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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey di sorry for the late reply
like the intro its awesome can't wait to read the part
pleaseeeeeeeee continue soon
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Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey di sorry for the late reply

like the intro its awesome can't wait to read the part
pleaseeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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thanks mittal😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that is sooo good sangeeta di...i love it alreayd!
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that is sooo good sangeeta di...i love it alreayd!



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PART 2:

RAHUL's GRADUATION PARTY AT SHARMA HOUSEHOLD

The Sharma mansion was abuzz with activity that evening. Rahul, the youngest Sharma had graduated with honors from St. Joseph's college with a B.Com degree and was ready to set step into the real world. It was Kripa's idea to celebrate his graduation in a grandiose manner. Gayatri, who usually concurred with her favorite daughter-in-law's ideas, agreed readily. After all, since Prithvi's wedding, the Sharma's had not celebrated anything big in the past few years.

Mishti, as always, had something to criticize.

"Aakhir Rahul pehla tho graduate hai nahin is ghar mein……itna badha afsaana banaane ki kya zaroorat hai?" She snarled at her husband, Kartik as he put on his favorite suit for the evening.

Kartik swallowed his annoyance at her usual negativity, "bahi hamare liye tho bahut badha afsaana hai…..aakhir Rahul ko maine bachpan se chote bhai nahin balki apne bte jaise hi paala hai……….jaanti ho Rahul ke baad ab hamara Kavya hi is ghar se graduate karega…..tho kyun na abhi se thodi practice kar li jaaye……apne Kavya ke liye is se bhi badhi party doonga main tho."

"Haan…haan…..zaroor…..party tho tab hi hogi na jab ladli Kripa ka idea hoga…..hamari kaun sunega?" Mishti spurned his idea.

"Mishti! Har baat mein Kripa ko kyun ghaseet laati ho? Aakhir us bechari ne tumhara kya bigaada hai?" Kartik sighed and sat at her feet to fix her saree pleats.

"Dekhna jab tak kavya badha hoga…..Kripa is ghar par raaz kar rahi hogi……humein servant quarter mein bhi jagah mil jaaye tho ganeemat hogi," Mishti fumed.

Kartik shook his head and forced a smile, "bhai…..main tho abhi se servant quarter mein hi rehta hoon…..I'll not know the difference."

"Matlab?" Mishti pulled her pleats away from his fingers.

"Apni biwi ka sab se badha naukar hoon bhai," he teased her and folded his palms.

Mishti pulled her wheel chair away and wheeled towards the door, "tumhein tho har baat mazaak lagti hai."

"Kya karoon," he stood up and followed her promptly, "meri biwi jo itni entertaining hai."

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"Gayatri…….aaj main bahut khush hoon," Suryabhan walked towards his wife as she placed her shawl on her shoulder before leaving their bedroom.

"Haan…..hona bhi chaahiye…..aakhir kisey umeed thi ki Rahul college se bhi graduate karega," Gayatri replied without meeting his gaze.

"Jaanta hoon," Suryabhan replied guiltily, "meri galti hai……main Rahul ko bachpan mein wo sab nahin de saka jo dena chaahiye tha." He recalled how Rahul's formative years had been scarred by their strained marital relations thanks to his infidelity. Rahul was very young when Gayatri found out about Damini. Since then their relationship had never been the same; Suryabhan had drowned himself into guilt and work and barely spent time with his sons, especially Rahul. Even though Gayatri had invested all her energy into raising her sons, if it were not for Kartik, Rahul would never known what a father figure was.

"Gayatri," an emotional Suryabhan touched her shoulder slightly, but she backed off immediately. To this date, any physical contact with him felt repulsive to her.

"Hmm?" She turned around and asked, "kahiye."

"Thanks…..thanks for being such a wonderful mother……and…wife…..agar tum na hoti tho yeh ghar kabka bikhar gaya hota," a misty eyed Suryabhan swallowed painfully.

"Rishtey aur grahasti bikherna ya sametna har insaan ke haath mein hota hai Surya…..bas farak yeh hai ki jise bikherne mein do pal nahin lagte, usey sametne mein sadiyaan beet jaati hain," with a cynical smile, she walked out of their room to join the celebrations in the main hall.

