PEHCHAN (AK) 1-parts 1- 31 - Page 6

Awwww di......its veryyyyy beautiful intro.....i loved it....👏👏😛

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12

yayayy first part!!! plz continue this 1 regularly!!!!
btw is the AR 1 exactly the same...just diff characters???
i love the style in which u have written this....the title "pehchaan" fits in perfectly and the fact that uve written it in first person it makes it look like an interview more than a chapter.....which makes the readers more fond of the characters hehe
to an outsider suryabhan is a successful person and the happiest person in the world but only he knows how painful his life is.....we shud not judge ppl from how they look outside because ppl put on fake shows to show everybody their happy but every person is secretly fighting their own battle to be happy....in this world we dont know whos smile is real and whos is fake so we shudnt judge....
whos point of view is this ff gonna be written in????
im guessing that the one "mistake" suryabhan made was probably infidelity....did he sleep with another woman??? poor prithvi...i wonder how his reaction would be.....if his wife does the same thing to him as his father did to his mother....maybe prithvi is not gayatri's real son...he could be conceived out of the "mistake" ....forgive me if my guess is wrong hehe but that will make matters so much more complicated if its true.....i guess its like payback, prithvi will pay for his fathers wrongdoings.....
maybe once prithvi will forgive kripa....gayatri will forgive suryabhan....just another wacky guess hehe
poor suryabhan is dying inside...i am sure hes fighting a battle to live just waiting for the day when his wife will whole heartedly forgive him....
love how every character starts with "meri PEHCHAN" kya hai hehe:P
im guessing tht prithvi and kripa will be like suryabhan and gayatris role reversed....
at this point i cant decide whos side to take.....gayatri who has been betrayed and cheated on....or suryabhan who has spent his whole life seeking forgiveness.....
i love how all the characters are balanced bheegi....and at the same time they have their flaws too...for example suryabhan made a big mistake and gayatri is unable to forgive him....we are all human afterall and cant be perfect.
ummm im guessing damini and suryabhan must have been in love before the marriage....and thats why the cudnt control themselves....but maybe suryabhan realized his mistake after and thats why didnt tell gayatri coz he knew she wudnt forgive him and he cudnt afford to lose her....
when gayatri asked him...he cud have easily got out of it and made an excuse...but he told her the truth...coz he knew he was wrong and he cudnt lie to her coz he loved her....
aaah mishti again the evil bratty one🤣🤣🤣
will kartik be able to fulfil his responsisibility towards mishty??? she is paralyzed whcih means they cant have a physical relationship....i hope he doesnt sleep with another woman too lol
awww kavya sho cute...iski anjali kab aayegi🤣
awwww so kripa is a mini version of her mother in law...but i wonder will she be able to keep this respect when angad enters into ehr life??? how will she gain the respect back?
"dumb dad" rofl hahaha this shows mishtis arrogance.....she is so full of herself....
oh ho...lagta hai sach much mishti ki bad duaa kripa ko lag jaayegi...i hope mishti and prithvi will fall in love lol
omg yeh prithvi to mishti se bhi aage nikal gaya lol...so much arrogance...will serve him right when kripa cheats on him:P:P
oh man prithvi disgusts me like ewwwww
awwww i really look up to kripa in this ff...shes such a strong woman...manages to see the happiness in everything...so loving...she deserves to be truly happy!!!
so right what kripa said sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...she willr ealize tht when angad comes into her life!!!
but i have a ques...is she still a virgin???=O
i dont understand...if prithvi has a wife to satisfy his needs and keep him happy...why does he need to go to other women=S
rahul is shoo cuteee kuchi kuuu =p how old is he???
omg wowww this is so interesting....i am guessing that angad is damini's son right!!!!
i guess his father was not that strong to stay with damini after she had cheated on him.....but gayatri is still with suryabhan for her familys sake...women are so much stronger hehe
cant wait til AK meet!!!!
plz plz plz cont soooon dont make us wait longer than a week lol
awesome start lvoed it!!!

