to your watch or mine...

Kunal - sir main aa rah hoon... kunl is getting is into the left and nimmo is getting out... they collide and bump into each other...

Kunal aur nimmo - tum... Sir main abhi water high ble park restaurant pahunchta hoon and looking at nimmo - haan haan ms HR ko bhi leke aata hoon... accha sir, aaj bhi humare paas ladke kaam hai na... ohhh ms HR ... we need ppl... aap humaree manning kab khatam kar rahee ho...

Nimmo just continues to glare at him...
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nimmo breaks her hand away from Kunal and goes towards her cabin...

She is fuming and seething with rage.... MS HR ...what does he think of himself....manning complete chahiye- abhi batatee hoon usse....

Still fuming to herself she looks at various job sites and sends across some profiles to Kunal. She then calls up Aman and starts talking to him non stop...

Aman - relax relax nimmo...you know...stop calling him and he will come around..

Nimmo - Kunal and sudrofy...kabhi nahin.

Aman - yaar tum dono bhi na..itna kyun ladte ho...

Nimmo - pata nahin - woh mera blood pressure boil karta hai..

Aman - accha sun main tere se baad main baat karta hoon...

Nimmo - fine whatever ...

Nimmo rolls up her hair and puts the pen around the bun and goes back to work...

6 pm and nimmo takes out her car..of course it doesnt start at the same instance...After a couple of tries she goes towards the restaurant...there she gets to know that she has to handle yet another restaurant by the name of Tendulkars...and she has to report to none other than Kunal...

She talks to aman and has tea with him when she gets a call from Udit, and seeing nimmo talk in a laughing way to Udit and flirting with Udit on the phone bugs Kunal no end seeing nimmo talking to someone on the fone so openly, laughing is making kunal quite mad

Kunal thinks "hehehe hehehe wat the hell! yahaan hum bhi baithe hai aur memsaab ko fone se fursat nahin hai. dekho kaisi khil khila kar baat kar rahi hai. woh bhi kisi udit se". agar udit itna hi pasand to indian idol mein kyun nahin jaati :angry"

nimmo continues to talk to udit on the fone while kunal glares at her, which she notices n feels uncomfortable.

N- err udit main tumse baad mein baat karti hoon... hmm ok, ya ok ok..bye

K- Madam ki baat ho gayi?

nimmo thinks "wat a jerk, dikhta nahin hai kya"

n- haan ho gayi. so aman getting back to ur plans......

n they start talking business (which to be honest i have no clue about )

the meeting ends n they all head towards their own cars. nimmo tries starting the car when again her car betrays her. not starting. she decides to ask for help with kunal n aman.

N- SIR!!!

k- Yes

n-ji meri gaari kharab ho gayi hai

k- to?

n- aap meri gaari ko dhakaa denge plz

K- KYA??? he thinks "kya ajeeb ladki hai. mujhe laga lift wift maange gi, yeh to dhakaa maarne ko keh rahi hai"

n- sir plz

kunal again got lost in her innocent eyes while aman tried convincing him too
A- arre chalo na, main bhi madad kar raha hoon

k- huh? oh haan ok

the guys push her car n her car manages to start n off she goes while waving her hand to them thanking them.

kunal just shakes his head thinking "yeh ladki marwaayegi ek din" nxt day early morning in the streets of mumbai, ppl r lazily walking whilst some r jogging away. kunal was jogging his away gloriously, whise kk was following him trying to keep up with his pace. nimmo was accompanying kantaben to the vegetable vendors to buy vegetables ofcourse (chicken thodi na khareedegi wahaan se )
kunal was merrily jogging away jogging away jogging away when...a dog decide to bark n chase him n kk around. both kk n kunal freaked out n decide to run for their lives. while kk tripped n fell into a puddle of mud, kunal ran n bumped into the queen of clumsiness n fell on top of her. im sure uve guessed its nimmo by now. both on the floor, kunal uppar, nimmo neeche, nimo neeche to kunal uppar both staring into each others eyes, lost n away from the world. while the dog goes up to kantaben n offers his paw. she looks n shakes his paw saying- halo, myself kantaben, urself wat bhai? kuttabhai? very gd bhao waao
she turns n sees nimmo kunal. she goes over to them n says- nimmo oye hoye " src="http://209.85.122.89/11550/156/0/e9832/e9832.gif"> kya chal raha hai " src="http://209.85.122.89/11550/156/0/e9832/e9832.gif">
they both come back to earth n get up. kantaben sees a guy in the puddle n walks towards him. she sees the guy n giggles.