With a hung head, Suryabhan dragged out of the room and stood at the head of the magnificent stairway leading to the main hall downstairs. His family, except Prithvi, were all there, talking, laughing, teasing, mixing with the few guests who had started trickling in one by one.

He had everything……but why did he still feel so barren and empty on the inside?

……………………………………………….

"Thanks bhabhi!" Rahul whispered into Kripa's ears from behind. Clad in a beautiful navy blue saree, thick long hair on her shoulders, pearls accentuating her delicate features and long neck, she could easily pass off as his younger sister rather than 'bhabhi.'

Smiling, she turned around and teased him, "thanks jab bolna jab main Muskaan ko pass kar doon."

"Pass kar doon? Matlab aap uska test lengi?" Rahul was stunned, "I..I thought you have already approved of her…..and you were going to convince mom and dad tonight."

"Wah wah majnu devar……you think I'm that nave? Aakhir wo meri hone waali devraani hai…..she needs to meet some standards…..how can I present her case without knowing she will make a good devrani and a good bahu?"

"Come on Bhabhi! She is going to be my wife first…..not…not just your devrani or bahu!" Rahul replied vehemently.

"Wow! Muskaan is really lucky…shaadi se pehle hi uski itni tarafdaari ho rahi hai….tho baad mein kya hoga?" Kripa chided.

Rahul blushed a little and then asked softly, "kya Mishti bhabhi ne bhi aapka test liya tha?"

"Woh tho roz test leti hai…..kyun Kripa?" Kartik interrupted and winked at Kripa.

The three of them burst into laughter. Kripa touched Kartik's shoulder and shook her head, "bhaiyya…….wo unka haq hai….aakhir woh badhi jo hain."

"Badha tho wo hota hai jiski ghar mein sab se zyaada chalti hai…..aur jahan tak main jaanti hoon…..wo main nahin hoon," a growling Mishti joined the trio. Their smiles vanished as soon as she wheeled in. Kartik shuffled his feet awkwardly, while Rahul excused himself to greet his college mates at the door.

"Bhabhi…..aaiye…..aapko mehmaano se milwaati hoon," Kripa smiled and pushed Mishti's wheel chair towards the center of the hall, hoping to distract her from her usual negative banter.

"CHACHI! CHACHI!" Kavya ran in with a group of kids, panting, he pulled at Kripa's pallu, "chachi….music band kab aayega?"

"OH Kavya?" Kripa was taken by surprise; she smiled at her little nephew and cupped his chin, "aane waala hoga…..jao bahar jaakar dekho."

"OK chachi! You're the best!" He kissed her hands and bolted towards the front door. Mishti turned a crimson red, upset at how she was gradually losing her son to Kripa's spell. Mishti loved to blame her physical handicap and inferior looks for her misery, but it was Kripa's inner beauty and strength which captivated people. Her son being one of them too.

"KAVYA! KAVYA!" Mishti yelled from behind but Kavya had disappeared in the crowd, "yeh ladka bhi na……sab ki tarah tumhara chamcha banta jaa raha hai."

A little taken aback, Kripa chose to ignore her caustic comments, "bhabhi….aap maa hain uski…..aapki jagah koi nahin le sakta uski zindagi mein."

Gayatri walked in and interjected before Mishti's rebuttal, "arre Kripa…tum yahan ho beti…Prithvi kahan hai?"

"Oh mummyji….wo shayad office mein hi hain…..der se aayenge." Kripa excused her husband's absence.

"Uffo….aaj ke din bhi is ladke ko kaam se fursat nahin hai?" Gayatri shook her head.

"Meeting khatam hote hi aajayenge," Kripa lied to pacify her mother-in-law. Even though she had reminded Prithvi several times that morning, she knew he wouldn't show up on time. As he had walked out the door that morning, she had overheard him talking to someone about meeting at 7 pm that evening. She looked up at the wall clock- it was 8 pm, and she knew his meetings always ran late, especially the evening ones. She had never questioned him in the past, and as always, wouldn't dare disturb him, even if his presence would have meant a lot to his younger brother.

"Zara phone tho lagaa Kripa," Gayatri ordered.

"Jee mummyji," Kripa dialed her phone to be greeted by a voice message as always.

……………………………………………………….

"Oh darling……your phone……why does it always ring at the wrong time?" A slender, slinky young woman offered a shirtless Prithvi, nestled under the bed sheets, a drink and stared at his cell phone screen.