Hi Hinnu.....wonderful long comment😊 Now I know why i came back to IF to write again...it's for readers like u😊😊 Good guesses as always. Now suggest some songs for me. songs which angad would sing after all he is a musician😉 Prithvi is def a villain here....he has had so many extra marital affairs already par jab uski biwi usey dhokha degi, tab uska kya haal hoga😡😆
I agree women are stronger, at least emotionally😊

why do men cheat??? I wish nature could give us a simple answer😭....yeh unki fitrat hai, ab kya karein😡

awesome parttt

Heyy

Sorry actually I haven't really been on IF due to exams...Finally they are over =]

Great start..

I liked how you started out each characters analysis by "Meri pehchan kya hai?" It shows that with time each character have lost themselves amongst the different phases of life and are trying to not only put their life together but also trying to get to know who and what they truly are.

I dont really feel bad for Surbayan I mean its his fault and now he is paying the consequences. He deserves what he is getting. No matter what the circumstances or situation he was in he did betray his wife and her love and faith in him. He betrayed the woman who left everything for him. Who stood up against her own family for him. So there can possibly be no explanation for what he did. Looking forward to what will happen after angad comes into his life.

One thing that I really liked about gayatri is the fact that she is a really determined woman... and sticks with her decisions. and I think that can both be a positive and negative trait in a person depending in the situation. But regardless of her husband's betrayal she is staying in the same house for the sake of her kids which is certainly not an easy task to do..To be living in the same house and seeing the person who broke your trust and faith. I wonder what will happen when she gets to know the truth about Angad.

Karthic is a sweetheart. Even tho he isnt into business like his brother Prithvi but I can tell that he is a really kind hearted and sweet person, A family oriented guy indeed. It must be really hard for him to look after his son, Mishty and the business. I really hope that Mishty can start appreciating Karthic for who and what he is.

As for Mishty I kinda feel bad for her because she is parlayed and anyone in that situation would get cranky and feel helpless and useless because they aren't able to do anything. But as far as her personality is concerned I am sure that she would have behaved the same way with her husband even if she wasn't paralyzed. I really hope that sooner or later she accepts Karthic for who and what he is and sees what a sweet and loving person he is . Especially when he is looking after her in this condition and is trying to fulfill his responsibility towards her.

As for Prithvi I just hate himm like no other. I cant believe that he would go out with other women when he has such a sweet and loving wife at home.. He is soo full of himself and he thinks that the whole world just revolves around him. He so does not deserve Kripa in any way.

I really like the relationship that Kripa and Rahul share. They share the typical babhi-devar bond. Its going to be really aweet to see both of them teasing eachother.

Kripa is really sweet and perfect in every way...She fulfills all her responsibilities and is devoted to not only her husband but to the whole family in every way. But I already feel bad for her. Just thinking about what she might go through after learning what kind of person Prithvi really is. But I am sure that Angad will definalty give her all the love and respect that she deserves.

Well as for Angad we don't really know much about his character yet. But all I can say is that its going to be really interesting to see how Angad blends into the family and how Angad and Suryaban will interact with each other before and after finding out the truth about their relationship. And ofcource the interactions between AK will certainly be much awaited for ;]

I will try to comment on SWD as soon as I can...Great start ..Keep up the good work👏

hii bheegi .......

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

what a start?

if i am right... everyone is confused about their identity... except angad, who is in search of his identity... all the others think their identity exists, but the truth is they are not happy with what their identity is..

it would be interesting to see kripa falling in love with her brother-in-law angad khanna...

Thanks abhilasha. Well, not everyone is confused here but not everyone is who they appear they are. Kripa is the one who is really living in an illusion in this house as she has no idea what kind of a man she is really married to😕 Ab AK milenge tho sparks tho develop honge hi😳

Thanks swetha and akluver😊

[quote=anshu]hey hi di

YAY !!-- this means there's gonna be more musique in the FF-- well i guess urs usually do hav music-- bt it still makes me happy !!

oh and was wonderinn-- are both pehchaans-- ie AR and AK the same with just different names or are they gonna be slightly diff ??