kk- aap itna has kyun rahe hai?

kb- yeh karlo baat! hasne ki baat hai to hasungi na! waise tumhara naam kya hai?

kk-kk

kb-

kk- aisa kyun has rahe ho

kb- wah tumhare maa baap ne kya chun ke naam daala hai. kk! Keencharwaala Kamal!

while kb teases kk mercilessly, kunal speaks to nimmo


k- err sorry woh main gir gaya

n- its ok no problem

k- tumhe koi chot to nahin lagi na?
he tries to touch her to see if shes hurt when she takes a step back n replies- nahin nahin main theek hoon ,sachi

k-tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?

n- sabzi lene aayi hoon

k-Sabzi?

n-ya, english mein vegetables

k- i know wat sabzi is but tum kyun le rahe ho. ur a HR

n- HR office mein hoon, besides i am a woman afterall. i know my responsibilities n duties very well. HR bane se meri izzat dugni nahin hoti aur market aane se nahin kam hoti hai.

kunal was stunned. this gal is self respecting type. hmm impressed. wait wait did i say impress? jeez!

k-waise main yahaan jogging karne ke liye aaya tha.

n-obviously, vegetables lene nahin aaye the

k- waise tum salwaar kameez mein achi lagti ho

nimmo thinks "is he like checking me out"

n- errr thanx oh no! kanta massi! woh kk ke paas hai. aur kuch dair wahaan rahi to kk pagal ho jaayega. sir i gotta leave

K- ok but remember b on time today coz u have no excuses now!

n- ok ok sir bye.

she drags kantaben away while kunal helps kk get up n head back.

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few hours later, nimmo arrives at the office, surprising on time, wearing a nice formal white shirt with a black skirt. she enters kunals cabin shocking the daylights out of him. he stares at her n thinks "gosh can she look any better! hubba hubba!"
N- Gd morning sir, u called for me?

K- i did? oh ahem haan yes i did (straightening himself up). can u go get me that file regarding aman plz.

N- Sure sir. I'll be right back

she was walking away n reached the door when Kunal called for her again

K- err...nimmo.

she turns n looks at him

n- jee?

K- aaj tum....ur looking very nice

she smiles n replies- Thank u sir
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in the meantime we see a fairly young guy, tall fair n may i say very handsome was running around the office n barged into kunals office screaming- BHAIIIIIII!!!!

kunal looks up n sees this guy approaching him.

k- Abey rishabh tu!!!

R- haan bhai main abhi waapas aaya hoon delhi se. 6 mahine ka course, 6 mahine ke judaai ne mujhe maar daala bhai. Bhai main aapko chod kar ab nahin jaaunga

kunal justs laughs hearing his cousin speaking like this when rishabh gives kunal n a big hug n starts kissing his face. just then nimmo opens the door n sees this sight

N- wat the... !!!

k- nimmo yeh mera

n- no no its ok sir, u continue err file main yahaan rakh deti hoon

she places the file on the little table n runs back to her cabin.

five minutes later kunal comes into nimmos cabin with a child like expression on his face, as if trying to plead for something.

K- nimmo, jo kuch andar hua, jo tumne dekha woh....

N- its ok sir, everyone has their own preferences. main office mein kisiko nahin bataaungi

K- huh? preferences? yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? woh ladka rishab hai, mera bhai!!!

n- bhai mujhe laga

k- has kyun rahi ho

n- im sorry sir, haalaat hi kuch aise the. mujhe laga ke shayad aap Gay...

kunal starts choking hearing her answer.

n- arre kya hua sir? yeh lijiye, paani pee lijiye

nimmo offered him a glass of water which he took but accidently spilt it on nimmos shirt in the process.

k- oh crap! im so sorry!

n- nahin koi baat nahin

then nimmo gets up n starts opening her shirt buttons, one by one. kunal is he can see her lower neck. his heart is beating really really fast, he becomes restless n sweaty. nimmo opens another button (his vision is like slow motion [lol]). he can se her upper chest. his heart is gonna pump out of his chest any minute due to all the beating. she opens the rest of her buttons n we see that she is wearing a vest top inside. kunal is like phew. nimmo looks at kunal n smiles, not knowing wat is in his mind kunal feels restless again runs out of there.

nimmo thinks- arre ise phir se kya ho gaya?

kunal runs into his cabin n leans towards his table, breathing really fast. he drinks a glass of water to calm his nerves but to no use. he still fet the same. when he then jerks out the flowers out of the vase n pours the water his head n breathes in ease.

k- ahh, ab theek hai!

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