"I am an important man sweetheart," he took the scotch glass from her, set it aside and pulled her into his lap, "who was it?" He buried his lips into her neck and slipped his fingers under her silk shirt.

"Your wife," she chuckled and ran her fingers on his bare chest.

"Let's not waste time on her sweetheart," he turned the ringer off his phone and deftly unbuttoned her shirt.

After a quick and passionate love making session, Prithvi jumped out of bed and swiftly put on his clothes.

"Kahan jaa rahe ho darling?" The woman groaned and held her hand out at him.

"Sorry Simone…..got to go…..aaj mere bhai ki graduation party hai…..you know they all expect a speech from the big brother," He checked his missed calls on his phone and smiled smugly, "isey kehte hain kismet…….a devoted wife who misses me a lot…..and a hot mistress who I miss a lot," he bent down, kissed Simone's lips, "bye sweetheart…..see you tomorrow."

"No….not tomorrow," she moaned seductively, "tonight," licking her lips and settling into the comfort of her bed.

"Tonight?" He smiled quizzically, "you know I'm a family man."

"After the party……you might have an urgent call at the office," she winked and blew him a kiss.

"AH! I see!" He blew her a kiss as he walked out of her apartment. As he was about to lock the door, he turned around and said, "remember Simone…..you don't tell me when to come……I'll come here as and when I desire…..no one orders me…..not even you!" He shut the door behind her and with a satisfied smile walked towards his car.

Simone mumbled and growled at his arrogance, "I hate you Prithvi! But I love you too," and dozed off to sleep.

……………………………………………………………………………………

The Sharma's living room swelled up with guests, relatives and well wishers. Suryabhan and Kartik proudly displayed the youngest Sharma to the world. Prithvi was conspicuous by his absence, but the guests couldn't help admire the camaraderie and harmony of the Sharma household. While Rahul was the cynosure of all eyes in the room, his gaze was fixated at a very shy and demure Muskaan in the corner. She had been invited as one of his college mates, but everyone around him knew that she was more than just a college friend. Thankfully, Kripa had rescued her from Rahul's piercing gawks, and engaged her in an animated discussion to make her comfortable in the lavish surroundings.

"Muskaan…..Rahul is very lucky indeed," Kripa held Muskaan's hand and took her around the living room.

"Didi……can I call you didi?" Muskaan asked politely.

Kripa smiled back teasingly, "nahin kabhie nahin!"

"Oh sorry," Muskaan's face fell.

"Didi nahin…..bhabhi," Kripa whispered into Muskaan's ears, making her blush from ear to ear.

"Wo…wo…..abhi…abhi," Muskaan was dumbfounded, "lekin aapke in laws….wo?"

"Don't worry…..I'll handle that," Kripa squeezed her hands and reassured her.

"CHACHI! CHACHI!" Kavya ran in, excited and breathless, "band waala aagaya."

Kripa looked down at Kavya, "band waala?"

"Haan chachi….wo bahar khada hai guitar aur bag ke saath."

"Band waala? Guitar ke saath?" Kripa was baffled, "sirf ek aadmi hai? Poora group hona chaahiye tha…..chalo mere saath chalo," she held Kavya's hand, "sorry Muskaan….main abhi aayi…..need to take care of some things."

"Sure….please go ahead," Muskaan smiled.

……………………………………………………..

Kripa walked out into the front lawn and saw the back of a well built man with a guitar case on his shoulder and a bag in his hand.

"Itni late kyun aaye ho? Aur wo bhi akele?" She yelled at him.

A little stunned, the man turned around to face the loud but sweet voice, "excuse me?"

If her voice had stunned him, her persona took his breath away for a few seconds. Standing before him was the most beautiful woman he had ever set his eyes on. Very few things could render Angad speechless in life; her eyes had that mesmerizing effect on him. He stood still, blown away by her beauty and expressive eyes.

Kripa was taken aback by the stranger's reaction, "excuse ME? You were supposed to be here at 7……the party is in full swing…..what kind of a professional are you? I need to talk to your boss…..aur tumhare baaki group members kahan hain?" She yelled again.

"Sorry ma'am……I didn't realize you were waiting for me." His handsome, rugged looks melted into a little boy's expression who was being reprimanded by his teacher in school.