Originally posted by: rima791

awesome parttt

very wondrful intro..

this is inspired by janne kyun... right??

so glad that angad is coming and you are not stretching like those serials

if you have a pm list then plz add me di.. i would like a pm on whenever you update

can't wait for the next part

Thanks Rima. Yes, it is inspired by jaane kya baat hui but AK style😉 No, i will focus more on AK rather than Prithvi-Kripa relationship😃....sure I'll PM u😊

[quote=mitirasmali]Heyy

Sorry actually I haven't really been on IF due to exams...Finally they are over =]

Hi Mita...good to see u back. Actually I was ghayab for a while too. This is my first ff in a long time

Great start..

I liked how you started out each characters analysis by "Meri pehchan kya hai?" It shows that with time each character have lost themselves amongst the different phases of life and are trying to not only put their life together but also trying to get to know who and what they truly are.

yes, ur right with time a lot of our identities get muddled sometimes because of new relationships and sometimes because of circumstances

I dont really feel bad for Surbayan I mean its his fault and now he is paying the consequences. He deserves what he is getting. No matter what the circumstances or situation he was in he did betray his wife and her love and faith in him. He betrayed the woman who left everything for him. Who stood up against her own family for him. So there can possibly be no explanation for what he did. Looking forward to what will happen after angad comes into his life.
UR right...suryabhan made a mistake and unless gayatri forgives him, he will have to live with the burden of guilt all his life

One thing that I really liked about gayatri is the fact that she is a really determined woman... and sticks with her decisions. and I think that can both be a positive and negative trait in a person depending in the situation. But regardless of her husband's betrayal she is staying in the same house for the sake of her kids which is certainly not an easy task to do..To be living in the same house and seeing the person who broke your trust and faith. I wonder what will happen when she gets to know the truth about Angad.
Yes, gayatri is indeed a very strong woman in this ff and as we will see, she will be the only one to support Kripa later on in the story

Karthic is a sweetheart. Even tho he isnt into business like his brother Prithvi but I can tell that he is a really kind hearted and sweet person, A family oriented guy indeed. It must be really hard for him to look after his son, Mishty and the business. I really hope that Mishty can start appreciating Karthic for who and what he is.
Let's see😊
As for Mishty I kinda feel bad for her because she is parlayed and anyone in that situation would get cranky and feel helpless and useless because they aren't able to do anything. But as far as her personality is concerned I am sure that she would have behaved the same way with her husband even if she wasn't paralyzed. I really hope that sooner or later she accepts Karthic for who and what he is and sees what a sweet and loving person he is . Especially when he is looking after her in this condition and is trying to fulfill his responsibility towards her.
Mishti is basically an unhappy person and always sees the glass half full

As for Prithvi I just hate himm like no other. I cant believe that he would go out with other women when he has such a sweet and loving wife at home.. He is soo full of himself and he thinks that the whole world just revolves around him. He so does not deserve Kripa in any way.
He is indeed the villain here😡

I really like the relationship that Kripa and Rahul share. They share the typical babhi-devar bond. Its going to be really aweet to see both of them teasing eachother.
yes, they have a great relationship😊

Kripa is really sweet and perfect in every way...She fulfills all her responsibilities and is devoted to not only her husband but to the whole family in every way. But I already feel bad for her. Just thinking about what she might go through after learning what kind of person Prithvi really is. But I am sure that Angad will definalty give her all the love and respect that she deserves.
Kripa is a very kind and selfless person here...let's see how her life gets all topsy turvy soon

Well as for Angad we don't really know much about his character yet. But all I can say is that its going to be really interesting to see how Angad blends into the family and how Angad and Suryaban will interact with each other before and after finding out the truth about their relationship. And ofcource the interactions between AK will certainly be much awaited for ;]

Angad's character will be revealed as the story unfolds

I will try to comment on SWD as soon as I can...Great start ..Keep up the good work👏

Take ur time😊 and thanks again for ur wonderful comments
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