"Na jaane kahan kahan se chale aate hain yeh log?" She snickered, "just because you have a guitar on your shoulder, doesn't make you a good musician……..achcha…..ab jaldi andar chalo and start the performance…….something is better than nothing……" She held Kavya's hand and pulled him back into the house. With a puzzled look on his face, Angad followed her obediently, avoiding curious gazes from the other guests.

He stepped into the magnificent mansion and was awestruck by the opulence and elegance of the house.

"India is beautiful," he exclaimed, his gaze following the slender woman dressed in blue, "and it's people are equally beautiful," he murmured to himself.

"Band waale…..idhar aao na," Kavya gestured and asked Angad to join him in a corner of the room, "yeh aapki jagah hai."

"Aapka naam kya hai?" Angad was amused at being addressed as the 'band waala.'

"Kavya!"

"Wow! That's a wonderful name……I am Angad!" He extended his hand to the little boy.

"Angad band waala?" Kavya shook his hand and asked innocently.

"Hmm," Angad pondered, "how about Angad Khanna bandwaala?"

"OK…..that's good……main aapko AK bandwaala bolunga……aap chacha ke liye kaun sa gaana gaaoge?"

"Chacha?" Angad was confused.

"Haan…wo Rahul chacha…..wahan…wo khade hain…..unki graduation party hai na," Kavya pointed to his uncle.

"OH…..I see…..so this is a graduation party…..can I ask you a question Kavya?" Angad knelt down.

"Haan poocho."

"Mr Suryabhan Sharma kahan hain?"

"Dadaji?" Kavya grinned, "wo Rahul chacha ke saath hain….dekho wahan," he pointed again.

"Good," Angad smiled; reassured that he was at the right place. He knew he had been mistaken for someone else, perhaps a band they were expecting, but he didn't mind performing for the Sharma's. Music was his passion and he could never refuse a request, or in this case an order, that too from a beautiful but authoritative woman. Whoever she was, she was in charge for sure, and could help introduce him to Mr Suryabhan Sharma, his only hope of finding information about his father.

"GOOD EVENING LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!" Angad's booming voice into the microphone forced silence and attention from all the guests.

Kripa turned around, and saw him standing in front of the microphone, guitar in his arms, a melodious strum emanating from the strings.

"THANKS FOR GIVING ME CHANCE TO PERFORM IN FRONT OF THIS WONDERFUL CROWD……I'D LIKE TO DEDICATE THIS SONG TO THE NEW GRADUATE IN THIS ROOM…..MR RAHUL SHARMA!"

Kripa bit her lower lip nervously, "so this man is not as unprofessional as I thought…..lekin akela kyun aaya hai? I hope he performs well…..if he doesn't, Rahul and his friends would be disappointed…..aakhir zimmeddari tho meri hi hai…..please don't let me down," she crossed her fingers and said a silent prayer for the solo guitarist.

Please enjoy this wonderful song…….

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KXrgiRsq7VI&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

(Jaane kya dhoondta hai- Lucky Ali)

Jaane kya dhoondta hai, ae mera dilTujhko kya chaahiye zindagi(Jaane kya dhoondta hai, ae mera dilTujhko kya chaahiye zindagi) - 2Raaste hi raaste hain, kaisa hai yeh safarDhoondti hain jisko nazrein, jaane hai voh kidhar(Jaane kya dhoondta hai, ae mera dilTujhko kya chaahiye zindagi) - 2Bechehra sa koi sapna hai vohKahin nahin hai phir bhi apna hai vohAise mere andar shaamil hai vohMain hoon behta dariya, saahil hai vohHai kahan voh, voh kidhar hai, raaste kuch to bataKaun sa uska nagar hai, rehguzar kuch to bataDhoondti hain jisko nazrein, jaane hai voh kidhar(Jaane kya dhoondta hai, ae mera dilTujhko kya chaahiye zindagi) - 2Soona sa hai mandir, moorat nahinKhaali hai aaina, soorat nahinJeene ka jeevan mein kaaran to hoMaheke kaise kaliyaan, gulshan to hoShamma hai jo mujh mein roshan, voh viraasat kisko doonDoor tak koi nahin hai, apni chaahat kisko doonDhoondti hain jisko nazrein, jaane hai voh kidhar(Jaane kya dhoondta hai, ae mera dilTujhko kya chaahiye zindagi) - 2

Angad had the crowd mesmerized with his melodious voice and guitar. Applauses and cheers filled the room with requests for 'more! more!' from Rahul's friends and college mates. Rahul was thrilled with the performance and ran towards the stranger with the guitar. He gave him a big hug, "what a performance yaar! I loved it!"

Kripa heaved a sigh and smiled at last. He had not let her down. Mentally, she cancelled her plans of lodging a complaint against him to the local music band she had contracted with for this evening's performance.

"Mom….mom…..mujhey bhi aisa guitar seekhna hai," Kavya ran to Mishti and pestered her.

"Zaroor beta," she smiled, "kyun na is aadmi se hi poonch lein," Mishti wheeled her chair towards Angad who was surrounded by young college students.

"Thanks……that was great," Mishti was annoyed to see that a smiling Kripa had already preceded her and was talking to the musician.

"I am glad you liked my performance," Angad replied politely, relieved that he had lived up to Kripa's expectation. He couldn't help noticing how enchanting her smile was. In a way he was glad that his music had changed the frown on her face to a smile. It was strange, but for some weird reason, her approval mattered to him.

"Kya naam hai aapka?" Mishti intercepted their conversation.

Angad looked down and saw Kavya next to the woman on a wheel chair, "AK bandwaala!"

Mishti burst into laughter, "aap mazaakiya bhi hain."

Kripa was pleasantly surprised to see a smile on Mishti's face. She looked up at Angad's handsome face and wondered, "kaun hai yeh ajnabi? He sure knows how to make people smile."

"My name is Angad Khanna!" He shook Mishti's hand, "actually I'm here to meet someone."

"WHO?" Mishti's curiosity sparked.

"Mr. Suryabhan Sharma!"

Suryabhan, who had been equally enamored by Angad's performance, overheard his name and walked towards Angad.

"Mujhse milne? Kaun ho tum beta?" Suryabhan smiled at the handsome young man. Something about him was very familiar. He stared into Angad's eyes for some clues, but he could not place his finger on why he seemed familiar.

"Hello sir! I am Angad Khanna! Son of Damini Khanna!"

………………….to be contd…………………….

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey di awesome and wonderful part
i see now i understand some of the story line hehe
first i was confused and sad that how will kripa and anagd will united but after knowing what prithvi is doing besides he is married there is no need for ridz to stay with this man hehe
can't wait till they both fall for each other and di this time u will write more romance b/w the couples in the ff hehe
poor kartik has to bear all his wifes scold stupid her and rahul and muski r so cute
pleaseeeeeeeeee continue soon di
love ya
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Edited by sweet_mittal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sangeeta:
Wow what a great beginning.....👏👏
Already Angad is mesmerized by Kripa's charm.....his entry was great....I am so excited to see how their bond develops ....😳😳😉
Arrgghhhh!!! What a digusting man Prithvi is...😡🤢..he has a beautiful wife at home & he is out there with someone else...pathetic....I hate these kind of men.....he doesn't deserve any happiness....i am eager to see his downfall....😡🤢
Poor Kartik...he is such a nice husband but all Mishti does is complain....😕
I was so eager for you to update & I am glad u did.....perfect beginning Bheegi......outstanding, mindblowing, fantastic......👏
Please continue soon.......eagerly awaiting your next update.......thanks...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Angad ka entry... woh bhi... first he is meeting kripa, his sweetheart... haila min mar jaawaan... he is also performing for her...

AK bandwala 🤣 omg... that was so funny...

So Angad Khanna, son of Damini Khanna had arrived at his father's place... what is Suryabhan and Gayathri going to do?

kartik's character is somewhat sweet...

prithvi came out to be a fulltime jerk... hope angad saves her from this mess.

it would be interesting now... gayathri will immediately identify angad by his name... definitely prithvi's truth is going to come out. that time, angad is going to support kripa... whom will gayathri support? prithvi because he is her son? or will she see herself in kripa and try to patch her with angad with good intentions? or just ignore everything?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey di
angad ki entry was dhamaakedaar
esp d bomb he dropped on suryabaan
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhh my god wat ll be suryaban's reaction nw... angad rocks 👏👏..
nice part⭐️

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